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shweta.mayurfan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

reallly lovely dear do update

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brahmjot

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: zummi03
loved it..
update soon dear.
and pm me wen u update..

thanks so much dear 4 liking it yaar

ya i'll update soon promise

lov u

dolly😳

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brahmjot

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: gurmeetrocks
reallly lovely dear do update

thanks so much really 4 liking it yaar sure i'll update soon n pm u too

lov

dolly😳

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brahmjot

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: surbhi123
it looks great dear . please continue soon . you are 22222222222 good 😊awesome work👏

thanks sooooo much surbhi 4 liking it dear

pakka promise thati'll update it soon

lods of love

dolly😳

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brahmjot

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: rosette80
Dollly meri jaanuable frend..how do u make it so interesting and so so innovative from other shots?!!?!! Ur just too too good at this👏..it was all ther...hilarious but at the same time not so cheesy ...it was so cute and touchy ...it was just so so engrossive ..please do i request you to continue in full fledge and with intensity! I am sure u will make it really magical and lovable!👍🏼

I will wait like anything...waise this is the first time i am reading such a superb shot on sayank as brothers in such a scene..its cool and very funny too!😉

Ur the best dolly!Keep it up and update soon,pm me too!😊

thanks sooooooooooooooooooo much anjali 4 liking it yaar really i am very very greatful to u..

ok this idea wasn't mine but simi's actually it was her dream that we redefined later .....

i hope u'll lik the shortstory too jaan

thanks so much 4 being sooooooooooooo generous dear

lov u loads loads n loads

with love dolly😳

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Monica

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

hey dolly!!...

u hav to continue !!

wow...it was very funny...ki kya batau!!
i was imagine this...

underwear and socks....lol.lol.lol.lol

and then nupur's sari ..gunjan's sandals....lol.lol.lol

and when the phone rings and they jump 4 respond!!

i cant stop laughing!!
i really gone mad after reading this!!

really enjoy it!!

very hilarious and cute and januable!!!

pls pls pls continue soon!!

love yaaaa

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preksha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

plz do continue nd pm me as soon as u post

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Annesha Dhar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

hey,,,its a nyc..1 short n sweet.. u shud continue it further..

cn i suggest u smthin..? if u don mind.. u cn add suhani as well as their little sister, nw dat v knw suhani is samrats sister> wts say?..it wil b fun..

continue writin.. tc.. !

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

dolly dolly yaar itna must update tha yaar mein or meri friends jab bhi saath hotey hein to ye hamara favourite dialouge hota hein ke hamara kya hoga ...
love it yaar
mast part tha ab is jaldi update ker
yaar itna tand mein teri is update or hot tea ka mazaa he kuch or hein

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

by god.....hw d hell i'm sooooooooooooooo late....n tht too when its related to my sayank??????😲😲😲.......

nywz dolly.......d vry 1st thing i wanna do to u aftr readin tht 1st part......
🤗..............

n to ur fnd simi for givin d awesome perfect idea......🤗

hey dolly....i'm nikhila...a.k.a nikki....😃😃😃.......an utter hardcore obsessed krazzzzy mayurian & aftr tht n ultra hardcoreeeeeeee krazzziest sayank deewani....😳..........

dolly............lovd each n evry letter u wrote in d 1st part.........these vr d scenes i alwz alwz wanted to c....it ws soooooooo soooo hilarious....mayu & sammy infront of cup-boards.....aur ek doosre ki cheeze misplace hoke other ke cup-board mein hona....n tht cell takin....😆.....evrythin....evrythin i lovd it to d coreeeeeeeee...............plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz continue sooon n make it jitna lamba as possible....coz i really wanna read more n more n moreeeeeeee of it.....plzz do try to convert this to a lamba ff na....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz................

nywz plzzzzzzzzzzz do pm me when u post further updates....i've send u frnd req....aceept it..so tht wud make things easy for u to pm me also in d huge pm list for this story.....😳😳😳