MJHT (MAYUR & SAJAN) FF 'Sirf Tum' Part 26 @ Pg139 - Page 44

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: naina4MAYUR

lucd dis part......MAYANK iz vry Caring Husband.....luvd dis part

Thanks for loving it dear............
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

i simply loved the update

how mayank handled the situation was awesome

and how supportive he is!

i loved thsi

update soon......./

Thanks Mahak
Thank you so much for loving it.............
I'll update asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
love de update
continue asap
thnx tht u write for us

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Posted: 15 years ago
Sorry 4 Late update ....
Luvd D Part...
pls continue soon..👏
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luvd d part...
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Originally posted by: mannnnnn

love de update
continue asap
thnx tht u write for us

Thank you for your sweet gesture..........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver

Sorry 4 Late update ....

Luvd D Part...
pls continue soon..👏

Thank you dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
UPDATED: PART XVI
Scene: Sehgal House

In Samrat's room………..(after the party)

Samrat talking on phone with Dia………..

S: Hi jaan………kaisi ho……….

D: I'm fine here dear………

S: Aaj maine apni pehli deal sign ki………. tumhein pehle bata deta…….lekin tab wahan Singapore mein raat ho rahi thi……..to main abhi bata raha hoon……….

Dia (yawning): Hmm…….. aur tum waapas ka baa rahe ho………

Samrat (smiles): Ab to seedha tumhein lene aaunga………

D: Kya matlab….??? Main kahin nahin jaa rahi………. Singapore chod ke……….

S: Accha chodo…….. aur batao…….missing me…….

D: Aur kya……. Tum jaldi aa jao………

S: Hmm… dekhta hoon….. jaldi aane ki koshish karunga……..

They both had their talk and then Samrat's mom enter the room……………..

SM: Kisse baat ho rahi thi……..hmm Samrat……..

S: Kuch nahin mom…….bas aise hi……..

SM: Dekh beta agar koi ladki hai teri nazar mein toh tu mujhe bata de……… main bhi tujhe dulha bana hua dekhna chahti hoon………

S: Nahin maa……. Aur tum meri shaadi ka khyaal apne dimag se nikaal do…….mujhe bsiness par concentrate karna hai abhi……..

Samrat thinking: Shaadi toh main abhi kar loon……. Par Dia abhi ready nahin hogi….. main usse jald hi mana loonga……

SM: Kis soch mein pad gaya Samrat……… kisi ke khyalon mein……..

S: Nahin mom……. Ab tum jao yahaan se…….mujhe bohot neend aa rahi hai………

SM is leaving the room……….she looks around that the whole room is messed up……..

SM: Sehgal Group of Industries ke MD ka room dekho………. Aisa lagta hai kisi kabaadi ka ghar hai………… Saaf kar lena isse…….

Samrat says "Aahaan mom" and jumps into his bed…………..

Scene: Mayank's Flat

Mayank Nupur unclasp each other……..and they both go to bed after changing……… Nupur slept on one side……..then Mayank comes from another side…… He kissed her cheeks and sees that she has slept…….. He then wraps his arms around her waist and goes to sleep……….

Nupur was not sleeping……… after Mayank closes the lights……..she opens her eyes…… Whole night she was in tension………..she slept somewhere in the early morning around 3-4 am………..

In the morning at 7……….

Mayank slowly wakes up……… he picks up Angel and goes out……….

M: Chalo…chalo… aaj toh mummy ka birthday hai……… chalo market se mummy ke liye kuch saamaan lekar aate hain……….

After half an hour Nupur wakes up…….. she is having a headache…….. she sits on the bed and drinks water…….. She sees that Angel is not in her cradle…….. then she stands up to find Mayank……….. she goes out and sees that the door was not closed…..

Nupur thinking: Shayad Mayank Angel ko lekar walk par gaya ho………

She then goes to the washroom…………

In the meanwhile……. Mayank returns back with a bouquet of red roses and a lovely cake……….

Nupur when comes out she sees that Mayank is standing in front of the door………

Mayank was constantly gazing at her……….

