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Manu

@rmanu7382

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: sania_58
nice fic
plz continue soon & send a PM to me

Hey Sania...
Thanks for reading dear... stay tuned for lots of masti...I'll def PM you from next part onwards!!!

Love Manu..

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: rmanu7382

hahahaha.. Deepa.. tumne bhi dekha... waise main soch rahi hun ki Raj ka naam change kar deti hun.. what say... Kashish ke saath sujal naam hi aacha lagta hai and Vice versa.. wot say !!!

Thanks for reading dear... stay tuned..

Love Manu

yes i agree with u completely.................sujal kashish kashish sujal it always resembles like romeo juliet n other legendary jodis names....................but its ur call dear as long as its Rajeev n Aamna....................

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Adnan

@Mischeivous

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Hey Manu !! Just read all part of your FF. I like it but looking foward to more of SK or RA whichevea u prefer. Have never been a Piyush fan cant stand that guy lol. I would like if you do change Rajveer's name to Sujal.

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Manu

@rmanu7382

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

OMG... is tht u Adi....
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
okay okay Boss.. as u say.. will change the name..
but IDB.... u read it.. :)

Stay here now..
and dnt run.. else NY aakar hi marungi..

Love Manu

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

pls ur fic is nice pls cont

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Hey where have u gone missing??

Edited by togepe30 - 15 years ago

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Manu

@rmanu7382

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: golu_1677
pls ur fic is nice pls cont

yeah.. I will soon.. Thanks for following it :)

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Manu

@rmanu7382

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: togepe30
Hey where have u gone missing??

m here only.. just that things are a bit HOT at workplace and I really m not getting time ..
but will surely post the next part this week...

Thanks Dear for reading and loving it ..

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Ok Manu.....we r w8ing for the UD then. 😃

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Manu

@rmanu7382

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

Hey Friendz... m back.. m really sorry for the delay.. but there is lots of work at the workplace these days and iss week to subah 7 baje se training hai.. but aaj mujhe bahut mann kiya aage ki story likhne ka.. so ... here I am....
I really appreciate all of you.. 4 taking time out to read the story... love you guys !!!!

HUMEIN AISI MOHABBAT HAI TUMSE

Raj bahar hota hai woh soch raha hota hai..
mujhe aise achanak se kya ho gaya..pehle to kabhi kissi ko dekh kar kuch bhi mehsoos nahin hua..fir aaj Kashish ke saath Dance karke ek..ek..aanjana sa.. fir bhi apna sa..ek andekha sa...fir bhi jaise harr roz dekha hua sa..ek ehsas jaisa mehsoos hua..
ek aarzoo hai..tumhein paane ki..
tumhein apna banane ki..
tumhare saath zindagi bitane ki..
tujh main khud ko bhool jaane ki...

Dr Raj..aapko pehli nazar main pyar ho gaya hai..the moment he thought about this thought that came into his mind..in his thoughts..he hit himself hard on his head and with a no no smile.. composed himself to go back inside to be the part of the party again..

Udhar Angad, Kripa, Akshat aur Charu sab baat kare rahe hote hain.. Kashish aur Raj ke
baare main..
Angad: Aaj bahut dino ke baad Kashish ke chehre par thoda sukoon dekha hai..
Kripa: haan maine bhi dance ke time note kiya tha ki Kashish bechain nahin thi aaj..Kaash woh hamesha aisi hi rahe..
Akshat: hmm.. yeh baat to hai..aur usmain aaye iss change ka reason shayad Dr Raj hai..
Everyone looks at him..
Akshat: are maine aisa kuch nahin kaha, maine to bas wahi kaha jo maine notice kiya..
shayad tum logon ne dekha nahin..Kashish ke chehre par jo chain hai..woh dance ke time
se hi hai..main bas yahi dua karta hun ki woh hamesha hi khush rahe. Piyush ka bacha..
waise hi mujhe aacha nahin lagta tha..pata nahin kahish ko iss halat main chod kar
chala kahan gaya hai... kahin mil jaaye na.. to uski woh haalat karunga ki yaad rakehga..

In the meantime.. Raj joins the gang standing there and listens to Akshat speaking the last sentence.
Raj: kiski dunayi karne ki soch rahe ho Akshat, mujhe maarne ka irada to nahin hai na tera..
Raj ko achnak aaya dekh aur Akshat ki baat sun lete dekh,sab ek ddosre ki aor dekhna
shuru kar dete hain, kynki unki samajh main nahin aata hai ki Raj se woh log kya kahein..

Akshat: are Raj, tujhe maar kar main khud marna nahin chahta hun..tujhe maar diya to Charu mujhe maar dalegi...tum uske iklote bhai jo ho..bhai kaha hai to charu ne tumhein dil se maana bhi hai...aur agar main main maar gaya to charu .. yeh bolte bolte Akshat ki halat kharab ho jaati hai ....nahin nahin.. tujhe to main kabhi bhi nahin maar sakta... sab hass padte hain..

