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Posted: 15 years ago
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I've decided to finally start a topic here to post stories about my favorite Dill Mill Gayye couple, Atul-Anjali...
As an aside, Komal (AshiYuvi4Life) threatened to post up one of my stories and yell to anyone who read it that I was the one who wrote it...No need to worry, Komzie, it's here for anyone and everyone to see!
I hope you enjoy reading! 😳
~ Borna
A/N: This first oneshot was written purely upon impulse immediately after watching the most beautiful Atul-Anjali/PaNa scene in DMG till date: the Poolside Confession scene from August 7th, 2008. I was so shocked and so touched by the powerful expressions in that scene that I just had to write a follow-up piece...And this was it.

Shattered

"Atul, I know you really like me, but -"

"Not 'like,' Anjali...I love you."

His words played over and over in her mind, his voice as close as a whisper.

Anjali shifted uncomfortably in her seat on the bus, turning to face the window. Leaning her head against the window, she watched the pool resort fade away into the darkness of the night. Shift focus, she thought, trying to gaze up at the millions of shining stars blinking in the deep bluish-black blanket of the night sky.

"Taare ko dekho, chand ko dekho. It's such a pretty night."

It was a pretty night, Anjali repeated to herself, smiling faintly. The most beautiful night she'd ever seen, in fact. The full moon had never seemed so bright before. There was something so enchanting about the moon...From here, it certainly seemed like there were no blemishes at all, no imperfections.

"I'll only see you there, too, Anjali..." Atul's soft voice cut through her thoughts.

Anjali's smile slowly vanished as she remembered how his words had numbed her. She hadn't expected to hear something like that from Atul, ever. As she'd turned back to him, she noticed that he was staring at her again...Gazing at her with a look of such seriousness that it unnerved her.

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"Atul..." Her ability to speak seemed to have left her, as she looked back at him, her eyes serious, her tone questioning.

"Uss chand pe daag nahi hoga," he said.

Atul reached for her hand that was resting on the table they were sitting at. He gently took it between his own hands, and held it. Raising his gaze to meet hers, he continued, "I always want to hold this hand...Forever, Anjali..."

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Each and every moment was still so vivid in her mind, even though it had been hours ago. When Atul had touched her...Anjali closed her eyes as her left hand tingled with sensation, as if he was holding it again. She opened her eyes again, confirming that he wasn't there, but the feeling didn't go away. He'd covered her hand so protectively then, and she could still remember the way her heart had started pounding, her mind yelling at her to say something, anything...

It had taken every last bit of effort she could muster to look into his eyes, frown, and say, "What?" with all the attitude she could gather.

He'd told her how he'd been trying to tell her his feelings for her...How that party at the disco had been planned just so he could tell her how he felt...But he hadn't been able to...

"I love you, Anjali. I love you a lot...I really love you a lot..."

She could see his face clearly in her mind...His soulful eyes, desperately seeking her acceptance...Squeezing her eyes shut, she willed for him to go away...Vanish...She opened her eyes again, and looked out at the dark road to focus on something else. But his voice still echoed in her ears.

Why did he love her? Why did he love her so much? Anjali asked herself over and over again. She'd clearly told him that she considered him a friend, nothing more. She wasn't ready for any sort of relationship now. Not when she had her career to focus on. Her father had always said to keep personal relationships distant from professional ones. And that's what she had done. Atul was a colleague and a friend, why couldn't he live with that? He didn't have to give her all that attention. She didn't want his plants, his songs, his favors...

Anjali frowned. But then why did she miss him when he wasn't around? Why had she felt a stab of irritation when Simran had insulted him? Why had she been so happy to see a plant in her locker every now and then? Why, after that dance on New Year's Eve, had she never turned him down when he asked her to dance?

Anjali knew that there was only one answer to all those questions. An answer that she had tried time and time again to ignore, to laugh off as an impossible possibility. But it was the truth, and she knew it.

He had given her all the love that was missing from her life...After so many years of living without her mother, the person she had loved most, who had given her everlasting love, as well as grief after her death, no one had been able to fill that void completely. Or so she had thought.

In his own inimitable way, Atul had walked into her life and changed it irrevocably. She still remembered their first day at Sanjeevani, when he'd unleashed his talent for singing with "Nakhrewaali, mann ki kaali" directed at her. When that mutual dislike had ebbed away, she hadn't noticed.

Atul's presence had distracted her from her work many times, but whenever he wasn't near her, she'd feel uneasy. Just like the countless times she felt him staring at her...She'd feel uncomfortable with such open displays of attention, but he'd been relentless in showing her how much she meant to him.

And now, things had come full-circle. She had tried so hard, so hard...As much as she told herself that she didn't feel anything for him, the more she thought about it, the more she realized that she did. She had been trying to run away from something inevitable.

