Saccha Pyaar: Part 46-47 - Page 118 (Nov 26th) - Page 72

Originally posted by: PrachiluvsKSG

Abeyyy oyee...over acting ki maa..!!!

(lets cont this later.....byeee....)

heheeh okie bye

heyy hinal

Originally posted by: armaankashridz

Hey Basket
Kaise hai?
acha sun i want to make a sigge for u so pm me the couple u want or sth u want in it
aur part was awesome
mein tumhe kuch nahi maroge
so just chill
luv the part
u write really nice
hope to talk to u soon
luv u
tc bye
ur sweety🤗

and sorry for a short comment..i dont know why i cant write a long comment write now🤔

hey sweety!!
thanks for the comment 😃
and congo for being first 👏 😛
m glad yu liked the part 😊
luv yu too <3
Basket

Originally posted by: i_clueless

ooh! i luvvd luvvd luvvd the part...thnxx for updating finally all the best for ur exams and i shall wait for the next part

heyy!!
thx for commenting 😃
m glad yu loved it 😳
thanks 😊
nd yu'll be surprised.. but im actually updating todayy 😆
😛
=P
luv,
HiNaL

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for Pm.

continue soon
love
Riddss

Hey Riddss!!
thxx =D
m glad yu liked it
and np for the pm.. my pleasure =D
<3
HinaL

Originally posted by: Prinnia

edited*😳

hey hinal🤗

very nice part
loved it😃
keep continue
thanks for the PM😊

love
prinz😳

hey dii!!
thanks for the comment
m glad yu loved it 😳
np for the pm 😃
luv yu too 😃
HiNaL 🤗

Originally posted by: arluver15

Hinal....

that was very nice part...totaly loved it.....

thanks for the pm

nruti

Hey nruti di!!
thanks for the comment =D
im soo happy that you loved itt 😃
np for the pm 😉
<3
HiNaL

Originally posted by: kash-kasu-kajen

hey hinal

u finally updated the part

thnk u sooooo much for the pm

k take ur tyme

till then i'll try reading d whole ff

i hpe i'll do that

aww AR ka jagra😔

luv jia

Hi jia di!!!
thanks for the commentt =D
m glad yu liked it..
nd yes.. i finally updated 😆
and abt AR dun wry.... patch up jald hi ho jaaye ga 😊
luv,
HiNaL

Originally posted by: aishar

awww nice parT! bt we want ar scene!!!!

Hey!!
thanks for comment =D
i will try my best to add more AR scenes =)
HiNaL

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Hey bachcha
Great part...n dun worry take your time to update 😊
I hope the tiff between AR gets solved fast...
Take care
Love you..

Hi di!!!
m glad yu liked the part 😃
thx for the comment
AR prob will be solved soon =)
HiNaL <3 love you too 😳

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

loved it

so sad AR had a fight

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

good luck for ur exams

Heyy!!
thanks for the comment =D
im sad too abt writing AR's fight..
but it was necessary.. it'll strenghten their bong
anyways... np for the pm
n thx for the good luck 😃
need it 😆
HiNaL

Originally posted by: kasuartifan

Awesome part Hinal!! Loved the Rahul Muskaan moments!

Hope AR gets back together asap! =)

thx for the pm!

Komal

Hey Komal!!
thanks for the comment 😃
m glad yu liked it
AR will certainly get back together soon =D
np for the pm 😉
HiNaL

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

very sweet update Hinal!!

it was very sweet of Abhi to help RM spend some time together and I agree with rahul's piece of advice,....he shud tell Nikki!!

Awww Riddhi is such a level headed girl...I just hope Sid is a great person and she can make Armaan see that!!

Hey Honey!!
thanks a ton for ur comment 😃
m glad yu liked the part 😃
and abhi is telling nikki.. that too in a cute way 😉
=P
luv,
HinaL

Originally posted by: wow123

Hey hinal

Thanx for update dear.Its 40 part of ur ff dear.All couple confess n enjoy their courtship.But our AN as usual late latif.

