~the bride-to-be~ AR/AK/RM/AA pt3 pg11

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Hina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: ammy-ridz
Hey,

Awesome part. AR seem like really pissed with each other'and I see Ridz very hot-headed too'*folding hands jointly * will pray 4 Armi..'God bless the guy.' hahaha u make him sound so in trouble lol
but how can that be when he himself is TROUBLE ,his middle name

Ridz and Angad share similar interest'May be she is the one at his stall right now who seems to be Armaan's object of affection..err..attension, I mean ;D hmm yeh ,and u know how Armaan's gona play thi snow dont u ? 😆

Ooooh!..and Angad 'dreamer at heart...does that imply he is also very romantic or something??...If yes! Good for Krips ;D haha Krips ya Ridz ? err ...

BTW'Muskaan's excitement is for the Show or Someone else..can't figure out :P I mean she sounds so impatient there. yeh thats typically Muskaan ,impatience is a part of her Liked Atul too..he is the same sweet guy as always. yeh but here he will more to offer than the usual sweetness we expect of him

Well apart from all this I still can't figure out the equation between them..But I know it won't be what we think cause u love zara hatke things. hahahaha again Sai ,i can't stop blushing
but i think i mite just do something hatke again to break my hatke image :) u get what i mean
u'll find out soon

cheers hun
the comment made my day :)

Loved the part. Plz continue soon.

Thanx .

Edited by hinanaziri - 15 years ago

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Hina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: AKForever
hey great parts.. continue soon

thanks :)
shall cont soon

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg
glad tat i read thru this fic.....simplyy awsum ff...!!fun filled n exciting....cnt wait 4 the unfolding of charcters...!!
hope u cont soon di

thx a ton 4 de pm

luvya

crazy ashu

cheers Ash ,glad u liked :)

Originally posted by: aarora
hey amazing updates..loved them..continue soon..
thanks for PM..

thanks aarora
will pm u again soon 😊

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Hina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: aish_punk
hey hina..ryt? yep Hina it is ..the concept seems gud.. thanks

Ridz wanted to get in bcuz Rahul was her bro..lol she sure has her ways..n Rahul reluctantly agreed too..

Kripa and Armaan are gettin married?!..wow i did'nt want that.. why not yar dont ,they look good togetha ?

Armaan felt that Ridz was unfair..well she was..but den she got angry..i guess she did'nt like that..n just cudnt stop complaining.. yeh Ridzie can't skip bickering

Kripa was looking for Angad while Armaan found Atul..their bonding scene was gud..:D

Ridz wanted to look at Angad's photos..n Muskaan cudnt wait for the show..so she ran away..lol..

Armaan took Angad's place..and acted as if he was the owner of the photos..but Ridz was so lost in em..tat he cudnt see her face..but recognized the glasses..n lol, he thot she was the bride..but she was just distracted..so she was talkin all nonsense..! lol keep guessing the rest

update soon

-aish

thanks aish ,will cont soon

Originally posted by: kash fan4ever
Hey Hina di,
lovely part!

I can so understand what Ridzi means! hehe ,i think there's a bit of Ridzie in all of us :) What does anyone have to do with how you get in, as long as you do? LOL. But here its Armaan, so maybe thats an exception :P yeh and of course there's always an Armaan for every Ridzie

I am glad I saw that u had updated. I almost missed it. lol didn't i pm u ? sorry must have missed the name somehow

Please update soon. I wanna know what Rahul is to Riddhima, boyfriend or brother. haha

I like AR for now! Seems interesting!

thanks Sakshi
u'll know soon what R is to R a b or B 😉😆
😆

Please update soon!

Cheers,

Sakshi :D

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Sunaina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

heyy hina...!!..

is another update on the way ??? ;)

ps : me liking my new nickname :) thanks to both u n nij :)

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Hina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007
heyy hina...!!..

is another update on the way ??? ;)

ps : me liking my new nickname :) thanks to both u n nij :)

hey Suni
yayyy u like your new nick :D

and yeh the updt i'm trying my best to post very soon,
have written most of it ,just need to add some more so its enuf to last u guys another couple of days
coz i'll be busy with Eid till Sat ...

