Zindagi Bus Yu Hi -2(RN)Epilogue on pg. 54 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

mahak a mindblowing and a terrific update

thanks for sharing
loved the way u structured the music in the update....it was fab
once again a lovely update
thanks for the pm



Thanks dear, love the comment and ur view.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIIIIIIII VERTIKA HOW R U ?
SORRY FOR LATE REPLY
ACTUALLY MAIN BAHAR GAYI THI TOH COMMENT NAHI KAR PAAYI
UD WAS AWESOOOOOME
MINDBLOWING
SUPERB
ROCKING
OUT OF THIS WORLD
LOVE ALL THE SCENES
UD ASAP PLZZZZZZZ

LOVE
DEEPA



Thanks a lot darling Preeti. 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: varshita

awesome baby. 👏
thanks yaar 😊 😊 😊

Kya baat hai ab to madam ko lagta hai sochna hi nahi padta hoga na update likhne k liye.😉
Ye to nahi ho sakta na, bina soche ideas nahi aate hain na mind me. 😉 😉 😉

Ideas to aise aate hain is dimaag me ki poocho mat. 😛
Brilliant n song selection to bahut bindaas hai yaar.😆
This one is one of my fav songs dear. 😊 Well described emotins and Sarthak n Muskaan's pairings.👏
Thanks 😊 😊 😊


Ab kya hoga Vatsal ka jab madam Mauli naraj hain yun par itna jyada. 😛 Logical bahut hai Mauli maana padega kyounki us ne to bolti hi band kar di na Vatsal ki.😉😉
Is ko hi to kehte hain na presence of mind. 😛 😛 😛

continue soon i mean asap.



thanks darling, tum jaise doston se hi to motivation milta rehta hai na.
😊 😊 😊
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: esha143

nice part Mahak,soft romance,beautiful song sequence with all the couples present,funny nok-jokh btn Mauli n Vatsal,everything was just perfect👏👏.and the convo btn Mauli-Vatsal was just too good😆.n yeah Mauli is so right😉.

waiting for the next ud..................................



Thank u esha, aur agar aisa nahi ho to kaise lagega ki shaadi ka mahole hai. 😛 😛 😛
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

cute n romantic part tha yaar...
thanks so much Priya 😊 😊 😊

sarthak ne apna kiya hua vaada rakha...vaise bhi voh baht pyar karta hai naina se, kab tak apne aap ko us se dur rakh pata...??? mushkaan ko lahenge me dekh kar hi sarthak ne apne shaadi ka plan change kar diya...aur turant shaadi ka plan bana liya...bade jaldi me hain janab...
Tune ek jagah galti se Naina likh diya hai Muski k place par 😆 😆 😆. Ab Sarthak aur jyada door nahi rehna chahta hai na apni Muskaan se. 😉 😉 😉


sarthak ka vaada aur mushkaan ka emotional hona...aur voh hug...aweee...dats so sweet yaar....aur tune kitne behtarin dhaang se likha hai use...too gud...
thanks again darling 😳 😳 😳


ab bichare vatsal kya karega...!!! mauli ko pareshaan kar k maze le raha tha...par ab us ki bhi halat kharab hai...!!!
Itna asaan thode na hai, Mauli ko ched kar chain se baithna. 😆 😆 😆


nikki aur sakhshi dono mushkaan ko tease kar rahe hain...aur mauka bhi toh sahi hai na...!!!
In sab shaitaaniyon se hi to shaadi ka mahole banta hai. 😛 😛 😛


yeh mera ek fav song hai...par sachhi.... main peeti bilkul bhi nahi hun...!!!
Mujhe pata hai, mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai ye song. 😉 😉 😉


ab itne achhe song par sarthak dance kaise nahi karta...aur mushkaan ko bhi sath le aaya...par voh thodi sharma rahi thi...sahi hai...ab is situation me sharmayegi nahi toh aur kya karegi...!!!
Itna to expect kar hi sakte hain na at least Muski se kabhi kabhi, varna aksar to apne bindaas form me hoti hain madam. 😃 😃 😃


