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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: star_fan


If thanks is not allowed by me then sorry is also not allowed. Hayye how i wish. Nope my hopes wasn't high. I thought you will say something else.

Rich..Nope not at all but c'mon i can use my sources for you and KaSh.....I thought we are already best friends. Cool thing i wish that will happen.
Repeat it again who u wanna be when u get older..?

Oh you too confuse.com...We are so alike...Haha Ms. Confusion..Another name on the list...😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

..PART 01..

The Sun was shining brightly, as it peeped into a beautifully decorated large room which was filled with lots and lots of furniture, placed appropriately suit to the spaces. A gentle wind swayed to its rhythm while the birds twittered beautifully. In the middle of the room on a double bed a girl was sleeping peacefully. She had a duvet over her head trying to block the Sun rays away. She snuggled into a ball hugging her legs. She turned right to left and left to right trying to find a soft corner, but it didn't work. She got annoyed. But suddenly she heard a light music from far away. The music was very familiar and the voices too. When she listened carefully she could hear the sound was coming to her very closely. She opened her eyes immediately and pulled the duvet away from her face. She stayed still for a moment, battering her long eyelashes. Her greenish almond eyes sparkled with excitement. Her childishness and playfulness were hidden in her mischievous eyes which were staring at the closed room door. Her mid length black hair shimmered as the sun rays hit on it. The door which led to her room unexpectedly swung opened. Her eyes instantly stroked at that direction to see a middle aged man who had his hands behind his back and looked straight at her, expecting to wake her up. She kept her eyes glued on him and then gradually closed it tight. Suddenly something stroke to her mind and she woke up straight away while she sat on the bed with a huge smile plastered across her face. Her eyes twinkled like stars with excitement.

Shashank - the man sang in his rough voice cheerfully Happy Birthday to my little daughter he slowly made his way towards the bed and sat next to her

Girl – she clapped like a little kid Thank you daddy she blurted out

Unable to control herself she opened her arms wide and pulled herself and her dad into a hug. The man was surprised, but he patted her back gently as he was happy to see his little daughter grown up to be a twenty-one year old young lady. A old aged man came through the door with a huge smile across his face.

Old Man - Happy Birthday Baby

Girl - Thank You Umar Kaka she replied sweetly flashing a smile at him A small frown appeared on her face, she looked at her father then at Kaka curiously. Her eyes glittered as tears started to form in them and kept looking up to her dad sweetly

Her father instantly understood what she was looking for. His lips curled up to a smile seen his curious daughter, his head turned toward the door and the girl too followed his dad's silent instructions.

Shashank - Gloria? He questioned loudly. The girl's sad face lit up with an enormous grin as she saw her maid walking into her room with a homemade chocolate cake

She suddenly felt her tummy grumbling as she could smell the delicious cake; attracting her more towards it. She couldn't take her eyes off the cake for even a second and kept on staring at it which made everyone surrounded her to giggle. She felt embrace but she didn't mind as she was back in her house with her sweet little family after many years in abroad.

Gloria - Happy birthday to you… happy birthday to you… Happy birthday to Riddhima, happy birthday to you… the maid sang out of beat, but it was still very sweet of her

Riddhima - Happy Birthday to you too Gloria she replied in her best innocent and polite voice. Gloria flashed her million dollar smile at Riddhima as she placed the cake on the bed in front of her

Riddhima gently blow out the candles and cut the cake into pieces. She did not forget to feed the three most special people in her life; who were present at that instance in her room and saved two more pieces. She finally got up and straightens herself from the crumpled silk night suit. Everybody in the room was heading back to their day routine when Shashank noticed the expecting look of his daughter; he wasn't able to hide it any longer and gave the small rapped box without a delay.

She snatched it from his hands and excitedly unwrapped the box. Her smile suddenly vanished as she saw another small box in it. She glared at her dad who just gestured her to keep opening it. Shrugging her shoulder she loosened the tight ribbon. She looked at her dad with a fall face while she held another small box on her hand. She inhaled some fresh air to calm herself down from the rage, which was building up inside her. Losing interest she opened that box as well, but suddenly her eyes lit up, her fall face got brightened.

