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Posted: 15 years ago

hey guys m back wid an update of pyaar ka angle

so as u knw de bus crashes n de only one who is safe widout even a single scrach xcept 4
a wound on his hand is de conductor who has tried 2 rush all de 5 into de hospital as
soon as possible Soon de doctors give him de news all r safe including de driver xcept 4
mayank whos critical n de doctors hav lost all hope 4 him bt still r going 2 try deir best
soon all 5 wake up<de driver n 4 students> conductor went 2 all of dem one by one n when he went 2 nupurs ward
C:hw r u feeling?
N:m alrite acha suno baaki kaisay hain
C:baki sahi hain xcept 4 one student kia naam tha uska .... haan mayank
N:kia??? mayank??? kia hua usse?
C:doctor sahab ne kaha k uski halat bohat kharab hai aur ho sakta hai k...
N:nahi aisa nahi hosakta!! ... she feels a grave pain in her heart
nupur gets up when de conductor asks her 2 sit as her wounds r still fresh bt she pays no heed
n leaves 4 mayank ward. she sees him palen lifeles attached wid all sorts of wires. unknowingly her heart cries n tears form in her eyes bt wat were dose water tears
when her heart was crying tears of blood?????? her face is filled wid wet n salty tears when suddenly she feels a hand on her
shoulder. she sees mayank
N:mayank?? tum?? she dznt luks at de hospital bed bcoz she knws if she luks dere mayak will dissappear
she decides 2 go 2 de temple 4 de first she dznt put aside dose feelings she always brushed off
M:arey tum ro kiun rahi ho nupur? tum to humesha mujhse peecha chudane ki baat karti rahti rahti ho
Nupur falls on her knees n cries out" haan par aaj k baad aisa kabhi nahi kahoongi plz waapis aajao plzzz kabhi tumhe khud se door nahi karungi pakka waapis aajao plzzzz n she continues crying 4 a long tym in de same position
she goes 2 de temple n immediately kneels down n closes her eyes" plz God plz mayank ko theek kardo mujhe uski sakht zaroorat
haan aaj main apne poore dil se manti hun k main usse bepana mohabbat karti hun plz uske bina meri koi zindagi nai hai
wo hai to sab kuch hai wo nahi to kuch nahi
as if her prayers had started working mayank seemed 2 respond to de medicines n treatments n rita came 2 de temple searching 4 nupur n sees her kneeling down goes 2 her n puts her hand on nupurs shoulder
R:fikar mat karo nupur mayank has started 2 respond 2 de treatments
N:really?? is dat true
R:haan nupur par ek baat batao tum itna khush kiun horahi ho?
:wo... umm.. waisay hi
R:chupao mat mujhe sab pata hai aur itni excitement tumhare liye sahi nahi hai ur still not completely alrite
N:acha ab chalen
R:sure waisay tumhe pehli baar kisi ladke main itna interest lete hue dekhrahi hun sab theek hai na?
N:ya ofc
R:jhooti
N:ab chale
R:pyaar chupaye nahi chupta nupur
Nupur lleaves while mumbling"i knw"
dey reach de hospital n nupur sees mayank n asks de doctor if she can go in de doctor says yes bt dat only one person at a tym nupur goes in n as dere is no stool or chair present in de ward 4 de time being she sits on her
knees on de side of his bed n holds his hand "i promise mayank main aaj k baad kabhi bhi tumse peecha churane ki baat nahi karungi i promise kabhi tumhe khud se door nahi hone dungi i promise plz ek dafa aankhein kholo mayank i miss u
i need u 2 tease me i want 2 hear ur talks all day long plzzzz aankhein kholo aur ek dafa bus ye boldo tum mujhe kabhi nahi chodk jauge
Voice:nahi chod k jaunga mere aaka
Nupur luks up 2 find mayank grinning mischeviouly still lying on de bed
N:<whining> mayank
M:kia??? tumhi ne to kaha tha kehne ko
N:haan wo... umm..
M:jao maaf kiya tumbhi kia yaad rakhogi k mayank bhushan ne tumhe maaf kiya
N:huh?? maine tumse maafi kab maangi
M:maangi nahi hai par maangna chahti thi
N:mayankkkk
M:bolo nupurr..
N:i hate u
M:mujhe pata hai
N:bt i dun hate u
M:mujhe ye bhi pata hai
N:urghh!!!
M:acha baba sorry
N:mayank itna bolo mat tumhare liye theek nahi hai
M:ji madam. aur kuch?
N:haan main khana le k aati hun tab tak tum aankhein band kark rest karo
M:nahi nupur main tumhara ye hukum nahi mansakta
N:kiun?
M:kiun k main rest kark thak gaya hun aur mujhe hospital ka khana bohat bura lagta hai
N:par mayank tumhe rest ki zaroorat hai
M:acha wo sab chodomujhe mera mobile lado mujhe sam se baat karni hai
N:tum usse bohat pyaar karte ho na?
M:apni jaan se bhi zyaada pata hai jab maa thi kitna nautanki tha itna flirty aur fun-loving tha itne pranks khelta tha aur maa k saath mera asli sam bhi margaya
N:<felt so much pain seeing him in pain> mayank itna stress mat lo main tumhara mobile lati hun
M:<in mind> she's so nyc itni caring itni responsible perfect 2 b a wif... whoa whoa whoa mayank stop y would she ever wanna date any guy?
nupu bought his mobile
he called samrat
M:hey sam
S:hi bhaiiya kaisay ho?
Nupur frm behind"shukar karo zinda hai"
S:bhaiiya ye nupur kia kehrahi hai
M:kuch nai sam tu chod tu bata tu kaisa hai
S:nai bhai pehle mujhe batao kia hua?
M:sam bola na kuch nahi hua
S:bhaiya nupur ko dijiye
M;acha baba ek minute
he keeps his hand on de phone n whispers " plz nupur sam ko kuch mat batana"
N:sry mayank main jhooth nahi bolooongi aur waisay bhi ab tum theek hogaye ho ab phone do
M:ye lo
N:hi samrat
S:hi nupur bhaiya ko kia hua
N:humari bus ka accident hua tha par ab hum sub safe hain aur tum zara si bhi chinta mat karo
S:thnk GOd bhaiiya ko phone dena zara
M:<on phone> bol sam
S:bhaiiya aap mujhe pehle nahi batasakte the
M:mere baap ab tum lecture dena band karega
S:acha bhai ab aap apna khayal rakhiye main rakhta hun
M:ok sam tc bye
S:tc bye
so guys dats it
i didnt want 2 put my readers into worry so i finished de bus part
anywz plzzzzz comment/criticize
n plz press de like button
luv
Fiza

Edited by mayurian-artian - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update fiza
but i didnt get when maynk turned to bhushan frm sharma.lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update Fiza nupur is so caring n sweeet
can't wait next part
plzzz update soon
n ha thanks 4 d pm 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fariaa70

lovely update fiza
but i didnt get when maynk turned to bhushan frm sharma.lol

no fari wid de characters i changed de surname 2 lol
luv
Fiza
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Posted: 15 years ago
soo emotional yaar
gr8 update fiza...thanks for nt keeping us in pain
lovely
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Posted: 15 years ago
mind blowing update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
A very Touching and Cute update <3

Natasha
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg
wow
thank god mayank is fine
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update
cont soon n tnx fr pm

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