MAYUR SHORT STORY-Tum Miley part6-pg60 - Page 2

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

grt story yaar!

and congrats for ur gallery........

i loved how mayank fell for her..........

how nupur ignored her.....

and i hate that rv.........

i hate him to the core.........

but i loved the story...........

loved it!

do continue soon............

aur aap zara bataiyengi ki aap "nafrat se mohobbat" kab update karengi?????????

i am waiting...............

Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey nidhz..nice part..

Mayank never used to attend classes..n he was with Dia n RV..RV is def bad company..

n then he had to rag Nupur..he did'nt want to..bcuz he was attracted to her aldready..but RV made her drink cigarette..n she started coughing n he felt so bad..aww so sweet..

n then he went behind her to apologise bt she didnt listen..

RV asked her for a left..n she ignored him..but he was following her n even held her hang..she gt angry n slapped him..nice..but he will do netyn 2 her!

thnx 4 d PM

update soon

-aish

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Thanks Mahi .........

I'm glad you liked it

Even I hate RV

I'll surely continue soon

Aur rahi baat Nafrat se mohabbat ki....

tou wo Faria se poocho

mai ne uss se kaha jab tak wo Desert Love nai update karegi mai Nafrat se nai update karne wali

luv

Nidzy

tum dono apni ladai mein ek baat bhoool rahe ho!

i too am there........

maine socha that ki aaj main "kaun hai woh" update karoongi.........

but now i will update it when u will update that.......

so tattatanan.......... 😆

ab mera update tum par depend karta hai..........

even i thought that main life in a movie thodi si jaldi update kar doon.......but i guess.........

hey congrats for the new gallery
the start was awesome
loved it
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

tum dono apni ladai mein ek baat bhoool rahe ho!

i too am there........

maine socha that ki aaj main "kaun hai woh" update karoongi.........

but now i will update it when u will update that.......

so tattatanan.......... 😆

ab mera update tum par depend karta hai..........

even i thought that main life in a movie thodi si jaldi update kar doon.......but i guess.........

luv

ab yeh baat to tum dono par hi depend karti hai......

and this time i was thinkng to write abt nupur rather than mayank..........

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Aare nai Mahi aisa mat bol

mai kaun hai woh ke liye kab se wait kar rahi hu

plz aisa mat kar

aur

life in a movie ko delay karne ki sochna bhi mat

hum dono apne differences sort out karne ki koshish karenge

lekin tumhara update delay hona afford nai kar sakte

luv

Nidzy

Nidzy dekh ye sab kuch tere wasaise ho rahi hai. nahi tu jid karti nahi aisa hota.
ab man ja meri dost-plz plz nafrat se mohaabat update kar de.
phir mahak kaun hai woh.
tum dono ka update padne ke bina main ji nahi paunga.
So plz save ur frnsds life.
jaldi update kar de- akher ye teri fr ka jindegi ka sawal hai.
plz plz plz update soon

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hey Nidzy,
Yeppe 1st one to comment
U started a new Mayur ff.
Congrats dear.
Wow i m very happy 4 that.
and loved ur 1st part very much.
it was damn good.
mayank is a prank star but good at heart.
And RV is a stupid guy.
i hate RV
i loved nupur slapped him.
hope nups forgive mayank soon and they become good friend.
awesome start dear.
loved every bit of it.
Love u so much 4 starting such a nice ff.
keep updating
take care.

Hey Nidzy!! 👏

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

ab yeh baat to tum dono par hi depend karti hai......

and this time i was thinkng to write abt nupur rather than mayank..........