~ArBi FF Jab Lurve Hua~Part 271 pg141 - Page 44

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 64 - Simply beautiful and amazing, I don't have any other words to describe it, I loved every little detail, every movement, the song, the dance, the kiss.....wow, what a kiss...😳🤪Loved reading the whole interaction between Payal and Bharti, but I can't believe that Bharti is thinking like that, denying all her feelings and she wants to ignore Armaan!?😲 Hope Payal can help sort all of this out, I know harti loves him, but I hate to see her denying her love and ignoring her love(literally and figuratively) Sometimes, just sometimes, I too wonder if Bharti deserves Armaan's love. He loves her so so much, I don't want to see him hurt...😔

Part 65 - funny seeing Bharti hiding and reading that she honestly feels her plan will work. I wonder if Payal will tell Armaan everything about how Bharti feels and how she wants to avaid everything, I think Armaan would be really hurt by that. 😒Oooohh! I love Amarjeet, yay yay yay! 🥳Extension of 4 months!!! 122 days!! Yay, now Bharti can't ignore him forever, they have to talk about what happened and see where things are going. I hope Bharti isn't able to fight her feelings for too long, she needs to succumb to his love. Great parts Jassie😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
Dear Jassie,

Lovely epis👏
I just loved the way Armaan proposed Bharti 😃
And the kiss was😳

But I am so very sad, why is Bharti behaving like this?
I am feeling very very bad for Armaan. Don't break his heart dear. I hate his tears😭

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~Jab Lurve Hua Part 66~

"Sab kuch plan ki hisaab se chal raha tha na...Hamesha jab main soch thi hoon ke kuch acha ho rahi hain, tab yeh sab ulti pulti karna zaroori hai kya?Seriously you need a reality check!!Do you get it, Mr God??Ab main ky akarungi...I can't practically ignore him forever na?"

Armaan:So i guessed right..

Bharti:Shux!!(turns to face Armaan and grins sheepishly)Oh hi Armaan..

Armaan:Ignoring me?

Bharti:Psshh..Why would I think of doing that??(turns away,feeling so embarassed)

Armaan:If it's regarding what had happened at the party, then...

Bharti:erm Armaan i've got lots of work to do..I'll talk to you later..bye!!(rushed off)

Armaan:B...Bharti!!(sure that Bharti's hiding something from him)Arrgghh!!

Armaan left to meet Payal at Hotel Maroon. Meanwhile Jiya saw Raj and Pushpak in the conference room.

Jiya:What are you guys doing here?And who let you in?

Raj:Arre Jiya ek minute...Four!!Awesome!!!Pushpak sometimes blowing in fornt of the TV does work...

Jiya:Crazy idiots!!

Raj:Waise Jiya..what do you think??Will India win?

Jiya:What's the chasing score?

Raj:246...

Jiya:I don't think so...

Pushpak:Arre shub shub bol...I have placed a bet with Sonali that if India wins, she'll let me have control over the TV for a week..

Jiya:Lollz..I'll catch up with you guys later..Keep the noise down,i'll keep Amarjeet away from the conference room..

Pushpak:Thanks Jiya..Jeeyo hazaaron saal..

Jiya:Chup kar...oh yes keep me updated on the scores...

Pushpak:Narain hai na..so no worries..(smiled at Jiya and turned back to focus on the cricket match)

Jiya left to check on Sunny's designs and the stocks that had just arrived. Bhaskar had gone to the radio station to meet Payal but he met Shaz instead. She told himt hat Payal had gone out for dinner at Hotel Maroon with someone else and Bhaskar assumed it to be none other than Armaan and headed towards Hotel Maroon.

While having dinner,

Payal:Thanks for coming..Actually..

Armaan:Payal, is everything ok with you?

Payal:Yeah..why?

Armaan:Nothing..just asked..continue with what you were saying...

Payal:Actually i got to know about you and Bharti from her..And i'm actually here to talk about it..

Armaan:I'm sorry Payal;i've been wanting to tell you as well..You can;t imagine how unbelievable it was,that night..For a moment, i really thought i was dreaming..but it really did happen!!

