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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi maisha
awesome updte
it was wonderful
loved the romance of all couples.
lovely

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Posted: 15 years ago
wowow i really love your part 58 plzzzzzzzzzzz contuied soon plzz add me to your pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome dear
loved it
n song choice was too gud
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Posted: 15 years ago
mindblowing update yaar!!! hanks for the pm!! plz update the next part soon..!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey it was awesome plz continue updating
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Posted: 15 years ago
part=59 the next day....
locker room......
mayur n sajan were talking about the party..
m=kaal wakemehi bohot maza aya..sam u rockedd yaar..kya time pe gana start kia..
s=tune bhi to kia...so we both rockedd....
m=as usual...
n=by god..sirf tum dono nahi the party me..hhum sab the..
m=ji ha..par idea samrat ka tha....aur gana bhi..
n=tum to chup hi raho..jab dekho samrat ki piiche piche..
nupur made a angry look n turned towards her locker..seeing this mayank went upto her...
m=kya hua??? meri jhansiki rani gusaa ha???
n=tum kabhibi meri side nahi lete....jab dekho..samrat...
m=koi baat nahi shadike baad tumhara gulam bana lena...
n=hay..so sweett!! par mujhe abhise chahiye.....
m=thora time lagega...par hojayega.....
n=ok......
s=wase chashmish..kaal dance bohot accha hua rite??
g=ha..
s=dance ke ilawa aur bhi kuch....
g=samrat...tum bhi na...jab dekho..mazak karte rehte ho....
s=mazak kaha..apni girlfrend ke sath thorasa flirting,....
sabhi interns nurse station pe report kare...
g=chalo...
s=lets go...
gunjan left samrat was also going when he saw mayur were stilll talking...then sometime he glared at them...
s=ab nupur...mayank agar tum logoki bate khatam na hui ho to unhe pause karke rakho....aur chalo.,.duty pe jana ha..warna humare bhai aur tumhari didi itne duties denge ke pause kiye hue bate bhi badme nahi keh paogi...
n=ab..ha chalo...kya mayank har waqt sirf mazak sujhta ha??????chalo..kabhito kaam kiya karo..
m=are mane....
then mayank couldnt say anything had to leave with samrat n nupur....
nurse station.....
r=ap log pach minute late ha...ap jante ha ke in pach minute ek patient keliye kitne kimti ha?????
ar=rehne do riddhima..ye to bohot bare doctors ha na...apne time ke hisaab se ate ha jate ha....
n=ma'm woh....
r=dr nupur..kya mane apse kuch pucha?????
n=sorry ma;m....
r=better...ab sabki saza ha aj ap saab double duties karenge..aur kisiko agar problem ha to uske report pe mujhe red mark laganeme koi problem nahi hha.....
ar=red mark?????
r=ha armaan...inhe ek red mark dena chahiye tab shayed inhe inki duties ka ehsaass ho.....
ar=woh...riddhima tum to bilkul dr kirti ko copy karrahiho balki unhe bhi piche chod dogi hitler banneme...
riddhima gives armaan n angry look..while the others laugh...
r=quiettt internsss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! armaan tum ek senior doctor hoke....in interns ke sath?????
ar=sorry....
r=interns.....dr samrat n gunjan...ap log general ward...aur dr nupur mayank...ap dono special ward....
sajan+mayur=ok ma'm....
r=aur ap dr armaan...apko round pe jana ha....mere sath..
ar=ha...
r=abnhi.....folllow me...aur apsaab...resume your duties....
sajan n mayur vanished.....
r=tum bhi na,....kya karte rehte ho..interns ke samne???
ar=are..kuch galat to nahi kaha.....itni zorse chillaogi to terrace se bhi koi sun lega aur bhag jayega...itni zorse dr kirti bhi nahi chillati thi...
r=armaan..chalo..
then armaan n riddhima leaves for round...
mayur....
n=ufffoooo....ek ghantese kaam kaam aur bass kaam....mayank chalo na cafe chalte ha...
m=nupur panra minute baad wasehi break ha..phir chalenge.....
n=tum bhi na.....ma boho thak gayi hu mayank...plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
m=nupur kaam karo....
patient=pa
pa=kya hua dr nupur..dr mayank kuch zyada hi busy lagrahe ha kaam me???
n=aur nahito kya...jab dekho kaam meri taraf koi dhyan nahi.......
pa=ap dono abhi tak date pe nahi gaye?????
n=kya??? date...apki tabbayat to thik ha na???? mayank aur date?? usse date pata bhi ha.....nahi...jab puchega na..to me to behoshhi hojaungi....
patient n nupur give high five.....mayank hears all this...n smiles naughtily...
m(in mind)=nupur...tumhe date pe jana ha??? to thik ha esi date pe leke jaunga ke kabhi bhulna bhi chaho to bhul nahi paogi.....
sajan.....
gunjan n samrat were standing at opposite directions.....samrat was feeling bored as his work was over waiting for gunjan to complete her work n then to go to cafe...
s=chashmish plzzz jaldi karo na...
g=samrat tumhe bhook lagi ha tum jao..mujhe abhi kaam ha.....