AN has feelings for so long but both doesn't express it.It seems as Abhi is in love but Nikki still far from this feeling.I wait for next update.

Sid has some angle in AN story.I love to read.

Heyy!!
thanks for the comment!!
nd i made the nxt part just for you...
cuz i realized tat AN had no improvement in their relationship 😛
hope yu like the nxt part =D
HiNaL

Originally posted by: janu1610

awesome part dear.............
Poor armaan always get pain at the end..

thanks for pm.
love
ritu

Hey ritu di!!
thanks for the comment 😃
m glad yu liked it
and i also feel that.. poor armaan =(
neways.. np for pm
luv,
HiNaL

Originally posted by: kasufan4ever

Awesomee upd.dear..

Aww,AR ki Fight.😔

Hope it will b solved soon..

N dear take ur time to upd.it..!!

bt cont.ASAP

n thnxx for the pm..!!

-Mehek-

Hey di!!
im glad yu liked it
thanks for the comment 😃
and AR fight will be siolved soon.. no wrries 😳
and i actually did cont ASAP 😆
for a change 😛
anyways.. np for pm.
luv,
HiNaL

Originally posted by: pearldesire

gr8 work i hav already following this story on dill-mill-gayyeblogspot. it tooo gud
👏

Heyy!!
thanks a lott =D
am glad yu like my ff 😃
and also.. thanks for commenting 😃
luv
HiNaL

Originally posted by: Aisha202

Hinal sweety!!!! 🤗

All the best for your exams!!! I'm sure you'll do great!!

Lovely update!!! Abhi helping Rahul and Muskaan to spend time with each other was so sweet!!
The RM scene was really cute too!!😉

Loved the AR scene - although it ended o a sad note!

Really really eager to read the next update where there will be more of AN!! Can't wait!!

Thanks sweety!!!

Love Aisha

🤗

Heyy!!!
thanks for the wishes 😃
and m glad yu liked the part =D
dun wry.. AR will have romantic scenes coming up 😃
luv,
HinaL

Originally posted by: PrachiluvsKSG

Heyy Cyutie / Hinal..!!

I am cmmenting ryt now...but not for the part...

sorry..!!! =( this is just to tell ya that I am bzy till 4th june..!

my Finalz.. (my enemies O_o ) are startin on 28th and endin on4th..

so will cmment later..

and I dont have even FB anymre...

soo babye =((

will mis u...

love ya

Prachi

Hey Doll!!
its okay...
take yur time =D
will wait 😃
luv yu too 🤗
miss yu too <3
Cyutiee

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

Hey Hinal 🤗

its been sooo long .......
nice update...
luvd RM scene...
Armaan's possessiveness is tooo sweet ...lol

cnt soon...thnx 4 d pm..

love
vini

Hey vini di!!
it has been an extremely longgg break
😛
m sry 😳
nd m glad yu liked the RM scene 😃
np for the pm
love =D
HinaL

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG

heyy hinal

srrryyy for the late comment

the part was awesome

loved it

thxx for pm

luv dhruvi

Hey Dhruvi!!
thx for the comment 😃
m glad yu loved it
and no need to say sorry....
=D
np for the pm
luv yu too <3
HinaL

Part 41

Gupta House - Guest Room

Abhi went home and thought about what rahul had said.... "tell dr.nikita that you love her" was his love that obvious?? He changed into shorts and a shirt... and went to bed... he turned the lights off and tried to sleep.... he couldn't though... thoughts of nikki kept coming in his mind

He got up from his bed with a jerk and ruffled his hair... making up his mind to confess his love to nikki as soon as he can... he was finally able to go to sleep... only to see nikki in his dreams too =P

Morning

Nikki opened her eyes and found ridzy's bed empty... she found a note on the table..

