'mayur' the temptation....page 44 part 12 - Page 27

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Posted: 15 years ago
It was very romantic and touching
i hope ki wo sheena aur RV kuch na kar paye otherwise i will be very sad
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome
loved it
nupur is so understanding
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey pari
niceeee update..
thanx for the pm!!!
Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
well waiting for the next part
soon update pari
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely ,nice update.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago

heyy guys,,,,,,,,,,,,, here is the next update....... dont forget to comment and press lyk tab,,,,,, and if you hav forgotten this ff than the previous update is on page 36..

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,m: nupur......... jaldi nikalo na bathroom se humme aaj samrat keyahaan jaana hai gunjan ka bday hai..........

n: haan nikal rhi hoon bas......

but wat mayank noticed was that the bathroom door was not locked,,,,,,,, and an evil smile played on his lips...........
mayank moved forward and opened the door slightly.......... only to find his wife wrappped in a light pink colored towel and was applying body lotion,......
mayank was lost to see his sexy and hot wife.....
wen nupur turned and saw mayank........ her eyes widened,,,,,,,,
she quickly took the duppataa which was placed on the shelf and covered herself..... mayank smiled at her childishnes,,,,,,
n: mayank tum andar kya ka rhe ho?
m: kyu mrs sharma aaj badi sharam aa rhi hai..... kal raat ko to.......
n: mayank dekho..... dekho tum bahaar chale jaao......
m: aur agar nhi gya to?? (he said cuming closer to her)
n: mayank tum.......
mayank slowly came forward and nupur a step backward until she was stopped by the wall....
n: mayank tum..... tum......
m: mein kya nupur.??? (he said holding her waist and pulling her towards himm..)
n: abbb.......
mayank slightly removed the dupaatte from her which she used to covr herself.........
m: tum bhi na nupur.....
he opened the shower which was right on their top..........
and now the scene was lyk this,,,,,,
nupur was in towel mayank in his black vest and grey lower........ both bathing in the shower......
mayank rubbing her back and nupur just...... BLUSHING.......
mayank kisses nupur on her cheek then her neckline..............
making nupur go weak in her knees..... she is in a state to fall wen mayank holds her tight,,,,,,,
then he looks at her lips passionately and brushes them with his..... he then closes the shower tap and continues the kiss........
nupur too responds,,,,,,,,,
they broke wen both are out of breath,,,,,,,
nupur looks everywhere except mayank......... and then runns out of the bathroom,,,,,,,
after an hour,,,,,
nupur is sitting in front of the mirror..... and mayank standin just behind the mirror and applying gel to his hair,,,
m: nupur gunjan ke liye gift kya le jaayein?
n: mene gift le liye tha mayank........
m: okk.......
they go to samrat's place........ and there is a grand party going on,,,,
they wish gunjan and then enjoy,,,,,,,,,
but mayank was still not enjoying the party.....
nupur was confused with mayank's behavior....
mayank left the hall and sat in the garden out side......
nupur saw him moving out and followed him.......
she saw him sitting on the bench.............
"something is wrong" she thot....
she went to mayank .................. and sat next to him..
but he was so lost that he did not notice that nupur was sitting next to him.......
n: mayank......
mayank looked at her....his eyes were all red... and he still had tears in his eyes .... to which nupur reaction was again confused..
n: mayank you were crying...........
m: nupur....
and he hugged her........... and nupur cud feel him crying.....
n: wat happend mayank........
m: i need to go home nupur......... (he said breaking the hug..)
n: mayank abhi...
m: plz..
n: fine.. chalo..... and stop crying....
they left for their home... and nupur was driving ......
in their bedroom........
n: mayank kya baat hai.?? tum thik ho na..
m: kuch thik nahi hai nupur............. sab galat ho rha hai.......
n: plz mayank mujhe saaf saaf bataao baat kya hai?
mayank looked at her,,,,,,
then mayank started,,,,, he told her everything..... why he got married to her so quickly then all his work load.... then sheena marrying rv and samrat's view on it... then how he hid the wedding card why he did so,,,,,, all........... all............ all..
and nupur was listening quitely..........
she hugged him ...... to which mayank was taken back.......
n: mayank i love you.......
m: i love you too.............
but soon mayank realised wat he has done..... he told everything to nupur.......... it was so dangerus ,,,,,,,,,
and mayank's face was showing regret for telling nupur.
and nupur noticed it.......
n: myank......
m: (not able to meet her eyes..)
