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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: saanch_69

Heylo Rakhi

The update was very cute....Raj n Naina look so cute together. I can't imagine Raj n Naina's daughter getting married n they crying at that ceremony 😳

But Raj is right.....Naina would have all the right to cry then only 😆

Keep updating fast😊

hi saanch
thanks for loving the update.yes, raj and naina looks too cute together.
he he, dekhte hain kya hota h ain, raj and naina ka daughter or son then toh c rying at that ceremony.
yes, raj is always right, niana sirf tab ro sakti hain.
I'll update soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: niyaati

so cute rakhi

amazing jaan
loved raj naina scenes..
i lov dis patni word..itz really sweet
hehheeeeeee

hi jaanu
thanks for loving this ud.
thanks for loving all the scens between raj and naina.
tujhe patni word accha laga kyuon jee😉😆😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice up mainne tumhare fic i just loved ur fic
rn are married so nice
plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

very nice up mainne tumhare fic i just loved ur fic

rn are married so nice
plz cont soon

thanks dear for loving this fic.
yes rn are married.
I'll update now.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part4:-

Naina thinking some thinking hard when phone ring.She picked up the phone and said kk, ma, ha, ma,mein unka khayal rakhungi, don't worry,ma,mein ekbaar jo galati kar dia maine ,doosri baar oh galati nehi karungi, kk ma, ha aap aapna aur papa ka khayal rakhna.

Then naina cut the phone

Shalini heard it and said naina,

Hearing shalini's voice, Naina quickly weeps her tears and said are aap kab aaye?

Shalini:-baaa thori der pehele jab tum baat kar rehe the.

Naina:-oh, kya loge,Tea iye coffee.

Shalini:-First, don't be formal. And second don't try to avoid the topic.

Naina:-nehi oh, actually mein jo bhi kuch kya unke sath. Meine bahut?but raj stopped her and said tumne kuch nehi kya naina,

Both, shalini and naina looking at raj who is struggling to walk properly or stand properly.

Naina run and support him and said aap bahar kyuon aaye.

Raj smiles at her, then said tum nehi kar paoge,I'm kk.

Shalini runs and support Raj also.and said raj tum iha kyuon aaye?tumhe toh abhi rest lena chaiye tha.

Raj ,ne naina aur Shalini ke help se sofa pe baitha.

Raj:-Mein agar nehi aata iha toh?

Naina:-Kya bigarata aapko, agar aap uha rehthe toh, aap kyaa aapne aapko hero samajhte ho, kya smajhte ho,

Raj:- naina,

Naina:-kya ,naina, aapko iha kaun aane ko kaha,aap mujhe bula nehi sakte the.

Raj:-ha ,par mein uha bore horehatha. So?aacha, sorry, kan pakarta hoon thik hain.

Naina:-mein aapko sorry kehene ko nehi boli,

Raj:-par, naina?

Naina gusse se uha se chali gayi..

Raj:-iyebhi na.

Shalini:-tum iha aye kyuon?

Raj:-mujhe room mein ekele bore feel ho ratha toh, kya karta.

Naina:-bore ho rahatha matlab kya hain, aapko rest lena hain iss time pe, aur aap ho kya nehi sunte kisi ke baat , jo aapne maan mein aaye oh karte, iye lijiye?

Raj:-iye kya hain?

Naina:-Haldi wala milk kyuon,

Raj:-oh toh mujhe bi dikh raha hain par iye mujhe kyuon de rehe ho

Naina:-aap ko kya majak sujh raha hainabhi, iye kya hain,iye kisliye?

Raj drink the haldi milk and said lo aab koi sawal nehi pucha mein,khush.

Naina: -khush, and take the glass and goes from there.

Shalini:-iye toh bacchi hain aab tum bhi baccho kii tarah kar rehe ho.

Raj:-ok, sorry.nehi karunga,kya karu, sach mein room mein bore ho raah tha. Isliye iha aagaya.aur mein abhi pehele se thik hoon?

Shalini:-tum doctor ho iya mein?

Raj:- tum .. toh kya ,mein nehi samjhunga kya mein thik hoon iya nehi?

Shalini:-ha par..dekho ,kuch baat.

Naina:-di, iye lijiye, aapka c offee aur inse baat mat kijiye, iye nehi sunne wale,inhe jo maan chaha oh iye karenge, kisi kebaat sunna inke kaam nehi hain.