"hey nikki... sry, had to talk to armaan n he left early, so had to leave... abhi n u have same duty hrz so do come wid him.. luv yu nikki... ridzy"

Nikki let out a small smile, thinking of her being with abhi... but then she shook her head and decided to go have breakfast... there duty hours started at 1:00 pm... and it was only 7:00 am... lots of time left...

Kitchen

Abhi was already in the kitchen when nikki came.... nikki saw abhi and took a deep breath, vice versa as well ;)

They both greeted each other... and sat down at the table... abhi had made pancakes...

Nik - (taking a bite) these are pretty gud abhi... mujhe nahi pata tum itna accha khaana bhi banate ho

Abh - you still don't know a lot of things abt me nikki...

Nikki raised her eyebrows n nodded... they both finished their breakfast and nikki excused herself from the table to go get a shower... abhi put the plates in the sink and also headed upstairs... he also went to take a shower, but just then, he heard the phone ring.... he decided to not pick it up for some odd reason... and then the person calling left a message that could be heard by abhi...

"hello nikki beta.... how are you?? I know your at your friend riddhima's house, simmy told me.. but i just wanted to tell you.. me, yur mother and simmy are all coming to india today midnight... raj aana chahta tha lekin uske company ka bahot bada deal finalize karna hai so he won't be able to make it... waise, tum soch rahi hogi ki hum tujhe bina bataaye aa rahe hai, well actually.. ab tu badi ho gayi hai... toh maine aur teri mom ne socha ki tere liye ek accha sa rishta choose kar le… toh ha… teri shaadi karaane aa rahe hai.. (in background " all flights going from hold in france to india are ready... passengers are requested to start boarding the plane") toh ab hum phir milte hai.... bye beta... take care.. love you cyutie"

Abhi was just standing there... his jaw dropping... he said to himself "im telling nikki i love her before they arrive... warna uski shaadi ho jaaye gi aur main kunwaara reh jaaounga"

Abhi left the room and went to take a shower... thinking of ways to how he will confess his love.... abhi took a very short shower and came out.. he put a note by nikki's phone saying that their duty hours are going to start at 10:00 am so she should get ready quickly

Of course, that was a lie.. he just wanted to take her out somewhere...

He didn't mind being with her just in the morning, but then he wanted to also take her on a date in the evening.. so he called sanjeevani

Abh - hello... sister lovely.. are dr.rahul or dr.muskaan there?

Sis - ji woh dr.muskaan hai... aap kaun bol rahe ho?

Abh - main dr.abhimanyu.. aap please unhe phone dijiye

Sis - haa.. ek second... dr.muskaan, aapka phone

Mus - hello.. dr.muskaan speaking

Abh - hello ma'am.. dr.abhimanyu here

Mus - jee.. boliye

Just then, rahul came...

Abh - woh ma'am, actually mujhe aur nik. I maen dr.nikita ko leave chahiye tha aaj ke liye

Mus - aapko aur dr.nikita, dono ko leave? Lekin kyun?

Rahul understood the matter and signalled muski to allow them

Abh - woh actually, ma'am we had some work.. isliye...

Mus - well, okay... (she only agreed because of rahul telling her to... otherwise, she wouldn't have believed that excuse) well ab main chalti hu...

Abh - thanks dr.muskaan... see you tomorrow

Mus - okay bye

Abhi jumped up in joy... as rahul explained to muski the reason to why abhi wanted a leave...

Rah - muski.... you know abhi loves nikki!!

Muski was first surprised, but then caught on to something else... she nudged abhi.. and said

Mus - abhi and nikki... i see, bahot gehri dosti ho gayi hai interns ke saath (then chuckling)

Rah - c'mon muski... who is gonna say abhimanyu and nikita... abhi and nikki sounds better

Mus - yep... anyways... toh unh eek day off kyun chahiye?

Rah - muskaan! You really don't know?? Of course woh usse propose karega... in a special way.. you don't remember??

Mus - oohh...

Rahul gently tapped muski's head... and gave her a peck, then both resumed for their duties...