& lastlly mauli ne sahi kaha vatsal se ki ladkiyon k paas toh baht option hote hain par ladko k paas nahi...!!! vaise bhi mauli toh vatsal se thodi si naaraz bhi hai na...??? ab vatsal kya karega dekhte hain...
Manana to padega hi na , kaise bhi kar k. Ab ye us ki responsibility hai.


chal ab jaldi se cont kar...



thanks so much Priya dear, ur comments give me a lot of encouragement. 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
Part 66:-

In the hall:-

When the dance got over Muskaan's mom called her in a corner, "Beta tujh se kuch baat karni thi."

"Haan maa kahiye." She asked.

"Vo ek baat bata, kya Poorvi aur Vedant ek doosre ko pasand karte hain?" Unhone jo notice kiya tha directly pooch liya.

Muskaan soch me pad gayi ki bataye ya nahi, kahin agar vo kuch aisa keh de jis par us k bhaiya us par naraj ho jaayein to?' sochne lagi Muskaan.

"Are kya soch rahi hai? Mai kuch pooch rahi hoon aur tu soche jaa rahi hai na jaane kya?"

"Haan," tabhi peeche se ek awaaz aayi jis ko sun kar Muskaan ko chain aaya. "Haan maa, mai pasand karta hoon Poorvi ko." Sab kuch keh diya Vedant ne.

"Theek hai, abhi yahan nahi ghar pahuch kar baat karte hain is bare me." Ye keh k Mrs. Sinha chali gayi.

Un k jaane k baad Muskaan ne kaha, "Thank god bhaiya aap aa gaye, varna mai samajh nahi paa rahi thi ki maa ko kya kahoon?"

"Maine maa ko tere pass jaate hue dekha tha, mujhe lag raha tha shayad is baare me koi baat ho."

"Vo to theek hai bhaiya par ye batao aap kya kahoge maa se?" she asked with curiosity.

Vedant thought for a moment, "Ab I think maa ko is baare me sab sach pata hona chahiye to jaise hi mauka milega jo maa poochengi mai clear bata doonga."

Muskaan smiled at his brother's honesty and said, "Hmm, to jaldi hi mai Poorvi ko Poorvi bhabhi bulaoongi." And winked.

Vedant smiled and soon Sarthak joined them, "Kya baat hai aaj madam bahut khush lag rahi hain?" he asked.

"Haan vo to mai hoon." She replied grinning.

"So may I know the reason?"

"Ah..ha, mai chalta hoon, both of u enjoy urself." Ye keh kar chala gaya Vedant.

"Kitne acche n samajhdaar hain na saale sahab."

Muskaan again smiled, "Vo to hai par sharmaa rahe the na bhaiya to yahan kitne der tak khade reh sakte hain na?"

"Sharmaa raha tha Vedant kyoun?" Sarthak was surprised.

"Actually maa ne mujh se poocha ki Poorvi n bhaiya me kya hai?"

"To tum ne kya kaha?"

"Mai to dar gayi thi ki kahin mai kuch aisa na bol doon jo jab baad me bhaiya ko pata chale to vo naraj ho jaayein mujh par, but thank god bhaiya sahi time pe aa gaye aur unhone maa ko sab bata diya." She sighed.

"Kya bata diya?"

"Yahi ki vo Poorvi se pyaar karte hain aur ab mujhe lagta hai ki jaldi hi Poorvi meri bhabhi banne waali hai." She smiled saying it broadly.

"Oh vow, that's good news."

"Haan Arth, mai bhaiya k liye bahut khush hoon."

"Aur mai apne pyaar k liye khush hoon ki vo khush hai."

Muskaan smiled feeling his immense love for her.

"Bus aise smile karne se kaam nahi chalega."

"So?"

"Aaj tum itne hot lag rahi ho to kuch dogi nahi mujhe?"

