My collections of One-shots upd.pg.94 - Page 41

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh

you are welcome

loved it...much better than what i told you

now lets work on ours :P

Originally posted by: *payal_15*

OHMYGOSH!

this is one of your best one shots ever! loved it..that was soo cute. and this is like a mantra, i love mac with each update, lolz! :D

i love how it was from yuvis POV! shoo shweet! poor yuna thou, they have to live alone? :(

oh well, ^_^

Love ya! :D

Originally posted by: nadz_J

hey ss finally i decided to giv ur sadma os one try lolz will read the odas later but im soooo soooo soooo happy with ure sid and ridz meetin so much more sesible then the real one it was so dumb to call sumon a molester without knowing him anyways loved yours it was reli cool loved there chat about t a it was reli sweet thnx for that and yes tamz shud come back becaus they love eachother and ar are meant to be thnx soooooo much for that ure an awesum writer awesum mindblowing tooo good

luved it

keep it up

nadz

Originally posted by: sups2222

So thats we call one shot- A PERFECT PACKAGE OF HUMOUR, ROMANCE, SUSPENCE, ACTION(THOUGH IT WAS A LESS A BIT BUT I STILL LOVED), DRAMA, AND HAPPY ENDING............IT WAS A GR88 AND FAB ONE SHOT.........U NOE THAT I FELL IN LOVE WITH LOVE MAC😳 MORE THAN ANYONE ELSE IN YOUR EVERY FANFIC...............loved THE YUVI'S ERGE TO FIGURE A WAY TO MAINTAIN LONG DISTANCE RELATIONSHIP............

Our relationship has survived betrayal, lies, separation, parents' disapproval...and now long-distance relationship....so NAINA'S FATHER DIDNT APPROVE OF THIS DAFFOR??...KOOL SO THAY HAVE RUN AWAY AND ARE MARRIED KOOOLLL.................
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Yuvi - a joru ka gulaam
SO NAINA STILL HOLDS YUVI AT GUN POINT ..BE MY SIDE OR U WILL BE DIVORCED[A GOOD WEAPON OF WIVES FOR THEIR HUSBANDS].........😆
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Thump

"Chor!!! You came to steal in my house...you idiot...I won't leave you!!"[DAFFOR U DONT KNOW THIS NAINA MEHTA'S OOPS I M SO SORRY NAINA YUVRAAJ SINGH'S HOUSE U DAFFOR HOW U DARE TO BLURGE IN ]😆😆

"Naina!!! It's me!! Crazy woman!!" 😆😆😆

I got a hold of her hands...my crazy wife was just hitting with her eyes closed...sometimes I wonder why I love her to death!🤣 🤣 🤣[YEAH DUDE DONT U NOE OPPOSITE ATTRACT]

"Yuvi!!"

"Yes, Yuvi! Your husband...Dr. Yuvraaj Singh!"[HE MUST BE THINKING WHAT HAS HAPPENED TO MY FACE ?WHY ISNT SHE RECOGNISING ME??]🤣

"What the hell are you doing here?"

"I am your husband...remember? I was the one who was hit on the head indiscriminately...and you're the one who is acting crazy!" 🤣...............

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But my most fav line was:

We are watching some corny movie now...she is leaning onto me...well that's the good thing about marriage...at least in this relationship...you don't have to put a scary movie on...to have the girl you love lean onto you.

😆 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

Heheheh so there at least one profit from marriage.Heyy gr88 part keep it up............

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Oh man that was so cute and fabulous........lol Yuvi compared the cat with Naina.....and bechara Mac can never live in peace.....Yuvi is always pestering him with something or the other and its him who gets scolded.....🤣.....too funny....
and I think you really like men in boxers....😳....you have to have such a scene...lolz.....and the last part was so romantic and sweet......I got the kiss part....😉........all in all a great concept and an amazing one-shot.....love you.🤗

Originally posted by: koolaries4

summi. that was amzing.. i really liked it!! lol, finally yuvi did make the first move. hehe.. thanks for the PM n do continue soon..

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

hmmmmmmmmmm long distance relationship n YuNa ................wow "kitne dooooor kitne passsss...............

luvd da shot gal it was realllly nice one

UV in boxer😍

*hug*

Originally posted by: LanaBurak

Ok ...uhhhh guss who is writing here...omg nope it is not Lana

lolz anyways

She didn't say anything but walked up to me and hugged me...damn...even if I wanted...I couldn't say angry at her when became touchy with me.

first of all i can see about this is awwwww

sumi this was a great part...i could imagine mac-yuvi and naina together like that...aww and yuvi is such sweet husband and naina crazy as always...i realy loved...but poor yuvi, even that cat drinked all his milk..lolz

and omg how can i forget the boxer...and that yuvi...😲

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

Wonderful... simblee Wonderful...

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey special suma
awwh!! so sweet YUNA -wow!!
yuvi bechara still alone without naina due to job n there he comes drivign all way to her house
thanks to mac n his GF n nainas doubt

"Naina, you know that I sleep in my boxers!"😆😆

that he didnt have grocery in his home 😆
aw..naina thought he was a thief 😆😆
now both r together even for sometime..

thats greatt!!

sri:-)

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh

people loved your concept about boxers(first mac and now yuvi)

guess now you have to include that every once in awhile :P

Originally posted by: sunena2293

It was tooo good yaar....I LUVED IT...lol
Bechara Yuvi....he has mice in his stomach...lol
maybe his real hunger was seeing Naina...lol
And Mac...lol....a new girlfriend every day....lol....what a player 😆
I hope Naina comes back to live with Yuvi.....and in his boxers...😛

Originally posted by: KSG2

Sumz- its amazing..loved it soooooo much....u rock yaar....Waiting eagerly for the next one...thanx....

Originally posted by: Nishithini

wow!! amazing!! your writing style is unique and I love it. it was really sweet. awesome!!

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Okay... finally read those last 2.

The first one... okay... I only have one question running through my mind... was she really even interested in his past? Or was it just the past affairs she was interested in? Cuz basically... ghuma phiraa ke... she ended up right where I had expected her to be. Seriously, how does one go from something like "how'd you survive?," have an in depth convo on the matter, and then go all quiet to "how many girlfriends did you have?" Something nahi lots of things seem kinda fishy here! Looks like Miss Naina Mehta just wanted the spicy part of his life out in the open, but ended getting more than she expected. lol.

The second one... interesting concept. Mac and his half naked girlfriends... seriously... WHAT GIVES DUDE?! can he ever have decently clad woman over. Actually cross that out. Can he ever just be ALONE?! rofl! He's always the reason for misunderstandings between Yuvi-Naina. Dude should control the hormones... they're getting in the way of someone's madly-in-love/happily married life!


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