ss samy n mayu(the two bro's,chapter 1.pg14)pls c.

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n ya credit 4 the poster goes to my darling pari ... lov u jaan
hey friends i have just posted here the starting of a shortstory that simi thought 4 me ,,, pls tell me if u liked it or not... if yes then i'll continue,,,,, it 'll be a short story having 4 parts,,,,,,
n the idea of thiss ss goes only n only to my jaan simu(simar456)
pls read n comment guys
THE TWO BRO'S

From the past on hour samrat n mayank were standing in front of their cupboards ,, dressed only in vests n knickers ''..they both looked hopelessly towards each other'.

The room had never looked this messier b4' . infect those two half naked boys standing in front of those two cupboards were the only bearable sight of the whole room,,,,,

The room resembled a century old attic '. With books strewn across the floor ,,clothes pilled up on the two single beds ,, basket balls both inflated n deflated lieing on the studytable,,, the walls adorned with posters of Ferrari n Thomas Edison,,, the room looked more like a museum '

No one could have ever imagined that this was a room that two brothers shared ..

The two brothers who were supposed to be colledge stars n yet still their room was more messed up then a zoo'.

Samrat== bhai humara kya hoga?????

Mayank= patanahi samrat .. lekin agar humko jaldi hi koi kapda nahin mila daalne ko to '..

Both of them looked disgustedly in their cupboards trying their best to find something for wearing to their respective first date'.

Mayank= SAMRAT teri underwear meri cupboard mein kya kar rahi hai??????

Samrat== vahi jo aapki socks mere cupboard mein kar rahi hai''.

Saying so samrat flicked the two smelly socks at his elder brother's face n started ruining his cupboard again in order to find something wearable for his first date'.

Samrat=BHAYIYA!!!!!!YEH KYA HAI???

Mayank=huh??? Oh vo vo nupur ki saree hai I will gift that to her today!!

Samrat= yeh meri cupboard mein kyun hai?????

Mayank== pehle tu bata yeh gunjan k sandals meri cupboard mein kya kar rahe hain????

Samrat== vo vo vo mom aa gayi thi to maine aapki cupboard mein''.

Mayank shook his head n started to smack his brother on his head ,, but was stopped in mid action by the cell ring..

Actually two cell rings'

Both of them ran to their beds n started dismantling their respective cloth pile to the floor in order to find their cells'

Mayank n samrat in unison= hello!!! Sorry sorry mein bas pahunch raha hun bas abhi ..

Hello hello'

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pls tell should i continue or not.....

loads of love

dolly😳
CHAPTER 1 (PG14)--THE TWO BROS.........
ps== guys pls press the like button if u just by chanc want me to continue...😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its lovely@@ continue~~[/QUOTE
thanks bhart so much 4 replying
lov
dolly😳😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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dollyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

so short one yaar
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it was an awesome part
oh god plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon dolly
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz it was really FABULAS update
loved sayank convo to the core
awwwwwwwwww how sweetly they were talking
anyways want to read more
so u better continue soon
ok dear N thank u sooooooo much for the pm
plz continue soon as i liked it so much
love
sana 😉 😳 😃
Edited by sana866 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana866

dollyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

so short one yaar
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it was an awesome part
oh god plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon dolly
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz it was really FABULAS update
loved sayank convo to the core
awwwwwwwwww how sweetly they were talking
anyways want to read more
so u better continue soon
ok dear N thank u sooooooo much for the pm
plz continue soon as i liked it so much
love
sana 😉 😳 😃

awwwwww thanku san so much ..... ya now i'll continue sure just let me post last part of the stranger , n thank simi 4 it jaan it was hher idea ,, i can't tell u how much i laughed my head offf on listening tyo it ...
i just hope i am able to do justice to her idea......
loads n loads of love
dolly😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dolly18

awwwwww thanku san so much ..... ya now i'll continue sure just let me post last part of the stranger , n thank simi 4 it jaan it was hher idea ,, i can't tell u how much i laughed my head offf on listening tyo it ...
i just hope i am able to do justice to her idea......
loads n loads of love
dolly😳

awwwwww dolly thanx for replying yaar
but i really loved it
N i know ur friend simi too will love it
because u wrote it realy nice
ok u r continuing the other one os its ok that one too i want to read it as i liked that one too
but still i will say u plzzzzzzzzz try to continue this one too soon
with love!!!!!!!!!
sana!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana866

awwwwww dolly thanx for replying yaar
but i really loved it
N i know ur friend simi too will love it
because u wrote it realy nice
ok u r continuing the other one os its ok that one too i want to read it as i liked that one too
but still i will say u plzzzzzzzzz try to continue this one too soon
with love!!!!!!!!!
sana!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

don't worry i'll update both ss soon ... sim , mallika n pari will strangle me if i didn't u know!!!!!
b/w when r u updating ur story jaan?????
lov
dolly😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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looks gr8888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888
aweeeeesome do conti
plezzzzzzzzz pm & update sooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz & make it longggggggg plezzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

looks gr8888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888

aweeeeesome do conti
plezzzzzzzzz pm & update sooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz & make it longggggggg plezzzzzzz

thanks tehzeeb so much 4 ur reply
ya i'll continue soon n will surely pm u
yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai??????
loads of lov
dolly😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dolly18

don't worry i'll update both ss soon ... sim , mallika n pari will strangle me if i didn't u know!!!!!

b/w when r u updating ur story jaan?????
lov
dolly😳

well dolly i will try to update my ff parts soon
but rigt now im enjoying my holiday hehehe............
ok than i will be waiting for ur updates too
update it soon
hmmm can u tell me excat time when u will be updating ur parts
because im sooooooooo excited to read futher
love
sana 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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should i continue????ye koi sawall hai bhala!!! ofcourse u must....do i need to say this!!! oh god dolly u made me mad laughing...this was just too enjoyable yaar and sammy and mayank two messed up bros preparing for their first dates!!! oh man it was just fantabulous....u just rock dolly!!! and u know what was the best part....sammy and mayank finding each others things in their respective cupboards....that was my most favourite....loved it way toooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!! 😛 😛 😛
n dolly its a new land u have conquered meri jaan...from serious and emotionally tearing scripts to a comedy and masti filled one...its just AWESOME!!!! ab kehne ki zaroorat to nahin hai but just go n write the next part soon.....rather just now.........i am dieing to see these two lovable confused yet so januable bros....rather want to see much more of them...so do come back with a long update..oks!!! and yaar pls post
the last part of "the stranger" as well na...i cant wait to see sammy being concious in that!!! ok bye for now got to study...but u keep writing more of such mindblowing stories!!! theek hai!!!
love u
mallu

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