Gupta House

Abhi relaxed as he now knew that he had the whole day to propose her...

Abhi called someone/thing/where... :)

Abh - make sure its ready... we will come after dinner.. about 9-10 pm... (he hung up)

just then, nikki came out of the room and headed downstairs....

Nik - humaare duty hours change kaise ho gaye?

Abh - umm woh... nikki... dr.muskaan called and said that none of us have to report for duty...

Abhi told her, without any eye contact.... the poor fellow was a HORRIBLE liar!! He once tried to lie his way out of getting yelled at a teacher, but ended up with a lunch detention with the creepy teacher PLUS cleaning duties in the cafeteria for the WHOLE month!!....

Nik - oh.. that's weird.... lekin anyways.... toh.. armaan aur ridzy ko bhi off hai na?

Abh - no no no... only us.. (letting out a small nervous laugh)

Nik - oh.. theek hai toh....

Abh - woh nikki.. main soch raha tha.. kyun na hum bahar chale? You know, just me and you

Nik - in her mind HE JUST ASKED YOU OUT ON A DATE!!!!

Abh - in his mind DID I JUST ASK HER OUT???? HOPE SHE DOESN'T GUESS WHAT IM GOING TO DO...

Nik - umm... ya sure.. why not... i'll go get ready

A nervous nikki turned around and smiled to herself... as abhi still thought of ways to make today the best day for nikki... nikki came out wearing baby blue shorts and a yellow coloured t-shirt.... she was looking very cute and adorable... and abhi, as usual, looked handsome with jeans and a tight-fitted shirt showing his muscles...

Before they went outside, he remembered the phone call... although he didn't tell nikki anything as he was going to surprise her.. first by confessing his love somehow, and then by taking her to the airport without her knowing that her parents and simmy were going to come...

In Abhi's Car

Nik - toh abhi... hum exactly jaa kaha rahe hai?

Abh - pata nahi.. tumhe kaha jaana hai??

Nik - tumne kaha (mimicking him in his voice) kyun na hum bahar chale? Maine socha ki tumne koi jagah pick kar li hogi... anyways.. decide now… kaha jaana hai?

Abhi and nikki in unison - Billiard's Point!!

They both smiled as abhi drove towards Billiard's Point

(1 quick point... apparently, billiard's point is in Chennai... i found that name on this website.. n since i don't know any other places where they could play pool.. i just put this... bear wid me)

Billiard's Point

Abhi n nikki both reached there... and went in line to pay their admission fees... the line was quite long...

Nik - tumhe bhi pool khelna accha lagta hai?

Abh - ya... i love it...

Nik - you know, i've always loved playing pool.. but am not that gud...

Abh - well.. not to brag or anything.. but im quite good...

Nik - well you can teach me... what say??

Abh - ummm (leaning in towards her face) shayad

Nikki gave him a look... as a few guys came up behind her... abhi could sense that they might make a move so he pulled nikki towards him.... chest to chest, leaving only enough space for a paper to come in between them... abhi held her back gently as nikki put her hands on his shoulder... she questioned him with his eyes as abhi slowly went towards her ear and said "look behind yu"

Nikki stole a glance behind her and found out the reason.... she smiled and abhi let go... the boys not bothering her... unhe abhi se maar khaane ka shauk nahi tha ;)

Finally they paid their admission fee and went inside... it was a very club-type environment... loud music in the background as tables of pool were laid out on the floor... abhi and nikki went on a pool table... and set up for the game...

Abhi told nikki to take the first shot.. so she did, but she was quite bad.... nikki's face flushed with disappointment as abhi re-set the game...

Abh - main tumhe help karta hu...

Nikki nodded... and prompted him to help her

As nikki was in the right position with her right arm stretched on the table and her left arm holding the stick.... abhi slid right behind her... their faces were a few inches apart... it was like he engulfed her in a hug....

