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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: rkmnkp

Rakhi di Rakhi di Rakhi di

love this part to the coreeeeeeee Awwww,Thanks lina for loving this part😳.
sachi mein all the Mayur dailouges 😳
are sooooooooooooo cute
and awwwwwwwwwwwww
Mayu mom wants him to marry yes,she wants marry but mainly now she teases her son 😳 but very soon she really wants this
sachhi mein
want to read the next part so badly awww,,lina ,I'll post next very soon.
do update soon ok dear
and thank you sooooooooooooo much for updating It's my pleasure dear.
waz waiting for it for such a long time Sorry dear, waiting for it but I'm little busy so late ho gayi
mwah
tc
-Lina-

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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Nice understanding u shown b/w Mayur in part 2 yaar,
Noopur knows Mayu so well and she understood that his mom has gone out of town n she will make his food for him but Mayank aur Noopur dono ka hi nature aisa hai ki seedhe baat to samajh hi nahi aati na in logon ko. Jahan tak Dia n RV ki baat hai to they were quite funny aur baaki ki kasar to Benji n Uday ne poori kar di hai.
Sammy aur Gunjan saath me padh rahe the, unbelievable.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Nice understanding u shown b/w Mayur in part 2 yaar,

Noopur knows Mayu so well and she understood that his mom has gone out of town n she will make his food for him but Mayank aur Noopur dono ka hi nature aisa hai ki seedhe baat to samajh hi nahi aati na in logon ko. Jahan tak Dia n RV ki baat hai to they were quite funny aur baaki ki kasar to Benji n Uday ne poori kar di hai.
Sammy aur Gunjan saath me padh rahe the, unbelievable.

Thanks dear and yes they understand each other very well.
sahi kaha seedhe baat samajh mein nehi aati inlogon ko,
Nupur care for mayank and she always try to cheer him up and taking good care of him.
yes,they were funny and benji and uday also.
This fic mein sammy has a different avtar ,
u know more about him in my coming parts.
Thanks forloving the part 2 and thanks for ur lovely comments.It's inspired me lot.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Some times Mayank looks like a 5 year old kid, jo apni mom se door nahi jaana chahta, dekho kitna sad ho raha hai na jaane k naam pe. Ab Noopur mam ko responsiblities de di gayi hain na samhaalne ki sab. I think bus vahi hai jo sab theek kar sakti hai na Mayank ki life me. Sahi kaha Mayank ne ki real life bahut tough hoti hai aur itna asaan nahi hai jitna Noopur sochti hai but kahin na kahin i feel us ki soh kaafi had tak positive hai na.
Gunjan ka mood off to hona hi hai na kyounki aakhir us se Daina ne aise keh diya Sammy k baare me, dekhte hain sab mil kar ye problems kaise solve karte hain.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Some times Mayank looks like a 5 year old kid, jo apni mom se door nahi jaana chahta, dekho kitna sad ho raha hai na jaane k naam pe. Ab Noopur mam ko responsiblities de di gayi hain na samhaalne ki sab. I think bus vahi hai jo sab theek kar sakti hai na Mayank ki life me. Sahi kaha Mayank ne ki real life bahut tough hoti hai aur itna asaan nahi hai jitna Noopur sochti hai but kahin na kahin i feel us ki soh kaafi had tak positive hai na.

Gunjan ka mood off to hona hi hai na kyounki aakhir us se Daina ne aise keh diya Sammy k baare me, dekhte hain sab mil kar ye problems kaise solve karte hain.
continue soon.

Yes dear u siad it true , some times mayank behave likekid and sometime he acts like more mature than his age.
nupur mam ka responsibity toh hain mayank ko samlana and she is very ahppy to fo this.
mayank ka thought sahi hain aur iye aise thought ke piche bhi reason hain,jiske liye mayank aisa sochta hain aur nupur haas things ko life mein postive ly lena chathi hain.isse life thosa easy hota hain,aisa nupur manti hain hain.
ha diana is love sammy and try to create misunderstand netween gunjan and sammy.
iye u'll know it in coming parts.
Next part,I'll post soon dear.
thanks again for the lovely comments.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
its beautiful di....
keep it up...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
loved the update

thanks for the pm

continue soon
AayaTohModiJi thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: SwatiAgrawal

its beautiful di....
keep it up...

Thanks swati for loving the update.I'll continue it soon dear.
AayaTohModiJi thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

loved the update

thanks for the pm

continue soon

Thanks dear for loving the part.It's my pleasure dear.
I'll post next part very soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

Part3(b):-

Mayank call his mom and said hello ma,sorry,oh mein apne room mein that oh,phone ka ring thik se sunayi nehi dia.Are apne mere phone pe kyuon nehi call kia.App thik se toh pauch gaye?koi pareshani tohnehi na.

Padma:- Are ruk ruk kitna saare sawal,ek ek karke,ha mein thik se pauch gayi,koi pareshani nehi hain mujhe ,par tu mujhe itna formali kyuonbaat kar raha hain,aur tere awaj se mujhe lag raha hain tu kuch pareshan hain,kaya hua mayu?

