Mayur FF- Zindagi Ek Diary Mein Bandh - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part dear
but tooooooooo short
anyways continue soon
and thanx for the pm
love
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwww this is such a sweet and short cute update, keep it up!
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Posted: 15 years ago


lekin hai bahut hi short........
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was a really short update
but liked it
plzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey lina....
iam sure u got LOADS of comments saying 'the upd8 was soo short...' welll, i'll spare u & not say dat d upd8 was short...😛
it was really nice lina...😃😃😃
thank god nupur got 2 know wat kind of person gabby is...😃😃
thnxxxxx 4 d pm...😃
upd8 soooooon....😃
love u loads,
jigi
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey lina..nice part...bt TOO short!
So Mayank and Gaby are'nt the same?!..i thot dey were..n Mayank dropped her home..hw sweet..
Gaby is so rude 2 Nupur..n he has a GF..omg..but she shudnt hv chngd 4 him!..ugh..i hope Nupur gets over him..
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

Itna short😡

now make mayank love nupur and nupur love mayank!

Sorry sorry my desi gril
plez gussa matt ho.
Plez.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 6
Zindagi Ek Dairy Mein Bandh
The day goes on. I don't talk to Gaby the whole art class. Infact, I sit alone in the corner. Claudia is absent, or else she will never stand me sitting alone. I am coloring in my stectbook, and I see someone coming. I think it is Gaby, and I don't look back.
Nupur: Gaby, plez I don't want to talk to you.
Mayank: Acha, par mujhse toh baat kar suckti ho?
I look back, it was Mayank. He sits next to me.
Mayank:Nupur, tum yahan ahale kyun beheti ho?
Nupur:Mayank I want to be alone for a while.
Mayank:It's ok, I understand.
He is about to leave.
Nupur:Mayank, please mujhe baat karro.
He sits down again, and starts gigling.
Nupur:Kya hua Mayank?
Mayank:Nupur tumhe andaza nahi hai, ke you sounded like a little kid when you said that.
Nupur:It's not funny, never mind you won't understand.
Mayank:Ok par kaho toh.
I don't know why, but I tell him everything about Gaby. Maybe because he seems like a nice guy. And also, I want to share my feeling with someone.
Mayank:Nupur, mein tumse ek baat poocho?
Nupur:Haan poocho.
Mayank:Kya tum ussko abhi bhi pasand kar ti ho?
I don't know what to say. I know I do.
Nupur:Haan.
Mayank:Ok then, mere paas ek plan hai.
He tells me his plan, and I really like it.
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After school, we go outside, talking with each other, in front of Gaby.
Nupur:Hi Mayank.
Mayank:Hi Nupzs, you coming to the dance?
Nupur:Yep, I am going there right now.
Mayank:Did you ask your mom?
Nupur:Nope.
Mayank:Then call her,
I call her fakely, Because I know my mom cares less about where I am.
Nupur:Hi, yeah, yeah, no, yeah.
Then the stupid thing happens. My phone rings. I look at Mayank, nevously.
Mayank: Umm umm, excuse me, someone is calling me.
Nupur:Ok bye mom.
I close my phone.
Mayank:I guess they cut the phone.
Mayank looks at Gaby as if he didn't know he was there.
Mayank:hi you going to the dance?
Gaby:Yeah, I am going with my girlfriend, Isa.
I look at the girl besides him.
Nupur:Mayank lets go.
Gaby looks at me in total shocked.
Alexis: Mayank, don't tell me you are going to the dance!
Mayank:Umm
Alexis:Did you lie to me? You said you won't be able to go.
Mayank:No darling, I wouldn't lie to you. I just found out that I can.
Gaby:Hi.
Alexis:Hi, Mayank why is this kid talking to me?
Gaby: Hello? I am right here.
Alexis:Well whatever, Mayank lets go.
Mayank:You go ahead.
I am just standing there. Wondering what Alexis wants from Mayank.
Alexis:Ok.
She goes in.
Mayank:Nupur lets go.
Nupur:Ok.
Gaby:Lets go Isa.
Isa:Ok lets go.
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We all go in. The place is huge, with the lights off. Mayank tell Alexis something, and she says ok. And he comes to me. I am wondering what he said to her that she said "Ok" so quickly. We start dancing.
Nupur:What did you tell her?
Mayank:Who?
Nupur:Alexis.
Mayank:Oh her? I told her, that I am going to get some drinks.
Nupur:Lie!
Mayank:Nupur tum yeh itne yakeen se kaise yeh keh suckti ho?
Nupur:Ummm, because-
I really don't know what to say.
Nupur:It was preety obviuse. And-
He swirls me around.
Nupur:And that I know Alexis, she wouldn't say "Ok" so easily.
Mayank:Well-
He looks behind me.
Mayank:Woh aa raha hai.
Nupur:Kaun?
Mayank:Wohi.
Nupur:Gaby?
Mayank:Haan wohi.
Gaby:Hey guys.
Mayank signs me to say "Lets go".
Nupur: Mayank, lets go away from here, I don't lke the spot.
Mayank:Ok.
We go away. Gaby is still shocked, that I am ignoring him.
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We start laughing.
Nupur:*Laughing* You-you you should of seen his face.
I make a imatation of his face.
We laugh more. I am still laughing, Mayank looks at me very sweetly.
Nupur:Mayank?
He still is looking at me. I snap my fingers in front of his eyes.
Nupur:Mayank?
Mayank:Haan?
Nupur:Kya mere face pe kuch laaga hai?
Mayank:Nahi toh. Kyun?
Nupur:Toh mujhe tum appni barri barri ankon se kyun ghur ghur ke dekh rahe ho?
He smiles.
Mayank:Nupur you look very preety today.
Nupur:Ahem ahem. Today?
Mayank:Haan.
He gives me his big smile.
Nupur:Ok.
I look at the stage. Everyone is dancing. Also that Gaby and Isa. I look at Mayank:
Nupur:Mayank?
Mayank:Haan, bollo.
Nupur:Masti karni hai sab ke saath?
Mayank:I am not sure, agar mein trouble mei nahi phassu ga toh theek hai.
Nupur:Don't worry.
Mayank:Ok par kya?
Nupur:Don't worry this is going to be fun, you with me.
Mayank:Ok.
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Ok now, I know everyone is like, the last two updates are very short, but I made this one preety long. Right? Now no more complains😆. Ok I really want to kow what you all think of this part. Do comment.
-Lina-😉
Edited by rkmnkp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

hawwww itna short updte

CBB ur killing us with these little little updatess

aww sho sweet mayank gave nupur a ride😳

sooo cute

no make both of them love each other

aur yeh gaby??..hmmmmmmmmmm

con't sooon

with a lamba update kkk

-Sanam-

Thank you CB#2
You hate Gaby too?????????????????😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nikki028

firse ek shot update?????????????????????????😲

ab samjhi,......tumhe hum sabki koi parwa hi nahi haina?tabhi toh itni baar kehne ke bavajood u r nt givin us lamba updates!!!!!!!!!!!!1

nw when r u gonna make mayur love for each other!!!!!!!!!????????????????????

Sorry Nikki
I will soon make Nupur love Mayu.
Sorry again,
plez dont be mad at me.

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