Edited by hinanaziri - 15 years ago

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Hina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: spln
dear hin-iy-a (this is extended-special love)

this is to remind you, that 'parents' of 'good' kids (all kinds of pun intended) MUST behave well... if insanity is inherited from them, u might as well try grab some of the goodie genes BACK!

base line: comments ko reply ni karne ka hota? :-|

over and out ~ alpha-gamma-beta
~ and me! :D

lo ji ho gaye sare reply sheply , just coz u wanted me to
and the reminder lol ,pass some of them genes on to the bacha if u can
she needs em more u :)( i know u'll agree )

posting part 3 in a few hours guys
thanks for the patience

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Pebblez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

hinzzziiyyaa :D hahaha, mera demented version hai..

ab dadda ki itni baat manni hai to meri bhi mano na :P apne achay se grandkid se kuch seekho aur update kero! :D *you better know what might happen if not :P*

muaaaah!

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Reine

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

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Reine

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: hinanaziri
Originally posted by kash fan4ever

Hey Hina di,
lovely part!

I can so understand what Ridzi means! hehe ,i think there's a bit of Ridzie in all of us :) Lol. true! What does anyone have to do with how you get in, as long as you do? LOL. But here its Armaan, so maybe thats an exception :P yeh and of course there's always an Armaan for every Ridzie haha there is!

I am glad I saw that u had updated. I almost missed it. lol didn't i pm u ? sorry must have missed the name somehow Oh! its okay! I understand :D I did find it anyways! lol

Please update soon. I wanna know what Rahul is to Riddhima, boyfriend or brother. haha

I like AR for now! Seems interesting!

thanks Sakshi
u'll know soon what R is to R a b or B 😉😆Lmao! I wanna know the relation between R and R asap! :P
😆

Please update soon!

Cheers,

Sakshi :D

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Hina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#70

part 3:

" .... and u are the bride- to- be? " he asked enthusiastically ,hoping for an equally exciting reply but to his despair a low toned " hmm " is all she could manage...and that irked him ...
He wondered what was so special about the pictures that she seemed so engrossed ...he closely observed another set of pictures displayed on the wall to understand her interest but with his zero understanding of photography he couldn't see anything extraordianry...
He didnt care anymore and slyly he placed another album next to the one she was studying just to keep her going till Angad returned ...

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Atul quickly ran backstage for a last minute check on everything before the show commenced...this being the first and a huge opportunity to prove himself ,he didnt want to leave room for any mishaps ...also keeping in mind that his employers were the lead sponsors of the catwalk ,he felt the need to encourage and cheer the models ,upon whom depended the success of the show... So as a slighty selfish but humble gesture he stood by the doors of the dressing rooms and cheerfully smiled as the models started to line up for the ramp ....
Next the presenter began to greet the crowd ...Since Atul was the head representative of his company , he was asked to brief the audiences on the various products they offered ...though he was little edgy about going up on stage to face a huge crowd , he relied on his strong determination to see him through...

Rehearsing the short speech in his head ,he anxiously waited to hear his name being called ... and just then , she passed him by...

~~~~~

Angad held onto Kripa's arm and dragged her through to the front to find the best angle to click his shots ...try as she might , Kripa couldn't be less annoyed with Armaan , he had promised to be with her to help choose the wedding outfit but as always had ditched her at the last moment ...
She wondered and wished that he would make it to the wedding atleast ... Angad knew both him and her very well but could never work them out together ... he ,like always, played the peacemaker between the two ... and today as he tried to steer her attention to the soon to begin catwalk someone a pushed her from the side...
" Excuse me ! do u mind ... " yelled Kripa at the girl who was now standing next to her...
" I'm sorry ,but someone pushed me from behind " she pled ,Kripa recollected her face from earlier on ,she was the girl with the girl who had cheated her way in ... Muskaan had recognised her as well
" Hi ! " she said not knowing what else to say ...
" Hey ! " replied Kripa wondering why she did ....