s=ake khatam karlena....wase bhi aj to double duites ha na.,...ayengeto phir yahi na....
g=samrat.....plzzz bass pach minute....
samrat got angry...n he went upto her....
s=chashmish tumhara boyfrend kabse tumse plzz plzz keh raha kuch to daya karo.....itna plzz to ma tumhe date pe janekeliye bhi nahi bolunga...
g=date??? abhi ye date kaha se agaya???
s=aya nahi..apr kabhi na kabhi to jayenge na...
g=jab jayenge atb dekhenge....
s=chashmish abhi agar tum mere sath cafe nahi chali....to..
g=to??????
s=to ma tumhe uthake leke jaunga.
saying he was going to take her up.....gunjan backed off...
g=samrat ye hospital ha...
s=mujhe koi farak nahi...chalrahiho ya???
g=ok ok..chalo..
then samrat takes to her to the cafe..where mayur were waiting for them...
n=kaha the aplog??? kitne mahino,.,...sadiose hum apki rah dek rahe ha...
m=nupur kabhito apni filmy duniase bahar aya karo......
n=mayank..meri duniya filmose shuru hoti hja aur filmopehi khatam...samjhe??
m=ha.....
s=nupur kuch chize apni is behen ko bhi sikha do....
g=samrat....tum bhi na...do kaam khatam anhi horaha tha isilie....
m=acha bhook lagi ha kuch mangaye....
s=ha....
just then samrat's pager rang....
s=abe..ab kya ha??? oh shitttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
g=kya hua samrat???
n=wat happened sam????
s=dr kirtiko lever pain shuru hogaya ha..mujhe jaana ha...
saying he rushed to the ot...n mayur gunjan followed him...armaan n riddhima were already there..
r=ma'm..ap chinta mat kijiye..sab thik hoga....hurry...
an=di,..plzzz...ghabrayiye mat..
k=riddhima.....mera...aaaa...bohot dard horaha ha...
then they take her inside...while armaan was getiing ready for the surgery...meanwhile samrat n other gets there...
s=sir..dr kirti..
ar=abhi surgery karni ha..bohot zyada pain ha...time waste kia to donoki jaan khatre me par sakti ha...jaldi andar ajao...
s=ji...
then smarat also quickly gets ready...
n=all the ebst..
m=best of luck
s=thanks...
g=all the best samrat..
s=thanks chashmish.....
then he gets inside...n the surgery starts......all are waiting outside.....riddhima is praying to the god...n mayur n consoling her......then after one hour armaan comes out..n samrat comes out taking the baby...
m=congrats anjie..tum ek baby boy ki masi ho...
an=reallly??/ woh......
at=congrats,......
s=sister baby ko ward me lejayiye....
mayur=congratulations sam...surgery successful thi..
s=thanks yaar...
r=congrats dr armaan..
ar=thank you dr riddhima..
mu=hum dr kirtise mil sakte ha?????
ar=abhi woh sorahiha....badme...
s=ek ghante badd.....
an=ok........
later all r in the cabin..
k=thanks armaan...thanks samrat..tum dono ne mera bohot accha khayal rakkha..
ar=dr kirti jab hum inters the aur mujhe jab chote lagti thi..tab apbhi mera khayal rakhti thi na????
s=ha..aur humara kaam hiha marizoki kahayl rakhna...
ar=so..no thank you..
k=samrat tum dekhna meri baat sach hogi...
s=kaunsi baat????
k=tum age jake ek booht acche doctor banoge...
s=matlab abhi nahi ho??
r=abhi accha intern ho..humari umaar me acche doctor banoge.....
m=aur hum saab????
n=ha..not fair ma;m......
k=tum sab bhi ok....................
ar=ab interns...sablog nurse staion pe ao..mujhe announce ment karni ha....
all=ok..
nurse station...
all are gathered when armaan comes...
ar=mane ap sabko isiliye bulaya ha ke jaisiake ap saba jante ha ke haar saal ek doctors conference hota ha usa me..jissme sanjeevani ke intern ko sanjeevaniki taraf se bheja jata ha...
r=aur iss saal bhi hoga...agle hafte..aur humne jiss intern ko choose kia ha...woh ha dr samrat...
mayur n gunjan clapped...
n=by god..sam...congrats...
ar=kyuki intership ke pehle mahine me ye intern of the montth bane..aur marks sabs ezyada inhike ha..so inhe jana ha....ek mahine keliye....
hearing this sajans face becomes sad..more gunjans face.......samrat looked at her...
r=so dr samrat..ap tayyaria karlijiye..apki flight parso ha..okk???
s=ji ma'm..........
ar=back to duties.....
m=woh mere bhai..awesome....
mayank hugs huim..samratw as happy but also sad...he looked at gunjan who was sad......then she left from there...nupur n mayank saw n understood that...
enjoy guys..i'll update the next part very sooon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update yaar!!!
Do update soon.........
first to comment yay!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee updt dear..
happy for sam... bt sad for sajan.... 1 month..?? 😲
anyways... luved it...
pllzzzzz do cont soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update...........poor sajan.......1 month long judaai. will be waiting for more, continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb update dear
bt sajan......... 😭
continue asap
thanx for the pm

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