Payal:Sorry to interrupt,but..

Armaan:Payal,what's wrong?

Payal:I really don't know how to tell you this..

Armaan:(noticed Payal's reluctancy)Just tell me Payal...

Payal:I'm really sorry if I'm bringing down your high hopes or pulling you down..You've really got no idea what Bharti is truly feeling about everything that happened that night...In fact that night I purposely dialled your number from Bharti's mobile to force her to talk about it with you but she disconnected those calls..

Armaan:Payal..what does Bharti really think of it??

Payal:Actually she admitted to me that she is attracted to you but she doesn't seem to realize that it is love..She feels as if it's some sort of a crush or a transient feeling. But that's not the issue..From the 7 years of our friendship, I know her well enough to understand what she's going through. From what I know her. she's not at all ready to accept anything.She's not ready to commit herself, for some unknown reason..I believe that she feels that her world is just perfect for her and she doesn't want anyone to enter it and affect her entire life..Frankly speaking, I'm really,really mad at her attitude towards love and the happiness that's approaching her life. She ahd made a plan of ignoring you till the end of her internship and after that, you'll forget her..I'm just so pissed with her..

Armaan:And you haven't talked to her since the party?

Payal:Yeah..Armaan don't mind me saying this but i seriously doubt if Bharti's worth your love..

Armaan:I do mind what you're saying..Payal,you're her best friend..How can you say that?

Payal:I don't know..I guess I'm still mad at her and that's why..But she doesn't realzie the extent and the essence of your love...

Armaan:Payal, firstly throw away your anger..Listen to me calmly..She's someone who is pretty much confused right now,yeah?

Payal:Yeah pretty much..

Armaan:Even i'm not fully aware of the feelings I have for her..I'm quite confused as well...Bharti has not believed in love all her entire life..Naturally she'll react the way she did..It'll be only weird if she,being herself,didn't react that way...I wish to spend the rest of my life with her and wish to know her,understand her..Yuo know something PAyal?Either I'll spend my life with a girl like Bharti or else I'll remain a bachelor my entire life..I can't even visualize my life with any other girl apart from Bharti...

Payal:But Armaan,she..

Armaan:I'll wait for her...

Payal:Until when Armaan?

Armaan:My entire life..I believe my love for her is true and you do believe that true love can overcome all odds?

Payal:Provided that love is mutual..

Armaan:Do you trust me Payal?

Payal:I guess so..

Armaan:Well in that case I promise you that one day,she'll fall in love with me too..

Payal:Wow..confidence in yourself?

Armaan:Nope..trust in my love..

Payal couldn't stop smiling widely at Armaan.

Payal:Bharti doesn't know how lucky she is..She's incredibly lucky!!Armaan,I feel totally relieved now!!

Armaan:So promise me that you'll talk to her as soon as possible?

Payal:Yeah i will

Armaan:Payal i truly appreciate you for being so open with me..Thanks!!(looks at his watch) Oops i told Maa that i'll pick her up from her clinic..I'll make a move first,k?

Payal:Yeahh sure..Take care!!Send my regards to Sudha aunty!!

Armaan:Ok..Bye!!

Payal finished up the last portion of the baked oysters. Just then, Bhaskar joined her.

Bhaskar:Hi...

Payal:Bhaskar tum yaha?Tumhe kaisa bata ki main yaha pe hoon?

Bhaskar:Shaz...

Payal:Oh icic...

Bhaskar:Where's Armaan?

Payal:Why would he be here?He has left already...

Bhaskar:Left before?So what's going on?

Payal:Bhaskar, I've been wanting to tell you..It's about Bharti and Armaan...

Payal narrated the incident at the MU party and the conversation between Payal and Armaan. Bhaskar was feeling so embarassed and ashamed of himself for even having stupid doubts about his girlfriend.

Payal:What happened to you all of a sudden?

Bhaskar:Payal, I'm sorry..

Payal:For what?

Bhaskar:Jenny told me that you had come to MU yesterday to meet Armaan..And my stupid brain..

