Saccha Pyaar: Part 46-47 - Page 118 (Nov 26th) - Page 82

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heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon
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Nice part!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
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loved it
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hey i am sorry for not commenting for too long........
the story so far is fab........just loved every bit of it
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Part 45

Armaan's House - Riddhima's POV

I felt my heart smile at the stupid dream i just had... i was still sleeping, that i could tell... but i was too deep into sleep to get my eyes to open... i felt him right beside me, holding me in his embrace.... i imagined our shaadi, very elegant.. yet simple... sapne main shaadi itni acchi lag rahi thi ki main reality main aana hi nahi chahti thi.... i laid my head on his chest, and kept dreaming....

Armaan's POV

Basket bhi naa... she is awake.. lekin she doesn't want to wake up... i smiled... meri pagal si basket... kitna bharosa hai mujhpe... and now, remembering something, i burst into pearls of laughter, barely able to control myself from laughing out loud, disrupting basket's fake sleep and imagination of our shaadi.... she's been telling me for weeks about how she always dreamed of our marriage.. cute, lekin a bit freaky... of course, freaky isliye nahi ki main shaadi ke bare main nahi soch raha... i do, every moment of my life... lekin freaky isliye kyunki hum dono ne itna kuchh soch raha hai, but it all matters on one person.... the hitler yaar... "Dr.Shashank Gupta" i sighed... but to make up my mood... i replayed through the whole hilarious scene that happened with Alisha... i moved my fingers in basket's hair, as i closed my eyes....

FLASHBACK - 2 Weeks Ago (3rd Person)

Arm - riddhima.. tumhaari duty general ward main hai na?

Rid - haa... kyun?

Arm - no, just making sure that i know where you'll be (he said with a wink at the end)

Ridz smiled and shook her head.... they both were heading towards the same direction as his duty was in the cancer ward, which was located a little past the general ward... before drifting off though, armaan looked around, and saw that his path was clear... as he held riddhima's hand and gave her a little, sweet peck on her cheek... her eyes widened as armaan grinned and left.... ridz touched her cheek on the spot where he kissed her, stared at it, and closed her eyes.... (only for a moment :P) she smiled and entered the general ward....

After a while, Dr.muskaan asked riddhima and armaan to follow-up on their patients so armaan went to the general ward too... riddhima excused herself to get reports of her patient as armaan checked the medicine charts of his patient...

Arm - toh gappu... ab kaise ho tum?

Gap - bhaiyya... mujhe chocolate chahiye!!

Arm - gappu.. (sitting down beside him) pehli baat... main koi waiter nahi hu theek hai... aur duusri baat... tumhe agar chocolate chahiye toh pehle puuri tarha se theek ho jaao.. phir main promise karta hu ki main tumhe dher saari chocolates duunga... theek hai?

Gappu nodded.. and stuck out his pinky - pinky promise?

Armaan smiled and nodded - pinky promise (armaan winked.. AGAIN.. lol) he was heading towards the next patient when he heard a voice he had heard before...

(Alisha) ali - dr.armaan mallik eh...

Armaan turned around and tried to recognize her... when he remembered exactly who she was...

Arm - oh wow.... Alisha! How you been?

Ali - im good.. how are you? (tried to give him a hug)

Arm - im awesome.. as usual... (backing off)

Ali - woh toh dikh raha hai... (winking at him)

In truth, armaan never liked Alisha... he was just being friendly cuz he didn't want to be rude... Alisha was one stuck-up gal in college... even though armaan loved female attention, he was glad to not have dated Alisha...

Arm - umm.. okay there... miss im too good for everyone in this college (he said while making bunny ears with his fingers) ... don't get a wrong impression.. im committed...

Armaan was about to turn his back on her when he saw riddhima enter the general ward... he stood there with his eyes only mesmerised by her gorgeous face... Alisha stood there completely perplexed... she knew armaan was a flirt, so she completely ignored the fact that armaan himself said he's committed... she knew the "gal" was in the ward because of the completely lost look of armaan's... she felt a tinge of jealousy... of course, that was just because she was a spoiled brat who got whatever she wanted, whenever she wanted... never was she gonna accept no... she turned around and saw the girl... aKa Dr.Riddhima "urff Basket" Gupta

She was shocked at armaan's choice... "such a bad choice... seriously?" she thought to herself... now Alisha was more than sure that she could get them to break up and have herself hooked up with armaan...

Ali - umm.. armaan? Hello.. you there?

Arm - umm.. Alisha.. i'll talk to you later.. bye

Armaan left after finishing his sentence, heading towards riddhima... he wanted to kiss her in front of Alisha so she cud get the idea that he is totally and hundred percent committed... but then before he could.. riddhima told him that nikita was looking for him.... a twinge of urgency to talk to nikita hit him as he realized that it probably was about abhi... so he left the ward telling ridz that they will meet in the cafe at break time...

Alisha walked towards riddhima.. making presumptions about how she could get ammy...

Ali - soo... are you the one with armaan? (she asked directly)

Rid - (not liking alisha's straight-forwardness) umm.. may i know why you are asking that?

Ali - attitude for a behenji type like you... doesn't match...

Rid - first of all, you have no right to talk to me like that, second of all.. if you are not here to talk to a patient.. get out of this general ward

Ali - you cant order me around...

Rid - yes i can.... (folding her arms)

Riddhima was tired, and on top of that, someone was literally judging her and armaan's jodi... she wanted to blast at Alisha saying she didn't give a damn... but she was too nice... she was about to leave when Alisha started blabbering more things...

Ali - you know armaan never loved you.. he's only gonna use you.. i mean how can anyone even be interested in you (with full-on attitude)

Riddhima turned around... with a tomato face.. as she pointed to her and said - don't cross your limits...