She was running away from love.

"I love you, Anjali. I love you a lot. I really love you a lot..."

The pain in his eyes, in his voice, sliced through her heart. A searing pain spread through her, and her breath caught in her throat as she fought back the same tears that had threatened to spill from her eyes hours ago, when she'd left Atul sitting at the table, speechless and heartbroken.

A single tear dropped onto her left hand. Anjali stared at her hand, taking a shuddering breath. She longed for him to take her hand into his again, to comfort her again in the way that only he could...But she had turned away from him...And although she hoped otherwise, she knew that the pain she had caused him was more than enough to send him away from her...

Tears spilled from her eyes as she sobbed uncontrollably. She had pushed him away again, like all those other times. But this time, it felt different. It was as if her heart itself was bleeding.

She felt shattered.

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A/N: This one is probably going to be a two-shot...😊And here's a little VM that I made...
Edit: To reflect what is happening in the show, I'm changing things up a little bit...😊
Don't Say Alvida...

"Dad..."

"Pack your bags."

Anjali's brows furrowed. "Dad...?" Her voice trailed off, leaving an unspoken question hanging in mid-air.

Shashank Gupta looked up at his 24-year-old daughter through his rimmed glasses. "Pack your bags, Anjali."

Anjali held her father's steely gaze with her own. "Can I at least ask why we're leaving?"

"You're leaving. I'm not." Shashank's response was terse and from his tone, Anjali knew that any attempt to argue would be pointless. Still, that didn't lessen the shock that his words produced.

"I..." Anjali felt her confusion increasing second by second. "I'm leaving?" She shook her head, trying to make sense of her father's sudden command. "But why?"

Shashank was silent for a moment. He then looked down at his study table and picked up a file as Anjali waited for an answer. "I'll tell you after you're finished packing."

Anjali stood her ground. "Dad, if I'm the one leaving...For whatever reason that is...Don't you think I'm the one who needs to know?"

She watched Shashank pick up another file and leaf through it. As she opened her mouth to gather his attention, Shashank's voice stopped her. "You're going to Chicago. Specialized training. Away from Sanjeevani."

"Dad..." Anjali began, cautiously, "Why can't I stay here? Nikki and Atul -"

Shashank looked up sharply. "Anjali, you will pack your bags now and prepare to leave. Your flight is next week, so I suggest that you gather your things from Sanjeevani and make sure that you don't overlook anything. You'll be staying abroad for as long as is necessary."

The finality in Shashank's voice told Anjali that his decision would not change. She had a feeling that her hunch about her father's motives behind this abrupt decision was correct, but she didn't want to think about that. She simply nodded stiffly and headed off to her room to begin packing.

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As Anjali stepped through Sanjeevani's familiar doors, she found herself noticing details about the hospital that she had taken for granted before. Walking through the corridor toward the locker room, she remembered the first time she had entered Sanjeevani as a 6-year-old child. It had been an unfamiliar place then, but it had, strangely enough, felt like she belonged there in the busy corridors, surrounded by nurses and ward boys and doctors hurrying to carry out their daily duties.

The hospital had not changed much after all these years; there were still people bustling about in the corridors, going about their tasks. It seemed like she had entered Sanjeevani as an intern just yesterday...Two years had flown by so quickly...Anjali absent-mindedly entered the locker room and went over to her locker to retrieve her things. A female voice pulled her out of her thoughts.

"Anjali?"

Anjali turned to see Nikita standing in the doorway. Nikki gave her a small smile and walked over to stand next to her. "I heard you were leaving..."

Anjali nodded, pulling files out of her locker and placing them next to the tote bag she had brought with her. "The decision came about so quickly, and Dad clearly didn't want me to argue about it. So I'm going." As she pulled her lab coat out of her locker, she turned to face Nikki. "Well, I guess you guys are going to have fun without me. I'm quite disappointed that I won't be able to see you all become resident doctors, you know. It would have been nice to work together - you, me, Atul..." She struggled to block out memories of the terrible accident that had taken place little over a month ago. "But now I'll have to miss out on all the fun."

Nikki had a grim look on her face. "Anjali..." she began. How could she tell Anjali about this? If Anjali was oblivious to that fact, then Shashank clearly didn't want her to know. Nikki decided that it would be best to keep quiet.

"Yeah? What?"

"Nothing." Nikki forced a smile and gave Anjali a hug. "We'll miss you."

Anjali rolled her eyes. "I'm not leaving forever, yaar." All the same, she felt her eyes becoming moist and she struggled to fight the sadness that was slowly settling over her like a gray cloud.

Anjali and Nikki parted from the hug, and silence prevailed as the two women contemplated what to say to each other. Anjali broke the silence.

