It Had To Be You (part 11) AK ff pg 121 4/26/10 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
wat a fantastic start! i kept on thinking of a childhood buddies turned enemy pair i know while reading this!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Smilesx3

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angads part was so hilariouss

he wants to annoy kripa and gt her attention

kripa is too perfecttt for him haha

already luv thiss ff......so diff from ur old one



thanks kiran. yes, this ff is more halki phulki and once again, thanks for requesting the siggy😊

[quote=kehanT]Hi Big D,
Im little sad 😭

You forgot to pm me ..... woh toh i searched for it to see if you posted an update .....

Chalo koi baat nahi , bade bade shehron mein aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai 😊

i am again awestruck by your new style of writing.
Honestly there is a litte angad in me as well 😆

and i completely agree with angad that poem stuff is boring.... poem recitation was never my kind of thing ....

Its a relief to know that now they are together, and whats to be seen is the course time takes to take them to their manzil ...

Great Job di

Loved it
Kanu[/quote]

My bad Kanu....sorry sorry if I missed ur name on the PM list😭.....will make sure next time I don't make the same mistake

so, u have a little angad in u too?😃 U are very good at shers and poetry though😊

yeah,this ff doesnot have the twists and turns of Pehchan- it's more a narration by angad😊


Edited by bheegi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bheegi



Happy new Year Annu! jee aapko bhi, saal e nau mubarak!😃 I love your new cartoons again. I will def use them again- i will always remain 1 chapter behind ur cartoons😃 arey, aise na kahein...main itne saare cartoons kahan se laaoon Yes, first person narration is always different as it is always one person's POV but that's how real life is, isn't it? How I wish real life mein bhi sabke thoughts pata chal jaayein.😊 ohh God, I think that there would be nothing more dangerous than this that we came to know about the thoughts of others and vice versa😕 bohatson ki pol khul jaye gi aise toh...wo kehte haina, ye insaan ki souch hi hai...jis per kisi aur ka ikhteyaar nahi...magar bheegi aap chahte ho, aapko ye ikhteyaar miley 😳, and if other would come to know about your thoughts then??? Aapko chale ga ?!🤔 Well, good observation re; Angad- why is he narrating these old incidents....aap ko abhi aage padhna padhega phir pata chalega kyun aisa likha maine. kahin aisa toh nahi, kripa is lying on hospital bed, taking her aakhri saans..while looking at her, angad is thinking all this

Thanks for ur compliment- they really mean a lot to me. I am humbled and honored. I am not familiar with Hasina Main's work but I am sure if u like it, she must be really good😊 U are not familiar with Hasina Moin's work..really??😲 Very strange! Im saying this, bcoz what I heard and saw that Indians, no matter in which part of the world they live, they are or used to be crazy about old paki tv serials and Omer Sharif's stage shows. anyways, that means, u didn't see her serials like Ankahi, Tanhaaiyaan, Dhoop Kinaarey ok, as you are a writer so i highly recommend you to watch all these serials..they are MUST WATCH!! Im still in disbelief .. u don't know writer Hasina Moin 😕
What award is Federer getting here? He looks so good! Its an ATP award, when he finished the season as world # 1

Edited by annu127 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NYPunjabii



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these cartooons are sooo like Angadd..you choose great cartoons tht go with the character


thnx Jannat😆

yes, but the difference is that in preview, angad was looking insaan ka bachcha atleast

but here, he is more like an alien or chooza😆


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Pearlz

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nice c@rtoons..the one bheegi put in first ch@p w@s funny...this one is funnny @lso...you should put diff pic in e@ch chap


jee behtar 😆

but i guess, it wont be that easy to put apt cartoons every time…but I will try.😃


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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG..................i have never read a ff lke that........i simly adore it bheegi.,wow..............i luv angad......................
really interesting......n wats suryabhan's problem.......continue soon n do pm me....
thnx for the pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: annu127


thnx Jannat😆

yes, but the difference is that in preview, angad was looking insaan ka bachcha atleast

but here, he is more like an alien or chooza😆




angad was looking insaan ka bachcha atleast but here, he is more like an alien or chooza😆

this part made me laugh 😆

yea your right, angad is like an alien who wants everyone to look at him by being different....llol

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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyyy Api

A great hearty welcome back to you. I hope you enjoyed the much needed break in India with friends/family.

Did you watch the ball drop?

I guess I'm always going to be first to reserve and last one to comment 😆

Back to the part

Again, the cartoons were great with the part. Usually you start your FF with quotes, but with this comedy FF you starting ff with comedy cartoons. Great approach

Aww...Angad is soo cute..if he can't get Kripa's attention by being nice, he decided to be bad and get her whole attention on him 😆

Kripa is the little goody-good girl who excels and shines in everything she does⭐️.

She and Angad must always be ready to fight as there complete opposites. But opposites do attract😉

And Suryabhan's competitiveness to show the world his daughter and hurt anyone who hurts her is sure to be foreshadowing. Wonder what will happen in the upcoming parts.

When Angad was narrating these parts made me laugh..


'na jaane kya khaakar paida kiya tha isko?'

'aapne kya khaakar paida kiya tha isko?'

kya hua on Kripa's 27th birthday.

You are a great writer. I visualized the scenes and the way you wrote the part makes the reader engaged and remember their own childhood.

Through the whole part, I was laughing or smiling at Angad's antics.

Your part makes people smile. 😃

This FF is wayyy different the Pehchaan which was a serious FF. I actually wanted you to write a comedy/romantic story on AK and was thinking if I should write the suggestion on this genre but your overly creative mind beat me to the punch.

Jannat


Edited by NYPunjabii - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Omg didi! That was AMAZING! AK are soooo cute. Angad is soo naughty but soo cute. I loved it. Poor Kripa but i seriously loved the ending and ofcourse Angad's character. LOL Update soon and Pleae PM me! ~Jot~

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