N: Aise kya dekh rahe ho…………. Chalo jaldi karo office nahin jaana kya……….

M: Nahin jaana……..

N: Kyun…..

M: Tum bhool sakti ho par main nahin……….

He comes closer to her………

N: Main kya bhool gayi………

Mayank comes more closer to her…….

N: Arre batao na kya bhool gayi………..

Mayank approaches more close to her………He then slowly places his mouth near her ears………..and……….shouts…………..HAPPY BIRTHDAY……..

Nupur hugs her………..she has tears in her eyes……..

Mayank then unclasp her and sees that her eyes are wet……….

M: Kya Nupur tum bhi……… bilkul TV serial ki heroinon ki tarah roti hi rahti ho…… dukhi hoti ho toh……….. khush hoti ho toh……… mujhe tumhaare ye aansoon bilkul nahin pasand…….. aur aaj ke din to bilkul nahin……..

He then gives her the bouquet………..Nupur smiles taking them……..

N: Bohot sundar hain…….. then both of them comes out of the room…….

The lovely cake was waiting for Nupur………. Angel was sitting nearby in her rocker…….. Nupur holds her and then she cuts the cake……….

Mayank was singing Happy Birthday to you………..and then suddenly……..voice comes……… Ma…..aammamm…a

It was Angel…….. she spoke for the first time………..her first word……….

Mamma……

Nupur kiseed her…………this could be the best gift on her birthday…………She was very happy…….

N: Phir se bolo……… Maamma……

Mayank too smiled…….and took Angel in his arms……..and kissed on her cheeks……

M: Ab jaldi se Papa…….bhi bolna……….. haan………

Then only she spoke………….Paaa….pa……..

To both of them amazement………..this was the best day of their life………….. Both of them were very happy………. Then Mayank sees the wall clock……

M: Arre…….der ho gayi….. Nupur aaj shaam tum bilkul tayaar rehna…… hum bahar chalenge dinner pe……….. aaj to double celebration hoga………..hai na…….

N: Aur kya……..aaj main bohot khush hoon……….

Then after the breakfast Mayank leaves for office………

In the evening……..when Mayank returns back…………

Nupur comes and opens the door………

Mayank enters and gives a file to Nupur……….

M: HAPPY BIRTHDAY…………. Mere khayal se isse accha gift tumhaare liye nahin ho sakta tha………..

N (making a face): Gift mein koi kisi ko file deta hai kya bhala…………

M: Ye file hum dono ki zindagi hai…….. aur kal raat se jo tum pareshaan ho na……. Ye tumhaari saari pareshaaniyaan door kar degi……….

N: Aisa kya hai issmein……… (she opens the file)

There was Marriage Certificate of Mayank and Nupur……….

N: Ab issmein kya hai……….

M: Year………. Iss ke according humein shaadi kare huye officially……….. Ek saal, 1 mahine, 16 din aur kuch ghante huye hain………….. Happy……….

N: Haan………

She kissed on Mayank's cheeks……..

N: Haan……… aaj main sabse khush hoon…………

M: To ye kya tareeka tha khushi zaahir karne ka………kuch aur bhi toh ho sakta tha……

Mayank coming towards Nupur……..and she pushes him back………

N: Jaao pehle jaakar tayaar ho jaao……… dinner pe nahin jaana kya………

One year passed………..Now everyone was happy…………. there was no tension in Mayank-Nupur's life………. In Bhushan Mansion also………. Uday expanded his business with Sehgals………….. Gunjan completed her graduation………

Only problem was in Sehgal house……… Samrat's father health was ruining day by day………..and Samrat was not able to talk to Dia for their marriage………..

Thats it for now guys............ Please tell whatever you liked and whatever you don't liked...........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Yippie I'm 1st to comment

Hey Daksha

Awwsome update dear

loved it...............👏

loved the way Mayank gave her surprise on her B-day

Wow angel said Mama ...Papa... it is surely the best day in their life

Aww..Mayank is so caring he got the marriage certificate

So the next twist is Samrat's marriage

do continue soon
Luv
Nidzy

Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago

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