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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

i am literally in tears now...poor mayur...how will they bare it??????

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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

Hey Kainath,

No no noooooooooooooo this can't be happening man, well i did suspect that something is going to go wrong and this incident will certainly make a negative impact on MN's report but i had not even in my wildest dreams thought that this will happen man!

If i would have been their lawyer i would tried to do something to help MN. There are some serious matters which can be raised here, firstly the inspection was to be for six months and not four until and unless there was an express term which provided for the inspection to be shorten, it cannot be done as it would lead towards exercise of arbitrary powers by the pertinent ministry and this is contrary to the basic constitutional principle of rule of law and certainty.

hehe too much law i guess man, appeal rights against the order can be made earlier here, oh noooooooooooo poor mayank and nups, in a more terrible condition is neevvvvvvvvvvvv.

I loveeeeeeeeeeee the way you write and it looks soooooooo real man but i couldn't even read after the parts when M and N are separately fighting against this tragedy. Hope to see them together, providing each other strenght.

I couldn't read ahead as i am sobbing so bad myselfffffffffff man.

very very welldoneeeeeeeeee man, awesomeeeeeeeeee but poor neev and poor MN.

I loveeeeeeee sonali, eh she is some woman and i loveeeeeeeee her jokes soooooo much, mum and ajay rocked as usual.

gang supporting nups was sooooooo sweet.

Excellent workkkkkkkkk man,toooooo good. Please do continue soon.

God bless.

Edited by Senny - 15 years ago

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

u've gotta love the custody system, don't u??
neev has such a great mother now, thanks to them!
i feel so bad for neev! n mayank n nupur
i hate that annie!
seperating neev from mayank n nupur, all this just so she can have her diamonds!
ugh! i cud kill her!
hope neev is bak w/ mayank n nupur soon
they deserve him, they love him unlike annie
anyways continue soon

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#74

amazing.. loved it.. thanks for the PM n do continue sooon..

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naina

@naina0123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

ok kainath..get ready for a looooong,silly n not to forget sappy comment...

i had read the update yesterday itself in the rickshaw..on my way back home after a 7hr class..so u can imagine how happy i was too see that u had updated...i nearly squealed with delight..the rick driver made a confused face..but i was too busy to care...

was nervous as hell when i started reading it...could actually feel mayurs tension n worries...the scenes were jus mindblowing...the way uve described lil neev on the large hospital bed,nupurs thoughts,mayanks thoughts n his decision to confront nupur n make evrything back to normal n where it should be..evrything was just perfect..

i loved sonali...especially when she snapped vikram...n made it clear how much nupur n the rest of the sharmas mean to her...shes one hell of a woman!

n then mayank n nupur blaming themselves for neev's condition..twas very very sweet n very husband-wife like..

ajay's interuption was awesome...he is very impatient n short tempered hai na?n then shilpa's veiw on parenting n how he was so bored of it...luved it!good that he did not blow the lid of his temper...

n then my fav. sonali's "sprinkler" comment..it completely cracked me up..n i was laughing my head off...by now the rick driver had decided that i had completely lost it..lol..his expressions were worth a watch..

n then when sonali asked for drinks n ajay asked for some whiskey n cognac..he he...cudnt stop laughing again...sarcasm runs in the sharma family aint it?

i calmed myself n then comes another ajay's comment..goo goo eyes before i vomit!!rofl rofl..it was the best!u wont believe it but the rick driver actually asked me if i was ok n y was i laughing..!!!!thnkfully i reached my building by then..i paid him...n ran to read the rest..

kainath..normally i read your udates at least thrice..but this thime i could not bring myselfto read it..i hate the ministry..the dmp..n evryone associated with it...n most of all i hate annie!i dont think ive evr hated a fictional charachter so much..seriously i absolutely loathe her!

mayus pain n neevs convo bought tears to my eyes...it was so so painful kainath..i was sobbing like a baby while i was readin it..i dont think ill b able to comment on each part..its just too hard..

how could they??i mean..neev belongs to mayur...uggh jus the thought of neev living with annie n that too for a year is creeping me out...

pls kainath dont do this..pls bring neev back to mayur..

ok..not gonna waste any more of your time..jus wanted to say that u r fantastic hands down..this is by far one of the best peices ive ever read...thanks a ton!!

continue soon dear..n pls make evrything fine..

hugs

-naina

Edited by naina_mayur - 15 years ago

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amazingneira

@amazingneira

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#76

oh god.. how can such a decision be taken..

This is so bad..

please get neev back to mayur...

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Bronze.

@Bronze.

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#77

thanks for the update and pm kainath..

loved it... particularly the father -son part... i loved how you explained mayanks feelings on seeing neev in the bed..

Loved sonali's reaction too.. she is such a sweetheart...

i hope mn find a way to get back neev... dont tell me it will take an year... poor neev, how will he survive with that horrible woman...

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

hey
im sorry for late comments
i was busy with exams
Oh so nice nupur decides to tell mayank about her love
but neev meets with an accident
I was seriously relieved to kno that mayank wasnt blaming nupur for it😃
and they fought because they were blaming each other😆
AND THE DMP TAKES NEEV AWAY😭😭😭
for one year.............poor mayank
but im sooo glad inspite of all this they still love each other n acknowledge it😳
im waiting for the next update............plz update soon

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hasiii

@hasiii

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Posted: 15 years ago

#79

Dear you portrayed everything so nicely that I felt the pain. I was nearly crying when that stupid DMP told Mayur that they have to wait 2 years for the joint custody. I was afraid of seeing this coming after the accident. Please don't make them suffer. Make some reason so that the ministry of whatever gets to see true color of Annie and Neev gets back to Mayur, Please please do that for us. I am in same pain as Mayur and Neev are.

Thanks for the pm.