She had a shocked but excited expression written all over her face while she looked at her dad with slightly opened mouth. Shashank was kept on smiling at his daughter while she danced showing the keys which were playing between her fingers. She screamed with joy. Riddhima gave her dad a quick hug and ran outside. All the way to the front garden, who ever she met giving them a small hug and told them what she got as her birthday gift.

Riddhima - Gloria I got a car…! Can you believe that?? She questioned Gloria who met just front of the door. Gloria silently nodded with a huge smile Gloria, I got a new car!! She shrieked with joy

With bare feet she ran outside, in her night suit. She ran into the street to find a red beautiful, luxurious, and modern car sitting in front of her. She checked the car from top to bottom taking three good looks around it. She was disturbed of her observation when she saw her dad walking towards her. As he stood in front of her and her newly gifted car, Riddhima came rushing toward him jumping with joy

Riddhima - Thank you dad, Thank you very much you're the best

Shashank - Thanks… By the way I knew that her dad quipped

Riddhima - Shall we go for a drive? She blurted out ignoring her dad's wise jokes

Even before Shashank could reply he found himself in the car, Riddhima came and joined him on the driving seat. She pulled the seat belt across her body and gave her dad a stern look gesturing to do the same, setting the rear mirror above her she turned on the engine, set it on to the right gear and was off like a thunder lightening in fast speed while the engine was roaring loudly.

She took a sudden turn on to a narrow street while Shashank seated shocking at his daughter's driving. He took a quick look at her daughter to make sure if she knows how to drive but he was surprised to see a huge smile on his daughter's face instead of scared expressions. He was suddenly snapped out of his thought when the car took a sudden turn to the right. Luckily, it was early in the morning therefore the road wasn't crowded with traffic, so it was very lucky not to get hit any one. Shashank was lost by his thoughts that still they were survived because of Riddhima's good driving or just because of their luck. But it didn't take him a long time to shout on top of his lungs when he saw a car just few feet away from them. Everything was happening so fast. He glanced at his daughter and he saw a shocked and frightened face instead of exciting and thrilling. There was an unexpected look across her face. But unfortunately for Shashank, this was more than enough to scare him.

Riddhima felt her heart beat pounding rapidly, her skin had turned pale as a dead body. She instantly pushed hard on the break paddles. With a screeching noise the car stopped instantly just an inch away. She at one couldn't believe what just happened with her. As soon as the car stopped she went out to the street to check upon it.

From the car which was parked ahead of Riddhima's, a person climbed down from it. He was dressed casually, blue jeans with a red shirt; the two top buttons of the shirt was opened showing off his muscular board chest. He had his rolled up sleeves up to his elbows, but on the right arm the sleeves were kind of loose as he tried to hide the tattoo. He kept his hand in his pockets as he stood still between Riddhima's care and his. He too bends down in the level between the two cars. His blue eyes glittered under the sun. A mischievous smile plays on his perfect lips. The short cropped hair with a handsome face which any girl would fall for.

Riddhima had her eyes glued on the distance between the two cars; it was just about an inch apart. She was jerked out of her thought as she saw another pair of eyes opposite her doing the same. There was something in his eyes which attracted Riddhima at once. The twinkling blue eyes as if it's were two identical oceans. Although she wasn't sure she can see something hidden in those eyes, something secretive. But before she can observe him more she was caught. They boy was also glancing at her. She felt embraced; she instantly lowered her eyes feeling sudden shyness hitting on to her.

He looked up to find pair of greenish almond eyes staring at him. Her big eyes suddenly lowered as she saw him looking at her. He was amazed; her eyes were something special, something different.

Riddhima felt at unease and stood up, she was somehow irritated not liking the way the boy was staring at her; she was followed by the boy, as soon as he got a glimpse of Riddhima he froze on his way. Milky skin, black hair, big eyes, a smile reach all across her face. He felt as if the perfect beauty was standing in front of him. As soon as Riddhima saw him, the anger has vanished. She never thought there would be a guy who looks cute at the same time sexy and hot. She wasn't able to break away from the trance. As they stood there they felt as if the world had come to a stop.

