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Posted: 15 years ago
i had seriously thought that the last update was the end... but i guess it wasnt lol cool ending! theyre old and still fighting.... well not old, older
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Kainath,

Good to see you back. Cute epilogue! Harsh was the best in this part 😆. I thought Neev-Mayank convo will continue and Neev may find something more in those boxes. But..anyways..some things are better left unsaid.

This is the best MN FF I have read and each chapter is a gem. Hope to read more of your work. Thanks a lot for PM.

-Noe
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Posted: 15 years ago

gr888 end dear

& plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz rite a ff on mayur plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thanxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
i am so sad u ended it this was the first FF i have ever read and u ended it so beautifully congrats on tht hope ur planning on wirtting more anytime soon this is thee best FF i have ever read in my life keep ROcking love ya
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Posted: 15 years ago
kainath i dunno what to say.i m running short of words.my most favourite FF has come to an end today.....but i m having a content as well complete feeling by the way u ended the story.....but at the same time having a sharp pain in heart.as it was literally my most favourite one....atleast i m happy that my most favourite writer has strated another one...and we wil get to read her another peace of unique creations...but this FF would always remain in my heart as its best creation i have ever read.truely adore u yaar.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi, kainath!!
I am akansha..
it feels really sad that this ff ended, but all good things come to an end. Though, i know i'll never forget this ff.
Talking about the epilogue.. it was as amazing as ever.. and i too like mayank pray for them to be together always...
Glad that you started a new ff...
Loved reading LTIE and i know i would love Melancholic September too...
Take care..
Akansha
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey kainath
im so sad that u have ended this ff
awesomme!!!
i truly loved it
a wonderful part
and a superb ending, so they have 4 children at the end
i wish u could have extended it a bit but never mind its still great
anyway just loved it
continue to write really good and well ff's
TJ
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wonderful ending!
I spent the whole day just reading this marvellous FF of yours!!
It's the BEST I've read so far!

--Nidheya
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey kainath 🤗
though i am sad that my fav ff ended,
but i couldnt have imagined a more beautiful ending
than this one.....u rockkkk!!! 👏
you are one of the most expressive and creative
writers of IF......
hats of to you!!!!
this ff was truly the BEST,
keep writing more!!!

Edited by shivangi278 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy Kainath. :)
Loved the FF, through and through.. :)
Just one question though...
Neev never liked Annie, but in the epilogue, he asked about her, and Mayank says don't be upset, Neev,
"Neev," Mayank sighed, "don't be upset."
Neev looked up and shook his head, forcing a smile onto his face. "I'm not upset, Dad, honestly. I'm just curious. It's not like I've had a void in my life where a mother should have been. I promise."


Why does Neev have to force a smile on his face? Are the next lines that were coming out of his mouth not true? About there not being a void and alll?
I am just curious.. :/ 'Cause I don't want Neev to not be close to Nupur and all. :/
Otherwise, the FF was fabtastic. :)
Cheers,

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