Raj:-iye galat hain, naina, mein tumhar ah aar baat manta,

Naina:-accha, kab, aap thik time pe so nehi rehe hain, jada kaam kar rehi hain, ghar mein hi sahi par ek ke baad ek meetings, why/?aap kya super man ho?

Raj:-super man,mein oh kasie?jara samjho na,my dear wife.

Naina:-rajj.. Shalini inhe chup karne kobolo..

Shalini:- raj kyuon pareshan kar rehe ho,

Raj:-mein kah pareshan kar raha hoon and making baby face.

Naina couldn't help her self to smile but she control and said inse baat karna bekar hain.

Raj:-accha, naina?

Naina get up from the sofa and straight goes to kitchen but her eyes full of tear.

Raj:-naina ruko tum, Shalini usse iha le aa, agar nehi aana chathe toh bol mein uha jaunga.

Naina heard it because raj said it little loud and naina cameback and said ek baar bhi aap iha se uthne ke soche toh na dekhna..

Raj:-are, mein toh daar gaya, naina jee ko gussa aagaya?

Naina:-raj , kyuon majak kar rehe ho aap,aapkopata bhi nehi hain mere halat,iya phir aapko lagta hain mein toh khush hoon,kyuon meine ek baar galati kya aap pe?but cannot complte start crying, sab mere wajay se?sab?

Raj:-Naina idhar aao then he try to standup on his own feet but fails and naina saw this she runs an d said kay kar rehe hain aap?

Shalini:-raj?

Raj:-Shalini, tum kuch der mujeh aur mere patni ko ekele choro mujhe isse kuch baaat karna hain, hope u don't mind.

Shalini:-raj, u guys carry on,I'll b e back after sometime, I have to some important work also.

Raj smirked, yes I know, go ahead and best of luck.

Shalini:Rajj, just stop it.

Then Shalini goes from there.

Then Raj said to naina comes here.

Naina came and sit besides him and asked, boliye, aab kya?

Raj smiles and said kuch nehi, baas puch raha tha, naraj ho kya?

Naina:-mere naraj hone iya na hone se kya hoga aapko.

Raj:-look at me.

Naina looks at Raj and found lots of love and care for her.Raj :- I know that I hurt u but really,I didn't want it but I did it every time. I'm sorry?and but naina placed her hands on raj's mouth and said shhh, u didn't hurt me neither u'll hurt me any time.i know,it'se who hurts u but I'm sorry.I know htta,I'm behaving like child but I love u and I'll always but,I feared to loose u.I..and hugged raj.

Raj also hugged her back and said shhh. Don't cry, naina.I understand u and ur condition,it's not ur fault, destiny who plays the cruel games and ?but u saw our true love won and now we r together.so, don't cry, just happy .aur waise mein ne kaha na mein aapne naina ke rote hue nehi dekh sakta, aur meine kaha na tum sirf iye rona dhona karoge, humara beti ki shaadi ke baad,tab hum do old ek sath royenge.

Hearing this naina blushed and hide her face in raj's neck.

Raj:-hay ,iye teri sarmana,ek bar iye laal hue chehe re ko dekhne toh do.

Naina:-Raj, pls?

Raj:-Kya Pls.

Naina;-Aap sab jante ho.

Raj:-mein toh kuch nehi janta.

Naina:-aapko mujhepareshan karke aacha lagta hain.

Raj:-kabhi nehi,mein kaise aapne jaan ko pareshan kar sakta hoon.

Naina now more blushed and said aap kar rehe ho.

Raj:-really? But I don't know about it.

Now naina push him and said badmash and runs from there.

Raj just smiles at her and said hay,iye muskurana.

At the night after dinner, raj lay on the bed, naina came and give him the medicine but looking sad.

Raj:-kya hua aab tumhe?

Naina:-kuch nehi baas aise hi.a nd try to move from there but raj hold her wrist and said aapne rajse chupaoge aapna paresahni.

Naina sit and placed her head on raj's chest and said raj?

Raj:-humm bolo.

Naina:-Raj oh mujhe

Raj:-Tumhe daar lag raha hain na?

Naina :-aapo kaise pata?

Raj:-tumhe kab kya hota hain mujhe sab pata chal jata hain.

Naina:-aap mujhe itna Pyaar kyuon karte ho?

Raj:-koi aur nehi mila na.

Naina:-kya?

