It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10

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bheegi

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Thanks..

@sri_4: I think u read the part before I sent my Pms out this time. Good luck with ur studies...and comment when u get time TC

@aishar...thanks

@aisha....sorry about the shorter length but will try to make up next time

@sheena...thanks for liking it. I promise to give u AN scene at the prom

@caprigurl....lolz...love ur sense of humor and loved ur multiple reasons...cute

@chahat...he he good guess

@naureen_aly...It was fun writing the part on a no work no school day

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bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: SunainaTM007
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Heyyyyyyyyyyyyy Bheegi !!!!!!!! 😃 😃

that was a super cute adolescent romance !! loved reading it soooooooo soooo much !!!.... awesomely penned hun !!...but it was a bit shorter than ur usual parts...was shocked to see it end sooo sooon 😉..

oh sorry...normally i write a part over 2-3 days but i wrote this in one day...couldn't type any more as my shoulders start hurting. will make up in nextt part😊

the chess game was soooo cute... their convo was damn sweet... their supposed ice-cream 'date' the following day : it was sooooooooooooo beautiful !!... riddhima calling up her mom and informing her abt her whereabts and armaan teasing her for that :) :) and then armaan's boisterous behaviour as opposed to riddhima's poised, elegant behaviour... their contrast was sooooo well-penned... armaan's sayings abt ice-cream abt ice-creams are sooo true... i love ice-creams but always eat them in a riddhima-ish way !! :) :) i absolutely loved the moments there ;) awesome penning here bheegs !! :D

aww...thanks sunaina...yeah that part was reflective of how different they are

then, armaan being restless to see her again...awww :) and rushing to give her the album... padma being understanding and her mysterious smile...awww !!... and then armaan getting shocked to see riddhima's room : totally like her... afterall, your room is the place that reflects your inner-self really well !! his shock was penned soooo beautifully !! :D :D and armaan's multiple choice questions... awww, he's just soooooooo cute... love his antics !! :) :)

of cours eremember armaan exaggerates a lot of things😆

aaah, winter..!! its the best part of the year for me :) the snowman building... AR-muski moments !!... then armaan and muski caring for riddhima and the electric shock moment between AR...awww 😳😳.... armaan's behaviour thereafter was soooo sweet !!... looks like some feelings are sure beginning to form in his heart :) :) and AR's meet the next day : his definiton for the electric shock and riddhima's reaction to it... hmmm, mysterious smile again !😉

the song was such a fab choice !!.. loved it there !! and the last line was soooooooooo beautiful !! :) :D

the update was fabulous and beautiful !!

thanks for the pm !!!

thanks sunaina...so u live in a cold place too? Did u get much snow this year?

continue soooooooooooooooooooon :D :D

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Posted: 15 years ago

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umm....ummm...🤓
not pestering... :D
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bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Thanks...

@Vini....yeah,they are both innocent at heart at this point

@kweekrockstar....glad u liked the science lessons :)

@nanthini9...thanls

@Dipu....yes,something did happen for sure

@shveta...awww...ur sweet:)

@Kshanikaa....he he...sorry for bring back those science class memories. Yeha, i am sure most readers can relate to the school going AR here. Well, I really hope u all like this one as much as DYM...this one will not be as intense though. Love all ur comments...simple or complex :)

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bheegi

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@Tahmina....aww, I am glad u liked this childhood style romance. Happy belated Valentine day to u too...thanks for the PM

@karanshraddha4....welcome aboard. Great to see comments from a silent reader. UR wonderful comments are motivating me to write more right now :)

@ssh57...OMG, that's a tall order. UR very sweet to bestow me with all those compliments. Yes, I still love the Beatles. In fact, to my surprise, a lot of young kids also like them even now. My son and his friends do :)

@shivani8906...remember Ridz has genes from both parents :)

@lil_desi_goddess...thanks dear

@Pebblez.....Thanks Kiran. As I am writing this one with AR in mind, hopefully u will see more AR in this than u did in pehchan:)

@shahidkarmaan...sure will do :)

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bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Thanks..

