It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10 - Page 27

Originally posted by: loveoflifeksg

Awesome mindblowing amazing good enchanting super superb great and all the nice words in the world the update waz awesome plz update soon thx for pm


Love Aisha

thanks Aisha!😊😊

[quote=sanjana]loved it
hated abhi
felt very sad for armaan
contd soon
thanx for the pm[/quote]

thanks sanjana.Poor armaan,has to go through a lot before he can get Ridz....yahi uski kismat hai sab jagah😭

[quote=prasanthi]

Hi Bheegi!

That was a very sweet enjoyable part. AR..haww.. they are such cute kids. I loved the way Armaan kept reminding himself about how to be and not be with his kids in the future..lol. Riddhima is such a softie, liked her so much when she got ready to help me. And now he is punished, haww.. how and what will he do now? Thanks for the pm![/quote]

thanks prasanthi. Yeah, armaan is a perceptive little kid. Ridz of course cares for armaan but is still too young to express anything . Lets see how this punishment effects armaan's life

[quote=anshu]hey di

i read it once again here
i like dis love-hate realtionship between ar
bt i rally hope armaan will b alright[/quote]

Good to see u on both versions although when i write, i write this ff with AR in mind (I wrote Pehchan keeping AK in mind)

[quote=sweetmittal]

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

well...yeah..have been watching the show for quite some time :) wow, a story on SaJan, that's great !!.. would love to read it.. okay, so here are the characters :

Mayank - one of SaJan's close friends and Nupur's boyfriend... he's studious and quiet and loves books and studying ...

Nupur - Gunjan's sister.. and she's the bubbly character.. somewhat like Muskaan of DMG :)

Dia and Uday - Gunjan n Nupur's cousins... their really close friends...

Benji - he's samrat's best friend and confidante... CJ - again one of their friends...

Shilpa - she's Mayank's mother.. and very friendly in nature... and Mr.Bhushan - Nupur n Gunjan's father.. bit strict but loves is daughters very dearly :) and Bui - Nupur and Gunjan's aunt... cares for them...

Suhani - Samrat's sister and loves his brother dearly... and is quite close to Gunjan :)

Adhiraj - not quite their friend but loves Suhani... him and Samrat always get over in the wrong foot...

well, those are the main characters in the show... the friends and family surrounding SaJan... hope this helps...

waiting to read this story ! :) :)

thanks sunaina! You know i will have to watch the serial before i can write it for MJHT because i just can't imagine or relate to the characters yet😕 Maybe u can help...tell me who will suit what role. I know samrat will be armaan and gunjan will be ridz but the rest?? I am confused😕

Originally posted by: bheegi

thanks sunaina! You know i will have to watch the serial before i can write it for MJHT because i just can't imagine or relate to the characters yet😕 Maybe u can help...tell me who will suit what role. I know samrat will be armaan and gunjan will be ridz but the rest?? I am confused😕

I loved the update! I'm really head over heels in love with Armaan's character! The Padma-Armaan scene was really sweet as well! I'm loving this style of writing...and even more this story and concept! I can't wait till you continue soon! Will be eagerly waiting!

Hey the update is fabulous... I could actually imagine them as kids...it is so nice to have something as good as your ff to read between my studies...it really puts me into such a nice happy happy mood...Sorry for always replying late...thanks for the pm and update fast...take care...love neha P.S: I am sure that you are an amazing mom yourself ever so understanding

This was such a beautiful piece. Part 3 being my all time favourite out of the 3 pieces. I cannot wait to see what Armaan will be like after spending time at the new school.

Hannahxx

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hey di! wow that was an intense part! armaan hurting himself like that..wow i love padma mum in urstory! she is so understanding! wonder what will happen next..aww love the love that is between them..tho they are both unawareofthis..wonder if Ridzi will tell the truth! hope u continue soon! andthanks for the PM

thanks kashish.Yes,AR have already developed a bond that they don't realize exists. Will ridz even realize what sacrifice armaan made for her? She was only 9 at that time....let's see what happens😊

[quote=ankitadmg]Amazing update Bheegi di ...The angry young man has already developed in Armaan ....hitting the wall with his fists,pulling Riddhima by her wrists..😆..Armaan is surely a very sensitive boy..... I loved how Armaan confessed that when he grows up he will always display affection to kids which I agree is very important ...because we all know our parents love us more than the world but gestures like hugs and kisses are very reassuring for a growing child.!!...making Riddhima do his work was quiet expected of him but his act to save Riddhima was suprising...I love the fact that even though he confesses hatred for her ....Riddhima and her respect and well being matter to him!!..Loved the Huggie Kissie scene...😆..I could very well imagine Armaans flushed cheeks and Riddhimas jaws dropping till her knees..now that Armaan is 28...I am sure Armaan is going to get his Huggie Kissie soon.....Loved the update all in all we got to see the AR love story start with all its drama with them being juniors itself!!!...Thank you for the PM!![/quote]

thanks ankita! I love the fact that even though he confesses hatred for her ....Riddhima and her respect and well being matter to him.....yes u have summarized armaan's character very well here...that's how he is in this ff😊 Thanks for ur wonderful comments ankita....relaly enjoyed reading them😊

[quote=nidha1983]Hi Di!
I m F9! How ru! I wish u r gud....

