Zindagi Bus Yu Hi -2(RN)Epilogue on pg. 54

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

superb!!!updt...

luved d cute fight and lil romance at begining...

den d song was perfect...luved d updt

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iqra11

@iqra11

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

mahak a mindblowing and a terrific update

thanks for sharing

loved the way u structured the music in the update....it was fab

once again a lovely update

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

HIIIIIIII VERTIKA HOW R U ?
SORRY FOR LATE REPLY
ACTUALLY MAIN BAHAR GAYI THI TOH COMMENT NAHI KAR PAAYI
UD WAS AWESOOOOOME
MINDBLOWING
SUPERB
ROCKING
OUT OF THIS WORLD
LOVE ALL THE SCENES
UD ASAP PLZZZZZZZ

LOVE
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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

awesome baby. 👏

Kya baat hai ab to madam ko lagta hai sochna hi nahi padta hoga na update likhne k liye.😉

Ideas to aise aate hain is dimaag me ki poocho mat. 😛

Brilliant n song selection to bahut bindaas hai yaar.😆 This one is one of my fav songs dear. 😊 Well described emotins and Sarthak n Muskaan's pairings.👏

Ab kya hoga Vatsal ka jab madam Mauli naraj hain yun par itna jyada. 😛 Logical bahut hai Mauli maana padega kyounki us ne to bolti hi band kar di na Vatsal ki.😉

continue soon i mean asap.

Edited by varshita - 15 years ago

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Esha

@esha143

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

nice part Mahak,soft romance,beautiful song sequence with all the couples present,funny nok-jokh btn Mauli n Vatsal,everything was just perfect👏👏.and the convo btn Mauli-Vatsal was just too good😆.n yeah Mauli is so right😉.

waiting for the next ud..................................

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

cute n romantic part tha yaar...

sarthak ne apna kiya hua vaada rakha...vaise bhi voh baht pyar karta hai naina se, kab tak apne aap ko us se dur rakh pata...??? mushkaan ko lahenge me dekh kar hi sarthak ne apne shaadi ka plan change kar diya...aur turant shaadi ka plan bana liya...bade jaldi me hain janab...

sarthak ka vaada aur mushkaan ka emotional hona...aur voh hug...aweee...dats so sweet yaar....aur tune kitne behtarin dhaang se likha hai use...too gud...

ab bichare vatsal kya karega...!!! mauli ko pareshaan kar k maze le raha tha...par ab us ki bhi halat kharab hai...!!!

nikki aur sakhshi dono mushkaan ko tease kar rahe hain...aur mauka bhi toh sahi hai na...!!!

yeh mera ek fav song hai...par sachhi.... main peeti bilkul bhi nahi hun...!!!

ab itne achhe song par sarthak dance kaise nahi karta...aur mushkaan ko bhi sath le aaya...par voh thodi sharma rahi thi...sahi hai...ab is situation me sharmayegi nahi toh aur kya karegi...!!!

& lastlly mauli ne sahi kaha vatsal se ki ladkiyon k paas toh baht option hote hain par ladko k paas nahi...!!! vaise bhi mauli toh vatsal se thodi si naaraz bhi hai na...??? ab vatsal kya karega dekhte hain...

chal ab jaldi se cont kar...

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: guglu088
Great update Mahak.
thank u dear 😊 😊 😊

I liked the way Sarthak madse his promises to Muskaan. Absolutely lovely. He loves her so much. Muskan too became emotional and hugged him. Aweee.... I could visualise the scene.
Vow, to is ka matlab mera likhna successful hua. 😳 😳 😳

Here Sarthak was getting desperate to see Muski and Vatsal was teasing Mauli and... Mauli naraaz ho gayi. Acha hua, gentlemen shouldn't tease girls like this.😉 Ab manate raho janab Mauli ko. Mauli ne kya badhiya reasoning di last me ladkiyon ke taiyar hone me time lagane ki. Vatsal ki bolti band kar di.😆😆😆
Sahi kaha na, jab aap k pass options hi nahi honge to aap ko time thodo na lagega. 😉 😉 😉

Aur Saarthak itna besharm ho gaya hai ki sabke saamne Muski ke saath dance karne laga. The families also joined them on the dance floor and everybody had a great time.
Ab shaadi hone hi waali hai na to kaisa sharmaana? 😛 😛 😛

Waiting eagerly for the next update. Please update soon.

Love
Guglu

Thank u Guglu for such nice comment dear 😊 😊 😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: rituka7
update was superb
i loved it
damn cool
update soon

thank u so much Ritu dear 😉 😉 😉

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez
Hi Vertika !!!

As usual Wonderful Update ! 👏👏 👏
Hi Manali, thanks a lot dear 😊 😊 😊

Sarthak really loves muski so much.....awww...loved the way he promised her.
Sach me, vaada nibahana aur pyaar humesha karte rehna asaan nahi hai. 😳 😳 😳

Sarthak is impatient to see muski and both were staring at each other as soon as they met.
Kitna intezzar kiya hain na us ne, ab aur kitna kar paayega. 😉 😉 😉

Ye kya? Ab Mauli toh bahot naraaz hai vatsal se ! Dekhte hai ki kaise manata hai Vatsal usse...
Aasan nahi hai, ab naraj kiya hai to manana to padega hi na. 😉 😉 😉

The song was nice and very well described the excitement of sangeet !
thank u jee 😳 😳 😳

Update soon...