PEHCHAN (AK) 2 END&EPILOGUE pg 71, 12/21/09 - Page 17

Ok i am ready to see your eakta style hhaahahah but with lots of angad shaitani & love

hey sangeeta;

hey grt partt

glad to see ak make up but in my opinion it was too rushed without passion nd heatt

cntinue soon

I guessed with a big twist when you made AK together so soon!!!

Glad and relaxed while reading as they made up.

Fantastic Part...

As everyone else, even I believe that their milan was rushed. Thoda masala mirch or tarka dalna tha.

Suryabhan and Prithvi are using Angad to their own use and advantage. All they care is about the business.

Gayatri is fair as always as she supported Angad when he impulsively went to Nainital.

The basketball scene was touching and the metaphor of the ball and the hoop

Are you writing another AK ff? Will be happy to read another one as there limited on this section.

Continue soooon
Jannat

fab part di

i don't think, u need to rewrite the last scene...kripa's reaction was impulse. both have apologized to each other, the whole problem was that who would take the initiative to accept that he/she was wrong at that time.

jo conversation/argument honi chahiye thi, it can still happen..where this scene ended.

btw, kitna bhola hai angad, how easily he accepted that this shirt is gifted.. same if prithvi was there then he would have said, NO kripa... this shirt had been stitched by U, batao, kahan hai mera bachcha ???😆

Originally posted by: vallanki

Angad showed kripa where did she go wrong. He waited in hail storm even though she asked him to leave. But kripa left him when he asked to leave...That time she wanted to lead her own life. Now Angad wanted his life with kripa!!

Sorry, for this interference vallanki, but I disagree here...

I don't think kripa was wrong when she left angad... that time they exchanged heated arguments, and both of them felt that he/she is right and the other one is wrong. Under these circumstances angad's asking kripa to go away from his life and house, I don't think that Kripa or any self esteemed girl would tolerate this act. How is this possible that any girl's bf say in front of her, leave, i don't want to see u again... and that girl keep standing over there. that's why kripa's decision was correct in my opinion.

here, angad's situation is different, He came back to ranikhet to apologize kripa and wants to get back in her life, and he is well aware that kripa could say anything in anger to him, and he had to bear that

they both disliked their acts two year ago, but not now, ab dono thande pad chuke hein

reserved for comments

revised chapter coming up