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Posted: 15 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

grt!
continue soon..........
and pm me too........

thanks dear for loving this concept.I'll continue soon dear and pm u also.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
Index :-
Outline of the story:-Page1
Part1:-Page2
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13

Part1:-

On sunny morning, a girl waiting for her friend but he is still not come and she is getting angry. After 1hour a boy coming and his face said that he is very scared.He reached and said sorry, late hogaya, oh mujhe …

That girl is said:-sorry huh,kaya samjhte ho aapne aap ko tum, late hoge,ek baar bol nehi sakte the mujhe.

That boy:-mere baat toh suno…

That girl:-kaya suno?huh… tum jaanbhoojh ke late ho gaye,aur abhi sorry,mujhe tumhara sorry nehi sunna.

The boy:-par mere baat toh suno.

The girl:-kaya suno?haarbaar late,mujhe iha ghante khara rehena parta hain aur tum…

Aisa chalta raha sometimes then that boy said in loud mujhe late hua kyuon ki ek baache uha kho gaya tha aapne parents se aur mein usse uska address, name iye sab janke dene gayatha,isliye late hua.

That girl is like oh and feel sad and knew her mis take this time and said sorry.

That boy raised his eye brows and said kaya meine thik se suna nehi.

That girl:-I'm sorry and it's not only my fault u have to told me this.

That boy:-really, jab tum bolte ho toh tab kaun bolta hain ,kisi ko tum bolne dete ho.

That girl:-aacha meinbolti kab, jab dekho tum bolte ho, aur mein bahut kam bolti hoon,mere gharwale bhi aisa kehete hain,tum uday bhaiya se pucho

That boy:-Ha,mujhe pata hain,tum kaha bolte ho…. Aur uday se huh… daarte hain tumse…

That girl turns and said Mayank dekho tum.

That boy is none other than mayank sharma and said yes nupur bhushan,tum kaha bolti ho….itne der se mein iyebaat kehene paaya tumse oh toh aapke wajy se nehi,mein hi toh bol raha tha.

Nupur:-mayank tum mujhe baat mat karo.

Mayank:-aacha, kab tak phir aaoge aur kahoge,mayank mere baat suno.

Nupur:-iss baar mein nehi tum aaoge.tum jao iha se.

Then both goes to different direction .

In the class,mayank ne samrat ke sath aur nupur ne gunjan ke sath baithi.Samrat:-aab kitne second ke liye.

Mayank:-Pucho unse.

Samrat:-ok,karta hoon,hey everybody suno,nupur aur mayank ka phir se jhagra hua hain toh bolo kab tak matlab kitna seconds iye jhagra rehega matlab chalega?

Nupur:-samrat ,aapna muh bandh karo aur shukla sir aarehe hain.

Gunjan:-di,pls..aap aisa kyuon samrat ko bol rehe hain.

Samrat:rehe do chashmish ,tumhara behen nehi samjhegi…. Waise mujhe mayank pe bahut sad feel hota hain,kiase tumjhe samalti hogi.

Nupur:-samrat.mein tumhe.

Mayank:-nupur, choro usse. Aur samrat tum rehene do,mujhe koi problem nehi hoti nupur se aur tum kyuon usse puche pare ho.

Nupur:-dekha mayank kasie iye sab.

Mayank:nupur don't cry, just forget it and ignore them .then both ek sath baitha.

Samrat also change his sit and said to gunjan,dekha bhalai ka result.aur dekho phir kuch pal nehi hua dono baat karne lage.

Gunjan:-tum kyuon di ke piche lagte ho aise, oh tumhe aapne bhai ki tarah Pyaar karte hain.

Samrat:-toh iye mre right hain,bhai hone ka.

Uday is sleeping and his sleep is broke and said in a sleeping tone,hey guys what happen?

Benji:-nothing tu so ja, kuch naya nehi phir se purani …

Uday:-matlab.. mayank aur nupur ka jhagra and now solve it also.Aur tumne bola nehi,kitna aacha scene miss kar dia.

Benji:-tumhe sone time mile tab na bolu…

Uday:-whatever,hey where is my sis dia,

Benji:-aur kaha aapne ranvijay ke sath library mein iya phir makeup room mein.

That's all for today.pls read it and comment it.If u liked it pls press the liked button also.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
nice outline..!
i'd love to read more...plz do continue soon..!!
and plz PM me when you update...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: hgrhr

nice outline..!

i'd love to read more...plz do continue soon..!!
and plz PM me when you update...

Thanks hgrhr for loving this outline.
I'll continue in a few mins. I'll pm u dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
nice story..........

i liked it..........

continue soon...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
lovelyyyyyyy concept
and nice start
loved it to the core dear
plzzzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm dear
love
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Awsome Rakhi di
love it
wow
Mayank late becuz of he helping a lost child?
Superb
and Nupur saying she doesn't talk
lol
wow
love it a lot
and everyone is like
Mayank and Nupur ka jagara purani baat
lol
Do continue soon.
plez
and love the title
dont forget to
pm me
Plez hurry
I want to read the next part.
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

nice story..........

i liked it..........

continue soon...........

thanks dear for loving this story and I'll continue soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: sana866

lovelyyyyyyy concept

and nice start
loved it to the core dear
plzzzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm dear
love
sana

thanks dear for loving this concept and 1st part.I'll continue soon dear and welcome dear.

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