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sonal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

nice yr please cont soon but im very angerey 😡wit u cause u didnt pm me

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@-Sanjana-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

I'm so so so so so Sorry Sweet sonal!! Actually, for some reason my computer wan't allowing me to PM some people. ( I dunno why??!!!) plz plz plz forgive me!! I will try PMing again!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Hi Fans readers and friends!! Luv u all for commenting! Have to say that I've got some commited readers here!! Anyways, here's the nxt update!!! Plz do read it and comment once again! And sorry for the slight delay!

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Samrat's POV:

Our hands were still locked together. Neither of us felt like letting go. The moment was picture perfect. When I turned, I found Gunjan looking at me. When she noticed me gazing into her eyes, she blushed a bright shade of red. There was silence. It felt awkward. I hadn't spoken to her in such a long time, I wasn't really sure what to say! I was surprised when she was the first to start the conversation.

'Tumhaare muh me patti pandhi hui hai kya?'

She asked me casually. I looked at her confused.

'Kya matlab?'

Gunjan laughed. It made my heart leap 20 miles in the air.

'I mean, tum itne chupp kyun ho?'

I went back into flashback mode.

FLASHBACK:

'Samrat!! Kuch bolo na!! Tum mujhese itne naraaz ho kya?!'

I turned away and pouted.

'Main kab se mera gift maang raha hoon! Tum dene ke liye tayaar hi nahi ho!! Mujhe mera Birthday gift chahiye! Abhi!'

Gunjan smiled.

'Achcha baba! Tumhe kya chahiye?'

I turned towards her, reluctantly.

'Main jo bhi maangoona tum dogi?'

Gunjan frowned and put her hands on her hips. It made her look ultra cute!!!

'Pehle tum batao ke tumhe kya chahiye, aur phir main sochoongi!'

I pretended to get angry again.

'Mujhe pata tha ke tum yehi kahogi! Jao tumhaari Di ke paas jao. Tumhe tho mere baareme parwaa hi nahi hai!'

Gunjan rolled her eyes.

'Fine! Jaldi se batao ke tumhe kya gift chahiye. Main doongi.'

I turned towards her, a mischievous look embedded in my eyes.

'Promise.'

She glanced at me suspiciously.

'Haan...promise.'

I came closer to her...closing the space that was around us.

'Tumhe nahi pata ke mujhe kya gift chahiye?'

Gunjan looked nervous.

'N-nahi...kya chahiye?'

I came even closer to her, eliminating the distance between us. I pushed back her hair and whispered in her ear.

'Kiss...'

Gunjan gasped and pushed me away.

'Samrat! Yeh cheating hai! Yeh emotional blackmail hai!!'

She folded her hands across her chest and turned away from me.

I laughed.

'All is fair in love and war Chashmish! Aur waise bhi, tumne mujhe promise kiya hai na?! Mujhe nahi pata ke tum jhoote waaqde bhi kar sakti ho!'

I gasped dramatically and pretended to be shocked.

'Main tumhe kiss kabhi nahi doongi Samrat!'

'Achcha? Dekhte hai ke tum Samrat ke charm se kab tak bach paogi!! Aaj tak koi nahi bach payya hai Chashmish!'

Gunjan turned abruptly. Her eyes were burning red. She was jelous.

'Tumhaara matlab hai ke tumne aur bhi ladikiyon ko kiss kiya hai??!!'

I looked at her, faking a surprised look.

'Haan! Aur nahi tho kya?! Tumhe etho pata hai na, ke main har ladki se pyaar karta hoon! Tho phir main har ladki ko kiss bhi karoonga na?! Iss me gussa hone ki kya baat hai?!'

Gunjan looked like she was going to cry! I surpressed a laugh.

'Tumne...tumne... . How could u Samrat?! Tum tho mujhse pyaar karte ho na? Tho phir...tumhe mujhe kiss karna chahiye! Tum...dusri ladkiyon ke saat...!'

She burst into tears and ran out of the hall, leaving me standing there, not knowing what to do. Then, Benji walked up to me and put his hand on my shoulder, in a pitying way.

'Yaar, aaj tho tu gayya. I feel sorry for u dude.'

I sighed and rested my arm on his shoulder.

'yaar, yeh morena waale itne sensitive kyun hote hain?'

...

PRESENT:

I felt a slight tug on my hand.

'SAMRAT!'

I awoke out of my fantasy.

'Kya? Kya hua?'

It was Gunjan.

'Yeh tho mujhe tumse poochna chahiye! Tum kahaan kho gayye the? Aur rukh kyun gayye?'

I realized that I'd been daydreaming in front of her.

'Woh...kuch nahi. Tumhe library nahi dekhna kya?'

Gunjan smiled.

'Agar tum le challo ge!'

I nodded.

'Haan, challo, iss taraf hai.'

As, we proceeded onwards, I was forced to leave my pleasant memories behind. The memories that would forever stay memories. My dream had shattered to bits. Shattered like glass.

...

END.

Sry guys! I know I ended it at a very gud spot! I had to go! But thx a lot for reading, and do comment! Bye!

P.S. :

I might not update on the weekend. Maybe if I find the time...otherwise on Monday for sure!!

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basket_101

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

hii!
i realllly liked the part..
the flashback was raelly cute!!
awsum job..
nd thx a lot of the pm..
appreciate it =)
try to update soonn

HiNaL

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Miracle_sweet

@Miracle_sweet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

WOW nice part

loved how in the flash back gunjan was getting so possesive about samXD

will be waiting for ur post on Mon

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sonal

@sweetsonal156

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: dreamer2305
I'm so so so so so Sorry Sweet sonal!! Actually, for some reason my computer wan't allowing me to PM some people. ( I dunno why??!!!) plz plz plz forgive me!! I will try PMing again!!!

its ok yr i was kidding and awsomeeeeeeeee ud please cont soon n thnx 4 the pm

Edited by sweetsonal156 - 15 years ago

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@-Sanjana-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: basket_101
hii!
i realllly liked the part..
the flashback was raelly cute!!
awsum job..
nd thx a lot of the pm..
appreciate it =)
try to update soonn

HiNaL

Hi Hinal!! Thx for ur sweet comments! No problem! I will keep PM ing u!! Plz keep reading and commenting! And I will probably write a few more cute flashbacks...so I hope u like it!

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@-Sanjana-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht was amazingggggggggg

Thx Shafoo! I luv all ur comments!

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@-Sanjana-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: miiroxxsweet
WOW nice part
loved how in the flash back gunjan was getting so possesive about samXD

will be waiting for ur post on Mon

tc

Hey miiroxxsweet! It's not a lot that we get to see a possesive Gunjan in the show so I thought of portraying her as being possesive in my FF! I'm glad u liked it! Actually, I just started writing! Glad it turned out somewhat ok!! And thx for ur comments!

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@-Sanjana-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: sweetsonal156

its ok yr i was kidding and awsomeeeeeeeee ud please cont soon n thnx 4 the pm

Hi sweetsonal! Finally managed to PM u!! (I'm so glad I managed cause I just luved reading ur comment!) Adn I'm happy to know that u weren't seriously mad at me!! And thx for liking the latest part! I will try and write ASAP, and will DEFINATELY Pm u!! Bye!