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Posted: 15 years ago
hey great promo loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey great promo loved it<br>





thanks......

i am updating shortly........
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Posted: 15 years ago




story so far- wedding of mayank and nupur had taken place.......they were comfortable with each other.......they loved each moment......they chatted the ntire night.....only a passionate hug was shared between them......as for the romance.....they have their entire lifes...........and they need some time to get lovey dovey with each other.......





coloured part denotes present while black presents past

They talked for sometime and then…….

Mayank went back and asked her to sleep……..

coz the day was tiring…….

they both slept……

not like that……..

but on one corner each……..

nupur wanted some time for it and so did mayank……




present-

Yaad hai Nupur?????…

we were doing our first movie and were eventually attracted towards each other…

we got in love.…..

we got married secretly……

in order not to loose our fame………

we loved each other very much……..

i used to love u like mad…………u too loved me……….

our life was awesome....




After their wedding, the next morning-

Nupur- mayank utho na…..

Mayank –nahi na

Nupur- par kyun?

Mayank- raat bhar to tumhare saath………

Nupur blushed……

Nupur leaned back but her mangalsootra did not allowed her to move away from mayank…



Mayank- lagta hai ki koi nahi chahta ki hum alag hon…….

Nupur again blushed…

Mayank- tum itna kyun sharmaati ho??? Aur who bhi mujhse……?

Nupur- ji nahi…….main to sirf ja rahi thi

Mayank putting his arms around her………

she shuddered at his touch…..



Mayank- ek to pata nahi tum mere touch se kaapna kab band karogi?

Nupur- tumhare touch mein ek aisi kashish hai jo mujhe…….

Mayank- kya?

Nupur- kuch nahi………jo mujhe tumhari taraf aur khichti hai

Mayank- to phir theek hai....ab jab bhi tum kapongi tab main samjhoonga ki tum mujhse pyaar kati ho.....theek hai na?

Nupur- main tumse hamesha hi pyaar karti rahoongi.....

Mayank held her in his arms and she rested her head on his chest......

and for sometime there was no one who could disturb this peaceful love bird couple....





present-

nupur......

isiliye jab tum us din mere chune se kapkapaayi......

to mujhe pata chal gaya ki u still love me.....

varna tumhe koi fark nahi padta......

tum hamesha hi kehti thi ki mera ehsaas tumhe majboor kar deta hai.........

u melt in my arms........

uth jao nupur plzzzzzzz..........



That day in the evening-

Mayank locks the door silently and finds Nupur arranging her things in the almirah……

he walks over to her making no sound and holds her by her waist…..

Nupur is startled…….

she turns around and sees mayank……

she blushes…..

Mayank holds her waist and keeps his head on her shoulder…….

she shivers…



Mayank- aaj to din bahut hi boring gaya

Nupur enjoying their closeness- kyun?

Mayank- kyunki aaj shoot par tum jo nahi thi na……..

Nupur- toh? Aapki pehli movies mein bhi to main nahi hoti thi...

Mayank- pehle tum meri kuch nahi thi par ab tum meri ho….tum meri sab kuch ho…….

This makes Nupur blush…….



she thinks what has happened to mayank????

Why is he acting so strange??

He was so close to her…….

she wanted to go but she enjoyed his grip…….

she doesn't know why but she really enjoyed it……

and as for mayank he was busy holding her and enjoying her warmth…….



Nupur- aapko ho kya gaya hai?

Mayank- kuch nahi

Nupur- chodiye mujhe. Mujhe jaana hai

Mayank- kyun?

Nupur- kaam hai



Mayank- itni der se aur kya kar rai thi? Ab thoda samay apne is bachare pati ko bhi de do……..

Nupur- par……and she blushes

Mayank- par var kuch nahi…..aaj main apni biwi ko samjhna chahta hoon

Nupur- aur aap ko kahana nahi khana hai kya?

mayank- tumne khaya?

Nupur- jab tak aap nahi khaate main kaise kha sakti hoon?

Mayank- to chalo tum bhi kha lo.

Mayank releases her waist……

Then they eat their food and went to sleep………





Morning in mayur's room-

Mayank got up early to find Nupur dressing up…….

she was looking awesome with her wet hairs……

her pink saree……

mayank watched her dress up……



Mayank looks at her adoribly and thinks that she was too sweet………..

she was an complete angel……

she was trying to tie up her dori of the blouse……

mayank moved towards her and asked her if he could do that for her?........

after getting an answer "yes" he tied her dori up for her…

he removed her wet hairs from her back exposing her bare back….

when he touched her……..

so closely, ……..

she almost shivered and melted…..



her creamy skin forced mayank to touch her…..

mayank also felt an urge to kiss her….

she was his…....

he kissed her on her bare back………..

not able to control himself……



Nupur was shocked………

she started trembling……….

she started feeling shy…….

she blushed…



on seeing her reacting this way he understood……..

so he was not the only one affected…….

mayank came into confidence……

he became romantic…….

the entire atmosphere changed…….



and he moved towards her and gave her a kiss but not on her cheek but on her lips……..

Nupur felt like shivering…..

she did not knew what to do?...

she was with her husband and he was kissing her……

mayank kissed her passionately on her lips…



she could no nothing…

she kissed him back in order to response…….

their kiss created spark in their body…….

they felt their body burning…..

the moment mayank felt Nupur responding back, he deepened the kiss even further…

while caressing her waist….



neither Mayank nor Nupur realized what they were doing…….

and they continued to kiss each other passionately……..