Payal:Bhaskar..(paused for a second) You doubted me,you idiot!!

Bhaskar:Please forgive me!!

Payal felt a strong sense of irritation towards Bhaskar but she was feeling more uncomfortable. She looked at her hands which were red, and she quickly headed to the washroom and vomitted out. Payal headed outside where Bhaskar was waiting.

Bhaskar:I just said Sorry..Why did you have to vomit for that?You could have easily said something else...

Payal:Oh shut up Bhaskar...I forgot that i was allergic to oysters and ate it happily since it was Armaan's treat...

Bhaskar bursted out laughing.

Payal:Will you continue laughing or bring me home quickly??

Bhaskar:Oops..yeah chalo...

Payal:Bhaskar, i really feel like strangling you...How could you even...

Bhaskar:Sorry Paayu...sorry,sorry,sorry!!!

Payal rushed inside their home quickly, looking for her first aid kit where she had placed her ointment. Bhaskar came and stood behind her and took the ointment from her. Bhaskar went close to Payal's face and slid his hands around Payal's tummy and slowly took Payal's hand and gradually spread the ointment on her palm which had mild rashes. Bhaskar gently kissed Payal's shoulder and apologized to her.Payal smiled and gently turned around.

Payal:Wow i've never heard so many sorries from you..I forgive you..

Bhaskar:(smiled flirtishly at her) Well thank you madame...

Payal:What are you looking at me for?

Just then Bhaskar pulled Payal towards him.

Payal:What are you doing?

Bhaskar:What do you think I'm doing?

Payal:(places her hands around Bhaskar's neck)I'm not exactly sure..Why don't you tell me?

Bhaskar:I guess there is no need for words here...(raises his eyebrow)

Payal:Well Mr Bhaskar, excuse me...my mobile's ringing...

Bhaskar:Let it ring..

Payal:It could be an important call..

Bhaskar:not as important as me..So where were we?

Payal:My mobile's ringing,Bhaskar..

Bhaskar:Tum aise nahin maanoge.....

Payal:Bhask..

Bhaskar leaned in and kissed Payal before she could say anything further. Both of them smiled after parting from their gentle kiss. Payal turned to go but Bhaskar held her hand in an attempt to stop her.

Payal:(blushed a lil)What Bhaskar?

Bhaskar:Where are you heading off to?

Payal:I need to change..

Bhaskar:I'll be waiting for you..in bed!!(winked at her)

Payal:Let go..and you too go and have a shower..

Bhaskar:That I will..See you soon..(let go of her hand and smiled at her)

It was 10:30 pm and Raj and Pushpak were still at the conference room.

Jiya:Guys, the match isn't over yet?

Pushpak:It's the last ball..

Jiya:What's the score?

Pushpak:241...

Jiya:Surprising...what..OMG..don't tell me that he just hit a 6...

raj:What perfect timing to catch the ball..Jiya!!!!

jiya:Haha!!Hello what did I do??

Raj:Pushpak..sad case,no control over the TV now!!By the way how's the live-in relationship going on?

Pushpak:Surprisingly good so far..But goodness..no control over the TV for a week..

raj:Who would even consider betting on India?

Jiya:Pushpak did!!It's ok..Sonali's your girlfriend..she'll understand..

Pushpak:Good night guys...

Raj:Nitezz..

Jiya:When did you come back from your dinner date with Malaika?

Raj:(checks his mobile)It's 10:30?Oh shux!!Jiya,couldn't you have come in earlier?

Jiya:What's wrong?

Raj:How stupid can I be?

jiya:Very..but what happened?

Raj:Dinner plan was at 9:30 pm...I'm 1 hour late...

Jiya:Try giving her a call...

Raj:Yeah ok..hello Malaika..hey listen..but..hello?Hello??She disconnected my call...Let me call her again...Oh no!!!She swtiched off her phone...Arrgghhh!!!

Jiya:Hhmm..it's ok,just a dinner...

Raj:Sometimes girls should be as patient as Bharti...

Jiya:Bharti..hhmm..Hey i forgot to tell ya...

