Mayur FF- Zindagi Ek Diary Mein Bandh - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
hey awesome part lina....very sweet....and that guy is mayank???...plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
awesome part
to kya wo letter boy maynk hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
hey lina..nice part..total high-school stuff!
Nupur dusnt like to interact much..guess she's a bit of an introvert..or gels with only some people..!
anyway that guy sat next to her..wow!..but then he was in ALL her classes?..thats weird..
n Nupur likes Gaby..sorta like crush i think..n well thats cute!..but i wonder who the 'guy' is..
n she got a dare to write a love letter to him..aww..but i think the guy felt bad that it was just a dare!..so sad..
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
heyy
nice update
n i guess this time the guy was definately mayank
continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
Aww Lina,
great part dear.
just loved it.
keep updating

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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sana866

wow lina nice part

awesome dear
plz continue soon
and thanx for the pm
love
sana 😊

Thankz a lot Sana.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
loved this part..awesome lina 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
wowowwwwww
awsome part!!!!!!!!
CB ..........👏
tum toh muhje se bhi bari suspence niklii yaar!!!!!!!!
👏
greta job
con't soooooonnnnnnn
-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
omg! i ❤️ it soooooo muuuuuch ! when r u going 2 post the next part?
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Zindagi Ek Diary Mein Bandh
Part 3
The next day is BORING!!!!!!Fifth period is the best. I notice, Gaby is very popular, every girl likes him. Ugh, hate it. He is talking with Samatha and Isa. I see Aldyre and start talking to him. Gaby sees us, and comes and sit besides me.
Gaby:What ya talkng about?
Nupur:Nothing
Gaby:Nupur did u tell him, that u like him?
I give a shock look. What is he saying?
Nupur:Stop kidding.
Aldyre leaves us alone.
Nupur:Gaby are u mental?
Gaby:No, but the way u talk to him.
Nupur:What way???
Gaby: Nupur, you dont kow it hurtz to see u talking to someone, becuz.....becuz........
Oh my god, what is he gonna say? I see him looking at his friends, and he gave an evil smile. I am confused.
Gaby:Becuz, I like u.
I am shocked. Didn't see that one coming.
Nupur:Ummmmmm...ummmmmm.....
He starts laughing. I am confused again.
Gaby: Y-y-you thought......
He is still laughing hard,
Gaby:U should of see ur face
He made a shock face and starts laughing again.
Gaby:Nupzs u still dont know me. You see that me and my friend made a bet, and I lost, so I had to tell u this.
My heart is broken. Saying this he goes with Samatha. I am deeply hurt.
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I go home, and realize that we are going to move to London. I dont say a word. And just pack my stuff. I want to move away, away from Kenwood, away from Gaby, away from that guy I hurt, Now I know how he felt. Now I know.
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5 yearz later
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We move back to Miami, I go to college now. Today is the first day, so I get up, and get ready. Now I have change. I think Gaby and that guy has changed my life. I am much quieter. I wear chorridar pajama and frok/kamis, instead of t-shirts/jeans/skirt. I am more simple now, not wearing much make-up. I totally change. I can never forget those two people. Gaby and that guy. Never!!!!
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I go to college in my own car. I go in and find many people. Wow they still remember me. Wow, didnt know they love me so much. I am talking to Jordasha and Milten. Just then, I hear laughter.
Jordasha: There he goes again, with another girl.
Nupur:Who is that?
Milten:Gaby.
I am shocked.
Nupur:See ya later guyz.
I go behind the walls and see him. He looks so different now. He is still cute, and his smile and laugher is the same. I feel like crying now. He talking to someone else. He has probably forgot me.
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Mayank's POV
I arrived in college on my bike.(Wearing black jacket, jeans 😍looking hot) Every girl was looking at me (Kinda Adhiraj's entry😆) I got off my bike, and go in. I see Alexis waiting there. She comes and hugs me. I hug her back. I am in the court now.
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Nupur's POV
I see them hugging and my I feel like crying even more. I start moving backward. And then I trip, and land on the floor. Everyone starts laughing. I realize I am in the court. I see someone gave out his hand. I grab it and get up. I look at him, he looks at me.
Alexis:Mayank?
Mayank:Coming Alexis,
He looks at me again.(Nupzs wearing white) And smiles, and is about to leave when we hear a voice. It was Brigette. She hugs me.
Brigette:Nupur, Nupur, Nupur, Jordy told me u are here.
I broke the hug and smile. I see Mayank looking at me, and he is shocked to hear my name. He smiles and unknown smile, and comes closer to me and tells.
Mayank: Welcome Nupur Bhushan, I am sure you will have a lot of fun here.
Saying this he leaves, with Alexis.
I am standing there, confused, trying to figure out what he meant.
Phewww
just updated part 3
do tell me how waz it.
-Lina-😉

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