Mayur FF- Zindagi Ek Diary Mein Bandh - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Hina_04

dear nice part

loved it 😛

Thank you Hinna
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Senny

hey amazinggggggggggg lina, i lovedddddd it, hope to see mayank and MN in the next part, i misssssssssssss it all really bad man.

lovedddd your update lina, keep it up.
God bless.

Awwwww
thank you so much Senny
Well I have planned a lot 4 this FF
Mayu will be known by Nupur
like on the 3 part.
thanks again
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
Note
Plez plez understand that Nupur will get to know Mayu like in 3 part.
Plez plez
I have planned some
"Special"
moment Nupur get to know him.
And that Gaby is the guy Nupur likes.
He is the flirty one.
Look at the character stetch on the 1st page.
Thankz 4 all ur replies
really meant a lot for me.
Lina
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: rkmnkp



Thank you Mahak

It feelz great 4 u to read my FF

Becuz

I am a fan of urz.

😳



fan nahi frd bolo.....
i will feel better.....and honored.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Hey Lina ,i ❤️ ur ff.Do conti .I will b the first 1 to comment .I will kill myself if u dont . I m a little girl .u dont wanna make a little girl cry ,would u ?😭 remember 2 p.m me . ❤️ Sani
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Zindagi Ek Dairy Mein Bandh
Part 2
I went to my 1st period. It was maths, with Mrs. Lewis, also my last year math teacher. I picked a seat, at the front desk, in the middle row. Delia sits next to me.
Delia: Nupzs finally we have a class together.
I smile.
Nupur:Yeah, I know.
I look around the room, it was fill with a least 36 students, what a big class?! Mrs. Lewis goes at the front of the class.
Mrs. Lewis: Welcome evrybody, this advance math class-
She looks around the room, everyone was busy talking. She didn't say anything and goes to her desk. I dont know why, no one likes her, I think she is a very good teacher. Anyways, a bunch of popular kids come to my desk. They are Alexis, Natelie, Alexzandra, Daniela, and Hannah.
Alexis: Hey Bhushan join us.
Nupur: No thanks.
Ugh what is their problem? Don't they get, I don't want to hang out with them?
Nupur:Take Delia with you.
Alexis: But-
Nupur: Plez
Alexis: Ok then come.
Delia goes with them. The door opens, I wish it was Gaby. I turn around, to find it wasn't him. It was some dude. He looks for a seat, and doesn't find one, so he goes to Mrs.Lewis.
Guy: Excuse me, I can't find a seat.
Mrs.Lewis looks around.
Mrs.Lewis: There's one next to Nupur.
Ugh did she say my name??????
Guy:Nupur?
He goes to sit next to me. Wow, he knows me. Didn't know I was that popular.
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One hour passes, we go to our next class. I have sceince next, with Mrs.Dwyer. She picked seats for us. I get to sit next to the same guy in maths. Alexis is in our table, with Natelie and Angie.
Alexis: Hey, whats ur name?
Guy: Umm me????
Alexis:Yeah you.
I get up to ask Mrs.Dwyer to move my seat, she says no. So I sit back.
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One hour passes, I went outside, because my next class was in the elementary building. I see the same guy walking. What is he, a stalker? By god plez dont say he has the same class I have next. I go in the class. It was History, with Mrs. Sautter. She has already assigned partners for us. I get the same guy. Wow, what a cioncedence?!
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One hour passes, I have band next with Mrs. Joa. I hate her, infact I hate band, I hate playing music. This class is huge, with the huge stage, and our seats are there. I pick, the top stage, and guess what, I see that guy there too. He picks the stage, lower than mine. I see my kiddo 7th grader Peirro there too. He is Delia's brother. I also see Brigette there. She is an awsome friend. I start talking with them.
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One hour passes, we have lunch. We have last lunch, with P.E class. I stand in the line. Jordasha and Milten takes me with them. I see Gaby there. I ask Jordasha if he is in 8th grade, but she says he is in 7th grade,
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After I get my food, I sit in the table, where I can veiw Gaby.He is talking with his friends.
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Half hour later, we go to our next class. Mine is art with Mr.Lacayo. I sit down with my best friend, Claudia.
I have never had any class with her, becuz I have always had advance classes and she has lower classes. I sit with her. Oh gosh, you wont believe, Gaby was in the class. And that same guy. Mr.Lacoyo gave us two people in our group, and I have Gaby and that guy. Whoever he is. I talk with Gaby, the entire time. He is so cute.That guy sits in the back, alone.
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One hour passes, I dont want to go. I have English, with Mrs. Price. Ugh that guy is there too. I gave up. He sits in the back of the room. I sit in the middle. Thank god.
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Next day, it was the same.
In 4th period, me Brigette and Peirro is playing truth or dare.
Brigette: Nupzs Truth or dare?
I pick dare, my truth hurts.
Nupur:Dare.
Peirro: Ok then, you have to write a love letter to a guy saying "I love you, love urs Nupur".
Nupur:Ok but who?
Brigette:That guy
She points to the same guy, that I have all my classes with.
Nupur:Ok,
I make a letter, and give it to him.
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5th period, I have fun with Gaby. He is so popular, every girl likes him.
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The next day, that guy says nothing. In lunch he comes up to me.
Guy:Woh kal? Woh letter?
Milten:Nupzs come.
Nupur:Coming.
I face the guy.
Nupur:Sorry, I have to go
Guy:Par woh letter?
Nupur:Dekho ussko seriuosly matt lena, it was just a dare.
Saying this I left. You should of seen his face, he looked shocked, it looked funny to me. Hahahahah, he actually thought? hahahah, and wow didn't know he speak hindi. I think he was hurt, but whatever, I will not like him, for anything, and it wasn't my fault he took it seruiosly, I did nothing wrong.
Ok did the second part. Do tell me how was it.
Lina😉
Edited by rkmnkp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

wow lina nice part

awesome dear
plz continue soon
and thanx for the pm
love
sana 😊
Edited by sana866 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
hey CB hehe linaaaaaaaa, i loveddddddddd it, it was truly very adorable, God bless.
amazinggggggggg work man.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
loved it desi girl! Really interesting! Excited for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
part 1-vry nice part........i also thot tht guy wud b mayu....bt hes nt????😲
hw come????????

part 2-....toh this unknown guy is mayu kya??????????😉😉..........mujhe wohi janni hai.....this part ws also nice..........

nywz plzz continue soon
Edited by nikki028 - 15 years ago

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