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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome updt..
loved it..
bt sajan...too sad...
plzzzzz cont soon..
thanx for d pm..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
dooo updatee it sonnnn dearr wonderfulll updateee
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyyy maisha
Amazing update
So sad sajan will be separated for whole one month
But I guess mayur date is soon
Plzzzzz continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update!!!
Ridz as new hitler wow
kool
cont soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Good part...
But for one month????
Hate it....
Cont fast...

Love Sana.... 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowowow tht was awesome part
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great Update
aw poor Gunjan
does he have to go??
i hope GUnjan can go with hiM!!
pllz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
part=60 gunjan went from there....n she went to the locker room crying......samrat folloowed her n went upto her...he placed his hand on her shoulder..... s=chashmish,..,.... g=....................................... s=idhar dekkho....meri taaraf.. he turned her around....gunjan's eyes were red....n tears were flowing..... s=tum khush nahi hoke mujhe itna bara golden chance mila ha??? g=nahi samrat...esi koi baat nahi ha...ma bohot khush hu tumhari tarakki se par..dukh isliye ke tum mujhse ek mahine keliye door..ma yaha kya karungi samrat??? aur woh bhi akele???? mera maan nahi lagega... s=chashmish......chp hojao...rona band karo... he wiped her tears... s=dekho..mera kaha maan ha tumhe chodke janeka?>???? mujhe bilkul khushi nahi mili ha ke mujhe tumhe ek mahine keliye chodke jana ha..par agar meri is tarakkise tumhe mujhse alag rehke udass hoke rona parega..to nahi chahiye mujhe esa chance..ma abhi bhai se mana karke ata hu... g=nahi samrat..tum esa kuch nahi karoge.....ma khush ho tumahari success se..aur bhi khush hongi jab tum ek mahineke baad wapas aoge good news leke...tab sabse zyada mahi khush hongi...i promise..isiliye tum apna jana cancel maat karna... s=mera bass chale to ma tumhe ek minute ke lie bhi na jane du... g=janti hu..tabhito..uss raat.,......khidkise... s=ha......par tum plzz maat rona... g=ok.. then gunjan rested her head on his shoulder n samrat responded back...mayur were watching from out....nupur was also in a teary eye...mayank put his hand on her shoulder... m=tum thik ho??? n=ha..gunjan ko udass dekke accha nahi laga.... m=woh abhi udass ha...par jab sam wapas ayega tab dekhna uske per zameen parhi nahi parenge... n=ha.....so to ha.. m=aur dekhan ye ek mahina kaise beet jayega pata bhi nahi chalega... n=i hope so........ later at night...mayank was helping samrat in his packing... m=sam..thora garam kappda leja..thand kagegi... s=thik ha... while mayank was taking out sam's clothes from his cupboard...samrat secretly took out a pic of gunjan from his drawer n put it in the suitcase...mayank saw that... m=dude..is taarhse chupchupke tasveer under dalneki koi zarurat nahi ha....kya mujhe nahi pata??? s=pata nahi dude...par usse akela chodke janeka maan nahi ha... m=samajhta hu dude..woh bhi bohot udass ha.. s=ha..ajtak kabhi usse itna rote hue nahi dekha.....mayank..ek vaada karega??? m=bol na yaar...ye bhi koi puchne wali baat ha???? s=mere janeke baat gunjan ka khayal rakhega???? is mahineme uske khayal rakhna plzzz.... m=dude..tu nishchint hoke ja..ma aur nupur ha na..usse sambhal lenge.... s=thanks.. then both brothers hugeed...then armaan n riddhima came.. ar=are..kya horaha ha??>/ bhai bhai me itna pyaar larai nahi??? r=har koi tumhari tarah nahi hota.. s=nahi bhai..esi baat nahi ha.. m=woh..kaal sam jaraha ha na..isiliye... ar=mere bhai..tu bohot age baar...bilkul meri atarh..aur success hokehi ana.. s=ji bhai..ap dekhna...waha sab thik hoga..apka ashirwad jo ha mere sath.. r=mayank..agli baari tumhari ha ok????? m=sure bhabi.... r=samrat packing karli????
s=ha bhabi..bas hogaya..
ar=abhi chal soja..kaal subhah ter flight ha rite??
s=ji bhai....
next morning...airport......
mayank n samrat were standing....samrat was waiting for gunjan.......
m=sam tujhe immigration keliye der hojayegi...
s=chashmish ko ajane de...
just then gunur came.....gunjan looked at samrat n samrat at her..both were very sad...then they went to them...
n=hi sam.....
s=hey nupss...
n=all the best..aur jaldi ana.....thik ha?????
s=ha..
nupur hugged samrat.....samrat pointed mayank to take nupur take out.....mayank understood...nupur also got that....
n=ab maaynk mere sath zara ao na...mujhe car thikse park karni ha..gunjan hum abhi aye......
mayur went from there.....samrat looked at gunjan who was shooking her head..he came close to her...then made her face up by hoolding her chin...tears were in her eyes...
s=sari raat soyi nahi????????
gunjan nodded in a negative.........samrat smiled at her...
s=chashmish tumne mujhse promise kia tha na ke tum nahi rogi?? mujhe ese wish karna ha????
gunjan looked at him n without saying anything ran n hugged him tighly..n started to cry...mayur were watching all this from behind the walll.....n then nupur also started to cry n went from there...mayank followed her...