Raj:Heyy what was Armaan hiding from me?

Jiya:I'll tell you..hey let's have dinner here..what say??

Raj:You've got food?

Jiya:Hot,spicy pasta..we can share!!

Raj:Sure,sure..yeah so tell me...

Meanwhile Armaan was done having dinner with Sudha and he went to his room. He switched off the lights and laid on the bed. As he tried to sleep, he recollected the conversation between him and Payal.

"Bharti's seriously crazy...And i'm even crazier to think of spending the rest of my life with her...It feels quite nice to know that she is attracted to me..but she confuses me and doesn't tell me what she really feels...Maybe she's finding it all so difficult and feels as if everything has become different..She might be thinking that our friendship had died down and got replaced by some confusing feelings...How do I make her talk to me about this?I'll have to make her realize that our friendship still exists but it has just gotten deeper and much more special...No matter what, I'll need to talk to her tomorrow..Yes that's what I'll do!!"

Edited by jassie_17 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwww sooo cute lol and payal isss sooo cute :p loved the part plz write more soon :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW Girl i love all the parts specially 64 the Kiss was super duper hot & romantic 😳
i cant believe bharti just dint say anything she kissed him back wow that was soooooooooooooo amazing jassie☺️
jiya is sooooo sweet when armaan told her that he kissed bharti, jiya is such cool honest friend to hv love the friendship between them !!!!
girl i love the payal armaan conversation fabulous!!!
part 66 truly beautiful the last part
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Bharti's seriously crazy...And i'm even crazier to think of spending the rest of my life with her...It feels quite nice to know that she is attracted to me..but she confuses me and doesn't tell me what she really feels...Maybe she's finding it all so difficult and feels as if everything has become different..She might be thinking that our friendship had died down and got replaced by some confusing feelings...How do I make her talk to me about this?I'll have to make her realize that our friendship still exists but it has just gotten deeper and much more special...No matter what, I'll need to talk to her tomorrow..Yes that's what I'll do!!"
just brilliant written sooo perfectly said by Armaan he sooo unbelievable sexy sweet caring honest person in ur ff love him loadz !!! & bhartiiiiiiiiiiiiii dont let him slip a way girl u r crazy if u do!!!! Wow his going to talk with bharti wow
truly Awesome cant wait for the next Part continue sooon
take care
naley




Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Hey sorry for the late comments...Was busy..:)
So i'l start off with Part 63
Sudha was so cute with Bhaskar and Payal..Pulling their ears!!.And the way she was scolding them! ...😆...
Bharti in a long, blue silky dress?.. Hmm i'm picturing the epsiode in BB where Bharti gets all drunk at Gyaneeta's engagement..and that dress sheb has on...I love her in that! She was so gorgeous and i bet she is now too in your FF!..Very excited for this party!! and Armaan stepping forward to ask her for a dance???!!! Wow intense part!! Me so excitedddd!!..
That promo of yours!!!...Ooh i can picture a kiss coming!!...
Gonna read the next parts soon..
Pissssttt want to tell ya smth!..😆 Hahah i don't have to wait for a day unlike the rest who had to wait...😆 😆 I get to read it all one shot!.............Yay yay!!...
Oh yes love the way Payal was dressing Bharti up!....She praising herself...😆
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Part 64
Hai ArBi kissed.......😍............🤪..............🥳.......All these emotions at once....😆Love the after effect of the Kiss..The way ArBi were acting all awkward...And Armaan's confession..?Woah!!...So beautiful....!!..
I esp love the Jia- Armaan Convo after Armaan Kissed Bharti!..It was so cute! More like Jia was sooo cute!!....😆 Love that girl!..
"Armaan was having a drink while talking to Jiya.
Jiya:What's wrong with you?Smiling for no apparent reason?
Armaan:Nothing..
iya:Oh come on...
Armaan:I said it to her...
Jiya:What?(confused)..Wait a second..(eyes widened with shock) You mean you said it?
Armaan:(nodded in agreement)Yeahh..
Jiya:OMG!OMG!!Then what did she say?
Armaan:Nothing..
Jiya:Leh..nothing?No wonder she was behaving so strangely...So nothing happened?
Armaan:I can't say that...
Jiya:So something happened..(paused for a while) You guys kissed??(Armaan nodded) What?OMG!!
Armaan:Sshh!!!
Jiya:Ok ok..wow Mr Armaan Sinha!!This is awesome news!!(smiled widely at Armaan)so where is she?".....
Also loved the Payal and Bharti Convo!!..😆 😆 Payal another cutie pie!..
"Payal:Just call him up or talk to him...
Bharti:bad option...
Payal:No it isn't..I don't care...you're talking to him,right away!!(dials Armaan's number from Bharti's mobile)
Bharti:Shux..Payal it's ringing..😆 😆
Payal:I'll slap you Bharti..just talk!! 😆
Bharti:I can't!!(passes her mobile to Payal after disconnecting the call)
Payal got irritated but didn't give up. She dialled Armaan's number and heard the call getting through."