Suddenly, Nupur realized what she was doing…..

and she instantly broke out of the kiss…

he looked at Mayank awkwardly…

she wasn't sure if what they did was right……..



Mayank as if he understood nupur's thoughts- don't worry we r husband and wife….we can kiss each other…we are allowed to do so….and I was not able to control myself…….u look stunning in pink…….. but I am sorry if u didn't liked that…..did u liked that or did u mind if I kissed u?

Nupur blushing and in a fix what to say- I ……um….don't ……um……mind….

she blushed..

she tried to run away……..



Mayank thought that he was right…

he should show his love to his wife…..

he can't be shy…....

he could kiss his wife……..

she didn't mind it…….



and it proved that she was also enjoying it……

she had also melted in his arms……

he was not the only one affected………



They did not knew what to say to each other……….

mayank broke the silence between the two thinking that…..

ladkiyaan pehle kadam nahi badhati hain………u have to take the first move…….

Nupur was about to run away from the room when mayank once again caught her……..

he caught her by her hand……..

nupur tried to go but she couldn't……

his grip was too tight to be able to release……



Nupur- chodiye mujhe…..

Mayank- kyun?

Nupur- mujhe jaana hai

Mayank- nahi chodoonga

Nupur- please………

Mayank- I loved ur kiss…I felt my body burning…….what about you?



Nupur intended to go…..

Mayank- tumne bataya nahi…….

Nupur- me too……..

Mayank- so liked our kiss? Right?

Nupur blushes and turns to go…….



but mayank does not let her go…….

he firmly holds her by her hand….

he could not let her go atleast not now…...

not without getting an answer………



Mayank- I didn't got my answer..

Nupur releasing his hand and rushing out of the door – yes









that's it for today........

hope u liked it........

aaj dekh lijiye..........

maine ek saath aapki saari shikayatein door kar di.............

first of all to include romantic scenes...........

then to write long updates...........

and then to show romance...........

now u have to comment..........

i am really expecting a huge comment this time............

coz for the first time i have included soooooo much in my works............

i don't know if its ok...........

i just wanna know what u felt regarding this.........

did i did full justice to ur replies or not????????

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do comment..........

and silent readers............this time dont be silent.......and tell me what do u think abt this?????????

and plzzzzzzzzz i beg u to tell me which part u liked the most........and what did u felt on reading tat.......

coz i am very shy this time.........

itna blush main kabhi bhi nahi karti hoon.........

so do comment plzzzzzzzzzz..............



Mahak
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwww mahak,
at first i want to take a long breath.
ye tune kya update kya???????????

My head was spinning after reading it.

Oh my god it was so cute, nice, lovely, awesome,fantastic part.👏👏👏

Mein or kya kahu mujhe or kuch yaad nehi aa rahi hai.

the way how u describe mayur romance was really very very nice.😃😃

hats of u dear.

tu to or bacchi nehi rahi, tu to bahut bara ho gaya re???

tu itna romantic ho sakti hai maeine kabhi socah hi nehi tha.

tera update padke mein blush kar rahi hoon.😳😳😳

i loved this update very much.

mera dil aj bahut khush hogayi dear.😃😃😃

nupur ne mayank ko aap kehkar bulana, mayank ka dhire dhire aage badna everything was so pure and sweet.

dekh mein or jaida kuch nehi likh sakti. mein phir ek bar ye romantic scene padne ja rahi hoon.

or ha ye kya hai😡- u alwz stopeed it at crucial moment.

thats not fair.

Aab phir se ek lambe intezar update ka.

no way. this time try to update asap.

Mujhe lagta hai meri ye bakbak padke teri band baj gayi.......😆😆😆

so now i m stopped here.

thnax a lot 4 ur lovely update.

keep it up



Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hayeeeeeeeee Mayank... sorry Mahak..😛. kya kiya tune? Kuch pata hai what have you written dear... Mere hosh udd gaye..... and I was like 😳.

Hope the CV's read this part and incorporate it in the serial ... I am dying to see a Mayur lip lock..😳, full of love and passion........ MAHAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK... OMG....OMG....... I just loved the whole update..... ⭐️
The way Nupur blushes and the way Mayank is longing to hear that "yes" from her..... This update was ULTRA ROMANTIC AND MOST PASSIONATE one...☺️... I had a shiver run down to my spine, and my whole body was burning, literally burning..... I could just feel that kiss, I visualized it and Mayur were awesome... And it was the most MAGICAL, HEAVENLY, ULTRA ROMANTIC, PASSIONATE, INTIMATE, LOVING SCENE...I have ever seen or witnessed.😍
Swthrt.. This is for you..
👏
🤗
And I just Loved it to the core...❤️
❤️
❤️
And I am going again to read it..... 😃
Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
It's very romantic but sweet update.u wrote very well dear.Pls conitnue soon and thanks for lovely update and thanks for the pm.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey bhagwaan!!!!!!!!

itne saare reserve????????

ab inhe unreserve bhi kar hi dena.........

bhoolna mat plzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mahak, very nice part............i like this shyness................i wonder what break them apart..................
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

hey bhagwaan!!!!!!!!

itne saare reserve????????

ab inhe unreserve bhi kar hi dena.........

bhoolna mat plzzzz

i promise after friday i will sit down and read all the parts and comment😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
Very nice and romantic update
thanks for such a long part and also for pm
cont soon

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