n: mayank meri taraf dekho.. (he did so) ,,, tumhi ne to mujhe kahaa tha na mayank ki jab tak tum mere saath ho tum mujhe kuch nhi hone donge,,, phir aaj kya hua...
m: nu..pur..
n: to tumne yeh kese soch liya mayank ki mein .. tumpar bharosa nhi karungi .... mujhe vishwaas hai mayank ki jab tak tum mere saath ho mujhe darne ki koi zaroorat nhi hai.......
m: par nupur......
n: par kya mayank...... tumhaara haath pakadkar mein kuch bhi seh sakti hoon,,,,,, haan mujhe thodi ghabraahat hoti hai par bas mein itna chahti hoon ki tum mere ssaath rho...... humesha humesha ke liye...........
and then they hugged...... this tym both had tears but the tears were of happiness..............
next day:
they were getting ready as they had to visit sheena's engagement........ not bcoz it was SHEENA'S engagement but mayank had to talk to a client abt his projeect who asked him to meet there.......
m: nupur..... are you sure tum bhi chalna chahti ho.......
n: haan mayank........
m: par..
n: kyu tumhe sheena pe line maarni hai isliye mujhe nhi le jaa rhe?
both burst out laughing..... and mayank was happy for nupur.................
at the engagement venue...
mayur entered .....
mayank was searching for his client....... he wanted to meet him soon and then leave...
but he noticed that nupur's grip on her hand was growing tighter..... more tighter....... he looked at his hand..
nupur's nails were digging in his skin....... he was going to say sumthing............... but then
he looked towards her who had a fear in her eyes and her face was going pale..... he moved his eyes to the direction of hers and saw rv standing there.......... looking at her and smiling evil......
mayank then shifted his gaze to nupur's face..... her face was completely filled with fear..........
nupur was now clutching mayank's arm and trying to avoid rv's dirty gaze..
mayank cud clearly see er uncomfortableness and quickly starts to search for hi client........
after an hour,,,,,
mayank was busy with the discussion with his cliet.... and sooon he noticed that nupur was missing,, she went to take a glass of water,,, and rv too was missing.................
OH SH*T,,,,,, mayank quickly rushed to find nupur.....
wen he suddenly come across a room..... and sees nupur...... he was going to go near her and hug her...... but... he saw rv too was there,,,,,,,,, dont know why but his heart told him to give a chance to nupur to face rv..... coz for how long will she live in a fear of rv,,,,,, and so he decided to be out and will enter if needed.......
rv: nupur....... (coming closer to her) yur looking gorgeous........... (to which mayank was boiling in anger)
n: ranvijay mujhse door rho.....
rv: but kyu babes???? kya hum tumhe acche nhi lagte?? aur tum humse kiske liye door ho rhi ho..... uss mayank ke liye??? that bloody idiot fool, *******,,,,,
annd
SPLASH.......
a tight slapp on his face by "NUPUR"
N: how dare you..... mere saamne mayank ke baare mein aisaa bolne ki himmat kese ki tumne,,,,, aaindaa aisaa kiya to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.....
while two jaws dropped one of rv with the tight slap and one of mayank... and we all know why,,
rv; tum jaanti nahi ho tum ne kitni badi bhool ki hai aur tumhe darr nahi laga ek pal ke liye bhi ki ieska anjaam kya hoga? yur going to pay for it miss nupur...
n: MRS NUPUR MAYANK SHARMA...... got it.......... (with a voice full of anger and t was so sharp)
rv: got it.... by the way tumhe iske liye bahut badi keemat chuukaani hogi nupur........
n: keemat to tumhe chukaani hogi,,,,,,,, jo tumne kiya hai usse koi nhi bhula sakta hai.................. aur mujhe ab darrne ki bhi koi zarurat nhi hai kyuki mayank mere saath hai......... wo mujhe kuch nhi hone dega........
mayank was lyk aweeeee,,,,,,,
n: aur tum............
wen a lady arrived and took rv with her.... while mayank entered.,.
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so here was the update............ hope you lyked it................. i knw it was too late but still........... waiting eagerly for yur response.................

muaah,.,,

pari......

Edited by pari.theprinces - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Well I am the first one to comment

I really loved this update
Wow romantic.passionate and still so flawless 😛😛😛😛
Nupur ka karara jawab RV ko
that was amazing and i loved ki mayank ne nupur ko sab bata diya and she is hiding her fear but at last RV ko jo jawab diya it was too good pari
Thanks for the PM Cutie pie
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
fabulous update pari
loved it
mayur in were too romantic☺️☺️☺️
glad mayank told nupur every thing
and the slap nupur gave Rv was fabulous
update soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm wow really very nice

thx 4 the pm do continue waiting 4 the nxt
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Posted: 15 years ago
brilliant updatee....loved it.. continue it s000n....

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