woah what an update di he is grounded for whole one month ahh so tough ready to eat green vegetables ohh no i can't at any cost spl in case of food ops Abhi give him wrong advice and make both AR life hell really bad nice to see Armaan confessed in front of everyone and save Ridhima but di sending spl school is a tough punishment plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm[/quote]

thanks Nidha! Yes,lots of huggies and kissies to u for ur comments😊😊
yes, armaan is getting a tough punishment but thats whats going to make him tough😊 Loved the rose😊

[quote=sri_4]hey ...
thats really the best i ever read..
lovely description which i am falling for..hehehe..
n if its from armaans side the more n more falling continues..hehehe
armaan n his naughtyness ,,hehehe..he was grounded poor him n now thanks to abhimanyus plan of using rids n getting help from her has just made his life more complicated n hes now going to a different school as punishment..aww!! ..
one thing thats good here is armaan has started liking n admiring rids somewhere but he also lost padmas confidence on him..lets see whats next
great one
good wishes
sri:-)[/quote]

Thanks sri! We all are gullible when it comes to falling for armaan- whether he is a kid or an adult😳
yes, as snkita said above, armaan deep down wants the best for ridz but on the outside, he is in denialand will be like this for a while.

[quote=riddhan]hiiiiiiiiiiii i read your ff n liked it very much the conversation between armaan n ridhima or wat armaan is recollecting is vey nice plzzzzzzzzzzz pm me from next time u update as i would love to read the whole ff as its beautiful😊😊[/quote]

thanks riddhan! Yes, i will add u to the PM list😊 I am glad u have liked it so far

[quote=iamshveta]am feeling so bad for the little Armaan. For the first time he did something right and was rewarded with something wrong. I wonder if this is the point where ridhima will have a change of heart towards him .

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

awwwwwwwwwww

just for once i am feeling bad for armaan

poor guy

he lied to save her, still, so much bad happened to him, he was separated from her, padma also was disappointed, poor armaan,

hope everything gets better soon

plz post the next part soon

waiting eagerly

thanks for the pm

thanks Pooja! Yes, poor armaan keeps ending in trouble directly or indirectly because of ridz😭 Of course, he doesn't realize that it's all because of their special connection between them😳


[quote=sumedha]oh god di no!!!!!!!!!!!
don't put him in a different school!!!
u know i can't beleive the jaadoo in ur writing......ur making me feel so bad for armaan....almost like even six months away from ridzi at the tender age of ten wud kill the dude!!!
oh this part was just so so caring....specially the way padma aunty cares for armaan!!!
and i happen to love the way you write those little little lines in the middle
like this one!
I had lied to protect you
and
I had let you down once again, hurt your feelings rather than your body this time.
and
my first glimpse into how trust worthy you were.

its like even at the ten year old level you can just feel that his love for her was so earnest, caring, deep and everlasting!!!

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thanks sumedha! I know, even i don't want him to go to a different school but i think that will turn out to be a blessing in disguise for him. Sometimes separation helps people grow closer...let's see if that happens in AR's case😳 Aww...ur so sweet with ur compliments. Made my morning!😃

[quote=GEehsaas]Hey Bheegi Di,

MAN !! This was an awesome part !
Loved it from the point where Armaan was grounded..
To the point where Armaan was suspended or well.... thrown out

and the part where Armaan banged his fists... was just sooo.... ARMAAN !!
and then Armaan defending Riddhima was just sooo Awwwwww !!

Loved it,
Ehsaas 😊[/quote]

thanks ehsaas. Yes, these incidences are def inspired by the real armaan of real DMG😊

[quote=ssh57]Hi Bheegi,
Excellent, Superb no more adjectives to add. It is also conveying a good message to parents about parenting.Just love it.Padma and Armaan bonding superb. Cho chweet of Armaan to take all the blame on himself.ssh57

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Thanks ssh! I am honored once again. Yes, as a parent I am sure u could relate to some of the things armaan said. I have also learnt it from my kids😊 Armaan is armaan....😳

[quote=sunainaTM007]Heyyyyyyyyy Bheegi !!!!!! [/quote]

HEY DI!!!

Originally posted by: Pebblez

:) i was ABOUT to comment on the second part and you already updated the next one..but um not complaining, you didnt give me any chance to! I guess, this is turning out to be one of my favs of your fics...just cuz of the cliches u picked up and yet made those children so so much fun to read about! As I said earlier, um team Armaan just cuz punk kids are such a pain in the ass yet so much fun to be around! and hes such a sweetheart in reality, tell me...did any of your kids trouble you so much? experience bolta hai bhayii ;)

riddhima :D aaaah! I see what she is in the making, and i think i like her pretty much till now...you are taking the fic at a good pace bheegi, and even though the last 3 partrs were ALL kids, i still loved it tons! mastan hota! :D update soon...:D

Cheers! you got me grinning in no power time ;) (mob net is SO usable at times)

Kiran

thanks Kiran. I am glad u are liking it so far. Their childhood parts will continue for some more time as I am really enjoying writing something different this time😊 Let's see what kind of adults AR finally turn out to be😃

[quote=kaneez-e-fatima]irst of all i realli liked the smiley's which u have used for all six kids...its amazing they reflected their charcters so well...i like the armaan's muskaan's n ofcourse the most.. LOLzzz
n the update is beautifully written...poor armaan..u really understand kids mind realy well......
very nice work ...thnx for pm


-Huma