"Nikki...Is..." Anjali hesitated, cursing herself for feeling so awkward. "Is Atul going to stop by today?"

Nikki looked up at Anjali, feeling extremely guilty. She could see that in spite of Anjali's carefully-controlled question and seemingly nonchalant tone, her eyes betrayed the concern that she wanted to mask.

Nikki shook her head. "I don't know."

Anjali dropped her gaze to the floor. Her eyes welled up with tears again as she realized that she might not be able to meet Atul before she left. She had come to Sanjeevani with hopes that she would run into him; she had wanted to tell him first; he, of all people, deserved to know where she was going. She didn't want to think of his reaction when he would find out that she had left the country, but she couldn't stop the flurry of thoughts that invaded her mind. He deserved to know, not from her father or Nikki, but from her.

Nikki watched solemnly as Anjali stood there, motionless, staring at the floor ahead of her. After a few minutes of silence, Anjali sat down on the bench in front of her locker and promptly whipped out her pager.

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Atul groaned as he heard his pager go off.

"Kya, yaar...Now even an injured man isn't exempt from duty...I thought they would let me rest in peace for a while..." Atul carefully made his way over to his desk to check his pager. "Hitler just won't give us a break, will she? Even though so much has happened, and we need some time to adjust...No one is going to run away..." Mumbling to himself, Atul picked up his pager.

Atul,

Could you meet me in the locker room sometime within the next hour?

I have to tell you something. You'll come, won't you?

Anjali

Atul stared at the message. Anjali? At Sanjeevani? He couldn't imagine what she was doing there or why she was there in the first place. She should have been at home. He frowned, confused. He needed to rest his hand as much as possible, but Anjali needed to see him. If he didn't set off for Sanjeevani immediately, Anjali would be worried. Atul grinned. She was probably pacing around the locker room right now.

Atul pocketed his pager, grabbed his keys and wallet, and headed out the door.

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Anjali paced around the locker room impatiently. She'd been pacing for the past fifteen minutes, praying that Atul would get her message and come to meet her. Nikki had left for duty, with an assurance from Anjali that she would leave soon and have a safe trip. Anjali had stayed in the locker room well after Nikki left, gathering her things and arranging them neatly in her bag to take home. With nothing more to do to keep her busy, she had begun pacing, as she always did when she was worried.

Fifteen minutes had passed, and Atul still wasn't here. Anjali glanced at her watch for what seemed like the thousandth time. He wouldn't deliberately ignore her; she knew he wouldn't ever do that. Maybe he hadn't received her message...Anjali took out her pager again and began typing up a new message. She was almost halfway done when her pager alerted her of a new incoming message. She felt a rush of adrenaline wash over her as she read the message on the screen.

Anjali,

Would've come sooner, but I'm stuck in traffic.

Will be there in a few minutes.

Sorry!

Atul

Unwittingly, a huge smile spread over Anjali's face. It seemed as though a huge weight had been lifted off her shoulders. She sat down on the locker room bench and took a deep breath as all the tension that had built up inside her drained away. Just one message from Atul, and her worries had vanished. Anjali smiled and re-read his message. She would see him, after all.

Anjali's smile faded as quickly as it had appeared when she remembered why she had called Atul to the locker room in the first place. The gloom that settled over her as soon as that thought entered her mind was even more overwhelming than the sadness she had felt earlier while talking with Nikki. Atul had known her for so long...Anjali knew, without a doubt, that he would be devastated.

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Atul walked briskly toward the locker room, briefly acknowledging familiar faces in the corridors as they inquired about his health. He had no time to talk to people, no matter how touching their concern for him was. He had to see why Anjali had summoned him to the hospital so suddenly. He had a feeling that it was something urgent, and he chided himself for being late, even though he was well-aware that he was not to blame. If he was late, he was late...And Anjali had probably been on the verge of panicking before he'd sent that message.

He could see her through the glass doors of the locker room as he approached them. Anjali was sitting on a bench, with a large bag filled with what looked like files and her lab coat next to her. Atul wondered what that was all about. He pushed open the locker room door with his left hand and stepped inside, as Anjali looked up at that precise moment and their eyes met.

Atul was shocked to see that Anjali had been crying. He could see very faint traces of the tears that had probably spilled down her cheeks in spite of her attempts to contain them. He could see how tired and tense she was, and he felt terrible for adding to her stress by being late.

He knew she had been crying. Anjali could tell from the way his forehead creased immediately when she had turned to look at him. His eyes were full of concern, and she could feel that he regretted not being able to have arrived sooner. Anjali couldn't bring herself to look away from him. She felt her eyes filling with tears as Atul watched her.

Atul, who could read her expressions like a book and could feel her pain without her ever needing to say anything...Atul, whom she had thought of as a strange, immature boy when she had first laid eyes on him, was now her only confidant, the only one who truly understood her. And she would not see his face again until she returned from Chicago...Whenever that would be.

