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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeee updt dear...
luved it to d core..
ws a really sad one... my sajan... 😭 😭
pllzzzz bring back sam soon...
n pllzzzzz do cont soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice one
waiting for mayur's date
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update.......loved it, plzz bring back samrat soon. will be waiting for the next part and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ud
but feeling sad 4 my sajan
ples sajan ko jaldie mila do
cont soooooooooon
n thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
n a nice promo
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Posted: 15 years ago
part=61 nupur was in her room...selecting dress for her date..as the day was of there date...when gunjan came.. g=di.... n=are gunjan ana bahar kyu khari ha..aur meri madat karna..dekh na mujhe kuch samajh nahi araha ha ke kya pehnu???? g=di tum kahi bahar jarahiho??? n=ha...woh...........meri ek frend ke sath ghumne jarhihu... g=accha..di ma na orphanage jarhihu...ghar pe bore horahihu isiliye..tum chalijana.. n=gunjan...kamsekam meri madat... g=di tum to janti ho na ke mujhe ye sab pata nahi..plzzz...ok?? bye.. n=gunjan...he bhagwan ap plzz ye ek mahine jaldse khatam karke..samrat ko jaldse jald wapas layiye... mayank... m=mr mayank..aj sab thikse karna ha..kyuki aj sam nahi ha etra madat karnekeliye..so no galti aur galtise bhi kuch garbar hui to nupur tera chehra bigad degi..... r=mayank... m=are bapde bhabi... r=mayank..are tu itna sajh dhajke kaha jaraha ha??? m,=woh.....bhabi..mera ek dost ha jiske ghar pe lunch ah waha jaraha hu.. r=oh...phir to aur bhi accha ha.. m=kyu?? r=ma aur armaan bhi armaan ke dost ke gharpe khanepe jaraheha top..badme milenge ok???? m=ji bhabi.... r=bye... m=bye...
nupur is perfectly ready..she is wearing the white dress of her first date..n mayank is wearing his first days outfit...nupur was a bit nervous...
n=nupur tu bhii na.,...ghabrati kyu ha?? are nupur aur ghabrana??? nahi nahi ye teri dictionary me nahi ha..aur na hogi...tu to rajkumari ha phir...nahi yaar pehli date ha ghabrana to ha...thorasa....
then her cell rang...it was mayank...
n=hello mayank..tum kaha ho??? ma tayyar hu..
m=nupur mane tumhe jaha aneko kaha tha...tum adhe ghanteke andaar wahi ajao..ok???
n=par...
before she could say anything mayank disconnected the line.,..
n=ajeeb ha pehli date ha..aur ye mujhe lene bhi nahi ayega..kaisa ladka ha????
scene shifts to gunjan..she was in the orphanage playing with the kids..to make herself not feel lonely...there was a girl named pari..
p=gunjan didi..aj ap akeli.,....pichli baar to apne samrat bhaiyako sath laya tha..aj nahi aye kya????
gunjan became quiet...
p=unse kehdena ma unse gussa hu....bohot..wada kia tha unhone aur..
g=pari..beta samrat bhaiya na kaam se bahar gaye ha....thoridino baad wapas ayenge...jab ayenge na tab ma unhe khichke apke paas leke ayungi.....ok???
p=ok....didi samrat bhaiya nahi ha isiliye ap itni udas ha?????
gunjans eyes were teary.....she quickly hugged her,.....
mayur..
nupur reaches the place were mayank had asked her to come...it was a place near the hilll...with flower garden all over..wind was blowing..n nupur could see a beautiful shed decoarted a little far......she smiles...n goes to the shed...there she finds a bench in which red roses were kept with a note...nupur took the flowers n looked here n there for mayank..then she read the note..
reshan si ha ye hawaye sanam...ao zara pass aye sanam...............................
after reading the note nupur smiles...n looks for mayank...then she hears someone singing for her..nupur turns around n looks that mayank was standing.....
m=heehheee.....lalallaaaa...resham si ha ye hawaye sanam....
