Zindagi Bus Yu Hi -2(RN)Epilogue on pg. 54 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
I hope jaldi hi mai yahan tak aa jaaongi na.
I mean haan is thread pe.
Ab jaa k maza aa raha hai fic me jab se pyaar ka izhaar hua hai tab se khoob romance ho raha hai yahan tak ki phone pe bhi Sarthak kitna naughty ho jaata hai. Ab Mauli ki shaadi Vatsal se fix karane me laga hai Sarthak n i hope us ki koshishon se jaldi hi ye bhi ho jaayega.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

That was nice....not just Sarthak n Muskaan....all the couples were there....and I really loved the song portion....Sarthak to hai hi mast aurr naughty....sabke samne dance karne laga...lekin ab to janab k pass ticket bhi hai....lyftym ki...lolz
Sahi kaha, ab Sarthak aur Muskaan k beech me kabhi koi nahi aayega. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ Thanks 4 liking. 😊 😊 😊

And Vatsal...poor guy....wrong words at even more wrong tym....hehe....lekin anth me Mauli ne bahut sahi baat kaha hehe.
Sahi jawab diya na, naraj karega to jhelna padega hi. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

And first portion k bare me kya kahu....it was so soft n sweet....very nice Vertika.
Thanks again darling 😳 😳 😳


Pls continue soon.



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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hey Vertika....

Beautiful part dear πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thanks dear πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Janab to muski ko lehenga main dekhkar keh raha hain chalo abhi shaadi karlete hain...he is soooo naughty
Us ko aaj kal vaise bhi Muski k alawa soojhta hi kya hai? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Sarthak loves his muski so much ..n i really loved the lines he told to muski ..jab tak is seene main dhadkhan hain aur sasain hain tab tak har pal main apna pyar nibhaunga....muski also felt emotional n she hugged him saying ILU....u have written that scene so beautifully
Thanks dear so much, sach me pyaar aisa hi hota hai na. 😳 😳 😳

sarthak to hamesha bahut impatient hota hain to see his muskan..ye vatsal bhi na pehle mauli ko tease kar k enjoy kar raha tha n baadh main uska gussa dekhkar darr gaya...phi bhi wahape ruka nahin mauli ka burai kar raha tha....too bad
Ab is baat ki hi to saja milegi na us ko,πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† itna bhi nahi bolna chahiye ki kisi ko bura lag jaaye.

here nikki n sakshi r teasing muskan a lot... the song selction is so nice ...all the couples r enjoying a lot n sarthak bhi muski ke saath dance karne laga but muski is feeling s shy...its a nice scene
Thank u again, Muskaan to shy feel karegi hi aakhir us k parents bhi hain yahan jab ki Sarthak ko koi fark nahi padta hai. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

last main mauli ne sahi kaha vatsal se ki ladkhiyon ke pass bahut saare options hote hain khubsurat dikhne ke liye par ladkhon ke pass nahin...dekhthe hain ab ye vatsal saabh kya kahega
Kuch keh nahi sakta na is baat k baad, kyounki sach bhi yahi hai. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

totally fabulous part yaar...


plz post the next part soon ...



Thanks sweet heart for this awesome reply.
😍 😍 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: rituka7

update was superb
i loved it
damn cool
update soon



thank u darling πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Vertika

How r u???
Update was really sweet..
Hello Suhana dear, i am pretty fine, thanks a lot 😊 😊 😊

Sarthak is really very naughty..Apni baat manwana usko acche se aata hai...
Itna to chalta hai na. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Muskaan bhi hamesha uski baaton mein kho jaati hai...
They both love each other dearly..
Really that's true. Koi bhi ladki kho jaayegi agar us ka bf itna sweet ho to. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
"People can change everything
Except for only one thing
It's love, it always remain
Where in our heart reigns.

They said:"Love conquers all"
Cannot be broken like any wall
I know, love is great
And it truly waits.

Let the hearts see the magic of love
The happiness, life can have
It gives yo the fulfillment of life
Eradicates any strife.

I hope love can stand
Through holding each other's hand
Aiming that everybody can see
How wonderful life with love can be."

Beautiful lines yaara, kahan se milte hain yaar tum ko ye.......... 😳 😳 😳

Vatsal Mauli ko bahut tang karta rehta hai...But he loves her a lot...
Koi doubt nahi hai is me. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Sarthak was so mesmerized after seeing Muskaan..She nearly took his breath away...
Har baar us ka haal lost hi hota hai. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

All the couples danced on a beautiful song..Every1 was trying to convey their love to their beloved..I hope Sahil ki feelings ko Saakshi samajh jaaye...
Let's see, but abhi mujhe lagta hai in dono k matter pe time lagega. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Even Sarthak was not afraid to show his love for Muski to the entire world...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Ab to darne ki vaise bhi koi baat nahi hai na. 😊 😊 😊
Continue soon
Bye



Thanks a lot dear Suhana, tum aur tumhari poetry agar na ho to lagta hai sab incomplete hai. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

lovely update,very nice.loved it.

sorry for short comment. next time laba comment hoga.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.



Thanks a lot Rakhi, koi baat nahi hai. 😊 😊 😊Jab time ho tabhi bada sa reply karna. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Hi Vertika, thanks dear for the PM....
Hello Dhara dear 😊 😊 😊

lekin main iss fic me bahoooooooot hi piche hoon....!!!!Shayad wrong muharat me start kiya tha padhna....!!! I am just not able to catch up....but I am trying and will post a comment as soon as I read the whole thing..!!!
Koi baat nahi, tum aaram se padho aur jab poora padh lena tab aaram se comment dena mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›




Thanks a lot sweet heart
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesoooooooome..
superb.........
excellent........



thanks Preeti πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hii Vertika
Hello dear 😊 😊 😊

congrats for new thread...πŸ˜ƒ
update is also very beautiful .waiting for next part.



thank u darling so much
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

superb!!!updt...
thank u dear 😊 😊 😊

luved d cute fight and lil romance at beginning...

den d song was perfect...luved d updt



thanks Lipi that u liked it. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

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