It Had To Be You (part 11) AK ff pg 121 4/26/10

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Anila

@Annu..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

first of all, heartily congrats for starting this new fanfic 😊

first person narration se whole ff padhna aur story ke har character ko samajhna, thoda mushkil ho sakta hai..coz single person ke standpoint se har baat pata chale gi, but here angad is an astute observer...is liye anyone could rely on him

the way angad noticed everything related to kripa with keen interest, it seemed to be very cute while reading.. but how this flashback started at once... means, why angad is thinking in this way?

fantastic update... i was laughing while reading all this... but in this part atleast... little angad didn't seem to be extra ordinary.. i mean in this age, every naughty active kid behaves in this manner... This is narration, which is making everything so interesting.👏

kripa toh bohat hi bholi lagi..i hope, wo har waqt rotu surat na banaai rakhe aur angad ko ghoomaa ke aik tikaa bhi diya karey...tabhi mazaa hai!😉

intresting that angad had to wait for 27 longish years to listen for those magical words... it seems a longer period for childhood friends/ acquaintances

wo prithvi kahin dikhaai nahin diya bday party mein...shayad angad ki nazar na padi ho uss per

i am amazed by you writing skills,bheegi... kahan wo pehchaan aur kahan ye ff ...HATS OFF!!! 👏👍🏼 i have read 5-6 ffs of urs, aur aapke writing style esp ur sense of humour se mujhe veteran paki tv serial writer Hasina Moin ka khayaal aata hai.. don't know why

P.S. wo angad ka cartoon preview ke hisaab se apt tha, yahan thoda misfit laga 😆
ye kaisa hai ?!

Edited by annu127 - 15 years ago

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Sweta

@Angadzgirl

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Awww di.....welcome back.....wat a beaufiful part...👏😊

Angad's sooo naughty as usual....😳

n Kripa's soo sweet n cute....😛

n Awww they r complete opposite poles..............

n di thanx for pm....🤗

n cant wait for next part...😛

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Smileyface
hey welcome back bheegi di!! happy new year! hope ur holiday season was funfilled =) i dont think i need to tell u about how amazing the first part was! but i will...lol...i loved it...it was very good...haha i love angad...hes so funny...a typical brat...lol....cant wait for this fanfic to develop....im sure its gonna be amazing like all the other ones u have written...great job di! cud u plz pm me when u continue?? and plz continue soon =)

hershi

thanks Hershi. I had a great holiday season and hope you did too. I hope u all continue to like this fic as it's ur support that keeps me going:) This ff will be a short one and not as long as my previous one😊

[quote=angadkripa_fan]wow👏i fell in love with ur ff its just amazing ;great;mindblowing
wow really i can't find the apropriat words hats off
really great job please cont soon&pm me when u update👍🏼
i❤️ak.............kyph will always rock&thanks for the pm😃

[/quote]

thanks dear! Yes, Ak and KYPH rock for sure! I am glad u have liked this first part😊

[quote=lilmay]

Welcome back!!! I'm so happy that u r back with ur fanfic!!

The first part was AMAZING!!! I loved every little bit of it....I loved both Angad and Kripa...so cute!

Honestly, I wish they would make movies like ur stories...

Please update soon...[/quote]

thanks lilmay! Are u an AR fan or AK fan? I have seen u both places😃 Thanks for reading my ffs and ur compliment makes me blush now😳

[quote=queenhinna12]yayyy bheegi ur bakkk :D:D hope u had a great new year!!
awwwww looks like angad already in love:P
haha ak competing:P:P
aww he remembers everything related to kripa:P:P
for some reason i cnt imagine ak in this story...its more of an ar type lol
ak wud have no problem getting married :P
ak r opposites :P
how old was kripa??
kripas dad is quite cruel to angad :P
does angad have some kinda mental problem lol?
haha its like krips is an angel n angad a devil:P
cont soooooooon[/quote]

Hi Hinu! Yes, I am back from India and glad to be writing again😊 Angad the duffer will take forever to realize what kripa means to him😆 Yes, this ff was originally an AR ff but all AK fans wanted it to be written for AK also....so u can pick which version u want to read😊. In the first part, Angad attended Kripa's fourth birthday. No, Angad is just a typical boy- he is NOT MENTAL!

[quote=simi]

Yay your back 🤗 thanks for the PM 😊 Hope you had an awesome New years 😃

And a great start to the story 😃😃 quite a light theme compared to Pehchan 😆 And i love this new writing style of yours 😃 There arent many stories here from a boy's point of view so i hope we get to read all the masala that cooks in a typical boy's head 😆😆

Anywho, loved the childhood begining! Poor Kripa, so miserable around Angad! ahahaha!

Does Angad have ADHD in this one? 😕

Kripa's dad throwing jabs at Angad maybe shows that he's going to be a hurdle between the two in the future? probably maybe because Kripa will grow up to be a intelligent well educated girl and Angad will (as signs show it) probably be more of the creative kind of a guy...which Krip's dad will disapprove of?

