MAYUR SHORT STORY-Tum Miley part6-pg60

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey friends
Thanks a lot for all your encouragement & support
I have decided to start a gallery of Short Stories I'll be writing OS & short stories on Mayur having 2-5 parts
Please do comment good or bad it will help me improve my writing
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TUM MILEY (short story)
part1-pg1
part2-pg16
part3-pg25
part4-pg37
part5-pg51
part6-pg60

A Journey from love to marriage (MAYUR OS)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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TUM MILEY

Mayank Sharma 3rd yr Excel college cool dude,rich handsome hunk , he's a very mischievous boy , prankster but good at heart , girls just wanna be with him but he's waiting for his dream girl

he is rarely seen in class he usually hangs out with his famous mastikhor gang.

Diya was his best friend also a part of the gang she was very naughty at the same time good natured.

The gang also had Ranvijay Mayank's friend in all pranks.

Nupur was a sweet girl,very soft & sensitive she had come to Mumbai for her studies she lived alone in her house she was going to join Excel college in 1st year

Excel college

A gang of boys sitting on their bikes inside the campus

RV-yaar Mayank aaj college ka pehla din hai aur aaj 1st year ke students aane wale hai tou ragging karne mein bohot mazaa aayega

M-haan yaar chal dekhte hai kaun sabse zyada students ki ragging karta hai

Dia-lets see aaj kaun jeet ta hai

A new boy comes he was wearing fat glass basically a nerd types with a big bag

M- Oye…. Mr.Champu

The boy turns

M-idhar aa…..

The boy comes near Mayank

B-Ji bhaiya

M-mai tujhe bhaiya dikhta hu

Chal bol tera naam kya hai

B-Chandu

M-tou Mr.Chandu aaj garmi kuch zyada hai na iss liye apni shirt utharo

B- (nervous) shirt …..kyu????

M-beta apne bhaiya ki baat nai sunoge chal jaldi shirt utaar aur jaa ke mere liye paani le kar aa

The boy removes his shirt all of them were laughing on him he quickly runs from there & gets water for Mayank

M-ab isse peele

B-mai…..

M-haan yaar jabse tujhse itna kaam karaya thak gaya hoga na chal peele

They boy drank the water

B- plz ab mai jau

M-kya aise hi jaayega yeh le shirt (throwing him the shirt)

Mayank was smart he was ragging only boys while RV was searching for girls

M- kyu RV kitne hue

RV-paanch aur tere..

M- 15 hahaha……iss baar bhi mai hi jeeta

RV- tu jabse sirf ladko ki ragging kar raha hai ladkiyo ki bhi karni padegi

M- aisa koi rule nai hai

RV-kyu tu darta hai

M-mai kisi se nai darta

RV-tou theek hai jo ladki ab gate se andar aayegi tu usski ragging karga

M-theek hai

All of them were looking towards the gate when a girl dressed in a while chudidaar looking like an angel enters her she had very light make-up .She was different from other girls of the college who mostly wore mini skirts & a lot of make-up .Mayank was just lost in her plain beauty he couldn't take his eyes off her he was mesmerized by her beauty.

RV-Mayank bula usse .....wo jaa rahi hai

M-(coming back to his senses) jaane de na…

RV-aise kaise …nai bula usse

M-Suniye ….(he stops her)

The girl turned

G-Ji….aap ne mujhe bulaya

RV & the rest of the gang burst into laughter.

M-Aap ka naam kya hai?

G-Ji …mera naam Nupur Bhushan hai she said fiddling with her dupatta

M- theek hai jaiye

She turns to leave

RV-aise kaise abhi tou kuch kiya bhi nai

M-jaane de wo kitni dari hui lag rahi hai

RV-tou kya hua ragging mein har koi dara hua rehta

RV-Aye ladki idhar aao…abhi tumhari ragging hui kaha jo tum jaane lagi

Nupur turned

Mayank could see that she was really scared

RV gave her a cigarette

RV- chal pi ….

N-nai….mai smoke nai karti

RV-tou ab karo

D-she's a girl RV usse chod de yeh sab tou hum boys se karwate

RV-shutup Dia yeh ragging hai kuch bhi karwa sakte…………

RV-(to Nupur) tumhari bhalai iss mein hai tum hamari baat sun lo warna tum jaati nai hum kya kar sakte

Nupur with shaking hands took the cigarette from him & tried to smoke she had tears in her eyes

Mayanks could see the tears rolling down her soft cheeks he felt guilty for bringing tears in those beautiful eyes

As she blew the cigarette she started coughing RV & the rest of the gang were laughing & making fun of her

"Cry baby"…. "Cry baby"…

Mayank felt very bad for her he never hurted any girl though he was a prankster but he certainly respected women.