As Anjali's eyes welled up with tears, Atul felt his heart lurch. He had no idea why she was so distressed, or why she was even here at the hospital when she should have been at home. With each passing second, his worry and pain for her were increasing exponentially. His frown deepened.

The next thing he knew, Anjali was running towards him, seeking solace in his embrace. The sudden action took him by surprise, and he only fully realized what was happening when he felt Anjali's body collide with his.

Atul wrapped his arms around her, holding her close, as she buried her face in his shoulder. He could feel her tears soaking his shirt sleeve, and it alarmed him. He closed his eyes and, in an effort to soothe his nerves, inhaled deeply, taking in the sweet scent of Anjali's hair. He stood there, motionless, holding her until her sobs subsided. When it seemed like Anjali had stopped crying, Atul spoke for the first time since he'd arrived.

"Anjali..."

Hearing her name on his lips brought more tears to her eyes, no matter how hard she tried to stop them. Anjali lifted her head and moved just enough to be able to look at him. The emotions that she could see in his eyes mirrored her own feelings. He didn't even know what she was going to tell him, but he could feel her pain. He always could.

How could anyone be so gentle, so caring, so loving?

"Atul..."

Anjali's voice was slightly hoarse when she spoke, and to Atul, just hearing her say his name that way broke his heart. His Anjali had always been so strong...Why was she being subjected to such suffering now?

"Anjali, what's wrong?" Atul softly brushed a few tear-dampened strands of hair away from her cheek. As he did so, his thumb grazed her cheek ever so lightly, and her eyes fluttered closed involuntarily.

Her heart was pounding, her head was spinning. Why did this have to be so difficult? Why did she have to leave everything behind? She took a shaky breath, her eyes still closed, her cheek tingling with sensation.

She opened her eyes and found Atul watching her worriedly. She couldn't bear to see what her next words would do to him, but he had to know.

"Atul, I'm leaving."
Edited by PaNa4ever - 15 years ago
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OMG, I love this couple! There are no where near enough stories written on them. And these two oneshots are amazing. So well-written, and shows the feelings that were never taken to a new level on the show.

Write more!

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 15 years ago
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VEERUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!
OMG OMG OMG!
Well first off, this is a surprise in it's own. Happy Birthday!!!!!!! and thanks for this BEAUTIFUL gift! I can't believe my own eyes! Borna actually made a one-shot thread!
Well, the first one, I didn't read because I re-read that one for the umpteenth time last night. rofl.
The second one was MIND BLOWING! This is so totally you! The level that you analyze things at, this shows that you truely ARE the real PaNa fan! You explained every small detail so simply yet beautifully.
There was just so much truth and beauty in every single word. Purity in it's simplest form. Just the essence of the whole setting was so right. Everything from the beginning to the end was absolutely perfect. Nothing seemed out of place, but of course that's not possible anyway since madam Borna is the one writing. That too on one of most purest couples in the industry.
I'm telling you yaar, you should have done this sooner. You have no idea how much this is needed. I started my AA ff in April 08 and it got nowhere after June 08 because there were definitely not enough scenes of AA. I'd only written one one-shot on AA (of course that's no longer the case) but now, we have the PaNa master herself out on the field! Watch out people! Veeru's here!
Perfect couple that was wasted. Not anymore. I love this couple the most in DMG. As you already know, before RM came on the show, I was already an AA fan since DMG started. They're truely the heart and soul of the show and you, my dear, do the best job in highlighting that fact continuously!
love you!!! Happy birthday!
komz
Edited by AshiYuvi4life - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY Borna🥳 hope I am not late in wishing u😉
Loved ur shorts story they r awesome👏👏
Have a great day🤗
Oh by the way u might not know me i am Pari😊
Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Borna

Happy Birthday hun!

and awesome writing,I've only just read the first
will read the next soon
great to see u here,always loved your love for AA :)

have a great day !
Hina( hoping u still remember me )

Posted: 15 years ago
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Happy Birthday Borna!!
omg i just love our return gift!!!
both the one shots were fabulous!
i didn't even knw u wrote one shots!

the first one was soo great! i could feel how anjali felt!
the confession scene was playing in my mind, n ur os fit into it perfectly! i love how u expressed anji's feelings it, they r almost tangible.

the second one was awesome too. this one soo explains how AA r! again it was like i was watching a great AA scene. its soo beautifully written! ur too good!
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hhaappyyyy brthddayyyyyyy botnna deaaaaarrrr🥳🥳
it was awsemm ff
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Happy Birthday first of all !!

and an excellently written FF !!


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A Very Happy Birthday to you!!!
and the shots were great!!!
Thanks komal for the PM...

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