PEHCHAN (AK) 2 END&EPILOGUE pg 71, 12/21/09 - Page 20

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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow!! amazing part, i loved the details in it!!
Keep up the great work 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
This makes more sense ........

the relations are so complicated and so simple .....
some people with a bond of marriage cant be faithful to their partners and some without the bindings live their life for their significant others.

All that matters is trust and belief that they love you .... she knew even if he is not with her he loved her and will always .... and that belief tied her to the relation.

and same goes with him ....

its so beautiful that i wonder if there is something this beautiful that happens in real life ...


Di you once again clean bowled me with ur update ....

Loved it .....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NYPunjabii

This part was greatt

Sab ingredients te; pyaar, rona, and masala

I love the way they patched up. And Angad didn't get mad when he found out what Suryabhan did.

The pink kurta/red towel and the events that followed were cute. Only AK can bring out a dam of emotions between each other.

You have expressed their inner agony and reconciliation fantastically.

But I wonder what will happen now. Will Angad stay back with Kripa or will Kripa move to Sharma house?

Jannat



thanks jannat! Yes, this part was like a potboiler with all masalas😆 The earlier part had some spices lacking so i decided to cook the dish again for all of u😆

well, good questions...wait and see what i have in store for you all😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaddiction

oh woww !!--
i thot the other version was fab-- this one just outdid itself (literally)-- lol :P
in retrospect the other was a bit rushed !-- and this one kinda made more sense--
either how-- TRES AMAZINGGG !!
canNOT wait to read the nxt part ! =)



thanks sweetoo...yes this part wa smore realistic and more masaaledar as Jannat said😆 I am glad u like dit
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bheegi



wah wah kya baat hai. Two of my greatest critics are debating the actions of my main characters. I am honored ladies😊 basically, as Vallanki said, haste makes waste and that's precisely what happened with AK. I also agree with Annu that if i were in kripa's place, i would have left if my husband/lover asked me to leave so heartlessly- no woman would stay back after such an insult and that too a woman who has recently been divorced😕 She knows the pain of rejection and humiliation better than anyone else😭

[quote=vallanki]With small amendments, the part looked clean and acceptable.😳 Both had grown up and took time to run into each other's arms!!😆 Good they busted out their frustration and agony before they accepted each other.

I liked the way kripa told about her meeting with Surya, unlike I expected the scene about it. Now, Angad will find out the truth and hope, he won't hate surya again.
I fear if kripa again rejects to accompany Angad to Mumbai. If so happens, Angad would understand and help her to establish her relation with orphans. I like if he slowly moves to Nainital/Ranikhet to help both orphanage and stay with kripa.
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thanks 4 reading the revised part. Yes, this part was more realistic and less filmy than part 35😆 Great guesses and suggestions but wait and see what twist i have planned....in the meantime enjoy AK romance in next part😳

Thanks bheegi. I always like debates, especially when it comes to our beloveds, you know!!!😳 I agree that I too go away when my hubby asks/screams at me to leave😛😕 but that won't be the solution to keep relationships. We have to twist man's ear and pour akal in his stupid mind😆 Then only we succeed in our life!! 'Karyeshu mantri" is not a useless proverb!!!!😳😆
Waiting for the twists...bring new one .. diff from usual marriage with some other girl; parents' interference;..we already tasted kripa's rejection .. so let's have something variety next😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: KehanT

This makes more sense ........

the relations are so complicated and so simple .....
some people with a bond of marriage cant be faithful to their partners and some without the bindings live their life for their significant others.

All that matters is trust and belief that they love you .... she knew even if he is not with her he loved her and will always .... and that belief tied her to the relation.

and same goes with him ....

its so beautiful that i wonder if there is something this beautiful that happens in real life ...


Di you once again clean bowled me with ur update ....

Loved it .....



Kanu, aapne bilkul theek samjha. This whole story is about marriage, betrayal, faith and trust. Of course, I have stirred a lot of emotions with it's unconventional storyline, but I did want people to question what a marriage really means? Is it just saat pheras and mangal sutra or is it more about undying commitment for the person u love and being faithful to them no matter what happens?

This is exactly what Kripa has experienced in this story- a perfect marriage to an imperfect life partner and then an imperfect (in the conventional sense) love story with a perfect man for her😳

I think the institution of marriage has been created to keep people together in the name of society and rules because in real life, very few couples have true love stories like AK have in our ffs😕


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vallanki

Thanks bheegi. I always like debates, especially when it comes to our beloveds, you know!!!😳 I agree that I too go away when my hubby asks/screams at me to leave😛😕 but that won't be the solution to keep relationships. We have to twist man's ear and pour akal in his stupid mind😆 Then only we succeed in our life!! 'Karyeshu mantri" is not a useless proverb!!!!😳😆

Waiting for the twists...bring new one .. diff from usual marriage with some other girl; parents' interference;..we already tasted kripa's rejection .. so let's have something variety next😉



yes vallanki....men are pig headed when it comes to their beliefs😆...i will keep ur mantar in mind altho my hubby would never fall for it😆

Yes, is ajab kahani ka agla ghazab twist kuch aur hi hoga😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bheegi


yes vallanki....men are pig headed when it comes to their beliefs😆...i will keep ur mantar in mind altho my hubby would never fall for it😆

Yes, is ajab kahani ka agla ghazab twist kuch aur hi hoga😆

this name suits yur story😆
yuh even my hubby won't fall..but we lose nothing in trials.😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vallanki

this name suits yur story😆

yuh even my hubby won't fall..but we lose nothing in trials.😉



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just saw that movie today...it's really cute! U should see it with ur daughter, she will love it too. I know our hubbies are not as easy as angad in our ffs😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bheegi



Kanu, aapne bilkul theek samjha. This whole story is about marriage, betrayal, faith and trust. Of course, I have stirred a lot of emotions with it's unconventional storyline, but I did want people to question what a marriage really means? Is it just saat pheras and mangal sutra or is it more about undying commitment for the person u love and being faithful to them no matter what happens?

This is exactly what Kripa has experienced in this story- a perfect marriage to an imperfect life partner and then an imperfect (in the conventional sense) love story with a perfect man for her😳

I think the institution of marriage has been created to keep people together in the name of society and rules because in real life, very few couples have true love stories like AK have in our ffs😕




sometimes ignorance is a bliss too ...when we acquire too much knowledge and that too when it concerns our life , it gets hard to beleive anyone .

for some people marriage is a binding and for some a liberation.

all depends on how much you commit to relation and in which aspects and how much u are given liberty.
pehchan as it says ..... if you are given the liberty to have your own pehchan in a marriage , its certainly a liberation.......
agar koi apni khushi se badle aapke liye toh woh khushi hai aur agar koi zabardasti aapki pehchan ko badle to what they think is right toh wohi rishta bojh lagta hai .


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