Angad: are yeh Kashish kaha reh gayi.. abhi to yahi thi..pata nahin kaha chali gayi..Tabhi Kashish aati hai..
Kashish: aacha mujhe dhoondha ja raha hai..
Akshat: are aacha hua tum aagayi.. main to police main jaane hi waala tha..
Kashish: Police.. kyn?
Akshat: are tumhare gum hone ki FIR likhvane ke liye..
Kashish: Akki .. tu bhi na..main kahin nahin gayi thi.. bas mama ke paas gayi thi. tum log jahan ekhate hote ho to tum logon ke saamne haar 5 min main mujhe hazari lagani padti hai.. warna pata nahin kya haal karoge mera tum log...

Kripa: wahi to..tumhari fikr hoti hai isliye..
Kashish: are bhai, main theek hun.. aachi hun..

Kripa: aacha aab yeh sab baatein chodo..tum logon ko yaad hai na ki kal 31st hai...
Charu: are haan.. yaad aaya.. aab aayega mazaaa....
Akshat: kyn aisa kya hai kal.. tabhi woh Kripa ki taraf dekh kar apna sar hilata hai aur smile karta hai.. areeeeee kal to mera fav day hota hai US ka...

Kripa: aur nahin to kya.. bhooton ko bhooton se milna jo hota hai..
Angad: are haan.. kal to holloween hai.. mast mazaa aayega...aur iss bhoot ka bhi din hai..
Akshat: to sahi hai.. kal ki bhooton ki party, iss bhoot ke ghar par..sab aache aache bhoot ban kar aana.. are kal to Raj bhi yahi hoga.. kyn hai na Raj..

Raj: jo ki Kashish ko gaur se dekh raha hota hai..achanak se apna naam sun kar akshat ki taraf dekhta hai.. kuch kaha Akki..

Akshat: hey bhagwan.. yaha poori ramayan khatam ho gayi hai.. aur yeh puch raha hai ki sita ji kaun thi... Raj.. maine kaha ki kal holloween ki party hai aur sab ko aanana hai..

Raj: ohh okay.. main aajaunga...woh bhi best bhoot ban kar.. 😆

Haste haste party comes to and end and everyone bid goodbye to one another...

Kashish ghar pahunch kar change karke waapis se khidhki ke paas baithi hai.. aaj bhi uska dil bbaichan hota hai.. woh sochti hai...
Aakhir kab tak main doosron ke saame apne aap ko sambhalti rahungi... mujh main itni himmat nahin hai Piyush .. bilkul bhi nahin hai.. thak gayi hun main .. aisa lagta hai ki zindagi ke koi mayne nahin reh gaye hain... tumhari yaad aati hai Piyush.. jahan bhi ho waapis aajaoo... apni aankhein band kar khidhki ke kinare baithi hoti hai kashish....

tabhi band aankhon se woh Raj ka chehra dekhti hai.. aur jhat se kashish ki aankhein khul jaati hai.... woh aur bhi baichan ho jaati hai...
yeh kya hua mujhe.. mujhe ekdum se Dr Raj ka chehra kyn dikhayi diya... kuch samajh main nahin aaraha hai mujhe... piyush tum hi kuch bataoo na.. main kya karun.. kahan dhoondhun tumhein...

Udhar apni window se bahar dekhte hue Raj sochta hai.... Kashish.. ajeeb se kashish hai usse judi hui.. bilkul waise hi jaise uske naam main hai...
Raj Kashish ka naam leta hai aur apni aankehin band karta hai.. jaise hi Raj ki aankhien bandd hoti hai.. usse Kashish muskurati hui dikhayi deti hai.. aur Raj hass deta hai..
Sach main Kashish, upar waale ne tumhein bahut fursat main banaya hai... par, pata nahin.. yeh dil hai ki yeh baat manane ko tayar hi nahin hai ki tum aisa bhi kar sakti ho.. kissi ki jindagi ke saath khel sakti ho ki woh insaan apni sudb budh kho baithe.. main ek psychiatrist hun.. par fir bhi tumse pehli baar main mil kar main tumhari sachai nahin jaan paya... yeh mere saath pehli baar hua hai.. ki main kissi se mil kar khud hi thoda ghoom raha hun.....
Samajh main nahin aata hai ki kya karun... tumhein dekh kar aisa lagta hai ki duniya ki haar khushi tumhare hi pairon tale hai... par yeh bhi lagta hai ki kissi ki zindagi ko roondne waali bhi tumhi ho.. aab to yeh raaj suljhana hi padega ki aakhir tum main aisi kaun si baat hai.. aur kaun sahi hai aur kaun galat....

dono hi yeh soch kar so jaate hain...
The next day is Holloween .. Kashish is not that excited this time as she was the last year.. iss saal kynki Piyush uske saath nahin tha.. par fir bhi woh baki sab ke liye khush rehne ki koshish kar rahi thi...

The party is at Akshat's house and he has decorated the house very well...

Every where in the house is a scary effect the moment you enter in the hall..

Akshat is wearing and is looking a pakka bhoot...
Charu is wearing...

Angad comes as

and Kripa is accompanying and complementing Angad....

Kashish choose to be a bit sober and she is dressed like a princess..

Unaware of each other choice for the dresses , both Kashish and Raj complement each other and are wearing dresses which are incomplete and tangibly meaningless without it's counterpart.... Raj comes as dressed as Robinhood .....

Both are silently complementing each other .... in the dressing style which is noticed by all...

the FUN AND FROLIC BEGINS.................................. and IT'S GONNA BE SCARY...........

Edited by rmanu7382 - 15 years ago