A boy comes running "Princi aara Princi bhaago"

Mayank was still looking at those scared eyes glistened with tears

RV-chal Mayank

Nupur runs away crying

The whole gang gets scattered .

During the classes

As The Mastikhor gang never attended classes they use to roam around or just sit in the canteen

RV-chal Mayank canteen chalte hai

M-haan tu chal mai aata hu

Mayank wanted to apologize to the girl it was b'coz of him she had ……he started searching for her he didn't knew which class she was in so he started looking into each & every 1st year class .

He peeped into a class & saw the same girl sitting in the 1st bench………… he thought she was soo beautiful a strand of hair was coming on her face which was blocking his view he stood there looking at her big beautiful eyes .Bell rang everyone started coming out of the class . Mayank was waiting for her she didn't come out as he was about to go in the class he bumped into her she was about to fall but he held her by her waist they both share an eyelock she looked into those chocolate brown eyes which were staring at her, her face turned into a scared one & Mayank immediately let her go.

She took her bag & was about to leave

M-mera naam Mayank hai

She ignored & started to walk he came behind her.

M-wo…subha ke liye I'm sorry

She was still walking

M- meri baat tou suniye …..kya naam tha …haan… Nupur….

N- (turned) please mera peecha chod dijiye ….she pleaded & ran from there

Mayank stood there cursing himself why did he ever stop her in the morning he blamed himself for hurting her .

In the evening at the gate Nupur was waiting for an auto when RV came from behind

RV-lift chahiye kya….

Nupur didn't say anything she started walking

RV-aare akadh tou dekho……. Chal na mai chod deta hu

He caught her hand Nupur couldn't take it anymore she turned back & slapped him hard

N-dubara mujhe chune ki koshish bhi mat karna

She leaves from there

RV-Iss ladki ki itni himmat uss ne RV ko thapad mara isse tou mai chodunga nai…..

That's it for today guys

I hope you liked it

Plz do comment as it means a lot to me

Luv

Nidzy

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Nidzy,
Yeppe 1st one to comment
U started a new Mayur ff.
Congrats dear.
Wow i m very happy 4 that.
and loved ur 1st part very much.
it was damn good.
mayank is a prank star but good at heart.
And RV is a stupid guy.
i hate RV
i loved nupur slapped him.
hope nups forgive mayank soon and they become good friend.
awesome start dear.
loved every bit of it.
Love u so much 4 starting such a nice ff.
keep updating
take care.


Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Nidzy!!
awesum upd8 yaar!!!
luvd it...
btw...i hated RV!!
plssss do cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm.. =)

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yaar...not considering fariaa's 'res'...m d first one to coment!!😆
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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grt story yaar!

and congrats for ur gallery........

i loved how mayank fell for her..........

how nupur ignored her.....

and i hate that rv.........

i hate him to the core.........

but i loved the story...........

loved it!

do continue soon............

aur aap zara bataiyengi ki aap "nafrat se mohobbat" kab update karengi?????????

i am waiting...............
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nidhz..nice part..
Mayank never used to attend classes..n he was with Dia n RV..RV is def bad company..
n then he had to rag Nupur..he did'nt want to..bcuz he was attracted to her aldready..but RV made her drink cigarette..n she started coughing n he felt so bad..aww so sweet..
n then he went behind her to apologise bt she didnt listen..
RV asked her for a left..n she ignored him..but he was following her n even held her hang..she gt angry n slapped him..nice..but he will do netyn 2 her!
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting start :D
cool , Mayank is quite diff here :) so is nupur for that matter :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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your ff was rocking...... i could see the whole scene in front of my eyes.........
especially nupur entering college......... she looked so beautiful
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

hey Nidzy!!
awesum upd8 yaar!!!
luvd it...
btw...i hated RV!!
plssss do cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm.. =)

*edited*
yaar...not considering fariaa's 'res'...m d first one to coment!!😆

Thanks dear
I'm glad you liked it
even I hate RV
I'll continue soon
its my pleasure to pm you
luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh i love nupz....rv needed it.......nd pls continue soon.........

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