ao zara passs aye sanam....hhhmmmmhhhhmmmmm............nupur smiles n runs to him...n stops a little far.....then mayank starts walking to her..
m=resham si ha ye hawaye sanam.,...
ao zara pass aye sanam....
jage jage armaan ha jage jage hum...nupur blushes
oo..jage jage armaan ha jage jage hum.....
o jane do ab fasle kuch to kum....he walks upto her n gives her a single rose.....nupur takes it n smiles...
jage jage armaan ha jage jage hum....
oo jage jage armaan ha jage jage hum.......
both started to wlak together,.......the wind started blowing more.....nupur's hair was coming on her face mayank came close to her n moved them..nupur blushed run away from him..n started to run in the flowers.....mayank was staring at her...
m=angarayi leke hawa ha chali...
to kyu na khushboo bikhere kali..?????
n=o khushboo hawao ma kaise bhare????nupur takes some flowers from the garden..
kaliya ha sharmati hay kya kare?????she indicate sher as she was blushing from mayank....
m=kya pata ha ye kya?? sharme ha ya saza.....he walks upto her...n holds her hand..
n=kyu ha betabiya intezaar ek saza.....nupur doesnt look at him..
m=ek paal ki bhi duri to ab ha sitam.......mayank turns her n pulls to him...then they both dance on slow motion...
m=jage jage armaan ha jage jage hum..
oo jage jage armaan ha jage jage hum..........
nupur pushes him n runs...mayank also follows her..then her holds her one hand..n twirls her around the whole garden.....then they both falll..nupur falls over him.......mayank moves her hair back..then they both sit on the ground..mayank holds her hand...
m=chup rehna chaha tha rehna sake...
phirbi jo kehna tha kehna sake...
n=ooo..tum mujhse kuch bhi kahona kaho...nupur puts her hand on his moouth
ese to khoye hue na raho.....mayank kisses her hand...
m=ab to jo hosoho baat dilki suno...
n=kehti ha dhadkane kehbhi do kehbhi do.....
m=tumhare ha hum..ha tumhari kasam...mayank takes her in his arms...n starts walking to the shed....
m=jage jage armaan ha jage jage hum.....
oo jage jage armaan ha jage jage hum...
n=ha resham si ha ye hawaye sanam...
ao zara pass aye sanam....
jage jage armaan ha jage jage hum......oooo
jage jage armaan ha jage jage hum...
oo jane do ab fasle kuch to kum.....
m=jage jage armaan ha jage jage hum..
jage jage armaan ha jage jage hum...
nupur rests her head on his chest.....then they reach the shed.....then they sit on the bench...
n=mayank...ye sab.....tumne??? i mean...booht accha ha..its beautifull..aur kitna romantic ha...
m=thank you..tumhe accha laga.,...yehi kaffi ha....wase aj tum kisis simran se kaam nahi bohot zyada lagrahiho...
n=thanks...
m=wase..nupur mane ye tumhare lie kia....apne ab..i hope tumhe koi kami..
n=ssshhhhhhhh
nupur puts her finger on his lipss..
n=tumne jitna kia ha...utna mere lie bohot ha...thanks mayank..ma humari pehli date kabhi nahi bhulungi..
m=ma bhi..
then mayank starts coming close to her..there lips were not a single way far..nupur turned her face n he kissed on her cheeks...nupur closed her eyes.....then they both loked at eachother n gave a sweet smile......
the next day......gunjan came to the hospitall...nupur n mayank had late duties.....gunjan came early..she came to the locker room..n saw it was empty.....n started remebering her n sam's memorable moments..then nupur came from back..
n=hi gunjan..
gunjan quickly wiped the tear...
g=d tum...
m=hi girls....
n=hey...
m=hi gunjan.,....
g=hi..di tum donoki dutyto badme thi na phir kaise??????
n=ma jaldi uthgayi to socha.....
m=ha..aur mujhe bhai ne jaldi bulaya..
g=di..chale?? brifeing keliye der horahiha.....
gunjan went from there......