As abhi slid behind her, nikki gazed at his face... she could feel her heartbeats thumping against her chest... his fragrance made her crazy... all she would want to do is be in those arms forever... nikki looked away as now, abhi stared at her face... a few strands of hair caressing her delicate and rosy cheeks... he was dying to hold her in his arms without any barriers.... he finally caught hold of his thoughts and slowly teached nikki how to hit properly... as abhi slid with nikki to hit the ball, nikki closed her eyes and absorbed the mixed feelings she felt... as abhi was about to get up...

Nik - once more!!

Abh - kya?

Nik - woh... help me once more... so that i get it properly...

She had already gotten it, but she wanted to be close to him.... as of course, she was unaware of his plans of confessing his love...

They played a few games of billiards and then went to the restaurant..... they ate Chinese food and then headed towards the beach.... they had both decided to go to the beach... "Juhu Beach" (guys... i've been there LOTS of times when i used to live there.... its an AWESOME place!!! And its one of the places i do know... lol)

Juhu Beach

It was about 3 pm.... both had taken their shoes off and kept them in the car... they walked barefoot across the coast... they just talked randomly about their internship, their dreams and lots more... literally, they talked about anything that came to their mind... they walked for a good hour when nikki noticed a corn stall....

Nik - (with widened eyes) abhi! Lets go there!! I just lovee eating corn here!

Abhi smiled at her childish side.... as she pulled his hand and led him to the stall... they both got two corns and started eating them, as they walked once again... it was now about 5 pm... they walked back to the car, and decided to go for dinner... actually nikki wanted to stay, but our abhi had his own plans...

Car

Nik - well.. ab hum kaha jaa rahe?

Abh - dinner ke liye, i don't know.. tumhe kaha jaana hai?

Nik - i wanna go to the Blue point (i just made that up)

Abh - okay.. let's go...

After a while as abhi was driving....

Nik - armaan aur ridzy hote toh aur bhi maza aata na...

Abh - no way!!

Nikki turned her head and questioned him.. - what do you mean?

Abh - umm woh.. actually.. woh dono apne khud ke romance main itne busy ho jaate ke hum waise bhi akele hi hote..

Nikki let out a cute laugh... - thats soo right!! But jo bhi ho, you have to admit... unka pyaar dekh kar sab ko aisa hi lagta hoga ki pyaar duniya ki sabse khoobsurat cheez hai

Abhi - (in a whisper) woh toh hai hi....

Blue Point

Abhi n nikki sat down at a table... ordered their food... and just waited for it to arrive...

Nik - abhi...

Abhi looked up... - ya

Nik - tum aise kyun baithe ho? So quiet!! Thodi toh baatein karo..

Abh - okay... lekin baatein shuru tum karo...

Nik - okay how about we play a game until the food arrives?

Abh - theek hai... kaunsi game?

Nik - we have to act out a character from any soap... and the other person has to guess...

Abh - no punishments right?

Nik - ya...

Abh - ya as in ya or no?

Nik - abhi!! No punishments...

Abh - okay.. so you start...

Nik - by god!! Aaj toh main bach hi gayi... warna pata nahi kya ho jaata

Abh - wow nikki... thats an easy one... nupur from miley jab hum tum

Nik - cool... now your turn (:

Abh - main apni chashmish ko kaise bhuul jaaon? (hitting nikki's nose with his index finger)

Nik - your not bad abhi.. lekin i know this one too... samrat from miley jab hum tum

Abh - im being easy okay...

Nik - dekhte hai....

Abh - haan.. toh abse no easy characters... and start...

Nik - yes.. aur iss body main se jo glass ka tukda mila hai woh bhi nakli hai (raising her head high)

Abh - (sighing) taarika from CID....

Nik - yes...

Abh - i love you basket!

And then the DMG wind strikes... nikki's hair blows as both share an eye-lock... he did say basket, but both knew that abhi actually meant that he loved nikki... both stayed in the eye-lock until their food arrived.. bringing them back.... as the moment of awkwardness passed.... nikki guessed the character...

