ss samy n mayu(the two bro's,chapter 1.pg14)pls c.

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Sammy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

nice concept dear
continue soon

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sanjana25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#112

wow

it was really good

loved it

contd soon

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Miracle_sweet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#113

Loved Part One!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love the bond sayank share that is so sweet!!!!!!!!!!

I love how in mayur conve she wouldn't let mayank say anything whereas in sajan convo samrat was being sooo cute an manofying her!!!!!!!!!

Plz update soooon

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mjht_admirer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#114

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haay !!! marjawa tussi pe !! kya sahi likha hai, ekdum rapchik.😆😉😊

vests n knickers mein cute????cute ??? pagal - say HOT !!! 😉 Sayank on phone was soo real. & samrat isdefinitely not a cartoon. aur agar hai bhi to tujhse kam !!😆😆 & its so amazing tht samrat-nupur are best frndz. thanku for keeping thme like tht. Nups aayi hogi samrat se milne aur galati se koi stupid se situation mein mayank se mulakat ho gayi hogi. hai na??? i loved this description - Mr samrat ki miss chashmish'😳

Actually otis the shish was a stuff toy ' samrat's toy from the time he was still a two year old kid''. - how how how cute

main to tujhe beat nahi karungi. infact main daudke tere paas aaungi laafa marungi. yeh bhi chalega na???😆😉

Edited by mjht_admirer - 15 years ago

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Ultrachic

@Ultrachic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#115

hey that was so nice and fun really maan gaye... u write really very nice trust me please yaar jaldi continue karna and don't say that u don't write well because u write marvellous stories i think....do continue soon!!!!

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seema mittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#116

heyyyyy dolly
really amazing update
nd i love ur bakwas
u told many things n left everything for some time else
plzzzzzzzz continue soon
n gthanx for the pm