Love and Duty Rajvee and Naina note in page 54 - Page 24

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Posted: 15 years ago
totally beautiful and rocking updt
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Posted: 15 years ago
HI RAKHI SORRY FOR LATE REPLY
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Rakhi.....

Wow kya update tha.... full of Raj and naina... no disturbances. Aur shalini bhi achi bachi ki tarah exit maar gayi. Good girl.

Naina ki pareshani wajib hai... usse Raj ki fikr jo hai... hogi hi... she is a soldier but she is also a wife. Raj ka kehna bhi sahi hai...

Raj knows Naina a lot better than her... Naina kabhi kuch bhi nahi chipa sakti Raj se. Beautiful.

Cont soon...

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Posted: 15 years ago
This was a very nice part
I just love reading all the fics ( as far as I can manage) related to LRL
Keep going😊
P.S. Sorry for such a reply...I dun knw whether it can be called a reply or not
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for all the lovely comments,I'll reply them also, but first,I'll post the next part within 15mins.
And who reserve the post pls unreserve them soon then I'll reply them.
thanks for who likes the update also.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 5:-

After some days, Raj is more fit but still he cannot walk properly but better from previous days.He try to walk with out support every day for some time.Naina scold him for this buthe make an excuse that Shalini told him to do thata for quick recover.

After 1 week, Raj:-naina, jaldi karo, hum chalna h ain.

Naina:-Par, mujhe aapka is tarah uha jan, matlab.

Raj:-Naina, mein tumhe pichle dino se samjha raha hoon but tum ho kya, samajhti nehi, mujhe pata hain, tumhe mere health ke liye pareshani hain par tum aapne bhagwan jee pe trust karti ho na.

Naina nodded and then raj continue, so, aab uss baarein mein aur nehi pareshan hona, ok, chalo, waise tum toh ho mere sath, phir.

Naina:-mein hi toh aapko haar time problem mein daalti hoon, mein hoon aapke iye halat ki wajay, mujhe toh mar jaana chaiye …but raj shout nainaaaaaa, ek dam chup phir kabhi iye baat aapne juban pe mat lana,, tumhe mien iye akhri baar kahe raha hoon, jo bhi kehene hain bure mujhe kaho paar aapni baarein mein nehi, mein nehi sunna chaunga, koi bhi burai tumhara baarein mein, chahe oh tuhare muhse kyuon na ho..

Naina:-Sorry.

Raj:-Bahar aajao, agarmere sath jana hain toh.

Naina:-mein toh but tab tak raj chala gaya tha uha se. naina feeling very sad but she control her eomotions and goes behind raj.

Naina goes and sit in the car but raj ignore her.Naina goes near to him and hold his hand and placed her head on his shoulder but ran ignore it and turn his face.

Naina:-Sorry Raj.

Raj:-Naina, mein abhi uss baat nehi karna chatha,

Naina:-Raj…

Raj:-Naina, pls…

Naina:-Ok…but she still holds his hand.But raj turn his face .Naina saw it and feel hurt and her guilt rise again and she freed raj and and move slightly .Raj understand and said naina , come here.

But naina deny and said I'm sorry.I'll not disturb u .I know I hurt u everytime.I'm bad very bad.

Raj:-Come here…

Naina:-no, I'll not

Raj: - Stop behaving like child.

Naina:-Mujhe aap maa f nehi kar paaye, aap nafrat karte ho, aap ko karna bhi chahe, aap sahi ho….

Raj:-Stop naina.idhar aao.

Naina:-aap mujhe chor doge, oh bhi pata hain…

Raj now lost his patience and said stop it naina, Stop ur crying and just come here.

Naina looks at her and raj saw the tears and said naina.come here.

Naina goes near to him but suddenly car stop and driver said sir, aagaye hum.

Raj:-kk.

Naina thinks, this is not kma but it's .Suddenly raj told mein janta hoon tum kya soch rehe ho but sab tum samjh jaoge par ab hi chalo.They enter the new house, it's like bunglow type and soon naina understand it's their base camp before they enter the kma and when they stay at kma.but naina thinks more about her relationship with raj, her guilt again risen and she feels shame.

Raj looks at her and understands said naina, chalo, raat hogaya hain dinner kar lete hain.

Naina just nodded in positive.After their dinner, raj feel tired and sleep in the bed when naina entered there and see him sleeping peacefully, she goes near to him and looking at him lovingly but then said her self,I'm sorry raj but I have to do it .

Then she turns to leave raj but suddenly raj said toh tumne faisla kar liya mujhe chor ne ka.