Riddhima – urm... urm… she murmured feeling awkward

Guy – excuse me… Don't you have any idea how to drive he burst out with anger scaring Riddhima

Riddhima – oh hello… you stupid gavar… dehathi she replied trying to be rude I know how to drive alright… thanks for nothing… maybe you don't know how to park…

Guy – oh I am so sorry I didn't knew you were also blind Riddhima pulled a confused face at him well for your kind information, you can see this is a small road not a RACE TRACK

Riddhima – OI tumhe toh mein… she said as she tried to climb on to the car roof

Seen what happening in front of him, Shashank got out of the car and went toward them. He too investigates for any damage while stood next to the guy. Riddhima calmed down as she saw her dad giving her a strict glare. The guy was taken back as he saw Shashank next to him, his facial expressions change to a surprise but he kept it under control

Shashank – what happened… kya baat hai... he said calmly to both of them Hello to the guy I am very sorry about this…

Guy – It's really alright Sir… Armaan… Hi I am Armaan he forward his hand delightedly, Shashank was confused but not wanting to be rude he too replied

Shashank – nice to meet you Armaan... I am Shashank… well I am extremely sorry for this… it's my daughter's birthday today and she is bit over excited Armaan took a quick glimpse at her. She was frowning as she didn't liked Armaan at all, as he smiled at her she was taken back for the sudden politeness

Riddhima – papa you don't have to say sorry, it's not JUST our fault

Armaan – ignoring Riddhima oh that's great... toh I'll see you later

Riddhima – KYUN?!!

Armaan – cause it's your birthday and we are now new neighbors

Riddhima – but this is Jai uncle's house…

Armaan – well we have bought it from him… well I'll see you tonight at 8 o'clock… Nice to meet you Mr. Gupta… Bye Miss Riddhima Gupta…

Riddhima – confused how the hell did you know my name…?

Armaan – aap khud kaha tha...

Riddhima – aaahhh no I did NOT… but Armaan just glare at her will you just shut up!! Armaan just shrug as if he doesn't know what Riddhima on about. It was the end of her patience she picked up a stone from the ground and aimed it at him but before she was able to throw it Shashank stopped her and dragged her away. Armaan mockingly waved at her, unfortunately for Riddhima it was only she who saw him as Shashank was turning back to him.

Back in Gupta Residence, Riddhima stomped toward her room angrily while Shashank followed her trying to explain repeatedly. As Riddhima continued to walk away from Shashank, Gloria came in between. Seen her brought a smile across Riddhima's frown face but again when looked at Shashank's it vanished

Riddhima – aap uss idiot ko kyun invite kiya…

Shashank – Riddhima… I didn't invite him… he invited himself

Gloria – who was that stupid idiot my sweetheart ko upset kiya

Riddhima – woh Armaan 'whatever' who the hell does he think he is… Gloria… it's only you who cares about me... I love you Gloria... I love you… happy birthday to you too she run off after giving Gloria a tight hug

Gloria – after watching her disappearing sir… Riddhima is now 21 years old... are you going to hide the truth from her

Shashank – yes Gloria as long as possible... I am sure she won't be able to face it

Riddhima came in to her room and shut the door behind her. She went toward her wardrobe while murmuring something to herself. She opened the wardrobe doors widely and looked through the neatly hung clothes. She took a hanger out and placed it on her. It was a beautiful red salwar suit. She took it to the mirror and gave a quick look at herself

Riddhima – why the hell am I thinking about that Armaan nutcase… woh bloody idiot… I'll see him tonight… you just declared a war Mr. Armaan Dehathi… she said while marching towards the attached bathroom

Armaan's house; He came into a room, he walked in happily but seen what was in front of him it vanished rapidly and a frown took over. He let out a sigh while shook his head in disbelief. He walked tip toed toward the bed where a girl was fast in sleep

Armaan – Anjali!! He shouts right in her ears which made the girl to wake up with a sudden jerk

Anjali – Armaan!! Mein tumhe nahi chordungi… I'll kill you Mr. Mallik… please go and get a life she replied annoyingly

Armaan – sorry sweetheart… my love… yehi toh mere life hai… to irritate you he said adding more emphasis to his words

Anjali – standing up properly I seriously can't believe such a fool like you could be my brother…!

Armaan – oyeh Miss Attitude mein tumse itne bhi chota nahi hoon OK…?