Mayank gets alert and said nehi toh mom,aap bhina. Aur oh baas asia hi,aap thik toh hain na, uha sab thik toh hain ,raat ko window bandh kar dena cold wind bahut hain aur raat ko sardi mein bahar mat jana aapko bahut jald sardi lag jati hain.aur aap aapnamedicine time pe lena,aur….

Padma stopped him and said baas baas mayu,mujhe sab kuch iyaad hain aur Nupur ne mere saare medicine ek paper kab kaunsa lena hain sab kuch likh dia hain.tu pareshan mat ho.

Mayank murmurs ha isliye tohjada pareshani hain,ke usne likha hain.

Padma:-Mayu, aisa nehi kehete beta,waise mujhe toh pata hain tumuh se kuch bhi bole par tu janta hainusne agar likha hain toh sab sahi likha hoga.

Mayank just smiles and said mom,Good night.

Padma:-Are itni jaldi good night,mayu tu blush tohnehi kar raha hain na.

Mayank:-mom,mein kyuonblush karne lagi Nupur ke baat se

Padma:-nehi mein movies mein dekhi hain jab ma aapne bete ko jab aapne dost matlab girl friend ke baarein mein puchti hain toh bete sarmata hain aur baat ko ghuma ta hain,toh tunebhi…

Mayank:-mom, aap jada movie mat dekhiye,waise movie mein jada kuch nehi reheat aajkal.

Padma:-tu kabhi aapna books se bahar aake toh dekh kaya hain movies mein.chal chor so ja,abhi phir books ko leke mat baithna.

Mayank:-hoon,ok mom good night.

Padma:-Good night beta.

Then mayank lay on his bed and smiles to think about his mom and their conversation.He thinks his mom is worlds best mom who always bring smiles on his face but his mom is not always and soon he remember something and tensed .He get up from the bed and open the cup board and take a folder from there.

He sit with that forlder near the window and open the folder and take out some pics from there and looks a t them with angrily. Those pics are marriage pics of his parents.Helooks at them and then saw the pic where his dad stands. His dad who never loves him neither his mom.he remember his dad beat his mom and said go from there house just because his mom.

Mayank:mein tab nehi janta tha kaya reason hain but mein jab high school gaya tab mujhe aapka iss behaviour ka raaz pata chala.aap kisi aur se Pyaar karte the aur isliye aapne aisa kia,lekin usse bhi jada dard dena wala sach iye hain mere mom is bahutbare ghar se thi,my dadu was well known businessman and u take it for ur advantage.U marry to my mom and slowly u take everything frommy mom and my dadu then u left us.My dadu didn't take this and died and my mom broke that time.U left my mom and me there,u never love us.If Sushama aunty didn't take us with her then what happen to my mom and me.u never thought that.u just thing about urself and still u think about urself.lekin aap iha kaya kar rehe hain,iska kaya reason hain?jarur aap koi reson leke aaye hain iha,par agar mom iye jan gaye toh,nehi hum iye nehi bol sakte mom ko,aur mujhe aaj bhi iyaaad hain jab aapkebaarein mein momne kaha kaya hua aur kisliye aapne hume chora tab meine dekha unhe kitna dard hua.mujhe tohunhone kuch pehele pata nehi chalna dia but phir high school mein jba tha tab unhone sab bola par unko kitna dard hua mujhe pata hain.Par aab aur nehi hum aapko kuch nehi karne denge.then he kept those pics again the folder and kept the folder in the cupboard.

Then he sit in the bed and look at his mom pic where he and his mom smile.he close the eyes and dose off to sleep.

Next day morning Mayank uth gaya and after shower he received a call from Nupur.

Nupur:-Open the door,kab se bell baja rehi hoon.mere hath mein dard ho raha hain.

Mayank :-ok.par bellbajane mein tumhe hath mein dard kyuon hoga.Nupur:-Mayank pls.

Mayank:-ok,don't gey angry dear.

Then he open the door and said aaiye miss Bhushan the Angry woman.

Nupur:-iye toh tumpe bolna chaiye,Mr.Angry Yuong man.

Mayank:-oh really.wiasse tum iye sab kaya.

Nupur:-Tumhara break fast and iske wajay se mere hath mein dard ho raha tha.

Mayank:-toh tumhe aab mere liye khana lane mein hath mein dard ho raha hain,kaya din aagaya mere.

Nupur:-Tum baat ko wrong side pe mat le jao,mein baas kahi ke mujhe iye sab leke iha itne der tak khara rehena pare phir bell bhi but thanks sammy ki usne iye work meinmere help kia.

Mayank:-Wow,how sweet of u miss Bhushan ,aapne mere liye itna kuch kia,mere dil toh aapko ekbahut bara thanks dena chatha hain.

Nupur:-toh de do.Waise mujhe tumhe ek baat batana hain matlab.

Mayank:-Matlab help chaiye,ohbhi gunjan aur sammy related.

Nupur:-Are wah tum toh sab kuch jante ho,good mayu beta.

Matyank:-mar khaoge mere hath se ,bulao sammy ko.

Nupur:-ok sweetu and pinch his cheecks

Then sammy comes and mayank ko sab bola aapna problem.phir Nupur,mayank aur sammy ek plan banaya.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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