@ Namita...thanks for liking those little parts :)

@bloodline...thanks dear but here it snows like once a year lolz

@shilpa...yeah both are very different but stillmanaging to 'influence' each other in one way or another :)

@funkybratz....sure wil do

@Nidha....thanks for the musical valentine greetings :)

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Sunaina

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Posted: 15 years ago

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@bheegi : awww... bheegs no worries, dont stress urself :) the length of the part really doesnt matter more than ur health :) :) and well, i used to live in a cold place, but now, i live in a sunny place...its a coastal city actually :) i miss the cold :( :(

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bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: AnkitaDMG
Hey Bheegi di 😃
Loved the part !!

As I said in this FF I like each part better than the previous..!!

The icecream part was so adorable I relate to the way Mr Devil has his ice cream I eat it making a mess too.!!

I hope he keeps up to his promise of making Riddhima have it that way too..

I liked all the scenes from playing in the snow to the rubbing her hands the electric shock part and the last one when he goes to her house

I can see that even if Rids hides she loves him and for Armaan I have no doubts at all

Thanks so much for the pm and sorry for the late comment!!

thanks ankita...don't worry about late comment dear. I know today it's all depressing on DMG forum😕
Hopefully, we all can keep our ffs more sane and cheerful than the DMG show😆

[quote=missypatel]Bheegs!!

*eeeeee* thats me trying to give armaan-tight-lips smile :P ...luved the part..it was so enjoyable and long i say...or so it seemed cause of the smooth flow...

you know its incredible how reading the part it feels like they are all grown up AR...like we know them but then they aren't actually with little innocence you bring in them with your writing...! i likey so much!

thanks for the part..and hope you had a fun valentine! :)

cheers,

nijaL [/quote]

Thanks Nijal! Yeah, trying toimagine them as the mini versions of grown up original AR😃 Yeah, had a great Valentine...how about U?😊 Thanks again for liking the part

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bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: prernawaghray
hey di
a very big sorry from this irregular reader of urs
but i am a bit busy coz of college di... this semester is quite packed n have internals exams coming up so dont mind if i comment late n if its short
n thanks di for pm'in me
but overall im just loving the journey of armaan n riddhima's love
its beautiful
armaan's naughtiness n sacrifices n riddhima's cold yet concerned behaviour
just loving it di
keep updating :)

thanks Prerna...no sorries dear. We are all busy outside of IF. Thanks for liking this journey so far😊
Nicely summarized there👏

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Hi Di,

Firstly, belated happy Valentines Day! How is the snow treating, I hate it when it turns all icy and you can barely take a step without tripping!

This was a brilliant part and the multiple choices were the icing on the cake! How do you come up with all these ideas you truly are a genius, hats off to you! In this part I almost felt that AR were actually dating, it took me back to the Armaan Riddhima in to Err is human, AR in this ff seem like the younger version those in 'To Err', the dare devil Armaan and the timid Riddhima!

The snow scene made me crack up, I felt as if you were tiring to compensate all the AR fans for the Sid-Ridz Hypothermia scene in DMG lol.

And really sorry for the late comment, internet connection is dead at home, have to wait for a whole week to get new rooter arggggggg, I feel disable without the net.😭

Tc[/quote]

Thanks nahida! Yeah, hate it when snows stays for days and the ice which refuses to melt😕

yeah, that hypothermia scene was 'inspired' but in a less vulgar way than they showed it on the show I know we are all so dependent on internet these days...we are slaves to it😆 Thanks again for ur wonderful comments here and on my posts on DMG forum😊

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bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: maanu
hi............
super duper part..............
multiple choice........... was the bestest............
i so like armaans character...................
icecream was so tasty............. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
do continue soon.......
thanks for the pm
bye

thanks maanu...i am glad u liked the MCQs and ice cream date😊

@Aria...will start writing next part this evening😊

Edited by bheegi - 15 years ago