Anjali – yeh sirf paanch din ka difference hai… UNFORTUNATLEY…! Urgh you just ruined my morning

Armaan – well Anjali Mallik… I have a good news for you in this bad morning… guess who I met… Anjali sleepily gestured who Shashank Gupta... and he invited us to Riddhima's birthday party

Anjali – did you GOT invited or did you invite YOURSELF?

Armaan – wow you know me so well

Anjali – HAHA you wish… not you but I know uncle really well… you stupid cow he never will invite a stranger and specially like you… by the way how is Ridzi? She asked excitedly as she got up from the bed

Armaan – who…?

Anjali – Riddhima you stupid

Armaan – OH woh chili powder…? She just declared a war with me…

Anjali – shut up Armaan… she is such a sweet girl!

Armaan – sweet my left foot's tiny winy little toe

Anjali – OI! Throwing a pillow at him mind it she is a good friend of mine… warning Armaan sternly she walked out into the attached bathroom

Armaan – falling on to the bed clutching on to the pillow enna raskala… mind it…

Anjali – from the bathroom shut up you Sharukh Khan's duplicate! Without bothering to reply to her Armaan got up and made a exit out of her room to his room

His room; modern but still old. Beautiful; red and white colour combination. He named his room sweet and sexy just like himself. Everything looked good but on the floor everything was a mess, the unmade bed. Things scattered around everywhere

He picked up his basketball which was also lying on the floor with all the other junks. He picked it up and starts to bounce it toward the balcony. As he continued bounce it, it was clear he was a pro at his game. He entered the balcony and still continued to play, head down. He suddenly stopped. He looked up, to see a slim body with great curves was rapped in a red salwar suit, she stands out in the white background building which was opposite to his. Her hair was slightly curled up on the edge as the water dripped down on to her back. She was wiping her wet hair with a towel. Armaan was mesmerized and was eagerly waiting for her to turn around. After a while she turned around. But the smile which was across Armaan's face suddenly gone as he saw it's non other than Riddhima

As Riddhima turned around she saw someone watching her. She went back to him, but suddenly he has turned around facing his back to her. But it didn't took her long to realize who it was seen the red shirt. She took the towel as a weapon and aimed to throw it at him but she realized there wont be much of a point as the towel isn't strong enough to reach all the way, and he is not worthy of all the hard work

Riddhima – so Mr. Armaan kukeraja… you playing hide and seek..?

Armaan – turning to ace her not bad chili powder you remember my name hun…? He asked as if he as surprised

Riddhima – what to do I don't have a bad memory like yours you see…. Its Riddhima not chili powder…

Armaan – smiling sarcastically, looking at each other with envy a second past oh my god wow… so now you're trying to be my favorite…. Impressive Riddhima just looked at him as if he was speaking another language wearing red… why aren't I getting out of your head… you see I have that effect from girls Riddhima looked down at her to see her wearing a red salwar kameez and up at Armaan who was wearing a red shirt

Riddhima – Urgh! She stomped on the spot any way in your dreams I have better things to do than remembering you Makhija! Armaan looked at her with a corner smile plastered over his face while Riddhima was huffing and puffin in anger

Anjali – from inside the house Armaan breakfast ready!

Armaan – yes An… a mischievous smile took over while he looked at Riddhima who was also paying attention to his every move yes darling Armaan replied sweetly I am coming… just a second baby he said adding more emphasis on some words, Riddhima was taken back as she felt anger rose within her for no reason well bye, bye Miss Chili Powder… my SWEETHEART is calling me for breakfast excuse me… he said walking away smiling as he left Riddhima confused

Riddhima – quietly to herself funny guy… magar who uska sweetheart kaun hai… girlfriends or wife… she pause for a second, shocked at her own state ARE YOU MAD! You think of that chimpanzee… are you like drunk Riddhima! You have better things to do than think about his jungle life… ARMAAN MAKHIJA!

Edited by LaLi17 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Friends,

Today a special day for me in IF, because now I have became year older as an IF member. Well on this great day I thought why not update most of the FFs that I can… and those which most of you like reading... so i hope you enjoy...!