"To milna to mujhe chahiye na kuch?" she teased.

"Hiee janam hum to sab k saamne bahut kuch dene ko ready hain bus aap ek baar haan to bolo."he winked.

"Arth kitne naughty ho tum, maine bus mazak kiya tha samjhe."

"To aisa mazak kyoun karti ho jis ka harjaana dene me darti ho."

"Mai nahi darti samjhe." She replied quickly.

"Accha?" he asked pulling her close, "To penalty yahin de do."

"Arth chodo kya kar rahe ho, koi dekhega to kya sochega?" she tried her best to made herself free from his grip but it wasn't easy.

"Ab to mushkil hai samjho." He pulled her his closest.

"Pls Arth mat karo aisa koi dekhega to accha nahi lagega aur agar maa papa yahan aa gaye to?" she pleaded.

"To yahi sochenge na ki un ka beta un ki bahu se kitna pyaar karta hai."

"Besharam ho aye ho tum hato." She pushed him and time he quickly carried her in his arms n brought her to a deserted room.

As soon as they reached inside Sarthak made her stand and quickly closed the door,"Ye kahan la...........", he couldn't make her continue n sealed her lips with his desirable lips pulling her bare waist to him and travelling his hands on her waist. Soon his fingers started playing with her navel n she groaned with pleasure. He was continuously making her week so that she couldn't oppose him. Her lower lip was being sucked by him completely whereas his actions were making her more n more passionate with each passing minute.

Here:-

"Haan ye bhi sahi hai." He said finally giving up.

"So next time, kuch bhi bolne se pehle soch lena samajhe." She warned him.

"OK baba sorry n a thousand times sorry, maaf kar do na pls."

"Jaao kya jaroorat hai maafi ki, mujhe maaf vaaf nahi karna hai." And as she turned to leave he caught her hand.

"Vatsal chodo mera haath mai in sab cheejon se maanane waali nahi hoon." She said without looking at him.

"To ek baar meri taraf palat k dekho na?"

"Kyoun?"

"Mai jaanta hoon tum meri aakhon me nahi dekhogi, varna tumhe dar hai ki tum in me doob jaaogi."

"Bus karo filmy dialogue maarana samjhe. Salman Khan nahi ban jaaoge."

"Mujhe us k jaisa nahi banana hai, bus ek se hi kaam chal jaayega mera." He said smiling.

She tunred immediately n speak in a loud voice,"Oye mere Salman ko kuch mat kehna samjhe."

"Agar vo tumhara hai to mai kis ka hoon phir?" Vatsal asked.

Mauli kept mum and realized may be she is doing any mistake.

"Haan, haan vahi to tumhara hai na mai to kuch lagta hi nahi hoon na tumhara." Suddenly she felt blankness in his voice, she got disturbed looking him in such condition.

"Nahi aisa nahi hai Vatsal, matlab mere kehne ka ye matlab nahi hai'.." She said.

"Tumhare kehne ka matlab mai samajh gaya hoon aur mai jaa raha hoon yahan se." she was shocked to hear this from him. Par is se pehle ki Mauli us ko rokne ki koshish karti Vatsal bahar nikal gaya jaldi se.

Now Mauli was tensed and she was cursing herself to make him feel so lonely. Par kya kare vo ab? Itna asaan bhi nahi tha Vatsal ko manana.

Here Sathak and Muskaan:-

Sarthak was feeling weak to held his desires more for her and she was also unable to stop him. He was still touching her at all sensitive points which were rising heat in them. Muskaan was enjoying it but deep inside her heart she was scared to be caught by someone. But Sarthak was not letting her think anything else except him.

Soon his hands reached to her peeks, she was surprised at first but when his fingers touched it's tips she got lost in the touch. Sarthak was not leaving a single chance to fulfill his desires.

"I missed u like hell Muskaan, aur ab mai aur jyada door nahi reh sakta tum se. I want to feel u to my closest." He whispered.

