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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
gUD NOW MUCH BETTER
Thank you for writing in English i can now read and now what happening
Again Thank You i will keep reading Contiune soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 11

MALAYSIA

kshitj is running after her and stops her by holding her hand
their eyes meet and then kshitj notices that he is holding kumud's hand so he quickly takes his hand away

kshitj-kumud pls its too dark and theres no more hotels pls come back

kumud-i dont need ur sympathy
let go of me now
and dont follow me

kshitj goes. kumud is lying on a bench and she is cuddling up so kshitj picks her up and takes her to the room

MOrning

kumud wakes up and finds herself in the same room she left
kumud sees kshitj bring her some tea and she gets so frustrated

kumud-how did i come here
kshitj-how do you think
kumud-hoe dare u touch me

she said lots of bad things to him and he gets angry and leaves
then kumud relises that it was her fault and that she is starting to like him so she goes after him to say sorry

she finds him at a restaraunt sitting
kshitj also sees her so to meke her jealouse he starts hanging out with girls when kumud sees that she starts hanging out with boyz too then kshitj finaly gets up and leaves and kumud was following him when the boyz who she was flirting with batamisi kar ne lage


but our hero kshitj shows up and starts to fight with them
then afetr giving everybody a punch he went and finnaly kumud stopped him and told him how she felt about him and that she is really sorry and so did kshitj

hope u all like it plz reply and if u have any ideas pls tell me or if u find a mistake tell me i will try to fix it and sorry about the delay 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
hey pooja u r going gr8 way👏 ...so don't worry just keep it up 👏...we r with u....😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 12

INDIA

Ddddiiiinnnngggggg Ddddooonnnggg

kusum went to see who was it when she opened the door she saw.......KUMUD
she was so excited and kumud came in and gave her a hug by then abhay and kali came down as well and she gave them a hug too then they started talking about malaysia what she did there and stuff

the same thing was going on at the oberoi house everybody were too shocked to see kshitij
and they opened his bags for the gifts he brought from malaysia for them

after wen kshitij goes to his room he tires to call kumud but kali picks it up instead
so he hangs up on her

later kumud tried calling him but preeti picks up so she hangs up on her they couldn't talk so that night they wre thinking about each other and fell asleep

i no this is kinda short but i have to go to my uncles house he isn't feeling too good and i wont be bak for 3 days so u guys will have to have some paitence as soon as i come bak ill update it
hope u guys cud understand

bye
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok..don't worry.. I m sure evrything gonna well... ur uncle will be fine soon...u make it dht's imp....👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
that was awsome!!!plz cont soon!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
brilliant. plzzz. cont. sooon

i hope your uncle gets better
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww...i hope ur uncle feels better...jus caought up it is awsone
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hope ur uncle gets better!!! hey u need someone to updat!! i am ur man!!!! (well woman)!!! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyy guli thanx for volunteering but my uncle is ok now and i really appreciated ur patience

Part 13

Morning

preeti-BHAIYYA!!!!!!!
kshitj-wat is it y r u screaming
preeti-bhaiyya i am getting late so can u pls pls drop me off while u go to ur office
kshitj-fine get ready then FAST in 1 min
preeti-1 min??
kshitij-if i say 1 min u will come in 5 min thats y

preeti angrily goes to get ready

COLLAge

kali is waiting for preeti and sees that her brother kshitij came to drop her off

preeti-HI KALI !!!!!
kali-Hi preeti

they meet and then kali asks

kali-was that ur bro
preeti-ya
kali-is he married
preeti-no

and kali starts thinking

preeti-y r u asking this
kali-cuz i have a GREAt girl for ur bro
preeti-REALLY WHO!!!!
kali-MY SIS!!!!!
preeti-o ya i think i shud talk to mom and dad for this
kali-i think u shud too.

thats all i cud rite for now cuz i need to think up wats going to happen cuz i am filled with ideas
pls post ur questions or comments and if u want me to stop just say it

bye and thnx again

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