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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fanofmjht

great update
thanks for passing 3 years in 1 chapter
who said to you its boring???
its just fabulous
do cont soon
and sorry for late comment

hey thanks 4 liking the update dear
n ya i passed 3 years in one chapter...........actually i didn't want to drag the story so thats why
n thanks a lot 4 undestanding n enjoying this update
i'll cont soon 4 sure 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear thanks 4 liking the update........
well it will take time 4 them to fall in love
but lets see wat will happen next 😉
i'll try to update asap😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys thank you all 4 liking chapter 4......... here i m going to update 5th one.........n please don't forget to leave ur precious comments............


Chapter 5
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Mayank was now back from london n was actually really happy because now he could meet nupur after almost 2 yrs n 7 months........he tried a lot to contact her........to find out where she is........but he couldn't........the onething he came to know about her was that she was in same city but where...........he didn't know........he just wanted to meet her, to see her.............he was dieing to see his love but he was helpless because there was no any clue of her..........but he was determined that he would find her at any cost............

Sharma mension

today mayank was going to join office..........mama ji n mayank's mom were very happy because finally he gave his consent to join office.........their happiness knew no bounds............
MJ: to barkhudaar tyaar hain aap aaj apni zimadaryon ko sambalne k liye...............
mama ji said as mayank came for breakfast...........he was in black suit looking as usual handsome n dashing............
M: ji mama ji.......bilkul (he said smilingly sitting on chair)
G: kya baat hai mayu aaj to buhat smart lag rahe ho............
M: well wo to main hamesha hi lagta hun...........tumne shayad aaj notice kiya hai..........chashmish..........
G: (getting irritated) dekhien aunty isse.............aaj bi shuru ho gya hai
MM: mayu...........beta aaj nahi............
M: ok maa.............as you wish.........aur chash.........(at his mom's glare)....i mean gunjan tumhe meri complains karne k ilawa aur bi kuch aata hai k nahi............
G: aur wo main tuhe kyon bataon..............
M: ok naa batao...........waise bi i m not interested..........
G: aaj keh lo jo kehna hai...........i wont say you anything........kyonki aaj tumhara din hai.......
M: oh really...........
G: bilkul...........acha mayu waise tum mujy kya gift do gay aaj.......
M: (amaized at this) kyon main tumhe kyon gift don?
G: aaj tumhara office main pehla din hai...........to tumhe mujhy kuch dena chahiye na........
M: arry yeh kahan ka rule hoa...........gift to tumhe mujy dena chahiye..........aur tum ulta mere se maang rahi ho
G: well gift to main tum se lun gi hi..........aur mujy kya chahiye wo main bataon gi jab tum wapiss aao gay office say.........
M: thats not fair gunjan.............
MM: arry mayu...........iss main kya problem hai............de dena gift.......
M: maa aap to hamesha iss ki hi side leti ho..........
MM: han bilkul meri beti jo hoi wo...........
M: to main kon hon..............
G: mayank tum beti thori na ho tum to bete ho............itna bi nahi pata (trying to make fun of him)
M: hahaha............ very funny..........lekin buhat purana joke tha..........
MJ: mayank beta ab hame chalna chahiye...........aaj pehla din hai office ka to late nahi hona chahiye tumhe......
M: ji mama ji.......... chalty hain..........mera breakfast bi ho gya hai...........
after taking blessings from his mom mayank went to office..........gunjan wished him good luck

In office mayank received a warm welcome from employees..........his office was set according to his taste.......everything was just perfect like him.........he was trying to concentrate on his work as this was his first day n he wanted to impress his mama ji.........his mama ji was also very happy looking his hard work n his so much dedication towards his work.............but whenever he got any break he just get lost in nupur's memories...........first bumping with her , that date,.her that smile on his silly joke...........her that nodding to his proposal........he was head over heals in love with nupur..........it was becoming very hard for him to live without nupur...........
mayank made him comfortable on his chair resting his arms beneath his head..........he closed his eyes n heaved a sigh..........n mumbled ..........."nupur.......kahan ho tum"...........

After a long hectic day mayank came back to home.......he went to his room to freshen up..........
after taking some rest he came down to hall..........gunjan was waiting for him there.........
G: hey mayu how was ur day?
M: (sitting on couch) it was great..........but im very tired.........
G: no problem..........mere sath shopping pe jao gay na to thakan uttar jaye gi..........
M: wat?...........shopping aur wo bi tuhare sath ..........no way.......(he simply denied)
G: how rude............maine kaha na tum aa rahe ho matlab aa rahe ho..........remember mera subah wala gift
M: (getting up) this is cheating gunjan...........i m not comming with you.......tum akeli jao..........
G: tum jaante ho na mujhy akele shopping pe jana passand nahi hai...........
M: aur mujy tumhare sath jaana pasand nahi hai.......kitna time laga deti ho kuch bi pasand karne main.......
G: dekho mayank(pointing finger at him).........tum mere stah chal rahe ho bass.........ok..........aur main zyada dair nahi lagaon gi.....promise
after pleading a lot mayank agreed...........so they both went to shopping plazza for shopping..........