Nik - that's my favourite.. karan singh grover from dill mill gayye

Abh - right (letting out a short and somewhat fake laugh)

They both then had their dinner in silence... finally.. nikki broke the silence...

Nik - can you drop me home after this?? I want to get a good long sleep... warna phir pata nahi kab time milega... (laughing)

Abh - actually... two more places to go...

Nik - two more!! Kaha?

Abh - well one to the cake shop... mujhe actually ek cake chahiye thi... (nikki didn't question him to why he wanted to buy a cake) aur phir second destination is surprise...

Nik - okay... anyways.. ho gaya?

Abh - ya, im done... lets go...

Abhi paid the bill and both left....

Cake Shop (about 10 pm)

As they were about to enter the cake shop, abhi excused himself... nikki went in and started looking at the cakes....

Abh - (on phone) we're here.... get ready okay...

Abhi disconnected the phone and went inside... there were MANY people in the cake shop... he smiled.... he was no longer afraid to confess his love because he was more than certain that nikki loved him back...

Abhi and nikki looked at many cakes... nikki saw a really beautiful one and as she went close by it.... her heartbeat stopped for a second.... the cake was beautifully decorated and said "I Love You Nikita!! You Are My Life! Do You Love Me Too?" her eyes were filled with tears of sheer joy... she turned to find abhi but he wasn't there... her eyes longed to see him... when suddenly... a spotlight was focused on nikki.... and a voice echoed throughout the room...

"ever since i've met you, i've longed to be with you... pehli nazar main hi tumse pyaar ho gaya... shayad mujhe pata chal gaya tha ki hum dono ek duusre ke liye hi bane ho... main jaanta hu nikki, hum dono bahot alag hai aur bahot jhagda karte hai, lekin nikki... main ek wadaa tumse karta hu... chahe tum mere liye same feel karti ho yaa nahi, main tumhe kabhi dukh nahi pohchaaunga nikki.. tum meri zindagi ho... main tumse bahot pyaar karta hu nikki... i love you... kya tum bhi mujhse?"

There was a pin-drop silence in the room.... all eyes were staring at nikki whose eyes were brimmed with tears... the lights slowly turned on as abhi appeared from the corner... his eyes showed his passionate love for her...

Nik - i love you (whispering) i love you (in a soft voice) i love you abhi (finally out loud)

She ran to abhi and hugged him tight... all the people around them clapped for them... glad to see such a beautiful confession right in front of their eyes...

Nikki was still crying... both were hugging each other very tightly.. they broke the hug and abhi gently wiped her tears....

Abh - i love you nikki

Nik - i love you too abhi

Abhi thanked the employees at the cake shop and took nikki to the car.... they were quiet.. both settled down in the car...

Nik - thanks abhi... (wiping her last tear from her face)

Abh - kis liye?

Nik - humaara pyaar ka pehla izhaar itna special banana ke liye

Abhi placed a kiss on her cheek...

Abh - tumhaare liye kucch bhi...

Nikki blushed with the comment as abhi drove off... (once again =P)

Airport

Nikki realized that they were at the airport.. they both got out of the car...

Nik - hum airport kyun aaye hai??

Abh - woh actually... koi special aane waala hai.. isliye...

Nik - okay...

Just then an announcement came... "the passengers of air Canada have passed the security checks and will be exiting momentarily"

After hearing air Canada, she remembered her parents and how she missed them badly... she turned around to tell abhi something when she felt a bump....

She turned around and her eyes widened.... in shock and disbelief

Nik - papa aap??

Hey Guys!!! this is an extremely long part totally dedicated to wow123 =D motivated me to post an AN confession scene 😃

hope yu guys enjoyed reading it...

please do comment =D m dying to read more of yur comments..

luv,

YIPE I AM AGAIN FIRST

hey HINAL🤗

supurb part
AN confession was cool😃
loved it
keep continue
thanks for the PM

love
prinz😳