Take Care... Luv Lali

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Posted: 15 years ago
wohoooooooo u finally updated this one ...i was so eagerly waiting for u to update ! awesome update loved it !!!OMg wats with chilli powder lolz armaan is seriously capable of inventing all weird names.hahaha loved AR completely .ridzi s dialogues were fab lolz "chimpanzee" 😆😆 .

Edited by sweetsugar - 15 years ago
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WOW that's what escape from my mouth when i have read the first paragraph, it's written amazingly.
I was thinking that i should stand and clap for writing but i didn't.....................................[Will complete the sentence in the end of my post.]

Let's see what i think after 1st paragraph.

Warning: Unlimited questions going to be shoot on you, be aware and i am hating to say this, even i can't say this but avoid to answer them as well. *Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii* in dramatic way. 😒 And if it's going to little difference of length between your part and my post then don't mind it and to make the distance long, write more longer part.

Oh it's Riddhima's birthday, Happy Birthday to her and Happy 1st Anniversary on IF to you. 🤗

Ok get back to main work. For three characters relate to Riddhima are Shashank, Umar Kaka and Gloria. Ok now would like to tell what's cooking ? About what Gloria asking Shashank to tell Riddhima ? 😳

Hmm cake, i can have a little piece of it. lol 😉 Wow amazing gift, when i am going to have such birthday gifts. *sigh* 😔

Oh the excited girl forget to change her nightie even or did she ? If she did change it then you haven't mention it.

Uff she scare me, i thought accident going to happen and Shashank will be no more bit it didn't happen like this. When they got safe and there was a car in front and she got out of the car then my guess was right as it's Armaan, i am doubting it can be Rahul also but when it turn to be Armaan then i did jump imaginary with happiness.

Before moving feather, i like to say that after first paragraph, when she wake up to here, it's greatly written. I mean the way you write about her happiness, sadness, excitement and the first expression in car *exciting and thrilling* and then nearly accident one expressions *shocked and frightened*. Love it the way you have written all that. Superb done !

From Armaan's entry. Blue jean and red shirt, i love it. My blue eyes boy as always in naughty mood, mischievous smile and as usual world's naughtiest mind. Amazingly defined. Btw why he was hiding his tattoo, if he have made them ?

Finally Armaan and Riddhima such interesting interaction in part, Yippee ! 😆 You know what 'I LOVE IT'. It was just FANTASTIC. *Muahh* girl ! It was so interesting and FULL ON enjoyable.

Oh it's amazing, they were checking out each other. You did awesome job in writing that part.

When they all start conversation then it's so hilarious, ROCKING ! SUPERB !! Give a pat on your back for writing the dialogues and those names. They surely remind me of KaSh nok-jhoks. 🤣 This Pakka KaSh FF, written in so typical KaSh type. You know what I WANT TO THIS STORY ON MY TV SCREENS RIGHT NOW.

you stupid gavar.... dehathi he was cool dude through you description. She is calling with such words a cool dude.😆

Love it when he said oh that's great... toh I'll see you later and she like KYUN ? Poor girl irritate by him. 🤣

Haha Shashank stop her from hitting him. Calm down girl, he is your hero so be easy. But it's funnyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 🤣

Ok now back to my questions, how he know her name and when she did told him ? Who is Jai uncle ? Armaan and Riddhima had met in childhood or fixed to marry each other ? 😳

Back in Gupta Residence
Definitely it's written greatly. Well done job. 👍🏼 Aww Riddhima being cho chweet while saying to Gloria woh Armaan 'whatever' who the hell does he think he is' Gloria' it's only you who cares about me... I love you Gloria... I love you' happy birthday to you to

Btw why Happy Birthday to her too ? You didn't mention it before nor about the party in which Armaan had invited himself ? (See, you need to update fast so then you can escape from my such useless questions becoz it's going to uncover in next part and i can't wait for long and long.)

WOW a red (Armaan's favorite Sauce Wala Laal) suit, haha ! She will regret wearing that. woh bloody idiot' I'll see him tonight' you just declared a war Mr. Armaan Dehathi' Uff war but in true meaning she is waiting for their meeting. (See she is waiting eagerly so can you fulfill her wish and write the next part more soon) but awesomely written.

