It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10

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JAZZ_ACUA

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Posted: 15 years ago

#241

hey, it as great. i just loved it. cont soon.

LOVE YOU
JIA

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#242

awwwwwwwwwww

just for once i am feeling bad for armaan

poor guy

he lied to save her, still, so much bad happened to him, he was separated from her, padma also was disappointed, poor armaan,

hope everything gets better soon

plz post the next part soon

waiting eagerly

thanks for the pm

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~sumedha~

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Posted: 15 years ago

#243

oh god di no!!!!!!!!!!!
don't put him in a different school!!!
u know i can't beleive the jaadoo in ur writing......ur making me feel so bad for armaan....almost like even six months away from ridzi at the tender age of ten wud kill the dude!!!
oh this part was just so so caring....specially the way padma aunty cares for armaan!!!
and i happen to love the way you write those little little lines in the middle
like this one!
I had lied to protect you
and
I had let you down once again, hurt your feelings rather than your body this time.
and
my first glimpse into how trust worthy you were.

its like even at the ten year old level you can just feel that his love for her was so earnest, caring, deep and everlasting!!!

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Ehsaas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#244

Hey Bheegi Di,

MAN !! This was an awesome part !
Loved it from the point where Armaan was grounded..
To the point where Armaan was suspended or well.... thrown out

and the part where Armaan banged his fists... was just sooo.... ARMAAN !!
and then Armaan defending Riddhima was just sooo Awwwwww !!

Loved it,
Ehsaas 😊

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bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: olive_green
Wow!

This is something else. An absolute treat! I can actually imagine those two as kids.
Loved it.

thanks Aria! I am trying my best to imagine the real original AR of DMG as kids here...ur butter did work😉

[quote=DMGfan]Hi Bheegi,

This fic is something all together at a different level.... wow and amazing dont really describe it well. When I first started reading part 1, I was in splits....imagining my own doing similar things.... but now as I continue reading, this part left me thinking on a lot of things - one being child psychology and sensitivity in a self-destructive way. Just curious, are you a psychologist...I might have read in some comment that you are a doctor! You are amazing with this one......being a parent you learn and understand a lot of child psychology, and this fic brings a lot of thoughts home.

Amazing job!

RT[/quote]

thanks RT! I am not a psychologist but yes, i do work with kids and have 2 kids of my own😊 Appreciate ur comments...thanks again😊

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blessing-beauty

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Posted: 15 years ago

#246

Hey bheegi di that was an awesome part . Please cont soon

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ssh57

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Posted: 15 years ago

#247

Hi Bheegi,
Excellent, Superb no more adjectives to add. It is also conveying a good message to parents about parenting.Just love it.Padma and Armaan bonding superb. Cho chweet of Armaan to take all the blame on himself.ssh57

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Sunaina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#248

Heyyyyyyyyy Bheegi !!!!!!

the update was again awesome, fabulous, marvelous and really really really well-penned... loved reading it... armaan's side of the story is really interesting.. his emotions, his actions, his thoughts are really amazingly penned :) :)

armaan trying to negotiate his punishments... his only hope- his dad failing him as he turned his back on armaan as well...awww..poor armaan, afterall he didnt hurt riddhima on purpose.. it was an accident... armaan feeling lonely and then hurting himself ..oh my gosh... thats terrible.. why would he do that to himself????.. i mean, i agree he's hurt and upset but hurting himself and feeling better abt it... omg.. thats bad :(

riddhima coming in at the exact same moment and witnessing his act... and then telling her mum abt it... padma and armaan's convo was really really very sweet... she understands him soooooo well !! and armaan being genuinely grateful to riddhima for her silent help :) aww...

then the moment with the kids.. and padma making the new deal to get armaan out of his punishment... she's one nice woman... and shivani's comment making AR shy and turning the moment awkward but padma again coming to the rescue... muski's innocent comment on teachers was damn cute !!.. she is really choooo cute !!.. and abhi teasing armaan by quoting the awkward moment lines again n again...

the armaan teaching riddhima scenes were really nice... he's a nice guy..armaan, he is... and abhi again putting some idiotic ideas into his mind.. getting armaan into trouble.. the two moms talking abt armaan and padma again undertanding him better than shivani ! :) innocent riddhima falling for armaan's plan... and then the plan going wrong wothin two days... oh gosh !!.. armaan lying to save riddhima the brunt of her father's anger and disapproval... omg... him getting shifted to another school...

the story is getting interesting with every part bheegs !! :)

loving it totally !!..

thanks for the pm...

the update was beautifully penned !!!!.. definitely one of ur best works... DYM stands at #1 :)

continue sooooooooooooooon :D

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Pebblez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#249

:) i was ABOUT to comment on the second part and you already updated the next one..but um not complaining, you didnt give me any chance to! I guess, this is turning out to be one of my favs of your fics...just cuz of the cliches u picked up and yet made those children so so much fun to read about! As I said earlier, um team Armaan just cuz punk kids are such a pain in the ass yet so much fun to be around! and hes such a sweetheart in reality, tell me...did any of your kids trouble you so much? experience bolta hai bhayii ;)

riddhima :D aaaah! I see what she is in the making, and i think i like her pretty much till now...you are taking the fic at a good pace bheegi, and even though the last 3 partrs were ALL kids, i still loved it tons! mastan hota! :D update soon...:D

Cheers! you got me grinning in no power time ;) (mob net is SO usable at times)

Kiran

Edited by Pebblez - 15 years ago

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Huma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#250

first of all i realli liked the smiley's which u have used for all six kids...its amazing they reflected their charcters so well...i like the armaan's muskaan's n ofcourse the most.. LOLzzz
n the update is beautifully written...poor armaan..u really understand kids mind realy well......
very nice work ...thnx for pm

-Huma

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