(DMG)~Silsila Yeh Chaahat Ka~Thread 1 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi guyz!!

thanx fr ur comments....im glad ull liked it....bt plz b honest if ull dint lyk it say it....newayz thnx...luv ull
Part 2
Rahul found muskaan alone nd pushed her towards the wall.Theu\y looked into each others eyes nd their stare conveyed to each other what they wanted to tell each other words were not needed.
Rahul-muskaan i....i...
Just den atul enters...dey did not realize he entered....he made a voice to make dem realize dat he was dere....bt dey still dint respond as they were soo lost in each other....den atul went to rahul and patted him on his back disturbing the sweet romantic moment...dey parted away nd were very embarressed and blushing more than ever...
Rahul-kya yaar atul dara hi diya tha tumne
Atul-aha daraya ya disturb kiya...
Rahul-Wateva...tu bol tu yaha kya kar raha hai...
Atul-sorry fr disturbing....aur ha anji ne bheja mujhe tujhe doondhne ke liye....armaan ne decorations bhej diye ja madad kar...bye..tata
Rahu-plz yaar tu ja na...
Atul-nayi tune mujhe anji se alag kiya tha na to ab thu bhugat ja muski se door...byyye
Rahul-atul yaar...fine m sorry ab to maafi maang raha hoon
Atul-nooo wayz ja
(atul pushed rahul out of the house)
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Anjali-kab se intezaar kar rahi hoon...kaha gaye the tum
Rahul-woh main
Anjali-Khair chodo...kya hum wapas kaam pe lag sakte hai plzz...
Rahul-haan chalo....(in a soft voice) yeh atul bhi na hamesha disturb karta hai agar who na hota toh
Anjali-kuch kaha tumne
No response as he is imagining he nd muskaan soo close 2 each other dat they cud fell each others breath on their face..
Anjali-rahul(patting him)
He gets bak to his conscious
Rahul-haan....who...uh...kaam ho gaya
Anjali-humne shuru hi kab ki thi??...rahul kaha khoye huye the.....
Rahul-who kuch nahi sry....lets get bak to work...ok...(in a soft voice) yeh sab aaj mujhe muskaan ke saath nahi rehne dete hai aur na hi sochne de rahe....mera bad luck hi kharab hai
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Outside the OT
Abhimanyu-sister sab tayaar hai
Sister- yes sir....10min. mein surgery shuru honi chahiye dr.shashank ne kaha hai
Abhimanyu-Good evening!
Nikita Good Evening dr. Abhimanyu Modi
Abhimanyu- so all set ready for ur surgery
Nikita-yes sir..All The Best!! for ur frst surgery after a long tym...
Abhimanyu-thank you....i luv u Dr. Nikita....
Nikita-I love you too Dr. Abhimanyu Modi
Sister-Sir,Maam surgery ka tym ho gaya hai
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In the shop
Armaan-sab ke liye gifts khareed liye...aur ab kapde....chalo
Ridhima- armaan plz mujhe bohut bhook lagi hai plz pehle kuch kha lete hai uske baad tumhe jo bhi shopping karni hai isliye...plz
Armaan-theek hai kya khana hai.....
Ridhima-mujhe ....uhhhh
Armaan-no no nooooo plz
Ridhima-yes arman yes
Armaan-jab bhi tumhare saath khaana khaane jataa hu tab chinese hi khana padta hai plz nt dis tym....lets eat italian tday plz....
Ridhima-theek hai armaan...tumhaare liye kuch bhi
Armaan-thank god...
He catches her waist nd pulls her towards him.
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In the Restaurant
Armaan-ab bolo kya khaana hai
Ridhima-italian tumhara idea tha....to tum zyaada jaante honge
Armaan- aisa kyun....main kyun zyaada jaane laga
Ridhima-kyunki mere hisaab se toh tum apne har girlfriend ko italian garden hi to le jaate ho including me
Armaan-ya fine
Ridhima-mujhse pehle to bohut saare girlfriends reh chuke hai....bt i hope mere baad ek bhi nahi hogi
Armaan-u were ma girl....u r ma girl....nd u vil always b ma girl.....dnt worry....par ha main tumhe yeh guarentee nahi kar sakta ki ladkiyan mujh par nahi marengi....par ha yeh guarentee kar sakti hun ki main kisi ladki par nahi marungi....sivaye 1 ladki ki
Ridhima-Wat....kaun hai who
Armaan-tumhe har baat bataana zaroori hai kya....tum jal jaogi
Ridhima-no wayz main kisi se jalti walti nahi hoon
Armaan-theek hai agar tum itna insist kar rahi ho to bata deta hoon....uska naam hai....
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Dats all 4 nw
i might update again tday
Coming up
Atul confessing his luv
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Posted: 15 years ago
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armman says to riddhima aur uska naam HAI FARZANA IRANI
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazing!!! Pls update soon and pls do PM me.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great part...........please pm me when u update...
just asking-- is Abhi really 5 yrs older than Niki???
isnt that a lil too much???