Armaan's house Aww so sweet brother and sister relation. I love it totally. You got full points in writing it and the dialogues are mind blowing.

Anjali ' did you GOT invited or did you invite YOURSELF? *MUAHAHAHAH* to this dialogue, i love all the dialogue but for this one you got extra marks. 🤣 She knows her brother so well.

Why meeting Shashank Gupta is a good news for both siblings ?
*Cough* *Cough* not you but I know uncle really well, what does it means and then secondly she mention Armaan being a stranger to Shashank ?
And why she ask how is Ridzi ? Can anyone tell me what's going on here ?

WOW chili powder love this name the most. 🤣 Totally suited. He knows she declared a war. Oh i am eagerly waiting to that war, coz i know it going to so interesting.

Armaan ' sweet my left foot's tiny winy little toe
What's that ? 🤣 Hilarious line but definitely i love it.
enna raskala' mind it'Shahrukh Khan's duplicate! 🤣

Riddhima being Anjali's good friend, Can you explain it ?

Armaan's room: Red and White Combination, definitely it has to be my favorite (you know why ?). WOW perfect Sweet and Sexy. Love it ! I have to slut your mind. 👏. His room described amazingly. Wooh Basketball champ is here, is she also knows to play BB ?

Balcony part, do i even need to say that i completely love it. I am totally 'fida' like the way you written it. Beautiful and Brilliant !

Haha she going to hit him through towel. 🤣 Great, she realize the logical fact before using her energy. She must have killed him, if she was given a little chance. 😆 But you know i love it.

Again FANTASTIC conversation. Awesome dialogues and expressions greatly written. 🤣

Ok i am not going to mention the lines, as it getting longer. BUT i love the dialogues, LOVE IT ! LOVE IT ! LOVE IT ! Back to back conversation between them. You ROCKED !

I think should mention in short go.

not bad chili powder you remember my name hun'? 🤣 Hilarious, i can imagine him saying it in style.
what to do I don't have a bad memory like yours you see'. Its Riddhima not chili powder' 🤣Wonderful reply. LOVE it, totally her style.
oh my god wow' so now you're trying to be my favorite'. Impressive This definitely my most favorite. I knew he won't leave this chance but i wasn't hoping them to have a interaction before party so i thought she will wear in party but it's COOOL !

NAUGHTY Armaan wanna make a jealous. 🤣 well bye, bye Miss Chili Powder' my SWEETHEART is calling me for breakfast excuse me' He won this one with this line.

And and and the end Riddhima's confusion part, WOW it's best one...LOOVVVEEEE her confused state and you have written awesome.

Funny guy...sweetheart kaun girlfriends or wife'ARE YOU MAD! .... chimpanzee' drunk Riddhima! ....his jungle life' ARMAAN MAKHIJA! 🤣🤣🤣 CLASSIC !


Overall, the part is written amazingly and i totally love it. It's most interesting and enjoyable. You are writing brilliant here. I have already mention the things i love in it.
And so my things need to be unclosed soon. Don't know how many twist and turn have in your suspense full mind.

but i didn't..................................... But i wanna stand and clap for you for writing such awesome part with amazing writing talent. Give yourself a BIG HUG from me for your writing. 🤗LOVE IT !

Wanna read it very soon so for that you need to update it more soon. Please update Part 2 soon. I am waiting eagerly !

I know the length of my post is long, so sorry for that. 😳


Edited by star_fan - 15 years ago
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Hey Lali,
treat for us two ff in one day that is miracle sorry yar juz joking but cool,
but the story is proceeding to really great interest Armaan and Riddhima meeting was superb well fight will head to the love valley when lets see now,
hope to see Atul, Muskan, and Rahul entry now because Anjali is already entered,
do continue the next part soon plz the part was brilliant..
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey!!!

cool....

the update was really good one...

love it...

update next one soon....

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome one......thnc for d pm/.... continue soon...............nice concept :))
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Posted: 15 years ago
wooow grt part plss continue soon
tnx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was great part👏👏👏.i really had fun reading it.anji and ridhima are friends??and what is that shashank is hidding from her??
the way armaan invited himself was funny and ridhima's driving is scary.cant wait for the party,its going to be fun.continue soon.....
Edited by sasya - 15 years ago

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