Life in a movie(#2)-mayur - New thread link : pg 1 - Page 7

Originally posted by: samira-08

<FONT color=#330033>thank youuuuuu so much ur fantastic and u really good at thissssssss</FONT>

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

you have clearly made my day (this will get long)

first of all, congrats!
I'm so happy that you have a second thread now

of course, your writing is amazing

so youhave to have a second thread

I am a little angry

cause you never updated

but it's okay now

after reading the part,

mera gussa kaam ho gaya

of course pm me!

I doubt you would've forgotten

anyways, going onto the part

very well done

I'm glad you updated

it was too sweet

I liked the ending too

but it was sweet how nupur didn't say mayank's name

but agree, they do need time for the relationship

they just got married

so I'll allow you to give it more time

but the way you described it,

was perfect!

you seriously know the way of words

and describing each little detail

awww it was so sweet that Mayank gave Nupur a necklace

and that too, diamonds!

Well diamonds are a girl's best friend,

that includes me 😆

anyways if I write more,

I won't be able to finish my hw

cause I can go on and on about your ffs

so continue soon

varna... I'll bother you until you do 😆

so you better continue soon

but since you have so many things going on,

meaning other stories,

I'll let you go,

this time...

JK! Now I should probably stop typing

or else my hand will get numb

so continue soon! (I always end with that)

i am glad for that! 😳

thanks for the compliments.........

i too am very happy to have a second thread..........

u r angry???????

so sorry..........

now i will update .........

thank god!!!!!

nahi...........

tum na bhi kehti to bhi tumhe pm karti.........

thanks 😳 😳 😳

i loved that scene best........

i dont like wife calling their husband's name..........

but i guess nupur to mayank ko uske naam se hi bulaayegi.........

thanks for understanding that they need time for that........

thanks 😳

i too have a diamond ring which i love.........

yes girls r best frds of a girl........

i am happy that u liked it............

i included each minute detail so that u could imagine that like me..........

thanks for liking it..... 😳 ..

u don't bother me with it..........

i just love it..........

i love ur large comments...........

thanks for understanding..........

u r too good..........

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: surbhi123

congo on new thread mahak dear 😊lovely update . so cute . nupur calling her suniye was hilarious and telling him ma ne kaha hain😆mayank answers ma ne ye nahi kaha ki pati ki baat sunni chahiye😆it was magnificient,mindblowing.😳 .really , i loved this update dear . you really did a great job . 😉it
was awesome , mindblowing , januable , i really dont have words dear .i
am speechles dear .keep updating please . you know how eagerly i wait
for your updates . love you 😊<br>

thanks for the compliments.......

yes it was indeed hilarious. 😆

thanks 😳

thanks for loving it dear............

how sweet of u!!!!!!!

😳

Originally posted by: surbhi123

i
can understand . its a very interesting ff . read it from the
starting , youwill understand dear . waise dia is not mjht wali dia ,
she is a very small girl who is nupurs daughter . mayank and nupur got
married five years ago but they separated . and now they are working
for a movie together . gunjan is mayank fiance now , but
mayank still loves nupur .nupur ki lipistic mein zeher tha aur isiliye
vo ab hospital mein hain , mayank abhi uske saath hain as acting
ke samay vo saath the . dia come running there and call nupur
mummy , mayank was shocked and samrat told that dia is his
and nupurs daughter . waise i think he lied to him in order not
reavile the reality . read the ff dear , i promise , you will enjoy 😊mahak really writes well😊<br>

tu kitni zyada sweet hai!!!!!!!!

ek to itne ache comments aur upar se sab ko bata bhi rahi hai..........

how sweet!!!!!!!

i am touched!!!!!!!!

love u a lot ❤️

u r the best...........

🤗

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

<FONT color=#9966ff>hi mahak
]i will not say this is not romantic actually
it is sweet and romantic
i love the way she said sunyeji and the way they show
i love it mahak

you write very very good
dil se
muje ye padker kuch yaad aa gaya wahi write ker rahi hoon
" </FONT><FONT color=#990000>kuch baatein dil se samjatein hein
kuch baatein aankhein kahtein hein
kuch baatien tum kahtein ho
kuch baatien hum yo samjayein hein
lakin jab bhi hum milte hein kyo
lab kuch kahten nahi bus aankhein bola kartin hein
bus aankhien bola karti hein...........
saanso ke aahat hoti hein
jab tu chupke sa aata hein
aata kuch or nazar na jab samne tu aa jata hein...
mere dil per tera pehra hein...........
mere dil per tera pehra hein...........
kya tujko batoo mein mera pyar kitna gehara hein...............</FONT>

<FONT color=#9966ff>this is the most lovly poem one written frm my diary
and im second time writing it on net
this is for you
batana kassie lagi........
luv you
aditi
</FONT>

thanks 😳

i wanted to make it sweet only.........

thanks for liking it.......... 😳

ohk.......

so a poem for me???????

i am excited...........



i am really very touched!!!!!!!!!

u wrote it for me????????

thank u...........

👏

what a poem!!!!!!!!

and u wrote it!!!!!!!!!

i loved it!!!!!!!!

thanks a ton for it!!!!!!!!!!

Mayank locks the door silently and finds Nupur arranging her things in the almirah……

he walks over to her making no sound and holds her by her waist…..

Nupur is startled…….

she turns around and sees mayank……she blushes…..

Mayank holds her waist and keeps his head on her shoulder…….

she shivers…



guys...........i heard u were displeased that i wasn't including romance so soon........so i decided to give u what u want.......next update will be a romantic one........i promise..........
hope u like it......
do comment........

its simple yet unique yaar......loved it to the core...plz continue soon..🤗

yay!
i'm so happy!
pls cont soon!

It was simpley and I really admire on it

OMG Mahak