Ridz stomped outside the ward and met armaan who was listening to the whole conversation... Alisha stood there... smiling at her small victory...

Outside General Ward

Rid - who is that bi*... (about to swear but armaan puts a hand on her mouth)

Arm - basket... i didn't know you swear!! (shocked that basket was that angry at Alisha)

Rid - ughhh.. main nahi.. lekin woh kaun hai.. aur woh chahti kya hai??

Arm - basket.. just do as i say... all explanations later... kay (winking at her)

Armaan whispered something into riddhima's ear... and smiled eagerly... waiting for her to enter the general ward again... riddhima sighed... and entered... once again...

General Ward

Rid - Alisha.. tumne kya kaha? Woh mujhse pyaar nahi karta?

Ali - of course not.. i mean c'mon.. main usse college se jaanti hu.. he's just a player

Rid - (in mind) NO HE'S NOT (in reality) yur not joking naa?

Ali - of course not babes... i mean main tumhaari bhalaai ke liye keh rahi hu

Rid - (in mind) ya right.. jhooti!! (in reality) lekin usne toh kaha ki woh mujhse pyaar karta hai..

Just as she said that.. armaan walked in and riddhima turned around and faced him... she was about to laugh but armaan gave her a look.. and she controlled herself...

Rid - how could you armaan!

Arm - what?

Rid - i cant believe tumne... (looking away as she said that)

Alisha was glad.. usse khushi ho rahi thi ki ab usse armaan ko paane se koi nahi rok sakta...

Riddhima walked off angrily (pretending guys.. lol) and armaan followed her... as expected, Alisha went behind them too... she was not one to leave without watching the full entertainment... course, she was unaware of the "nautanki" going on ;)

Fire Escape

Riddhima and armaan entered the fire escape.. and Alisha watched the scene from the corner of her eye through the door window..

Riddhima continued speaking...

Rid - you know how mad i am at you right now?

Arm - lekin maine kiya kya?

Rid - (now putting her hands around armaan's neck.. but not strangling.. lol) sabke saamne humaare pyaar ka izhaar nahi kiya... (pouting)

Arm - oyye hoyye...

Now.. Alisha was petrified... she thought they would break up and she'd hit on him.. but why!!!! She made such a trap.. but that riddhima - she thought... how can she trust him so much? I mean he was a player.. im not lying!!

Armaan and ridz were both watching alisha's reactions and enjoying themselves.. but then armaan just got carried away by their closeness...

Arm - aaj tum bahot khoobsurat lag rahi ho..

Rid - armaan...

Armaan leaned in for a kiss, and ridz didn't reciprocate.. they shared a small yet passionate kiss... and Alisha was even more angered...

Ridz blushed and then looked away.. lowering her gaze from armaan's hypnotic eyes... armaan let out a laugh and clasped her hand... they exited the fire escape.. and on seeing Alisha... armaan walked towards her...

Arm - im not at all interested in girls like you... im committed.. you better know that cuz no matter what you do, im not leaving her...

Ali - she doesn't deserve you

Arm - right.. she deserves more than me... but you know what.. i don't need to explain anything to you... so get lost.. and stay away from our life... i'd love to explain why i love her more than my life, but your too much of an insensitive freak to understand such values...

Ridz didn't want this to continue to she came and pulled armaan away... Alisha rolled her eyes and walked off... she didn't love armaan.. he was just someone that would go well with her so-called "popular status"

Then, armaan explained everything about her... and why she said all those things about him... they shared some sweet moments as armaan fell in love with riddhima even more after knowing that she trusted him so much....

FLASHBACK ENDS

Armaan opened his eyes after recalling the whole scene... it was funny, but in a way.. an imtehaan of their love... of course, passing with flying colours... armaan looked at riddhima again... and shook his head... - probably dreaming of our honeymoon now

Armaan laughed at his own thought and let riddhima use his hard chest as a pillow, which was unrealistically comfortable, and he himself let his head rest on her head.... he fell asleep too.. both in their own heaven with each other and no one else...

Hey Guys!!

reallllly sry for not updating...

but i was seriously busy!!

i tried writing the part more often.. but never got it done..

im sry im doing a lousy job updating regularly.. but bear with it plz..

especially now since AR are not together.. i mean they weren't together before either.. but now idk.. i dun mind shilpa... i do like her.. but its just that im one of the rare ones that cares about the names too... like i wanna hear armaan and riddhima together.. not AS or SR...

anyways... this part was meant to be funny.. so hope it makes yu laugh 😳

i tried to add some ARness... hopefully it wrked 😆

and yaa...

i know its been like 6 months since i said that RMs shaadi will happen in 2 months.. but i guess time is going reallly slowlyy 😛

i will include all couples in the nxt part... if i get to it =P

and no promises to cont soon.. unfortunately...

well.. as for the comments

thanks a lot for the comments guys!!

reallly appreciate all the feedback im receiving.. it feels nice to know that there are ppl out tere reading what i wrote

thanks.. no individual comments.. sry for that.. but a big hug to all of you 🤗

lovee,

HiNaL <3 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
Em......aren't an a couple in this ff as well?
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Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

Em......aren't an a couple in this ff as well?


lool.. yaa they are..
sry for not including them...
will definitely in the nxt part...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sam19_2009

hey hinal....nyce update...cont soon...


Heyy!!
thanks a lot!!
i will definitely try to cont soon... (yn) 😆


thankss =D
m glad yu liked it

HiNaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part!!
Thanks for the PM
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Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Nice part!!
Thanks for the PM



Thanks!!!
and np =D my pleasuree,
HiNaL 😃

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