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Posted: 15 years ago

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Great Update..Plz update next part soon.Add me to pm list..

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part 4

As they all went inside they were surprised to see such a big dance acadamy school.their were beautiful red curtains,sparkling lightening ,tiles flooring and beautiful bunch of flowers strucked at the wall which were making the place dazzling.

nupur-'yeh.....yeh toh bohut sunder hai....its beautiful!'

gunjun-'ha nupur yeh jagha kisi heaven seh kam nahi lagti'

samrat looking at gunjan-'aur ek beautiful girl ne bhi is jagah ko aur beautiful bana diya hai!'

gunjan becomes a little shy after hearing the compliment of samrat

suhaani-'voh kaun hai....joh red sleevless top aur short skirts mein waha khadi hai?'

they saw a beautiful cool girl was standing on the stage with a mike in her hand.

girl-'hey everybody!welcome to the world of dance.....'dance acadamy school' from where aapka career shuru hona wala hai so give a big hand of applause for that whoooo....'

mayank-'par yeh kaun hai?...kahi hamari dance teacher toh nahi!'

samrat to himself-'wow!itni hot girl! hamari dance teacher.... maza aa gaya'

gunjan-'tumne kuch kaha samrat!'

samrat-'main....maine nahi... nahi kuch nahi kuch bhi toh nahi'

girl-'mera naam dia hai and am your new dance teacher and this is benji your dance steps correction teacher!'

benji-'hi!tum logo koh yaha bohut kuch sikhne koh milega aur bohut maza bhi aayage so all the best guys!'

dia-'toh aaj hum log sabse pehle partners select karenge'

gunjan to herself-'yes! ab mujhe is museebat samrat ka partner nahi banna padega jo maine promise kiya tha kyoki partners toh yeh decide karenge'

dia-'yaha in saare tubs mein bohut saare colourful,designer aur different patterns ke crazy balls rakhe hue hai aur iske upar cardboards laga diye gaye hai jise koi cheating na ho sake toh sabko yaha ake ek ball nikalna hoga aur jis boy aur girl ka ball same hoga vohi dance partners ban jayenge'

nupur to herself-'arre vah bohut maza ayega kash mayank aur mera ball same nikal aaye'

samrat to himself-'kash mera aur gunjan ka ball same nikal aaye'

gunjan to herself-'kahi mera aur samrat ka ball same nikal aaya toh!...nahi nahi please bhagwan asa mat karna'

suhaani and mayank were looking at their faces suprisingly as wat happened to all of them.

just then a handsome boy with some kind of intention enters and stands at the door of the place and everyone was looking at him.

to be continued................................

i hope u all liked.comments/critize r required.i shall be waiting for it😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

great update.. luved it.. 👏 👏
continue soon.. n plzz add me in ur PM list... 😊

love
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Edited by sajanroxx20 - 15 years ago

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seema mittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

heyyyy

nice update

i think we all know who are gonna be partners

n i think the guy would be adhiraj

plzzzzzz continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

nice updates!
plz add me to ur pm list

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

wowowow tht was cool really amazingg

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Ultrachic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

thank you guys for such nice compliments but wait for the twist that will be coming in the next part.

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Sana Quraishi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

amazing updates

loved it to the coreeeeeee

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

hey nice parts pls update soon

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Ultrachic

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part 5

the boy was going to enter just then dia stopped that boy.

dia-'u r late!isliye tumhe ander ane ki koi permission nahi hai.tumne yaha keh rules nahi pade kya?tumahra naam kya hai?

boy-'adhiraj.....adhiraj hai mera naam.mujhe ane mein thodi der hogayi.agae seh nahi hoga so please let me come in.'

dia-'okey! tum ander aa sakte ho but from next time be on time.'

adhiraj-'hmm'

dia-'ok guys and gals ab hum partners choosing shuru karte hai'

everyone starts digging their hand inside the tub and start finding for their partner.

nupur-'are gunjan yeh dekh mere ball mein red flowers ka pattern hai tere may kya hai'

gunjan-'mere mein purple stars bane hai! di tumahre mein kya bana hai?

suhaani-'mera yellow colour ka hai'

three of them start finding for their partner and gunjan finds someone waving his hand with a purple stars ball.

gunjan-'excuse me!mera bhi same patern ka ball hai'

the boys turns to her. it was adhiraj

gunjan-'tum....tum toh adhiraj ho hena'

adhiraj-'ha aur tum?

gunjan-'main.....gunjan hoon'

gunjan felt happy as she is not samrat's partner

on the other side samrat finds a girl waving her hand with a red flowers pattern colour ball and his ball's colour was also with red flowers pattern

samrat-'tum toh nupur ho hena gunjan ki best friend right!

nupur-'right!'

samrat and nupur both becomes sad as they don't want to become partners.

mayank-'mere ball ka colour bhi yellow hai'

suhaani-'aur mera bhi'

they both smiled slightly

nupur-'samrat voh mujhe tumahra partner......'

samrat-'mujhe bhi tumahra partner nahi banna tha actually.....'

they both screamed toghther-'mujhe toh mayank/gunjan ka partner banna tha'

nupur-'ab kya kare?'

samrat-'ek idea hai!'

he whispers something to nupur's ear

nupur screamed with joy-'yessss! ab hume time waste nahi karna chahiye'

samrat-'right!'

nupur-'thike tum jaldi seh power circuit ke pass jao thike'

samrat-'okey!'

to be continued...........................................................

i am afraid that this part is quite short but i will surely try to post the next part longer.extremely sorry for not sending u all pm as i am not an active member so can't add u all in my buddy list and pm u all.i hope u all understand.eagerly waiting for your responses.😊

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