MJHT (MAYUR & SAJAN) FF 'Sirf Tum' Part 26 @ Pg139 - Page 46

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi daksha,

Lovely update.

mayank is a lovable husband

Loved the b.day surprise of Mayank 4 nups.

And wow angel called mayur as papa an mamma.

Aww she is so sweet.

U r right- it was the best day of their life.

Very very nice part.

Keep updating.

Thanx 4 pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
So sweet.. Angel said Mamma and Pappa.... That was utter sweet... and the flowers.. I love them and cake... mere mooh mein toh paani aa raha hai....
Very sweet updatešŸ‘ jo padhne se pehle hi khatam ho gaya...šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago

Dodddi my Dakshaaa!!

Perfectly editing part, It was shorrrt but very beautiful,

U used Nupur birthday,

The surprize wass so beautiful =)

YAAY for 1st time angel says '' Mamma...Papa''

The 3 was sooo cuteee together *Imagine*

The gift was sooo beautiful too,

Feel sad for SAM n Dia,
U rocks,

Can't wait for the next part!!

With love,
Aisho .
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it
I'm liking the one year leap
and angel said her first two words
awww.....
that's so cute!
and what Mayank did
bringing her cake and everything
was really nice!
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Daksha love this part loadzzzzzzz

Mayu gave her a surprise 4 her b-day??
and Angel is soooo cute
and wow Can't wait 4 the twist
do cont soon
love ya
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy daksha
really nice update
aww mayank understands nupur so much
plzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
UPDATED: Part XVII

Scene: Mayank's Flat

In the morning………..

Nupur wakes up…….. she sees that Mayank also woke up……… He was gazing at her…………..

N: Good Morning…………..

M: Good Morning………

He sits on the bed………. And pulls Nupur towards him and covers both of them with blanket………..

N: Mayank……….. chodo naa kya kar rahe ho………….

M: Pyaar……….

N: Wo mujhe bhi pata hai……….. par abhi chodo Angel ke uthne ka samay ho gaya hai…………

Mayank has firmly holded her hand…………

M: Nahin chodunga……….. jaao kya kar logi………..

Nupur dabs Mayank nose with her finger………

N: Main kya kar sakti hoon……… 5…4….3….2….1….

And voice of crying comes……….

Mayank leaves her hand……… Nupur stands up……….

N: Maine to kaha tha………. Main kya kar sakti hoon……. (she smiles seeing Mayank)

N: meri Angel sach mein Angel hai………. bas subah uth kar roti hai………

And she goes and picks her up………..

N: Bas…..papa darr jate hain…….. (she is giving Mayank a naughty smile)

Mayank too smiles seeing her……….

M: Papa darte nahin hain…… papa ko lagta hai Angel itni pyaari hai…… to woh ro kyun rahi hai……….

N: Accha Mayank mazzaak band haan………….. tum jaldi se tayaar ho jaao………..

Scene: Sehgal House

At the dining table………

SM: Good morning Samrat………

S: Good morning mom……… Papa ki tabiyat kaisi hai ab……….

SM: Kal doctor ne kaha tha unka khyaal ab 24 ghante rakhna hai…….. Accha chal ab tu breakfast kar le……..

Both of them are having the breakfast……..

SM: Beta……. Toone socha kuch……..

S: Kis baare mein……

SM: Beta shaadi ke baare mein……. Ab to tu acche se settle bhi ho gaya business bhi accha chal raha hai……….. beta tere papa marne se pehle apni bahu ka chehra dekhna chahte hain…………. (she has tears in her eyes while saying that)

Samrat has never seen her like this before…….. she was looking very dispared……. As if lost all the hope………

S: Haan maa…….. bas mujhe do din ka samay de do…….. bas………

SM: Jaisa tu theek samjhe beta………..

He then leaves for the office…………

In Samrat's cabin………..

He's on the phone with Dia………….

S: Hello……..jaan…… how r you……

D: Main theek hoon………

S: Tumne kya socha hai…… Dia please tum mujhe saaf saaf bata do………. Hum shaadi kab karenge………

D: Shaadi…….??????? Main tumse pehle bhi keh chuki hoon……. abhi mera shaadi ka koi plan nahin hai………. please hum kisi aur topic par baat kar sakte hain……..

S: Dia……. Iss waqt mere paas isse important koi topic nahin hai…….. mere Dad chahte hain meri jald se jald shaadi ho jaaye…….. aur main bhi yahi chahta hoon…..

D: Par main ye nahin chahti Samrat…….. aur abhi toh bilkul nahin……. mujhe abhi apne career par focus karna hai…….. aur India…. yes India to main kabhi nahin aa sakti……… kabhi bhi nahin………

They had huge fight on the phone……… Samrat puts off the phone harshly……..in anger………

Then the bell again rings……… Samrat picks up the phone in anger……

S: Maine kaha naa………..

SM (taking deep breaths): Beta tere papa……….tu jaldi se Fortaz Hospital aaja……. Beta jaldi…..

S: Haan mom…….abhi aa raha hoon……… tum pareshaan mat ho main pohonch raha hoon……….

He picks up his keys from the table…………and moves out hastily……..Mayank was coming towards his cabin………. Samrat sees him……….

S: Aaj ki saari meetings tum dekh lena……….

He is walking away…………..

S: Fortaz Hospital………papa……… tum sab sambhaal lena Mayank……..

And he leaves……..

Scene: Mayank's Flat

Nupur was playing with Angel when doorbell rings……….. Gunjan was there……..

N: Arre………. Ab jaake teri shakal dikhaayi di hai……… aur bata kya chal raha hai……..