Lotsa love,
Sheena
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Guyzz!!
thanx fr all da luv i received frm ull.....muah
Part 3
Armaan-aur uska naam....hai....cum on basket.....r u serious tum nahi jaanti....
Ridhima-nahi(in anger).....agar main jaanti toh tumse kabhi nahi poochti na....IDIOT
Armaan-fine nahi bataa raha....itna gussa karne waali ladki ko toh bilkul nahi
Ridhima-kyun....mujhe kyun nahi kahoge
Armaan-kyunki agar maine tumhara dushman ka naam le liya toh tum gusssa ho jaogi
Ridhima-gussa aur main....paagal ho gaye ho kya....ill b more than happy.....good morning armaan....its high tym u realise dat...agar tum meri dushman se pyaar karoge to main khush hongi kyunki meri dushman ko jo tumhe sehna padega......poor her
Armaan-main tumhaare liye musibat hoon.....jao main tumse baat nahi karta....aur naa hi uss ladki ka naam bataunga...
Ridhima- obviously tum musibat ho.....aur jaha tak us ladki ki baat hai to mujhe bilkul nahi janna
Armaan-gud fr u nd fr me
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Atul cums to the hall where anjali nd rahul r working.
Atul-(gestures rahul and tells him to cum to a side) rahul yaar....who actually....maina anjali se apni dil ki baat kehne waala hoon....isliye i wanna tok to her alone.....so if u can plz excuse us fr sumtym it wud b gr8 help
Rahul-arey yaar itna formal hone ki kya zaroorat hai v r frnds nd i do understand ......tu anjali se baat kar tabtak main muskaan se baat karta hoon....baat hote hi mujhe aake inform kar dena ok....all the best!!
Atul-thnx yaar....
Rahul- waise tips chahiye??
Atul- nahi main apne andaaz se bataana chahta hoon....i wanna show her da real me...
Rahul-dats da spirit champ
Atul-ok..
Atul-(goes to anjali) anjali main tumse kuch kehna chata hoon....
Anjali-haan atul bolo
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Ridhima-waise khana acha tha na..
Armaan-yeah
Ridhima-tumhara choice itna bhi bura nahi hai
Armaan-itna wat do u mean itna bilkul bura nahi hai....i know i know.....isliye m sure tumhe woh ladki bhi zaroor pasand aayegi
Ridhima-ladki kaunsi ladki???
Armaan-remember order dene se pehle...tum jal rahi thi wgera wagera
Ridhima-ohhh woh waali ladki....newayz main jal nahi rahi thi ok...
Armaan-(comes close to her and whispers in her ear) jaise ke main belive karne wala hoon...
Ridhima-HUH??
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Nikita-thank god surgery successful thi...it was a really long one
Abhimanyu-yeah ur righ....waise niki tum party ke liye jaa rahi ho??
Nikita- haan kyun?? tum nahi aa rahe??
Abhimanyu-no...who im vry tired so mujhe sona hai
Nikita- dnt b stupid plz itll b refreshiong yaar...abhi plz meri khaatir...plzz
Abhimanyu-but
Nikita-(cuts him)no if no but....ur cumin nd dats final....dnt say no agar tum mujhse pyaar karte ho to u vil cum
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i wrote 3 parts tday cant ryt more...bt if i can i vil
Coming up
Party
Armaan jealous
Atul full confession
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
waiting for da party and more AN!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey .....nice part......a perty cumin up.....wooh.....nice part cumin up.....luved d convos......do continue soon n thanks for d pm....

wid luv
radhika
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome parts
i loved it
after long time its AR cute fight
continue PM me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey it was very nice...do pm me.....thnxxx continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Guyzz!!
im bak....thnx fr ur comments nd i hav a request can ull plz spread ma fan fic to many ppl itz nt famous nd i want it to b vry famous if ull dnt mind plz telll ur frnds nd evryone thank u.....
Part 4
At the Gupta's House.
Anjali nd ridhima return frm sajeevani nd r gonna get ready fr their party at sanjeevani...as they enter they c dat all da lights r off nd there is complete darkness...,they thought dat they must hav gone out....
Anjali-arey yeh saari lights band kyun hai...kahi woh baahar to nahi chale gaye??
Ridhima-haan shaayad par ghar ka ek sadasya to ghar par rehta hai kyunki woh log to jaante hai ki humlog aane waale hai
Anjali-ur ryt ridzi....par shaayad zaroori kaa aa gaya hoga itz ok..
Ridhima- di pl aaj pehle main change karti hoon phir aap kar lena...ok
Anjali-no ridzi...no wayz
Ridhima-(in a babyish voice) plz di aapke choti si angel ke liye itna bhi nai kar sakti....