~~~~~

She was an absolute beauty ,one he had never seen before ... while he stood agape "Anjali " called someone from the group and she replied ... 'Anjali ! ...even her name had an angelic sound to it ...and she looked nothing less than one ... ' he thought and adored her while she cutely chattered with her mates ...he simply couldn't take his eyes off her....

" we'd now like to welcome on stage Mr Atul Joshi ,marketing director of Asiana , proud sponsors of the catwalk ..." said the host inviting him on stage but there was no response... he was too busy gaping at the ravishing face that seemed to have made him forget all ....so much so that he didnt hear his name echo ... "Mr Joshi ? " repeated the anchor ... a sudden racket broke out amongst the people backstage ...everyone got looking for Mr Joshi
"who's Atul Joshi? where is he? " was the buzz ...
"Mr.Joshi will be joining us shortly , so lets talk of the ambiance here today " the presenter luckily possesed good skills to cover up for his absence... Atul stood rooted to his spot , staring at her , oblivious to the commotion around him .... Anjali noticed his strangeness and when she walked close to him ,she spotted his name badge hung around his neck ...
" Mr Joshi? " she asked audibly loud to bring him out of his trance
" huh?"
" I think u're needed on stage "
" am I ? " flustered he gulped and said
"thanks.....Anjali! "
wiping the beads of sweat off his face, he rushed up the stage and apologised for the unforeseen delay...
"how did he know my name?" she wondered

~~~~~

The show had finally begun... to start with , it was the junior models to display the latest trends in wedding outfits mostly for the close family ,the bride and groom outfits were yet to be showcased ... Muskaan whinged and fret over Riddhima's slackness ,also the fact that she missed the front row seats bothered her lots ,all thanks to Riddhima ,she now had to fight for a spot to stand and watch the show ... also, next to a ' potentially trouble' female ....
Rahul was soon going to walk up and she sadly wondered if he could spot her amongst the mad mob ... this was definitely not how she had planned it...and it was now too late to moan...

~~~~~

"arent u gonna watch the catwalk? " asked Armaan again finding it hard to be patient ...
"yeh ..." she whispered as expected

He frowned at her weirdness and tried to ignore her presence for the while ....So he climbed up the chair and watched the show from far and meanwhile planned a believable story to tell Kripa ...

While flipping through pages of the last lot of pictures and humming along the music in the background ,she suddenly realised her purpose of being there.... "Muskaan !!!! " she shrieked and heard the crowd applauding the show " sh** , i'm so dead ! " she cried and raced it to the stage in a fraction of a moment ......

"huh ?" Armaan only managed to see her disappear into the dense crowd...
" strange or what ... " he thought and knew Angad would never believe him if he said she disappeared unexpectedly ... now he had another story to make adding to his already busy agenda ...

~~~~~~

Atul after his speech got back to the floor and joined the audience, finding an apt spot next to a photographer ...still caught in a partial reverie,he impatiently awaited her arrival on stage ...

"Wow! stunning...." said Angad gawking at the figure in the front of his lens ... and it bothered Atul ...neither could Kripa bear to see his dropped jaw
" owww he's HOT !!! " she exclaimed in retort
" and TAKEN " taunted Muskaan giving her a dirty glare...

~~~~~~

part 3 , finally here, i agree its short and inconclusive but yeh...
thanks each and every one of u for the lovely comments
I'm so glad to have included AngadKripa in here,they've given me a whole new set of readers :) also this part is quite a lot of AA,hope u can see them in this new lovestruck role...
I know things are still not clear but u know how it goes with me :) so expect the unexpected :D
and lastly wishing u all a happy and blessed EID !!!
will post the nxt part over the weekend,after posting GND hopefully

enjoy !

muah NN 315 ! hope tu thik nj
muah muah bp,me's still playing that game :)
kratz tu to kidar hai kya pata ,aja na soon...

p.s: i absolutely love to see the huge number of 'likes' after each update ,so u know what i mean yeh?
keep clicking my fave tab 😆😉

Edited by hinanaziri - 15 years ago

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