n=dekha....ye a....khudko sirf kaam me uljha rakkha ha...taki..
m=janta hu..chalo..dekhte ha...
gunjan was walking from the corrider...when her dupatta got stuck.....she turned around n saw it was stuck with a tool....she was taking it out..when a hand took it ut..n gave gunjan looked up..n saw samrat...he was smiling...gunjan was shopcked n surprised.....she was going to touch him....n he..
g=ssas........sssaa....samrat!!!!!!!!!!
n he was vanished.......
g=samrat........chala gaya??? mera..vehem.....
then gunjan went to the nurse station..riddhima was giving duties while gunjan was not paying attention
g=mujhe har jaga samrat kyu dikhraha ha??
she looked up n saw samrat behind riddhima..he started to walk at her...
s=janam...dekhlo....mit gayi duriyaa....
ma yaha hoo..yaha ..ho yaha hooo yaha..he came to her..n again vanished....gunjan was confused......then samrat again came form her back..
s=janam dekhlo..mit gayi duriya...
ma yaha hoo yaha hu yaha hu yaha....he holded her hand n pulled her to him..
kaisi sarhate kaisi majburiya...
ma yaha hoo yaha hoo yaha hoo yaha...samrat was vanished..n gunjan came into sense.nupur was calling him......gunjan went to duty..there she saw samrat talking to the patient in the general ward..she walked n saw him again in the chindrens ward palying with kids...gunjan started crying..n went from there....at night she was sitting in the window hoolding his picture n crying..
s=tum chupana sakogi ma woh raaz hu...he came from front..
tum bhulana na sakogi woh andaaz hu....he made her stand...then gunajn hugged him.samrat bbroke the hug..then he kissed her shoulder gunjan tried to walk...he holded her dupatta n pulled her back..
s=gunjata hu jo dilme jo ha raha kyu.....holds her from waist...
ma tumahri hi dilki to awaz hu....gunjan smiles at him..he picks her up...
s=sun sako to suno...dhadkano ki zaban...
ma yaha hoo yaha hoo yaha hoo yaha..he pins her against the wall..
kaisi sarhate kaisi majburia....
ma yaha hoo yaha hoo yaha hoo yaha...he walks back,....gunjan tries him stop...
next mroning..mayur n gunjan r sitting in the cafe..mayur r talking......nn gunjan is silent..then sam comes n feeds her food..gunjan eats it....then she was sitting alone in the firescape..when samrat comes n blows air on her face...gunjan closes her eyes..when she openes he was gone...
it was raining..gunjan was on the terreace.....when she sees samrat in the rain..
s=mahi ma ab tumhare kahaylo me hu..
ma ajwabo hu...ma sawalo me hu...
gunjan rushes to him..n hugss....both r drenching in the rain..
s=ma tumhare har ek khwab me hu basa...
ma tumhari nazar ki gujarome hu...he kisses her eyes....gunjan turns around....n again she sees he was gone..
dekti ho mujhe.,..dekhti ho jaha sam comes from other side..
ma yaha hoo yaha hoo..yaha hoo yaha....
janamdekhlo mit gayi duriya......he takes her hand..n pulls her to him..
ma yaha hoo yaha hoo yaha hoo yaha,....then he holds her from her waist...
kaisi sarhate kaisi majburiyaa....
ma yaha hoo yaha hoo yaha hoo yaha....samrat leaves her n goees..gunjan runs in her room...n closes her door..n startes crying seeing samrats pic..
g=lot ao samrat,.....plzzzz lot aooo.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
how sweet and gunji bichari plz samrat ko jaldi lao
-Jyotika- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeee updt dear..
mindblowinggg...
i ws literally crying while reading d sajan(gunjan) part.. 😭
pllzzzzzzz bring back sam...
n do cont soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome updt..
really loved it..
gunji😭
plzzz do cont soon..
thanx for d pm..
Edited by charmee_sammy - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was awesome...poor gunjan please bring samrat back i can't see her crying and getting pain for his samrat!!

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