Shopping Mall

while shopping mayank was getting bored.........he was really irritated........n said to gunjan
M: gunjan this is not fair............tum ne kaha tha tum zyada time waste nahi karo gi.........lekin tumhe to kuch pasand hi nahi aa raha..........
G: offo mayank ab kuch select karne main time to lagta hi hai na...........aisa karo tum bi kuch shopping kar lo apne liye.........ok
M: no thanks...........mujy koi shopping wagaira nahi karni...........tum bas jaldi karo.........main bahar jaa raha hun.........tum jaldi aa jana
G: arry sunno to............
but till then mayank had left...........
he was wandering here n there in mall but then a diamond jewellry shop attracted his attention........he went to the shop to buy something for nupur of course.........he decided to give it to her whenever he would meet her........
mayank looked here n there as if inspecting the whole shop...........then a sells man asked
SM: sir wat would you like to buy?
M: ummm.......diamond rings?
SM: oh to sir aap apni engangement k liye ring lena chahte hain?
M: (smiled at the thought of his engangement with nupur).......ah........yeah i want it for my engangement......
SM: (smilingly) ok sir ...........let me show you some exclusive rings..........
mayank saw many rings but he was in perplex as which will be perfect for nupur..........then he saw a ring........a simple ring with a daimond on it, it was so beautiful n delicate..........he thought it will be perfect for nupur as she is also a simple n delicate girl just different from all others............after selecting that ring he paid for it...........n was looking at the ring......n smiled imaging this ring in nupur's finger............he was lost in his dreamland when a voice bring him back to the world..............he heard someone saying "nupur"
hearing this word after such a long time his heart beat increased...........he instantly saw towards the direction from where the voice came..................
he just couldn't believe his eyes as he was seeing his love.........his nupur after such a long time.........
she was there with some girl n was looking like a fairy i a pink n white anarkali dress.........mayank just froze there looking at her...........he was lost in her..........she was talking with the some girl n was smiling...........looking her smiling his heart skipped a beat..........he wasn't even blinking his eyes wat if it would prove a dream.........he was just looking his life infront of his eyes
in background a song was playing........which was very close to his heart

jaanemann jaanemann
jaanemann jaanemaan

ik naam tumhara le kar
hum jeete hain marte hain
ye ishq niba dena tum
guzarish yeh karte hain

jaanemann jaanemann
jaanemann jaanemann


he came back to his senses when he noticed that she was going towards lift...........n was not a dream .....
mayank shouted her name ..........."nupurrrrrrrr" but till then lift's door got closed..........
he rushed towards the lift............but it was too late........then he ran through the stairs........as fast as he could.......as if his life is going away from him again he didn't want to loose her again............when he reached on the ground the floor he saw her going towards the exit door...........he rushed towards the door............he was out of breath......but he didn't care.........he just wanted to meet her.........
he was running with full speed to stop herbut somone hold his hand...........he tried to release his hand without even looking at the person.........but that hold was also very strong..........he turned to look at the person as that person called his name......"mayank"............mayank turned to see that stupid person who was holding his hand
M: (shocked)............sameer tu..........
S: hey mayank............yaar kahan gayab ho gya tha.........aur to yahan kya kar raha hai........
M: ( cutting him off) aik minute sameer............(he abruptly turned towards the door but nupur was out of sight.........he punched his one hand in other n mumbled)...........damn it........... (n then runned his hands through his hair)
S: kyaa hoa tumhe............aur yeh iss tarha bhaag kahan rahe thy
mayank turned to face him.......in heart was cursing him.........only because of him he could not meet nupur.......he was going to meet her after 2 years n 7 months n 23 days............but that stupid sameer
M: kuch nahi...........bas hona kya hai....thanks to you just
S: (neglecting his scarstic comment) well dude kahan gayab ho gaye thy..........london se to tum achanak hi aa gaye.........
M: han bas family ki buha yaad aa rahi thi to...........
S: oh really family ki(teasing him)..........ya wo apni dream girl ki..........wahan to sab larkiyan tere pichy pagal thi lekin tujy apni dream girl k khyaalo se fursat hi kahan thi............
M: (chuckeled)..........to tu to khush tha na unn se phir tu hi to deal karta tha.........pata nahi kitni girl frinds thi tumhari.........
S: ab zahir hai sab tumhare jaise bewkoof thori na hote hain.........waise kab ho rahi hai teri shaadi teri dream girl se...........aur kab milwa raha hai hamien bhabhi se......
M: well buhat jaldi milwa deta agar aik idiot rastay main naa aa jata.........(pointing to sameer)
S: ok well mujy to buhat craze hai teri dream girl se milne ka.........aakhir main bi dekhna chahta hun k kon hai wo jiss ne tujh apna dewaana bana rakha hai..........
M: by the way tu yahan kaise?
S: arry kya bataon yaar mama chahti thien k main shadi kar lun.........issi liye yahan bula liya hai mujy........main to nahi chahta yeh shaadi wagaira but mama ko kon samjaaye...aur by the way kal meri engangement hai..........tum zaror aana........ok.........
M: kal to possible nahi hai...........
S: main tujh se poch nahi bata raha hun..........aur koi bahana nahi..........ok.......kal shaam ko hotel palace main meri engangement hai...........tum zaror aao gay..........i will wait 4 you
M: ok..........fina........main aa jaon ga........
till then gunjan came to mayank.............
G: chalo mayank chalien.........meri shopping ho gayi hai.........
S: oh to yeh hai tumhari dream girl...............nice choice i must say..........
M: ahem ahem...........yeh meri cousin hai..........gunjan..........my best friend also..........not dream girl
S: oh im so sorry............well nice to meet you miss gunjan......... (he farward his hand for handshake)
G: (shaking hand with him).......nice to meet you too mister......?
M: sameer.............he was my friend n also my room mate in london.......
G: oh hi sameer.........(sameer was still holding gunjan's hand)
M: (releasing gunjan's han from sameer's grip)well sameer ab ham chalte hain............waise bi tu ne aaj mera buhat important kaam bigaar diya hai
S: (confused) maine?...........kab?.......konsa?
M: tu nahi samje ga...........ok bye now.........
S: bye......kal time pe aa jana..........
thus mayank n gunjan came back home while mayank was regretting as he could not meet nupur.............she was so close to him today......but ....but .....but........
but now there was a hope now.........he became sure now that nupur was in the same city..........he will found her now............

