It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10 - Page 51

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon and pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee pm me when you do!

Originally posted by: olive_green

:D Reserved

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This was a cute 'kiddie romantic' part 😳, loved the multiple choice test that he's getting into...Riddhima is really making him think hard poor thing, still doesn't get it. And then the best part was the justification of the electric shock! I was like, you can't be serious but yea this reaction is so real too. I guess good things come out of things like snow fall, both for AR and us :D the only complaint I have is this part felt shorter than your usual part (now I know readers feel when they write this😆) because you leave us wanting more.

Great work!

Edit again: It just occurred to me, that you seem to be inspired by the sadma 'body' heat track😆

thanks Aria. Actually that snow scene was a cleane, less vulgar interpretation of that SADMA scene😆 + i wrote that scene when my kids were playing in snow that day. My son came in all wet and cold just like Ridz...😆 So yeah it was an 'inspired' scene😃 Sorry, if the part felt short. Normally i write a part over 2-3 days and that's why am able to write a longer part but if it's a day's effort, my shoulders start hurting if i type that much

[quote=hannahdmg]Aww Bheegi Loved it!!!!!!

My fave part was multiple choice when the fourth option came 'physics or chemistry'

and the simile of ice-cream to a harem of girls- that was a good one!!

Can't wait to see how this shapes up

Loads of Love
Hannahxx[/quote]

thanks hannah! Yeah, trust armaan to bring MCQs here😆...i am glad u liked it

Originally posted by: bheegi

thanks Aria. Actually that snow scene was a cleane, less vulgar interpretation of that SADMA scene😆 + i wrote that scene when my kids were playing in snow that day. My son came in all wet and cold just like Ridz...😆 So yeah it was an 'inspired' scene😃 Sorry, if the part felt short. Normally i write a part over 2-3 days and that's why am able to write a longer part but if it's a day's effort, my shoulders start hurting if i type that much

Plz don't say sorry, I'm still thankful for whenever- however much you update :)

Hey di!
Wow ! Wat a surprise...i love snowy day becoz it gave us update like dis brilliant part..
Now abt d part...
Wat should i say abt it..hmmm
First of all : 1) multiple choice questions were great yaar,i really loved it...brilliant answer ,only u can do dis magic of showing emotions in mcq..
2) ice cream date; finally a date! But awesome one ..i can imagine ridzi's reaction by seeing grumphy armaan.oh god i just love him nd i m sure he will make her fall in luv
3.static energy was brilliant:-)

Luv u
Tc

Originally posted by: janu1610

Bheegi ji plz convey my big thanks to snow....😉I checked that date twice.I was like de ko kya hua?itni jaldi.wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!that's great.⭐️
next moment i almost jumped to reserve this ,I know its kiddish behavior but never mind i love this bachpana of mine 😆
now coming to part,i love Armaan [well i always do],but all this is coming from Armaan POV nd u done it very skillfully.👏his every move is adorable,his ice cream treat was great nd even he tasted her through her left over ice cream ...that was too cool.👏
his MCQ were too gud.even i stuck on some answers.😆😃this is unique concept.👏
she missed him in her album.great👍🏼even my heart flatter when i read this.😛
1000 volts de phir b jinda hai Armaan......😍😍😍love u deeeeeeee...................❤️
nd what a method to escape from Alzheimer...........👏

My Angel

At Night When I Am Alone,

I Think Aimlessly About You.

You Give Me Love When No One Else Can,

And Find A Place In Your Heart To Help Me Again.

You Hold Me Tightly When I Am Scared,

And Give Me Advice When No One Else Cared.

You Give Me A Shoulder When I Am Sad,

And Never Get Upset When I Am Mad.

You Smile With Me In Times Of Joy,

And Protect Me From The Cruel World Outside.

You Are The Angel That Looks After Me.

My Protector

My Angel

thanks for pm.
love
ritu

😆

Thanks Ritu....all i'll say is "dil tho bachcha hai jee' ...we all have a kid inside us...armaan def has one😊 Armaan is armaan...his POV is of course written in an exaggerated fashion but that's how he his😊

[quote=bary]ove snow days if they give early updates from u
sweet n funny ice cream date,well i hate mixed ones too...lol,may be now i got to know i dont know how to eat ice cream
lovely convo when armaan comes to riddhima's house
snow ball game turned out to be romantic at the age of 16,also electric shock thing still making me laugh,how could armaan say so much in one go
as always waiting for next part
swetha[/quote]

Thanks swetha! yeah, snow days are fun but they come only 1-2 /year here😕 Thanks for liking this part where both AR were kids rather than too grown up😊

Thanks...

@ Princess....well, Ridz's POV is sprinkled all over....u just have to spot it

@ Nruti...yeah, at least it's I hate ur antics rather than I hate u :)

@ desire_20....hope u get a snow day soon...where do u live? I am sure u know the answers to the MCQs...that was just a way of writing them to show armaan's confusion

@prasanthi....yeah, kuch kuch hua for sure. I was lucky that the snow day inspired me to write this part

@blessing_beauty...tables are turned this time. Armaan is the confused one now

@DMGfan...good guess about Ridz. Yes, armaan is in some ways dumb here and confused too lolz

for the 1st time in my life, i loved that snowy day... which gave us such a fantastic update!
cant wait for another snowy day so we can get another mindblowing early update! :P
plz update really really really soon! =)

hey great part please add me to ur pm list please. 😕

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