Raj:-tum bhi na naina, iye kiase sawal hain, aap mujhse itna Pyaar karte ho?Naina some questions ka koi answer nehi hota hain, aur iye Pyaar toh baas ho jata hain.Samjhi.

Naina slightly smiles and said pa raj, aap abhi thik nehi hue aur?

Raj:-Aur mein kaise Km aja sakti hoon,iye toh.

Naina:-ha

Raj:-Naina, u know,we r soldier and we r always ready to face any situation, and moreover ru r also a soldier and said this why?

Naina:-mein ek soldier ke sath sath ek patni hain, aapne pati ke liye.

Raj smiles and said kyuon tumhe aapne Pyaar pe bharosha nehi hain.

Naina:-khud se bhi jada.

Raj:-then ,always believe in God. He will always protct me .

Naina:-I know.

Raj:-Then give me ur smile nehi toh mujhe neend nehi aayega.

Naina:-accha.

Raj:-ha jee

Naina:-aapko kisine kaha ,aap bhaut drama karte ho.

Raj:-nehi.

Naina:-tohmein keh rehi hoon, aap bahut drama karte ho.

Raj:-accha, mujhe toh pata nehi hain,kab aur kiske sath karta hoon drama,

Naina:-ha, aap aur mere sath karte ho.

Raj: - shaam ko boli pareshan karta hoon now said drama.

Naina:-Aap ko sona nehi hain toh mein soctor ko kahungi aapko phir se hospital mein aahuraj kya kar rehe hain aap.

Tab tak raj pull her and goes close to her face and said don't even think of that.meine already abhut din tumse dur raha hain, aab aur nehi,samjhi, now so jao.Good night.and sweet dreams.jaan.

Naina's face bacme deep red and she quickly move her side on the bedand turns but soon found raj hold her waist and said mujhse dur jane ko sochna bhi nehi,

Naina smiles shyly and said mein kaha jan chathi aapko chor ke kahi bhi, mere zindegi toh aapse hi hain.

Raj:-Love u jaan.

Naina:-Love u too raj.

Then both the loving birds dose off too deep sleep.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi all

updated next part.pls read it and comment it.ur comments inspired me lots😊. all my silent readers pls press the liked button.😊
I know it's very small part.so sorry, kya karu bahut busy hoon😭, but try to post another part soon😊.
mujhe pata hain tum sab bahut gussa ho, ek toh itni late update aur upar se small part😭,kya karu, sach meina bhut busy hoon 😭but,mein jaldi post karne ki soch rehi hoon😊, chahe small ho but week mein2ud what say friends😉😃😛.
now jaldi jaldi comment karo.😳
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina's mom calls her and she assures her that she will take care of Raj!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

She feels very guilty for all her past actions and cannot forgive herself for it!!!!!!

Raj is getting bored and so has come out and Naina is worried about him!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ne sorry kaha toh Naina gussa ho gayi!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina is scolding him and then gave him haldi waala doodh to drink!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina gets upset when Raj does not take proper rest and keeps straining himself with work!!!!!

Naina ne Raj se kaha ke kya woh Superman hai??😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I loved it when Raj called Naina his dear wife!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj is saying ke woh pareshan kar raha hai making a baby face!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina came back when Raj threatened to get up!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is teasing Naina but Naina is crying!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj asked Shalini to leave him and his wife alone and Shalini also made an exit teased by Raj for her excuse!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is trying his best to bring Naina out of this guilt and and he wants her to move forward and forget the past!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj is teasing Naina and Naina is blushing which is making Raj tease her further!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj knows Naina a lot better than her aur Naina kabhi bhi Raj se kuch nahi chhupa sakti!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is very worried about this mission kyunki Raj abhi poori tarah se theek nahi huya hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I loved Raj's answer koi aur nahi mila to Naina's question!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ki pareshani bhi apni jagah sahi hai as she is a soldier but she is also a wife!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne kaha to believe in God and He will protect him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina ne sahi kaha ke Raj bahut drama karta hai uske saath!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ab doctor aur hospital ka naam leke Raj ko dhamka rahi hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ko ab Naina se ek minute bhi dur nahi rehna and Naina said ke uski zindagi toh Raj se hi hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
thank u yaar it's amaging
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part dear
thanks for the great update
nd thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice up naina takes good care of raj
plz cont soon and pm me when u up

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