G: kuch nahin bas college se aa rahi thi socha tumse mil loon……..

N: Toone mujhe naa college wale dinon ke Mayank ki yaad dila di…….. exams ke baad bhi koi college jaata hai kya……..

G: Di main college books return karne gayi thi……… aur tum batao kya ho raha hai aajkal……… Junior Mayank ki tayaari chal rahi hai………. ya Junior Nupur ki…….

N (blushing and pats Gunjan): Hat pagli……..

G: Kyun bhai hamaari Angel ko bhi to company chahiye na………

N: Tujhe bohot padi hai company ki……… abhi Chachi se kah kar teri shaadi karva deti hoon………. phir dekhti hoon kitni Junior Gunjan aati hain………

G (blushing): Diiiiiii………….

N: Accha bata na shaadi karni hai abhi ya aur padhna hai…….. dekh tu mujhe bata sakti hai………..

G: Di………. Mujhe nahin pata………

N: Isska matlab shaadi karni hai……….haina……. haina……..haina………

And Gunjan smiles………

G: Tum bohot shaitaan ho…………

N: Accha chal mujhe bata tujhe kaisa ladka chahiye………

G: Kya…….. mujhe nahin pata…….

N: To phir teri shaadi…….. doodh wale Kallu se kara deti hoon………

G: Tumhein to main………. (she picks up the cushion and hits her)

N: Toh bata na kaisa ladka chahiye…………

G: Mujhe…….. aisa ladka chahiye jo mujhse bohot pyaar kare…….. mera khayal rakhe…….. meri har ek baat bina kahe samajh jaaye……… bas……….

N: Accha toh tujhe shaadi ke baad Dumb shuraaz khelna hai…………

Gunjan again hits her with cushion……….

G: Nahin…….. bilkul waise hi jaise jiju tumhaari har ek baat tumhaare bolne se pehle hi samajh jaate hain………..

They both had their talks………..

Scene: FortazHospital

Samrat reaches the hospital………….. He sees his mom standing outside……..

S: Mom kya hua……. Sab theek to hai na…….

SM: pata nahin beta doctors kuch bata hi nahin rahe………..

S: Ruko mom…….main dekhta hoon……..

Then doctor comes out of the ward………..

S: Doctor sab theek to hai na…………

D: Ji dekhiye…….. abhi kuch keh nahin sakte…….. poori diagnosis ke baad hi bata payenge………. Waise he's very critical………. It's a major attack this time……. Kuch keh nahin sakte………

After few hours……….

Doctor calls Samrat and his mom in his cabin…………

D: Ji unki reports aa gayi hain……..

S: Sab theek to hai na……….

SM: haan doctor bataiye……….

D: Jaisa ki maine pehle bhi kaha tha Mr. Sehgal ke paas bohot kam samay bacha hai…… hardly 3-4 months………

Both samrat and his mom became freezed……… they were shocked to hear that……

S: kya kuch bhi nahin ho sakta……..

D: Hum poori koshish karenge lekin aap logon ko unki hare k khwahish poori karni hogi…….. so that he remains happy…..

S: ji doctor zaroor………….

After coming out of the doctor's cabin…………

Samrat is thinking about his conversation with mom in the morning……….

S: Maa…….. main shaadi ke liye tayaar hoon……. tumhein jo ladki pasand ho……. Main dad ko ab aur tension nahin de sakta…… and he leaves from there…….

Scene: Office

Uday calls in the office….... mayank receives the phone…..

M: Haan Uday………. Wo jo meeting hai…… wo kal subah postponed kar di hai…… sorry for the inconvenience…….

U: Kaisi baat karta hai……… kya hua sab theek toh hai na………

M: Wo Mr. Sehgal ki tabiyat achaanak kharaab ho gayi hai……. something serious…… he is in Fortaz Hospital…….

U: I hope sab theek ho jaye………. Accha ab main rakhta hoon…………

After putting the receiver he calls at Bhushan Mansion………

Gunjan has just come…….she picks up the phone……..

U: Hello……..kaun Gunjan……. Maa ko phone de……

G: haan bhaiya……..

Uday tells everything to Shilpa………. He asks her to visit the hospital……….

After putting off the phone……….

S: Beta tujhe koi kaam toh nahin hai………

G: Nahin chachi………

S: Toh tu mere saaath chal hospital………….

Both Shilpa and Gunjan reaches the hospital………… They see samrat's mom there…….

S&G: Namaste……….

S: Kaisi tabiyat hai ab Mr. Sehgal ki…….

SM: Ji ab to theek hai……. kal subah discharge ho jaayaenge……

S: acchi baat hai…… mujhe toh hospital ke naam se hi darr lagta hai…….

While Shilpa was talking……. Samrat's mom was gazing at Gunjan……. Then she speaks………

SM: Ji hum Gunjan ka haath apne Samrat ke liye maangna chahte hain……….

S: Kya……. Ji main samjhi nahin……..

Gunjan too shocked with what she heard right now………….

Hey Guys......
I know its less of Mayur in this update...... but it was the need of the story.......
Please don't feel sad........ wait for next update....... it will include all that you missed here...... Please batao kaisa laga ye part.......... Please comment.........tey really encourage me to write better......... I'll eagerly wait for them
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow nice update dear gun ke liye proposal form sam's mom's side loved this part please update soon and ya thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry 4 late update daksha...
luvd d part...(especially angel calling mayur.. mama & papa...)
pls continue soon...šŸ‘
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yippe.........
Will Sam marry Gunjan ?????????
I don't know.......... very excited update soon...........

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