Anjali-rizi plz tu jaanti hai na jab tu yeh puppy wala shakal banaati hai to main tumhe manaa nahi kar sakti....hamesha aise hi patati hai aur pata nahi kyun main pat jaati hun...go now fast
Ridhima-main jaanti hun aap itni aasaani se kyun patati hai...kyunki aap mujhse bohut pyaar karti hain isliye..
Ridhima goes to anjali nd kisses her on her cheek....nd says
Ridhima-di ur the best!! luv U!!!
Just then the lights turn on nd evryone screams surprise!!the two sisters get the shock of their lyf!!they r overfilled wid joy....they had seen their brother after a loong ty...he was smriti's son(ex wife) he cud nt attend the marriage bcoz he had a vry impotant meeting which wud change his lyf....his name was karan..
Ridhima-bhaiya!! m so happy to c u aap nahi jaante aaj main kitna khus hu....
Anjali-yeah karan chal ab tu tayaar ho ja....aur ha red main kuch pehnao jaldi....chal ridzi
Karan -par kyun??
Ridhima-(walking towards her bedroom)party ke liye....na mat kehna jaldi....aap log bhi tayaar ho joa....
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Hospital
Abhimanyu-niki chalo main tumhe ghar chod deta hun
Nikita-no its ok main khud chali jaaoongi
Abhimanyu-niki main abhi hoon tumhaara boss nahi dnt b soo formal...chalo ab
Nikita- ok fine
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In the car
Nikita-kitna achaa mausam hai na
Abhimanyu-hmmm
Nikita-i luv this weather...its jst so refreshing
Abhimanyu-hmmm.
Nikita-kya kab se hmm hmm kar rahe ho kuch to bolo
Abhimanyu-haan...who main bas soch raha tha ki yeh mausam kitna romantic hai....alll needed fr this weather is a candle light dinner and two lovers....totally perfect for a date...
Nikita-who to hai
Abhimanyu stops the car
Nikita-tumne gaadi kyun rok di??
Abhimanyu-tum hamesha yeh sawaal kyun poochti ho...agar itna tym mera saath bitaana hai to shaadi kar lo na
Nikita luks out nd sees her house
Nikita-oh!! sry....cya
Abhimanyu-main tumhe 1 ghante mein pick karne aaraha hoon....ok bye...
Nikita-fine byee
She walks....den turns bak...
Nikita-i luv u...
She runs toards her house....nd abhi is thinking abt da frst tym she sed i luv u....
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At the Gupta House
Anjali-ridzi pata hai aaj kya hua?/
Ridhima-agar koi mujhe bataayega to jaanu waise bhi aaj pura din main baahar thi...kyan hua??
Anjali-atul ne mujhe propose kiya...
Ridhima stands up at once nd goes towards anjali....happily she says
Ridhima-really di??....aapne kya kaha??....haan to kaha na??....usne aapko kese propose kiya??...bolo na di...
Anjali-itne sawaal poochogi to kabhi nahi bata paoongi...maine kaha ki mujhe tym chahiye aur mai aaj party mein use bata doongi....usne bohut simple tareeke se propose kiya...bas apni dil ki baat mujhe bataa di...ohut cute lag raha tha...i dont know wat to do....he knelt down after tellin me wat he feels fr e nd proposed...
Ridhima-di aapko simple cheeze achi lagti hai na...
Anjali-yah ridzi! t i neva felt fr him in dat way...he is ma gud frnd...
Ridhima-(cuts her) di yes u do feel fr hum...aap uska khayaal rakhti hai uske baare meiin sochti hain...di its jst dat u dnt wanna accept it....sumthing inside u is nt allowing u to...kya baat hai di
Anjali-i dont know...shayad papa use accept na kare
Ridhima-di shuru mein papa ne armaan ko bhi accept nahi kiya par baad mein to humaara pyaar hi jeeta na di aur papa ab is rishte se khush bhi hai...
Anjali-i think ur ryt toh kya main use haan keh du
Ridhima-obviously...go for it di...all the best!!
Anjali-thnx...main nikalti hu atul ko bataana hai ....tu sab ko le kar aa jaana ok bye
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Party
Anjali-hi!!
Atul-hii!!
Anjali-tum yahaan itni jaldi..
Atul-haan bas aise hi
Anjali-mera wait kar rahe the na??
Atul-who actually
Anjali-maine soch liya hai ke ......c atul i no u luv me...aur shayad main bhi tumse(atul flashes a smile)par mujhe darr hai ki papa...
Atul-(holds her hand)agar humaaraa pyaar sachaa hai to hum zaroorek honge....aur armaan ne bhi to mushkilo ka saamna kiya...main bhi kar loonga
Anjali-ok...
They hug as no one is there...nd r realy happy wid each other...wen atul decides hell start being a man
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Sry guyz cudnt put jealousy part surely ill put it in the nxt part
Thanx fr reading

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