Sharma mension

Mayank was in his room n was busy with somme important office files...........apparently just..........in actual he was thinking about nupur............
then his mom came to his room with coffee for him.............
MM: mayu beta...........kya kar rahe ho.........
M: (snapping out of his thoughts)..........maa.......aap.......?
MM: han beta.......yeh lo apni coffee
taking coffee from her hands n putting it at the side table...........he made his mom sit on the bed n lay down placing his head in her lap............
MM: (smiled at his act n start caressing his hair)............kya baat hai beta?........buhat thaky hoye lagg rahe ho
M: (with closed eyes n smiling getting the comfort of laying in his mom's lap).han bass office ka kaam aur phir gunjan k sath shopping.........to bas thora thakk gya hun
MM: beta kal shaam ko tum free ho kya?
M: kyon? kya baat hai?
MM: wo samrat k ghar jana tha mujy..........uss ki maa se mily hove buhat din ho gaye.........socha kal mill aaon
M: nahi maa........kal to mujy apne dost ki engangement party pe jana hai........
MM: dost ki?
M: han..........london main mere sath parta tha
MM: beta main soch rahi thi k abb teri bi shaadi kar don............
M: (opened his eyes at this n smiled thinking abt nupur as his wife).........meri shaadi?
MM: han..........aakhir mujy bi to baho chahiye na..........
M: maa itni jaldi kya hai...........(just faking this before his mom)
MM: jaldi kya.........ab to tum office bi jaane laage ho..........to iss liye main ab tuhari shaadi karwaaon gi.......
M: ok maa..........thiek hai.........lekin shaadi k liye larki bi to chahiye hoti hai na.........
MM: janti hun...........aur maine larki dundh li hai..........
M: (getting up from her lap)........kyaa??????.........kon?????
MM: beta main soch rahi thi k teri aur gunjan ki shadi karwaa don.........(she said happily)
M: (hell shocked........he at once get up from bed)........what??...........maa yeh aap kya keh rahi hain????.........main aur gunjan??????
MM: han beta.........main gunjan ko apni bahu banana chahti hun.........


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hey guys this was next chapter.........hope you like it.........well i have updated it soon on everyone's request.........
so guys do tell me how was it?
do comment guys.............please don't remain silent.........please please comment..........



Edited by rose.mn - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Rabi
Yippie 1st to comment
Awwsome part dear
loved it to the core
Awww Mayank bought a ring for Nupur so sweeeet
And what is this Gunjan & Mayank ???????
Aisa karne ki sochna bhi mat warna i'll kill you
please yaar jaldi se Mayur ko mila do
aur intezaar mat karwa
plz continue soon
luv
Nidzy
Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rabi...
Amazing part!!
The shopping part was toooo fanta!!
U rock!!
Keep updating!!
-Aisho
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Posted: 15 years ago
coool one rabi :)
Gunjan 😲
I thot they were behaving like siblings 😲
continue soon :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely update.... but Sameer??? no sammy... Keep Sajan together... like Mayur..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Rabi... Nice one.. par yeh kya? Mayank aur Gunjan... doesn't sound good yaa.. plz... taras khao hum sab par.. aur Mayur ko jaldi se mila do... and see that Gunjan says no to this marriage.... Plz.. yaar Mayur meet jaldi karaoo...
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hey dear loved it yar please post nw update soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
what???gunjan and mayank?
they were just like sis bro
shopping part was great
loved it
Edited by fanofmjht - 15 years ago

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