Hearing this naina shocked and frozed at her place.Raj get up and said thanks, naina, thanku very much for such a lovely gift.

Naina turns and said jee, oh aap, so, meine, mere jaane se…

Raj:-Abhi thik se bol bhi nehi pa rehe ho, kyuon, ek baat batao naina, mein tohmaan liya tha, ke tum mujhse nafart karte ho then tumne mujhe kyuon kaha u love me, why naina, why? Naina, tum mujhse abhi bhi nafrat karte ho, aur iye tum meine jo, jo bahut bara gunah kar dia tha, naveen ko marke uska badla le rehe ho,

Naina:-No, r aj, oh, actually.mein…

Raj:-kya naina, phir se koi naya jhooth kahoge mujhe.phir khaoge nehi mein toha apse Pyaar karti hoon but pls naina, aur jhooth mat bolo.are mujhe ek baar bolte shaadi se pehele toh…….. ok, tum jana chathe ho na jao,meintumhe rokunga abhi nehi but raat ko nehi subha chali jana, abhi it's dangerous, so, and don't worry, u'll sleep here,I'm leaving this room and try to leave but naina hold his hand and said I'm sorry, I… I really love u but I think

Raj smirked and said really, u love me, I cannot belive it.then little rudely leave my hand.

Naina:-no, I'll not and hugged him quickly as if he'll go from her forever.

Raj didn't hugged her and said what's this naina, leave me.I said.jab dil chahe mujhe kehe dia meinaapse Pyaar karti hoonjab dil chahe chali jaungi,ha ,mein kya hoon,naina, mere dil nehi hain,mujhe dard nehi hota,mujhe tum kya samjh e ho, haarb ar mein hi …but naina put her hands onhis lips and said,I" sorry,mein socha ,ke mere jane se aapko khushiya milega but meingalat thi, mien kya karu,mujhe abhi bhi aapka iye halat ke liye khud ko gunhagar lagta hain,meinkya karu, par, aap ne iye kaise soch liya mein aapko Pyaar nehi karti,mere zindegi mein aapko chor ke na kabhi koi tha,nahi kabhi koi hoga.par aapka koi galati nehi ahin, mein jo bhi kuch kya iya kar rehi hoon,mein ne aapko sirf aur sirf dard dia, kabhi aapko koi khushiya nehi dia,meinbahut buri hoon,aur isliye,meinjab tak hoon, isse acche hota mein mar but before she can complete her sentence ,naina received a tight slap on her face then raj hold her shoulder and said don't u ever think or tell this type of word,

Naina looking at him without blinking .Raj noticed red marks on her face.He carrased her face and then his eyes dropped on her lips,He bend and touch her lips gently and then said naina,I love u,love more than my life,s so never think to leave me.I'll die without u.

Naina just hugged hima nd said no raj,aap aise baat mt karo, meinkabhi nehi chor ke jaungi,aapko paaka promise….

Raj smiles and said really, but tumne jo iye galti kya usska saja kya hain.

Naina:-kya hain,

Raj:- abhi time h ainmeri jaan, soch ke bolungi.abhimujeh bahut neend aarehi hain,chalo so jate hain.

Naina:-ok,meindress c hange karu.

Raj:ha karo iha.

Naina shocked and said kay?aap andblushing .

Raj:-ha,toh mein kya karu, tumhe ek pal choru toh mujhe aab dar lag raha hain tum mujhe chorke kahi chale jaoge,so.kkjao chang karke aao.

After changing the dress naina came andlay besides her but saw raj looking at her lovignly,

Naina goes near to him and placed her head on his chest and said sorry about the incident , but promise u today never leave u.I love u.

Raj:-I understand ur mind jaan and believe u also.love u too jaan, chalo no more talk, tumhe mere sath aklkahi jan hainlong day ahead for us, so sleep now.

Naina:-ok sweet heart and blushed and raj also little blushed and grinned to heard it and hugs her waist tightly .then both love birds sleep peacefully.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
update the next part,I knwo another small part but,so sorry kehene ko chor ke mere paas aur kuch nehi,
pls gussa mat ho,meinchathi hoonjaldi jaldi update akru,
busy hoon sachmein.
now read it and comment soon.all my silent readers pls pressed the liked button also.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part Rakhi...but slap nice nahi tha...but Naina ka dimaag thikhane pe laane ke liye zaruri bhi tha...!!!

Finally finally sab kuch sort out ho gaya hai...!! Hoping dobaara Naina kuch galat nahi bolegi...!!! Update soon...!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks for sharing its lovely dear!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for the great part
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