"But Arth, agar koi aa gaya to?" she said breathing heavily.

"Aane do, ab mujhe kisi ka dar nahi hai." He replied.

Suddenly a black cat jumped over Muski and she jumped instantly, in this she hit his foot unknowingly. He too screamed.

Tabhi neeche se Jyoti jee ne kisi k upper se chillane ki awaaz suni di aur unhone ek naukar ko bulaya, "Upper koi hai kya?"

"Pata nahi madam."

"Jara dekh k aao, kisi k chillane ki awaaz aayi hai upper se." unhone us ko bhej diya.

Here Sarthak n Muskaan:-

"Hiiii raam mera pair." Sarthak winced in pain.

Tab bhi Muskaan ka dhayan nahi gaya Sarthak k pairon par, vo to bus cat ko dekhe jaa rahi thi.

"Muskaan ye kya hai?" he scolded her with anger, "Agar nahi mood tha to bata deti , aise mujhe thokane ka kya matlab hai?"

Still she didn't speak up.

"Muskaan." He called again.

"Vo billi." She replied scaring.

"Kya billi? Kahan hai?" he looked here and there but he couldn't see that.

"Vo dekhe table k peeche." She pointed at the point closing her eyes.

"Kahan hai?" tabhi kisi ne door khola.

"Sahab jee aap yahan?" the servant asked.

Sarthak was surprised to see him here, "Tum yahan kaise aaye?" he asked.

"Vo sahib jee, badi madam ko kisi k chillane ki awaaz aayi thin a to unhone mujhe yahan check karne k liye bheja ki kaun hai yahan dekh k aaon mai."

Sarthak samajh gaya ki agar ab us ne kahani nahi sunai koi badhiya se to bus us ki band baj jaayegi ma k saamne, "Haan vo mai yahan kuch dhoondh raha tha ki madam bhi yahan aa gayi aur mujhe dekh k poochne lagi ki mai yahan kya kar raha hoon. Par tab tak madam k upper jaane kahan se ek billi kood gayi aur ye aise chillayi jaise koi pahaad fat gaya ho." He made a good and solid excuse.

"Par saab jee aap dhoondh kya rahe the yahan?" aage k is sawaal ka jawaab dene se pehle Sarthak ko kuch der sochna pada.

"Kya hua beta?" Jyoti jee ne andar aate hue poocha.

Maa ko saamne dekh k Sarthak ko ab aur koi bahana nahi soojh raha tha but thank god sahi time pe Muski ka dimaag chalne laga. "Kuch nahi maa ye yahan pata nahi apne bachpan ka koi samaan dhoondhne aaye the to maine in ko yahan dekha to pooch liya ki kya kar rahe hain ye yahan." And she narrated the same thing which Sarthak told to the servent.

"To mujhe batana tha na, mai dhoondh k de deti tujhe." Jyoti jee said.

"Nahi maa, aap ko baar baar bekaar me pareshaan karne ka kya matlab? To maine socha khud hi dhoondh loon." Sarthak made a puppy face.

"Par beta tu dhoondh kya raha tha ye to bata?"

"Vo maa''..mai vo painting dhoondh raha tha jo mere birthday pe mujhe Nisha ne di thi." Sarthak excused but Muskaan gave him an angry look when he took name of Nisha.

"Oh, vo to mere room me rakhi hue hain na."

"Accha, mujhe to pata nahi tha." He said looking at Muski who turned her face.

"Chal room me de deti hoon."

"It's ok maa, abhi guests bahut saare hain neeche mai baad me le leta hoon." He reasoned.

"Haan ye bhi theek hai, bahu tu bhi chal na neeche." She called Muskaan and she nodded.

When they left Sarthak cursed himself for mentioning Nisha again, knowing very well that Muskaan never like her mention.

Next day:-

"Good morning jaaneman." Someone greeted Muskaan when she was in her bed.

She didn't open her eyes listening the voice, "Jaao yahan se mujhe tum se koi baat nahi karni hai."