Waiting to read more 😃[/quote]

thanks simi. Happy new Year to u too. Yes, this is Angad's storyin his words just like DYM was Ridz's story in her words. Well, Angad certainly has traits of ADHD but I had already portrayed armaan as ADHD in TEIH so won't highlight that fact here again.Let's see how AK's relationship evolves as the story progresses😊

[quote=teri_susan]Great start👏.Awesome part👍🏼.Angad's POV is nice and fascinating😆and funny.So he seeks Kripa's attention all those 28 years and to achieve that he does all type of things that would irritate her and turn attention her towards him for a while😉.Suryabhan started fighting with Angad for Kripa at the young age😆.Badmaash Angad😆,loving and at the same irritating,fine atleast he has his dad by his side who could supprot him.So how is he going to win Kripa's heart😉. [/quote]

Thanks susan! Yes, angad the attention seeker will continue to irk Kripa for 28 years....let's see how he manages to do this in coming chapters😉

[quote=anshu]hey di

it was bestest best update i hav ever read
srry for the grammar
i jst love angad
poor kripa i hope the coming 27 yrs will nt b too difficult for her

thanx for the pm
update soon di

i hope u had a good Indian trio

anshu

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thanks for reading both versions anshu. yes, this is originally an AR story but i have rewritten it for AK fans also Yes, I had a great India trip...thanks😊
thanks for liking it and recommending this ff in the sticky😊

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: annu127

first of all, heartily congrats for starting this new fanfic 😊

first person narration se whole ff padhna aur story ke har character ko samajhna, thoda mushkil ho sakta hai..coz single person ke standpoint se har baat pata chale gi, but here angad is an astute observer...is liye anyone could rely on him

the way angad noticed everything related to kripa with keen interest, it seemed to be very cute while reading.. but how this flashback started at once... means, why angad is thinking in this way?

fantastic update... i was laughing while reading all this... but in this part atleast... little angad didn't seem to be extra ordinary.. i mean in this age, every naughty active kid behaves in this manner... This is narration, which is making everything so interesting.👏

kripa toh bohat hi bholi lagi..i hope, wo har waqt rotu surat na banaai rakhe aur angad ko ghoomaa ke aik tikaa bhi diya karey...tabhi mazaa hai!😉

intresting that angad had to wait for 27 longish years to listen for those magical words... it seems a longer period for childhood friends/ acquaintances

wo prithvi kahin dikhaai nahin diya bday party mein...shayad angad ki nazar na padi ho uss per

i am amazed by you writing skills,bheegi... kahan wo pehchaan aur kahan ye ff ...HATS OFF!!! 👏👍🏼 i have read 5-6 ffs of urs, aur aapke writing style esp ur sense of humour se mujhe veteran paki tv serial writer Hasina Moin ka khayaal aata hai.. don't know why

P.S. wo angad ka cartoon preview ke hisaab se apt tha, yahan thoda misfit laga 😆
ye kaisa hai ?!

Happy new Year Annu! I love your new cartoons again. I will def use them again- i will always remain 1 chapter behind ur cartoons😃 Yes, first person narration is always different as it is always one person's POV but that's how real life is, isn't it? How I wish real life mein bhi sabke thoughts pata chal jaayein.😊

Well, good observation re; Angad- why is he narrating these old incidents....aap ko abhi aage padhna padhega phir pata chalega kyun aisa likha maine.

Thanks for ur compliment- they really mean a lot to me. I am humbled and honored. I am not familiar with Hasina Main's work but I am sure if u like it, she must be really good😊

What award is Federer getting here? He looks so good!

[quote=angadzgirl]Awww di.....welcome back.....wat a beaufiful part...👏😊

Angad's sooo naughty as usual....😳

n Kripa's soo sweet n cute....😛

n Awww they r complete opposite poles..............

n di thanx for pm....🤗

n cant wait for next part...😛[/quote]

Thanks shweta. yes,in this one, angad is really naughty😳 and chalaak😉

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: monikaseth
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👏Welcome Back Awesome , Mind Blowing Tooooooooooooooooooooooooo Good Sangeeta I loved it ...👏

I Cant stop laughing after reading angad's doings..both are complete opposite . angad total naughtymonkey and kripa sweet angel. angad ka bachha itna shaitaan hoga pata nahi tha 😆and for pm pl pm me every time . Aaage ja ke kya karenge yeh dono i am looking for it thank you so much for this sweet & cute part sangeeta ⭐️
⭐️

hi monu. Happy New year to you. It's good to be back. Yes, angad is the natkhat one here but all his badmaashis are done to get kripa's attention....will she ever give him the attention he wants??😉 yes, i will PM u next time also😊

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Jannat

@NYPunjabii

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: annu127
P.S. wo angad ka cartoon preview ke hisaab se apt tha, yahan thoda misfit laga 😆
ye kaisa hai ?!

😆
😆
these cartooons are sooo like Angadd..you choose great cartoons tht go with the character

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Pearlz

@Pearlz

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#107

@bheegi

thx...im on prt 5...jus love @ng@d nd @rm@@n ch@r@cter nd thier pr@nks.....you shld write @nother ff with these two couples

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Pearlz

@Pearlz

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#108

@annu

nice c@rtoons..the one bheegi put in first ch@p w@s funny...this one is funnny @lso...you should put diff pic in e@ch chap

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Shravya1

@Shravya1

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: bheegi

thanks lilmay! Are u an AR fan or AK fan? I have seen u both places😃 Thanks for reading my ffs and ur compliment makes me blush now😳

Lol, I'm actually a fan of both. Hindi is not my mother tongue (but I understand it reasonably well thanks to my friends) and so I was not aware of DMG/KYPH until last spring when my friend introduced me to DMG...I became an AR fan and then read a lot of AR fanfics...I saw many AK fanfics, wanted to see who they were and once I started , I liked them too...and I became an AK fan as well..lol. I like both couples equally...they r too cute together!

It was my pleasure. I should be the one saying thanks...ur ffs are like my coffee after a tiring day at uni!!!

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Kanu K

@artizia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#110

Hi Big D,
Im little sad 😭

You forgot to pm me ..... woh toh i searched for it to see if you posted an update .....

Chalo koi baat nahi , bade bade shehron mein aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai 😊

i am again awestruck by your new style of writing.
Honestly there is a litte angad in me as well 😆

and i completely agree with angad that poem stuff is boring.... poem recitation was never my kind of thing ....

Its a relief to know that now they are together, and whats to be seen is the course time takes to take them to their manzil ...

Great Job di

Loved it
Kanu

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