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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: rkmnkp

Thank god you updated Rakhi di 😳

I was waiting for the next part, thanks lina for waiting for my ff😳
and now I will wait for part 3 Awww.ok dear.I'll post the part 3 soon dear.
lol
Ok now back to this part
well ummmmmm......
let me think........
it was
superb, fantastic, fablous, mindblowing, just toooooooooooo good. I'm glad that u loved this part.
Mayu's mo is so sweet, yes she is very sweet
Awwwwww
I love her character too much thanks dear for loving her character
And most of awwwwwwww's goes to the way you describe Mayur's friendship. 😳
Too good.
And when Mayu's mom goes for wor or something
she cooks for him??????
Awwwwwwwwwwwww
too good Rakhi di.
Now I am so curios about what problem Mayu is going to face. u'll know this in the coming part.
And wow Diana tells Gunjan she loves Samrat?
And again the problem
Ahhhhhh
I really have to know it.
Warna I will keep thinking about it.
Plez Rakhi di
Rakhi do continue soon. Awww ,lina I'll post the next part cery soon dear.
I mean right now.
Plez...
-Lina-

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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Nice part do cont soon and thanks for the pm .

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Posted: 15 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: nihakapoor

Nice part do cont soon and thanks for the pm .

thanks dear for loving the part.I'll continue soon dear.
It's my pleasure dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

Part3(a):-At the evening all are going their home.Mayank is sitting in his room and said mom jana jaruri hain,kaya aap iye job nehi chor sakte ,We'll manage it very well and I don't like it at all.It'slike u r going away from me.

Suddenly they heard nupur said aunty jee ,iska shaadi kara dijiye then he'll not feeling alone at all.

Mayank's mom(Padma):-Yes beta u r right,Even I think same.

Mayank:-Mom,pls and u go away from here,jab dekho iha aate rehete ho,aapna ghar nehi hain.

Nupur:-nehi hain.kyuon kaya karoge.

Mayank looks at them and goes from that room.

Padma:-are mayu ruk beta.

Nupur:-don't worry,oh kahi nehi jayga,iha hi rehega, oh baas disturb hain aur kuch nehi .U don't worry go and do ur work and all the best for ur project.aur iye lijiye ,then both hugs and padma said beta,pls take care of him,u know na,he is very shy and do't tell any one about his wish and…

Nupur:-Ofcourseaunty ,chaliye,aap,mein usse leke aati hoon then we have to go with u na.

Then nupur goes and saw mayank sit in the living room and watching tv but his mind is disturbed.Nupur sat and said agar aise baithe rehoge toh aunty jee ko samajh main aajayga.

Mayank:-I know nupur…….. But...ok,I'll try ..Mom ka jane ka time ho gaya.

Then both mayank and nupur ne air port chorne gaya Padma ko and then after they return again mayank's face looks sad but this he misses his mom really.

Nupur realize this and said mayu,pata hain ek baat aaj aunty ne kaya kaha mujhe?

Mayank:-Kaya?

Nupur:-U r very shy and when I heard this I think actually aunty jee didn't see u in the college and specially ur so shyness.

Mayank:-huh,I'm shy actually I changed a bit because of u ,and more important thing is u r not at all shy and …

Nupur:-hey ,I'm not like this and it's an image of me in the college other wise I'm shy.

Mayank:-Oh really, huh I don't believe it that Miss. Nupur Bhushan is shy girl.

Nupur:-That's ur problem even I don't think u r shy.

Mayank:-huh and turn his face and Nupur also did this but Nupur suddenly asked waise mayank when u get married.

Mayank:-married who me and with whom u.

Nupur:-With ur dream girl.

Mayank:dream girl,Mere koi dream girlnehi hain aur abhi mere paas time nehi hain.

Nupur:-Ohyes, u have to do lots of work and will get married when u'll very old and ur hair become white and then u'll marry with someone.

Mayank:-That's better idea.

Nupur:-koi shaadi nehi karega tumse.

Mayank:-thik hain koi nehi karega toh tum toh rahoge.

Nupur:-Kaun main aur tumse,huh,mere liye toh mere sapno ke raj kumar aayga aurmujhe le jayga aapne sath.

Mayank:-Oh, Miss Princess , come back from ur dream.sapno ka raj kumar..Aisa kuch nehi hota real life mein,u know Nupur real life is very tough and bitter.

Nupur:-mujhe jaana bhi nehi hain ,tum raho iha aise aur mein aapne sapne ko rajkumar ke intejar karti hoon.

Mayank didn't reply and Nupur again said mein ja rehi hoon mayu,dinner time pe aajana.

Mayank just nodded ,Nupur jate soch raha hain I know mayu real world is very tough and bitter but I didn't want to face it.U didn't know what I saw no, what we saw in our childhood but I know that u also had very bitter experience and that's hurts u and that's why u r very reserve person now.

At night ,dinner time mayank came at nupur's house but still his face epression tells that he is very tensed and samrat saw this and dia also.

Samrat said to dia ,tum gunjan ko samlaho usse kaya hua hain pata nehi,mein iyenote dene aaya but she didn't talk to me and here mayank's face tell me that soemthign wrong with him.

Dia:-Yes, sammy and I want to decrease his tension,hey may be Nupur knw his problem.

Nupur heard this and said no,she didn't but she thinks in her mind I know and I didn' t want to discuss this with u and I know it's a problem that nobody help him.

Here after the dinner mayank go back his home and here dia try to cheer up gunjan but fails.

Benji calls dia and tell today at evening when Gunjan come to meet samrat ,daina come and told her that she loves samrat and that's shocked gunjan.Benji also told her tha he thinks may be samrat dind't knew this and gunjan like him .

Dia :-Oku don't worry I'll handle this ,meet u tomorrow at 8.30 p.m. at Orchid coffee Shop.

Here benji said yes and think Meet me at 8.30.huh miss dia sacrifice her sleep,no way,that's her mid night.

Here at mayanks room ,mayank think about evening incident and feels depressed and think to call Nupur but soon his phone rang and he saw nupur's name.He smiles and said tum humesha mere maan ke baat mujhse pehele jaan jate ho then he pick the phone and said bolo.

Nupur:-Pareshan mat ho…hum iss baat ko milke solve karenege but u call aunty jee,she called u but u didn'tpick.

Mayank:-mom called me.But my phone oh she called in our landline.oh no.ok I'll call her now.Take care.Good night.

Nupur:-U too and don't take too much stress.

That's for today.Sorry for late updating and small update.But it'snecessary to this story and u'll know the reason sooon.

No precap.

Pls read it and comment it and all my slient readers plspress the liked button.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Nice part dear
loved it
love Mayur
do continue soon
thanks for the pm
luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
OMG awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part
yaar really cool one
loved it to the core
loved mayur to much
short update
but awesomeeeeeee update
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
N thanx the pm dear
love
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Heyyy rakhi
It was a really awsome update
Waiting to know the reason of mayus reserve nature
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Nice part dear

loved it
love Mayur
do continue soon
thanks for the pm
luv
Nidzy

Thanks dear for loving this part and I'll continue soon dear.
It's my pleasure dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: sana866

OMG awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part

yaar really cool one
loved it to the core
loved mayur to much
short update
but awesomeeeeeee update
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
N thanx the pm dear
love
sana

Thanks dear for loving this part and Yes it's short update as I'm little busy also .I'll post another part very soon.
It's my pleasure dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

Heyyy rakhi
It was a really awsome update
Waiting to know the reason of mayus reserve nature
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm

Thanks dear for loving this part and u'll know the reason of mayu's reserve nature.
I'll post next part very soon dear.
It's my pleasure dear.

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