"Are ek baar baat to suno meri."

"Maine kaha na mujhe koi baat nahi karni hai tum se, jab mai aise baat nahi kar rahi hoon to jaroori nahi hai ki mere sapno me aa k meri neend disturb karo." She said.

"Oye hello madam, mai sapno me nahi hoon. Yahan aap k saamne jeeta jaagta khada hoon." He told.

To this she opened her eyes immediately and looked at him, "Tum yahan?"

"Haan mai yahan."

"Tum itne subah subah yahan kya kar rahe ho,vo bhi mere room me?" she asked getting up from her bed.

"Agar aap ghadi par nigaah daalengi to pata chalega ki 10 baj chuke hain. Subah subah ka mausam gaya, ab afternoon aanewaala hai."

"Kya?"


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
very nice update yaar........👏

so,finally Vedant ki bhi baat ban gayi.chalo uska aadha kaam toh pooraa hua.😉😛

aur rahi baat Mauli n Vatsal ki toh unka kuch nahi ho saktha.ek baar Mauli ji naraaz ho jaathi hai toh unko manaathe manaathe Vatsal naraaz ho jaatha hai.phir Mauli ki baari aati hai manaane ka.kya kamaal ki jodi hai😆😆

ab aate hai hamaare pyaare couple par.in dono ko bas ek mauka dedo akele rehne ka shuru hogayi inki romance.par kya kare woh mauka hi nahi miltha.iss baar dekhlo kambakhat billi na jaane kaha se aagayi inhe disturb karne😆.aur jab uska kaam khatam hua(i mean disturbance ka😆😆)toh bhaag gayi.par uski wajah se Jyoti ji bhi inhe disturb karne aagayi na aakhir mein.bechaare Muski aur Arth,kya karthe?iss tarah se phas gaye ki bachpan ke alaava kuch yaad hi nahi aaya bahaana banaane keliye.aur ye Arth bhi na,kya jaroorath thi use aise waqt par Nisha a naam lene ki?par nahi romance se jab peth nahi bhara toh ab Muski se daant jo khaani hai.😆

really yaar bohuth majaa aaya iss baar.................do continue soon

Edited by esha143 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
Hi Vertika
How r u??
Thanx for liking my reply so much...😛🤗
Now coming to the update it was really very gud..👏👏
Mr.Sinha ko Vedant ne apne ne Poorvi ke baare me sab sach bata diya..Muskaan was so happy for her brother..😊
She really loved dat Poorvi would b her bhabhi now..Sarthak is really very naughty..Har samay inko romance hi soojhta rehta hai..Pyaar karna to inse seekhe.😛
A touch, soft and tender.
A whisper, full of desire
A gasp of sweet surrender
As passion fuels the fire

No words spoken between them
No promises to be kept
No lies being told tonight
No looking back - no regrets

Longing to hold each other
Such precious little time
Both vowed to another
Being lonely their only crime
Ab Vatsal Mauli se naraaz ho gaya..Yeh boys apni girl friends ke favourite hero se itna jealous kyun feel karte hain???
Sarthak ke romantic moment ko ek billi ne kharaab kar diya..😉😆😆
uske chakkar mein us bechare ke chot bhi lag gayi..Muskaan was so very scared..
Naukar ke aa jane par Sarthak ne ek acchhi si story bana di par apni mom ke samne usko koi bahana nahin yaad aaya..Woh to Muski ne usse bacha liya warna sab ke samne unhe kitna embarrassment hota..
Nisha ka naam sunkar Muskaan ko bahut bura lagta hai..Ab Sarthak ko Muskaan ko manana padega😛
Continue soon
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
hii vertika........
first of all thanx a lot for the PM....
and now about the ud......
it was as usual........
awesoooooooome........
superb.......
excellent.......

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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
awesome wonderful update. loved it.
sarthak toh ek bhi mauka nehi chrota.
everytime romance. and that billi ,usne uske romance mein problem create kia.
continue soon dear.

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