PEHCHAN (AK) 2 END&EPILOGUE pg 71, 12/21/09

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topsyturvy23

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Posted: 15 years ago

#181

hey a great update beautifully ean n every word chosen that too honey dipped just loved the pattern u described it .thanks for a lovely update

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Vijaya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: annu127

Sorry, for this interference vallanki, but I disagree here...

I don't think kripa was wrong when she left angad... that time they exchanged heated arguments, and both of them felt that he/she is right and the other one is wrong. Under these circumstances angad's asking kripa to go away from his life and house, I don't think that Kripa or any self esteemed girl would tolerate this act. How is this possible that any girl's bf say in front of her, leave, i don't want to see u again... and that girl keep standing over there. that's why kripa's decision was correct in my opinion.

here, angad's situation is different, He came back to ranikhet to apologize kripa and wants to get back in her life, and he is well aware that kripa could say anything in anger to him, and he had to bear that

they both disliked their acts two year ago, but not now, ab dono thande pad chuke hein

No need of apologies, annu.

What I meant is reciprocated in bheegi's revised part!!

Kripa sould have waited for bringing 'akal' in Angad's insecurity. He just wanted some identity/pechan by getting married to a woman he loved. He had been identified throught his life so far as an 'illegitimate' child though it wasn't mentioned openly in the place he grown up. If it was in India he would have stamped with that name openly in the society!!! His mother went through so much agony because of his unidentity/ as an illegitimate son of surya. Angad was hurt and his ego was hurt when he proposed kripa without second thoughts of her wishes and future plans . He didn't realisewthat kripa would want after her divorce. He dint give her enough space to prove herself as an 'independant woman'. He didn't even think that she would have such wishes n dreams. He took her for granted just like Prithvi. The only difference between the two men is their characters and their love towards kripa. And at the same time kripa should have convinced Angad to wait for some more time instead of bluntly rejecting him. Both were wrong in haste then.

Hopefully, they both talk about their hasty decisons that took in the past. I doubt even now kripa agree to accompany Angad to Mumbai. She might expect Angad to stay back wiht her!!! let';s see what bheegi is preparing for us!!!

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Vijaya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#183

With small amendments, the part looked clean and acceptable.😳 Both had grown up and took time to run into each other's arms!!😆 Good they busted out their frustration and agony before they accepted each other.

I liked the way kripa told about her meeting with Surya, unlike I expected the scene about it. Now, Angad will find out the truth and hope, he won't hate surya again.

I fear if kripa again rejects to accompany Angad to Mumbai. If so happens, Angad would understand and help her to establish her relation with orphans. I like if he slowly moves to Nainital/Ranikhet to help both orphanage and stay with kripa.

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Jannat

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Posted: 15 years ago

#184

This part was greatt

Sab ingredients te; pyaar, rona, and masala

I love the way they patched up. And Angad didn't get mad when he found out what Suryabhan did.

The pink kurta/red towel and the events that followed were cute. Only AK can bring out a dam of emotions between each other.

You have expressed their inner agony and reconciliation fantastically.

But I wonder what will happen now. Will Angad stay back with Kripa or will Kripa move to Sharma house?

Jannat

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sameira

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Posted: 15 years ago

#185

hey bheegi awsome part.. finally theu are back together.. i hope nothing goes wrong... continue soon

thanks for the pm...

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Kiran

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Posted: 15 years ago

#186

I didnt read ur comment abt makin their rushed milan a Ekta style dream sequence.....but this new n revised part wz greatt....this part was soo romantic and cuteee....angad in a pinkk kurta 😆 😆

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Sammy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#187

awwww gr8 part dii, absolutely sweet..loved their milan and the way they cleared up the misunderstandings...i hope angad really does try to find out what his so called father really is...

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bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: spvd
wow this part is fantastic......................very well rewritten...................😉.........now they look like AK couple.................kripa let out her frustration and anger along with her hidden pyaar.................only AK can do this................but the confrontation was very good and expressed very nicely.............kripa atleast hinted angad about her visit to mumbai and she also didnt reveal everything about suryabhan and its now angad's wish to know the truth and then know whether suryabhan's love for him is true or not.............but i really loved the last part.................infact the whole thing i loved it...................but the kurta and towel scene was very perfect.............cont soon dear................wonder what the next twist will be.......

thanks Deepa. Yeah, the results of both parts was the same but this journey was more realistic and more AK like😃 Surya and abhi will def be in trouble...but let's see what imtihaans our love birds need to give

[quote=cheeky_pari]Revised Part...seriously i have no words for it!

You have simply blown me away with it! I loved it!

Thanks for the PM!

Priya
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thanks Priya...i am glad u liked this revision😊

[quote=sanju_veni]hey a great update beautifully ean n every word chosen that too honey dipped just loved the pattern u described it .thanks for a lovely update[/quote]

thanks sanju😊 loved ur analogy👏

Edited by bheegi - 15 years ago

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bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: vallanki
No need of apologies, annu.
What I meant is reciprocated in bheegi's revised part!!

Kripa sould have waited for bringing 'akal' in Angad's insecurity. He just wanted some identity/pechan by getting married to a woman he loved. He had been identified throught his life so far as an 'illegitimate' child though it wasn't mentioned openly in the place he grown up. If it was in India he would have stamped with that name openly in the society!!! His mother went through so much agony because of his unidentity/ as an illegitimate son of surya. Angad was hurt and his ego was hurt when he proposed kripa without second thoughts of her wishes and future plans . He didn't realisewthat kripa would want after her divorce. He dint give her enough space to prove herself as an 'independant woman'. He didn't even think that she would have such wishes n dreams. He took her for granted just like Prithvi. The only difference between the two men is their characters and their love towards kripa. And at the same time kripa should have convinced Angad to wait for some more time instead of bluntly rejecting him. Both were wrong in haste then.

Hopefully, they both talk about their hasty decisons that took in the past. I doubt even now kripa agree to accompany Angad to Mumbai. She might expect Angad to stay back wiht her!!! let';s see what bheegi is preparing for us!!!

wah wah kya baat hai. Two of my greatest critics are debating the actions of my main characters. I am honored ladies😊 basically, as Vallanki said, haste makes waste and that's precisely what happened with AK. I also agree with Annu that if i were in kripa's place, i would have left if my husband/lover asked me to leave so heartlessly- no woman would stay back after such an insult and that too a woman who has recently been divorced😕 She knows the pain of rejection and humiliation better than anyone else😭

[quote=vallanki]With small amendments, the part looked clean and acceptable.😳 Both had grown up and took time to run into each other's arms!!😆 Good they busted out their frustration and agony before they accepted each other.

I liked the way kripa told about her meeting with Surya, unlike I expected the scene about it. Now, Angad will find out the truth and hope, he won't hate surya again.

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thanks 4 reading the revised part. Yes, this part was more realistic and less filmy than part 35😆 Great guesses and suggestions but wait and see what twist i have planned....in the meantime enjoy AK romance in next part😳

Edited by bheegi - 15 years ago

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sweetaddiction

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Posted: 15 years ago

#190

oh woww !!--
i thot the other version was fab-- this one just outdid itself (literally)-- lol :P
in retrospect the other was a bit rushed !-- and this one kinda made more sense--
either how-- TRES AMAZINGGG !!
canNOT wait to read the nxt part ! =)