But why is Bharti still denying it and making things more complicated like what Payal said??...😭 Poor Armu he's gonna be heartbroken!..🥺
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Wow.. hail Armu.. hail..my Janu.. .my Rock star.. my HE-Man.. ..!! ❤️❤️❤️ .. oh gosh.. i cant believe this yaar.. .knwng Armu ..i thot he wuld hv exploded in anger n frustration on hearing Bhartis thots frm Payal.. but wow.. Armu really surprised me today.. n made me super happy..
Absolutely luvd the epi.. n esp. the Payal Armu convo.. delighted actually..!! Waise enjoyed the trait of jealousy in Bhaskar.. so cute.. esp the kiss 😳
n Bharti.. u really should realise that UR the Luckiest girl in Town to hv such an awesome n patient BEAU.. 😊 Gud going jassie..
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Part 65
Oh my i LOVE Payal and Bhaskar's moments!!..So sweet! I found Bhaskar so cute to have slept on the couch!..😆 I mean she just said "leave me alone" and he walks out of the rooom to sleep on the couch..? So cute! But she shdn't have done that..He was being so nice to her! And that special dinner he made! Sweet, sweet very nice of him! I love to read on their parts!...
Now Bharti was hilarious hiding from Armaan! I wonder how she managed to do it..?! I mean one whole day..?...😆 The way she and Pushpak met reminded me of BB days...😆 So funny! I read it and simultaneously imagined the BB comical tune playing..! 😆
Poor Armu man! He's still having hopes on being with Bharti..! So cute the way he's so happy at all times..And Bharti is weird i mean she wants to disappear from him foreva then what happened to a few days back when she felt like just spending time with him and being jealous seeing him with Preity and remembering those moments they share together..?.....
This girl is confusing as hell!...😆
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Part 66

Armaan is like THE SWEETEST guy ever!! I love how he wa so confident in his love and that whole convo with Payal over at dinner was perfect!..He's just too nice and i have to agree with Payal..Bharti sure doesn't deserve Armaan's love..Sadly..I mean he's willing to wait for her and the way he said "I'll either be with her or remain as a bachelor.."..Gosh those words are so nice to hear..Bharti shd be hearing this!...

Bhaskar and Payal's moments...Aaawww so cute! I was laughing out loud when i read the part where Bhaskar was suspected Payal..And the way Payal replied to him "Bhaskar how could you?! You stupid iditot!.." 😆 😆..So cute and also the vormitting part was funny and lastly that kiss and the way he flirt with Payal...Hai....😍 Loved every single bit of it!!...
Jassie i like the fact that you also include romantic moments of Bhaskar and Payal inside your FF..It's makes me love them even more post BB days..Cos during BB me nvr wanted them to be together..well i guees you know why..We all wanted ArBi like foreva together..But in your FF im loving this two more!...
Now that Cricket match at the conference room!..I like it alot!! Love the whole convo going on and how Raj told jia "You coudn't have come earlier..?"...😆 Seeing a bit of Rohan in Raj huh...😉..Good good me love that scene..:)
Great going!
Carry on writing!...😊
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago

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