g=samrat...plzz jaldi ana.......ma tumhare begar kaise...plzzzzz
s=sssssssshhhhhhhh..chashmish plzz maat ro..ma jaldi ajunga...humare pyaar me ye waqt kaise guzar jayega pata bhi nahi chalega....
he broke the hug...n cupeed her face n wiped the tears...
s=ab ma chalu??????
g=ok...
s=apna khayal rakhna..aur ha ma tumhe phone karunga....tum bhi karna....aur bata nahi hui to sms to dogi na???
g=ha...apna khayal rakhna samrat ok?????
s=tum bhi....
then samrat left her hands..oth were crying...they didnt want to let wachother go...but then samrat let go off her hands...n took the luggage n began to walk..at the opposite side....gunjan also turned n started to walk...in the bg song was palying....
jane safar pe esa kya hua ha???both were crying n walking...
meri har kadam aur tera rasta ha....they were walking slowly at the opposite sides....
dard judai ka is dilme bharke...gunjan was not able to speak anything..
dhundenge tujhko raho me phirse....she turnes around n looks at samrat who was doing the immigration...
tere bin suna suna lage.....jaag mujhe suna suna lage..
tujhko dhundenge ye akhe.....both were looking at eachother...samrat was going to go to the planes way..last time looking at her...n gunjan was also pretending to smile..but crying n showing him bye...
na ja zindagi me akee........................samrat gives her a flying kiss..n goes....gunjan also turns around n remebers all the memories with him.......there confession..dance....his flirting.....n all other moments...
mayur...
nupur came to the parking..mayank also came there..nupur hugged him...
m=nupur sambhalo apne apko..
n=kyu mayank?? esa kyu hua?? gunjan ko..itna dukh..kyu???? dekh rahehona....samratse beecharnea dard..ye ekk mahina uske lie ek saal jaisa ha mayank..
m=janta hu...par agar tum ese rougi to kaise chalega?? gunjan ko kaun sambhalega??/ zara socho....samrat ke na rehnese humhe usse sambhalna ha...ok???
n=ha..par ma gunjan ko ese nahi dekh sakti..
m=iske lie humhe uske samne sab normaal rakhna hoga..taki usse lage ke sab normaal ha...ok?
n=ok..
then gunjan came there..nupur wiped her tears......gunjan was upset..her eyes were red...seing her in this condition nupur started talking..
n=uss admikito...pata ha gunjan..ek minute ma late hoti to usne meri gari tok di hoti by godd...
g=di chale??? hum late horaheha....duty keliye late hoajyenge...
saying gunjan gets in the car..mayur also gets in ..n they reach sanjeevani..
r=interns...apki problem kya ha?? aplogone kya kasam lia ha ke brifeng me ap log har roz 15 minute late ayenge???
n=ma'm..hum woh dr samrat ko chodne..
r=dr nupur..mujhe excuses pasand nahi ha..so agese dhyan rakhiyega..warna marks katneme mujhe koi problem nahi hogi...aplogoki duties duty chart pe ha...now get to work...
mayur rushes.....gunjan slowly walks..riddhima sees her like this n stops her...
r=gunjan...kya hua??? tu thikto hana???
g=ha..ma..thikk hu..ma'm..
saying she goes from there...day by day pasisng..it has been 15 days..gunjan is still very sad sad.....samrat n she hardly gets anytime to talk..when gunjan is free..sam is working n when sam is free...gunjan has duties..they could only contact with sms...nupur also is very stressed about gunjan....one day mayur...
m=kya hua chupchap ho???
n=maayank..gunie....bilkul wasehi ha..hasti to bilkul bhi nahi ha...kya karu mayank??? aur ye din to jaise kattehi nahi..
m=chill nupur sab thik hoga..ab aur zyada din nahi ha..
n=pata ha sam se gunjan thikse baat bhi nahi kar pati..
m=malum ha.,..par abhi ma tumhara mood kaise thik hoga..idea...
n=kya????
m=date pe chalogi????
n=kya?????????????????
nupur was almost going to fall..when mayank holded her...
m=kya hua????mane esa kya kaha???
n=tum aur date???? woh..im impressed
m=chalogi???
n=ha...par kab???
m=um..is sunday...dopaherse leke sham tak tum mere sath rahogi ok????
n=ok.....par mayank.....gunjan...
m=ek kaam karte ha fillhaal hum chalte ha...samrat jab lot ayega...tab hum dono unhe bhejenge.....
n=ok.....hay mera sweetu mere stah rehke kitna romantic hogaya ha...
m=ab duty pe chale?????
n=ha...
hope u guys liked it............................
promo....of the next update.....
m=resham si ha ye hawaye sanam....
both r in a place like field...n filled with flowers....n plants..with a beautiful shed....nupur is running in the field....playing with flowers..mayank is staring at her......
ao zara pass aye sanam....
he is twriling her with his one hand holding her another hand.....n then pulls her...
n=keh bhi do keh bhi do...
both r dancing in slow motion.....
both=jage kage armaan ha...jage jage hum.............
they r very close to eachother....nupur is holding his shoulder...n they are smiling at eachother......
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi maisha
Awesome and wonderful update
loved it.

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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome ud dear

aww...!!
my poor sajan
plzzz bring sammy bak soon...!!
continue asap
thanx for the pm

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