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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 7

KAPOORS

kkusum-kali kumud ka pata chala
kali-mujhe nahin pata
kkusum-tumne uski doston ko phone kiya
kali-ji maa lekin unko bhi nahin pata
kkusum-kahan hogi meri beti

then there servent maharaj comes downstairs yelling

maharaj-yeh chiti mujhe kumud ke kamare main mili
kkusum-kya?!!!!!

then kkusum reads it aloud

kumud-maa main ghar chodd kar jarahin hoon
lekin aap phikar mat kijiye main ek troop ke saath hoon
aap jitni der mujhe shaadi ke liye force karengi tab tak main aap se door rahoon gi maa mujhe maaf kijiye

apki beti
kumud

after reading that kkusum starts crying

on the other hand the same thing is happening in the oberoi family.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
wow continue soon..dis is kinda like dulhaan hum lejayge.. the plane part..hehe
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
ghar chod diya???? let's see how far they go!!!😉 good keep riting👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
👏 Excellento!!!! Perfecto!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
PART 8

AFter the 12 hour flight they landed on the airport
and from the airport they went to the hotel
everybody had a room to thenselves

kumud-may i have the keys to my bedroom
sec-yes ma'am ur room number is 9

then kumud goes to her room and then
after kshitij is asking wat room nuber hes in

sec-u r in room number 6 sir


after that kshitij goes in the same room as kumud becuz the 6 turned into a 9
kshitij goes in and gets into bed afetr he landed on sumthing when he looked it was kumud

kumud screamed and the tour giude came to see wat was wrong and then kshitij tells the whole story he also said sorry to kumud and went to his room feeling so guilty

hope u guys like it i will con. soon


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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
lol lol lol lol cant stop lauging
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
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wonderful work!
please continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
😆 did u get the idea from the movie dil???.....well it was funny....wonder how it would look if it was pictureized 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oooooohhhhhhhhhh plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont. soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
plz continue...waiting eagerly for ur ff

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